Date: 04/10/11 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
You know for a very master submissive type of story, this was just to cute and sweet xD But I like it. And how did I guess it was Luminor who rape Kiro! I'm good xD
Any how I found one tiny mistake that confused this shit out of me until I moved to the next sentence xD
Both tied boys opened their mouths for the waiting ball gags
Author's Response: Next chapter is the flashback of what happened to Kiro so it won't be nearly as cute or sweet. Actually it was originally going to be Kiro's father, but I just couldn't do that. Luminor just seemed to fit that dark figure role. Yeah I think a lot of the bondage part was confusing. I just can't seem to get them right in my mind. Basically that was just Tom gagging Kiro and Bill.
Date: 04/10/11 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awww Kiro is really opening up to them and thanks for updating so fast.
Author's Response: He is and I love that about this chapter!
Date: 04/10/11 11:04 am Title: Chapter 3
silly and stoopid
Author's Response: Well that's not very nice, but to each their own I suppose.
Date: 04/10/11 09:04 am Title: Chapter 3
*drops jaw* Not Luminor! say it isn't so! *sobs*.... this chapter was, I don't even know where to begin. It was sweet and sad and heartbreaking *hugs Kiro* can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: *hugs and hands tissues* You might need them for the next chapter too. Sorry, but I promise lots of sweet nothings in chapter 5!
Date: 04/10/11 12:17 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh dear god!! I'm not a big CB fan but I must say that this is very very sexy and hot!! I feel so bad Kiro who hurt him?!? I really can't wait till you up date again = ]
Author's Response: Who hurt him will be coming up in the next couple chapters. I'm so glad you like it. I've currently got quite a few stories going at once so updates might be slow. I promise to try though!
Date: 04/09/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hmmmm...... So far......... I like it. One question though do Tom and Bill still have sex or is it just them doing Kiro one at the time?
Author's Response: Wait till the next chapter to find out! ;D
Date: 04/09/11 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 2
woot! please post more soon i want to see what the twins have in store for kiro next!
Date: 04/05/11 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
no. this story is like potato chips *audience looks around confused and akward silence*
you know cause you can't have just one! *people in audience go "ohhhh"*
Author's Response: Well there will be about 5 more. But unlike chips they won't be at all fattening!
Date: 04/05/11 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
I want more please. this was great. Will Bill get spanked again or arguing with Tomi??
Date: 04/04/11 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Normally I'm not a big CB fan, but this time around I like it :D. Makes me wonder what exactly happened.
Date: 04/04/11 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was pretty awesome :) The last line was great! It reminds me of when either Gustav or Georg (I can't remember which) said that when the Kaulitz twins agree on something you don't have a chance :') Although you could do a second chapter, it wouldn't hurt to leave it as this. If you do post a second chapter though, I shall be here waiting to review :D Great job!
Author's Response: I remember that interview! I wasn't even thinking about that though when I wrote it. That personality trait just seems to fit them.
Date: 04/04/11 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
i want more!
Author's Response: More on the way!
Date: 04/04/11 05:48 am Title: Chapter 1
awwwwww that was sweeet I love kiki so much :D and it was haaaaaaawt I love it ^-^
Author's Response: Thanks so much!