Date: 04/14/11 04:26 am Title: The Reason
oh man, police please...georg can't just get away with this. fuckkkk
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see what happens! :D
Date: 04/14/11 12:54 am Title: The Reason
ah... ese carro tenìa q venir a malograrse justo!! pero si no fuera x eso no tendrìamos historia a sì q....
jeje
en espera del sgte capi!!! :)
Author's Response: Gracias!!! :D
Date: 04/14/11 12:33 am Title: The Reason
At least Tom had a legit excuse for not being there. Still, I feel so bad for poor Bill. I wonder if he will eventually tell someone what happened. I certainly hope Georg didn't give him anything.
Looking forward to more XD
Author's Response: Yea, I wanted Tom's character to be unselfish, so it was only proper that he was doing something important that would make him late for his brother. Hm... that's an interesting thought, you'll have to wait and see!
Date: 04/14/11 12:33 am Title: The Reason
Can't wait for Tom to find out who done it and hopefully Bill will go the hospital to be checked and maybe talk to someone about it, if he won't talk to Tom about what happened.
Author's Response: Thank's for the review! It's interesting to see your thoughts on what'll happen to Bill. :D
Date: 04/13/11 10:14 pm Title: The Reason
I'm surprised that Bill is able to walk at all. He seems really traumatized.please hurry and post the next chapter!
Author's Response: I think Bill's in a bit of shock, and he can walk since the reality hasn't really hit him yet. New update soon! :D
Date: 04/13/11 06:34 pm Title: The Reason
poor Bill
Author's Response: *huggles Bill*
Date: 04/13/11 04:52 pm Title: The Reason
eep -.- In shock!Bill makes me writhe in sympathetic discomfort
Author's Response: Me too. He needs a hug and the doctors. :,(
Date: 04/13/11 03:12 pm Title: The Reason
Awww :( Your style works really well for this story. I like it anyway. Your writing is full of description and you give the reader what they want. You definitely draw us in. :) Keep it up and update soon please :)
Author's Response: I'm really glad you think so. I'm trying to make this story realistic and really develop the whole universe that it's taking place in. Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/13/11 02:22 pm Title: The Night Shift
Sorry, I was just feeling melodramatic. I'm back in my cage so Georg is safe.(From me anyway)
Author's Response: Hehe lol. New update was just posted!
Date: 04/08/11 03:23 pm Title: The Rape
no shocking religious things here: it's normal to pray the Lord for help when u're in danger
Can't wait to read what's coming up next
Author's Response: I should hope so. :D New update soon!
Date: 04/08/11 03:16 am Title: The Rape
you are a fab writer, excellent so far. the only thing i don;t like, (and that would be no matter who was writing it) is that Georg is the rapist.
Author's Response: Yea, I never usually have Georg as the bad guy, so this story is just me playing with new characterizations. New update soon!
Date: 04/07/11 04:14 pm Title: The Rape
no words. just....the paragraph where you describe being raped....*shudders*
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I tried to be as graphic as possible without it being too graphic, if that makes sense.
Date: 04/07/11 12:18 pm Title: The Night Shift
Okay, yeah, I'm totally heartbroken. Thank you for the quick update, and I really hope Tom or someone...anyone shows up soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 04/07/11 11:55 am Title: The Rape
I wonder how is gonna Georg feel like in the morning, will he be sorry for what he did, or not, cause I don't see him that bad. I hope he will be sorry and will try to apologize to Bill. Hope u will update soon.
Author's Response: You'll have to wait for Georg's response. I can't give anything away ;)
Date: 04/07/11 11:03 am Title: The Rape
It wasn't as graphic as I thought it would be :) I just wanna grab Bill and hug him close and I want to ram something up Georgs ass and cut his dick and balls off and choke him with them!
Author's Response: Wow, I think that's the most violent response I've ever gotten. XD
Date: 04/07/11 09:47 am Title: The Rape
pobre Bill.... quiero aber de la reacciòn de Tom cuando vea a Bill.... espero el sgte capi :D
Author's Response: gracias!
Date: 04/07/11 09:37 am Title: The Rape
o_O Oh man :( Love this story, hate Georg and poor Bill!! Georg is only going to get worse? Well how much worse can he possibly get after something like that? I suppose you have to update soon and I will just have to keep reading XD
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Georg's character is something I've had a new insight on, so you'll have to wait and see what that is... New update soon! :D
Date: 04/07/11 06:31 am Title: The Rape
When Tom gets there I hope he slices off Georg's mighty sword with his own switchblade and feeds it to their dogs. Then he could kiss Bill there and make it all better.
Author's Response: D: Run Georg! For some reason, I fear for his jewels with you on the loose ;) You'll have to wait for Tom's reaction until we get to it! :D
Date: 04/07/11 06:09 am Title: The Night Shift
Yes, Georg's character sounds believable. It's just hard to imagine him as the bad guy because he seems like such a pussycat in real life. I'm sure the next chapter will leave us with no doubt. Bring it on!
Author's Response: I'm sure Georg's nothing like this in real life, which is why I usually don't portray him as so in my work. At least this puts a spin on things! :D
Date: 04/07/11 05:49 am Title: The Rape
Aww, poor Bill.
You did a amazing job, this is heartbreaking!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so!