Date: 02/28/17 07:07 pm Title: The Kit
Awh, Scotty < 3 Dogs always help, even if they don't know what's wrong.
This was good, I don't know much about that stuff either so I wouldn't have noticed any different if you'd made it up.
Hope you continue soon, I'm interested to find out what happens next. :)
Date: 02/28/17 06:57 pm Title: The Reason
Okay, at least Tom has a genuine reason for being late, rather than just forgetting the time or something.
Great chapter once again :)
Date: 02/28/17 06:52 pm Title: The Rape
Oh, poor Bill :( I hope he recovers. Georg needs to get hit by a bus >.> Again, written very well. Descriptive without being too graphic. Well done :)
Date: 02/28/17 06:44 pm Title: The Switchblade
You know, I can actually see Georg being a high school bully, he has the look and the build for it. Stereotypically, of course. Really enjoying this, your writing style is really good :) Rather scared to read on though xD
Date: 02/20/17 09:27 am Title: The Night Shift
This is great though ^_^ Will read more when I get back :)
Date: 02/20/17 09:26 am Title: The Night Shift
Georg, noo :O I never expected it to be him D:
Date: 09/28/12 12:30 am Title: The Kit
ASDFGHJKL UPDATE SOON PLEASE. ;__; ALL OF MY FEELINGS. I DON'T KNOW WHAT THEY'RE DOING. OH GAWSH.
Date: 08/09/12 12:14 pm Title: The Kit
really very good, It kept me wanting to read more , you handled the whole rape realy well and the after math.
Date: 08/01/12 03:33 pm Title: The Kit
finishh pleaseee!!!! *bill's puppy dog eyes*
Date: 04/30/12 07:12 am Title: The Kit
I don't remember if I reviewed this fic earlier, but I just wanted to say that I'm glad to see you're back with this because I was reading this earlier. I think you did well with this chapter and the twisted, tragic and traumatic nature of the events came across well. Poor Bill.. and poor family all together.
Date: 04/26/12 02:17 am Title: The Kit
OMG YOU ARE ALIVE!!! I missed you! I miss reading your fics. And as usual, you made me read them over and over because I couldn't get enough. Thank you :)
Author's Response: YES I AM! I've been so busy, it's really quite ridiculous. Summer's coming soon though, so hopefully I'll have time to update more often. :)
Date: 04/26/12 02:10 am Title: The Kit
So so happy this was updated, thank you!
I'm very excited for more!
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thanks for the review :D
Date: 04/26/12 01:28 am Title: The Kit
OMG Im happy that you come back!!!! yehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Its a great capi. ;) and you allright is better all that of doctors happenned in his house.... inusual but fine in this universe ...
please update very soon......
:D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll try to update asap, but still, I don't want to rush this story -- it's too much fun to work on! :D
Date: 04/26/12 01:17 am Title: The Kit
Great chapter, can't wait to read more XD
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 04/25/12 08:59 pm Title: The Kit
: Poor Bill :( I wanted to cry reading this.
Author's Response: Aww :(
Date: 04/25/12 05:00 pm Title: The Kit
Nice use of "loped."
Author's Response: Thanks! It's actually one of my favorite verbs in the English language :)
Date: 04/25/12 04:15 pm Title: The Kit
This story is so well written and I'm quite enjoying it. I feel so sad for Bill and it all seems so surreal in this one because of his virginity and how important it is to him. I'm a huge fan of your work and really miss some of your stories. Keep up the incredible writing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really wanted to portray Bill's virginity as something innocent and important in this story, particularly because (for the sake of twincest) Bill characters tend to whore themselves out or be overly vulnerable. I want Bill to seem like the sweet guy next door that no one would think twice about harming, which is why his rape comes as a big shock to everyone. I'll be updating some of my other stories soon; I'm glad you're still interested in them after all this time. :)
Date: 04/25/12 04:03 pm Title: The Kit
Such a great story! perfectly written with an interesting plot :) can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)
Date: 02/09/12 12:27 pm Title: The Reason
loved it:) I don't actually like when people write about victims enjoying rape...first someone is scared to death and then gets aroused. you've captured it perfectly, just like the awful experience it really is...great job! tension, pain, hurt....just great
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am trying to make this as realistic as possible (without having experienced rape in the past), so I'm glad that you find my portrayal accurate.
Date: 04/24/11 09:24 pm Title: The Reason
Okay! This (like all of your others)is an amazing story. Keep up the friggin fantastic work, and I CAN'T wait to read the next chapter. :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! New update soon! :D