Date: 05/01/11 09:53 pm Title: Wake up
wow amazing chapter o.o Im kinda curious as to what exactly there was in the letter other than the names of the people jorg killed, that is if there was something else O: when do you think youll update next? :)
Author's Response: I hope to have a new chapter up on wednesday. Thank you :D
Date: 04/29/11 01:24 pm Title: Never forgetting
amazing o: more! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :D
Date: 04/27/11 02:14 am Title: Never forgetting
O damn! That's messed up. I love how Tom's emotions & expressions change so often. Great chapter =)
Author's Response: Yes, it's really messed up. rnThanks :D
Date: 04/26/11 04:29 am Title: Never forgetting
yikes!
Author's Response: I know!
Date: 04/22/11 04:48 am Title: Anything but the truth
ouch! harsh last line for Bill.
Author's Response: I know! But that's just the beginning!
Date: 04/20/11 05:50 pm Title: Anything but the truth
Omgosh!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 04/20/11 03:43 pm Title: Anything but the truth
This is very mysterious, I can't wait to see what's going to happen!
Author's Response: The next chapter is up now! :D
Date: 04/17/11 05:03 pm Title: Liar with a capital L - Prologue
I really liked it!
You caught me with the first chapter and Tom's way of smoking! Really well described! Looooved it!!!
I love the way you write and the story is very well developped too! be careful, you have a few mistakes, especially with then/than but nothing major...
keep going! i'm impatiently waiting for the next chapters!!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you liked it. And I'm trying to correct my spelling errors. rnrn:D Next chapter will be up very soon.
Date: 04/16/11 03:54 am Title: Not everything is like it seams
Grr! I'm so confused! Although i'm sure that was ur intention, to keep this as mysterious & suspenseful as possible. Can't wait to read more xD
Author's Response: It totally was! But it's going to become a little more clearer, soon... :D
Date: 04/16/11 12:52 am Title: Not everything is like it seams
interesting, still trying to figure out whats going on. =)
Author's Response: You'll get it soon :D
Date: 04/10/11 06:48 pm Title: The apple never falls far from the tree
Finally things are being revealed! Lol Have fun on ur trip =)
Author's Response: Yes, it was about time, I thought. So here it is... I had a lot of fun, and now I'm back to write more! :D
Date: 04/08/11 07:40 pm Title: Liar with a capital L - Prologue
The first of the three opened the door. It creaked just a little, and gave the building an old look. He swung the door all the way up, and went inside. The two other boys went after him and closed the door behind them. Then everything went quiet. There were no talking, no clicking of shoes – I had stopped walking – and the only thing I could hear was my own breathing. Witch wasn’t very pleasing, to be honest.
I don't want to sound elitist or anything here, but the word 'witch' on the last sentence was supposed to be 'which'.
Kekeke. I hope you don't mind a bit of a correction there. :)
Author's Response: Hehe, thank you for noticing. I'm going to correct it right away! And no, I don't mind :)
Date: 04/08/11 05:06 pm Title: Do not accept candy from strangers
Yes, yes u do keep me guessing lol. Although i'm impatient & want to know what's going on already, I am really enjoying the suspense. I love how the boys are so mysterious. More soon plz?
Author's Response: Hehe, I promised I would. xD I will post a new chapter as fast as I can. Hopefully tomorrow or sunday... :) rnI loved making the boys look like this. It's so not them, but it's so much fun... rn
Date: 04/08/11 05:05 pm Title: Do not accept candy from strangers
Was that water like the symbolism of the blue and red pill from the Matrix XD I've never seen water be portrayed in such a shady way lol.
Author's Response: I haven't seen the Matrix, so I wouldn't know. But to put it this way, the water is not just water... :)
Date: 04/03/11 03:11 pm Title: There is nothing like a bad start
Ur killing me here! Lol! Now I need to know what's behind the door =) Great chapter.
Author's Response: Well, that's the plan. Not to kill you, obviously, but to hold keep you reading :) rnYou'll soon enough get to know what's behind that door :D rnAnd thanks :)
Date: 04/02/11 07:14 pm Title: Liar with a capital L - Prologue
This is really good. Love ur writing. I can't wait to read what's next =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter will be up as soon as possible :D