Date: 05/09/21 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a really good story!
an sad to!
you should do a sequel to this!
Date: 05/09/21 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a really good story!
an sad to!
you should do a sequel to this!
Date: 08/18/12 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
this is a sad story!
Date: 04/02/11 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm no expert on emotions but at 5 years of age I'm sure he was just clingy. And I'm not saying his feelings for Tom aren't real but it's like he was sorta brainwashed into thinking he loved Tom 'wrong'. And to sell him is just sick (I'm mad about that lol)
Really sad and inconclusive ending though :/ Imagine someone asking 'what's breakfast?' :(
*free breakfast for all the people who never had it*
Author's Response: His parents were a**holes, the just wanted an excuse to get rid of him, there will be a sequel don't worry.
Date: 04/02/11 02:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Aww that was really short and sweet. Loved everything about it
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 04/02/11 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Wait...but...it can't be over! Thats not really all there is is it? This was really good! But it doesnt really feel complete you know? It just kind of stopped. Great work though. I hope you decide to come back to it.
Author's Response: Oh there's a sequel don't worry.