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Reviewer: Nightshaded Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/23 12:37 am Title: Chapter 1

I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!

Reviewer: THAngelSonja Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/12 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

SIMPLY GREAT!!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/29/11 09:14 am Title: Chapter 1

this was a really good story!

Author's Response: Thank you Jesse. I was glad to entertain you lately :D *Maria

Reviewer: kiss the stars Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/15/11 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

awesome story! the twins were so cute and sorta slutty. awesome!

Author's Response: Well, it's that age, isn't it? :) Thanks for reading ! *Maria

Reviewer: MelissaRM19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love this. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! *Maria

Reviewer: Amdee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/06/11 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

I liked this. I'm embarrassed to admit how hot the sex scenes were.. I feel confused and slightly disturbed by feeling so, but I guess it's okay. The idea was interesting and don't know if I've ever read anything exactly like this before. The flow of the story was good and the writing felt easy and unforced. Very nice.

Interesting little story of the twins' childhood.

Author's Response: Well, I most certainly haven't written anything like this either *s* I'm glad you thought the story worked technically. And thank you for your thoughts regarding the contents :) *Maria

Reviewer: Janule Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

I had a smile on my face the whole time reading your story, it was cute. :o) Especially the end. Florian was actually a Cupid to shoot arrows into their asses. :-D He helped them discover their relationship. Who knows? Maybe everything would be just as you wrote. It was a great read, Maria, thank you for the experience and excuse my poor English, I use Google Translator to translate from Czech. J. :o)

Author's Response: You did great translating :) I can see what you mean regarding Florian. In a way, he did initiate what quickly had feelings developing between the twins. I'm glad you enjoyed the story, Janule :) *Maria

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 02:12 am Title: Chapter 1

I love, love, love a protective Tom! Especially one who has it bad for his brother. Wonderful dynamic between the twins in this! Their lovemaking was hot and sweet. And I wanted to smack Florian upside his fool head!

Author's Response: Thanks darling :) I'm so pleased you liked the story for the facts you mentioned :D *huggles* Maria

Reviewer: Billkrox Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this :D where is the picture of the twins from?

Author's Response: Thank you :) The picture is this one: Then I manipulated the twins into the picture from their old school.

Reviewer: omgthatshot05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Holy hell that was pure hotness!! Fucking in the school bathroom is super hot!! Love how Bill played it off at the end like he was just bored with it all.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked the story. Bill had everything under control in the end thankfully ;)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

lol, strange little story, but i liked it. =)

Author's Response: Thanks Violet. I'm very happy the story worked. I can't tell you how nervous I was posting it :D *love Maria

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