Date: 09/13/13 03:20 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this story so much! Do you think you'll ever continue it? I'm going to go back and reread each chapter and review because I think when I read it first, I was in my "shy and too afraid to review" stage...And I love the story anyway ;)
Author's Response: I feel so guilty for having this WIP on the site. I almost want to take it down until I finish it. Same goes for Alien. But I would very much like to finish it one day.
Date: 06/23/11 05:24 am Title: Chapter 5
lol what a hot story
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 05/09/11 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 5
ooh, role playing...yummy. bill is so hilarious, bugging tom about going camping and then complaining about everything. ew bugs, ew dirt...lol, what did he expect, anyway? ahh, I'm worried about the false sense of security you're luring me into. everything seems peachy keen but it's NOT. it can't be...ahhh
Author's Response: I'm glad you found Bill's behavior amusing. But yes, there are bad things coming. Hope you're ready for it!rn
Date: 05/01/11 01:45 am Title: Chapter 5
ooh, very sexy. I am of course very curious about what Bill is hiding. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thank you. Bill's got a secret, and you'll find out about it next chapter!
Date: 04/29/11 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Sexy camping!
Author's Response: You know it!
Date: 04/29/11 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 5
I liked seeing how much their relationship has grown. They know how the other works now, and how to best complement each other (like with the choking). That sex scene was really hot, btw.
Author's Response: Thanks. *Sigh* it seems my ability to write anything other than kinky sex has fled. Glad to know you felt like they grew closer. That was essentially the purpose of this chapter, so that Tom sticking around in later chapters will make sense.
Date: 04/29/11 04:54 am Title: Chapter 5
CUTEEEEEEEEEEE
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 04/25/11 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
by titles I meant the "boyfriend" word. ahh, sorry to be review-spamming you, lol, um, Bill...I think...he may have problems with drugs, and memories. I think being alone and friendless, looking and acting the way he does, was hard on him and led him to do things he probably wouldn't otherwise...maybe the modeling got him started on something, but idk...he may have been abused in some way. i don't know if he could cut himself and Tom not see anything, but they haven't really studied each other yet, so who knows...yah. all I know for sure is it's not pretty....yah. oh, and I love Albert
Author's Response: Ah, I see what you ment now. And I like all your ideas and suspicions about Bill, they seem really developed. Can't wait to see what you say in future chapters. Glad you like Albert, but honestly, who wouldn't?
Date: 04/25/11 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
no no, i'd just missed this update. I've read it since day one :) it's a fine summary
Author's Response: Okay, good to know. Thanks!
Date: 04/25/11 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
aaaaw, yay, titles. i like titles. cute paint fun, and bill seems completely sweet and good, but there is still the issue of his, uh, issues...
Author's Response: Do you have a clue what his "issues" are? I'm trying to be vague, and I'd love to kow what you have or have not figured out. What do you mean, titles?
Date: 04/25/11 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
mmmm why didn't i read this sooner?? that was really really hot. i'm glad everything is good between them so far, but i'm still worried about bill
Author's Response: Yeah, I tried to make their hookup steamy. And Bill does have a secret, which you will learn later. Why didn't you start reading sooner? Is the summary too vague? I don't like giving the whole fic's central point away in the summary, but if it would make way more people read it, maybe I should?
Date: 04/25/11 04:14 am Title: Chapter 4
Here I am again, reviewing another amazing story by you :)
I've been a little absent from the site and every time I come looking for something to read... I find nothing. Not that the other stories are bad, 'cause they're not. It's just that I'm sort of picky, or they just don't get to me in order to continue reading. Anyways. I found your story on the recent stories list and the summary totally made me want to read it. And I did! I'll say it once again, just like I did on 'My Gilded Cage'. I LOVE your describing. You always make me feel I am there watching everything :D I so want to know what's next. I want to know Bill better, just as much as Tom wants to. I am enjoying this piece and gosh! I need more! Keep up, and I'll be looking forward to updates :) Good luck!
Author's Response: You are so thoughtful, to send me such a nice review like that! Seriously, you're such a sweetie and really made me smile. I'm thrilled to know that I can truely bring you into the story like that. This story is going to be limited third person all the way through, so mostly Tom's point of view. Eventually though, you'll learn more about Bill as Tom discovers his secrets. Thanks so much for taking the time to make me feel like a million bucks!
Date: 04/25/11 12:09 am Title: Chapter 4
awww, this is a great story!!! just so happy and nice and fluff fluff fluff!!!! i love it, it's like cotton candy!!
Author's Response: Damn! I guess it is very fluffy, but I cringe to think that I'm actually writing such a thing. Oh well, crap will happen later. Glad you like it though.
Date: 04/24/11 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awwwwww
Author's Response: I don't know what to say to that.
Date: 04/24/11 01:19 am Title: Chapter 4
this ia rly cool cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thanks.
Date: 04/24/11 01:00 am Title: Chapter 4
Very cute chapter. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks, and no problem.
Date: 04/23/11 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
I can't wait for the next update!!
Author's Response: Great, glad I've got you hooked!
Date: 04/23/11 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yay, they're boyfriends xDD
Author's Response: Yep. I thought it was kind of early, but I hope that it didn't seem that way, due to how well they get along so far.
Date: 04/23/11 10:55 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, I adore this already. I love how easily confident Bill is, throwing Tom off his game.
Author's Response: So gad you like it! Thanks.
Date: 04/23/11 10:09 am Title: Chapter 4
This is so wonderfully romantic without being unrealistic and sickeningly sweet...that's definitely something I enjoy a lot about this story. And the subtle hints thrown in about Bill, first when he was talking about past boyfriends and then with the homeless guy...I'm so intrigued and I really can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you noticed the hints! And also wondering if you know what Bill might be hiding. Thanks so much for commenting on how you liked the realistic, not-too-fluffy tone of the story, I really appreciate that.