Date: 04/01/11 11:46 am Title: Invasion
hmmmmm that sound painful. I love how Tom is so annoyed that this 'twin' has he face. His chagrin over the whole thing is quite amusing, and I'm really looking forward to more *snuggles*
Author's Response:
Bill can't ever do things easy.
rn/cuddles up with cups of hot chocolate and slankets
Date: 04/01/11 11:31 am Title: UIO: Unidentified Identical Object
Oh I love it. All of Tom's tangents especially the part where he hoped his Escalade was ok, how acquainted with certain parts of his anatomy he was and bold advertising. So many giggles in there. Off to read the next one to see how things go now that the 'twin' is awake. *smooshes*
Author's Response:
Love and giggles are awesome! It's like my pb&j. <3
Date: 04/01/11 11:21 am Title: The Thing!
Oooh interesting!! that would certainly be enough to freak me out and have me running back to the city. So I'm assuming that through the kiss the alien took some of Tom's DNA and replicated itself in his likeness? Oh and I'm not stalking you really *wink*
*skips to next chapter*
Author's Response:
STOP READING MY DIARY OH MY GAWSH
Date: 03/31/11 12:49 am Title: UIO: Unidentified Identical Object
eeek!!! I can't wait
Author's Response:
WHAT, WHAT, IS THERE A SPIDER, WHERE
rn/climbs a table
Date: 03/30/11 08:44 pm Title: UIO: Unidentified Identical Object
Oh goodness, I want to read more.
Author's Response:
AND YOU SHALL HAVE IT, MY BACK ASSWARDS FRIEND
Date: 03/30/11 05:42 pm Title: UIO: Unidentified Identical Object
Gah, you also have a knack for cliffhangers. D:
Great chapter, hoping you update super soon again.
[Sorry, that's all I've got; brain function on an empty stomach is not high.]
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I know how that is. No eating untile sundown - minus meat and cheese and beer = ZERO WILL TO LIVE
rnBut your reviews = WILL TO UPDATE, so there's that :D
Date: 03/30/11 01:59 pm Title: The Thing!
Way cool, I love where this is going so far.
Author's Response:
MOXIOUS.
Date: 03/30/11 12:03 pm Title: The Thing!
Yay more fic from you! I feel spoiled.
I love this so far. For one, I just love alien fic and respect anyone who tries their hand at it, and for two, your writing was again flawless. Well, there were technical flaws - a few misplaced commas and "it's" instead of "its" - but it wasn't distracting.
There are two things I really liked; they apply to your writing in general, but they were especially evident in this chapter, I think. One is your pacing, the other is your imagery. Your pacing is practically perfect; every thought follows the next logically and combines with the action in the story seamlessly. I can't say how your pacing for the story at large is since we haven't gotten very far into it, but as for pacing scenes, you have it down. Nothing happens too fast or is unexplained.
You also have this unconventional knack for imagery, or rather, fine-tuned knack. Most people when they hear the word "imagery" think of verbose word-paintings of elaborate scenes, but that's really the direct opposite goal of creative writing, I think. The goal of creative writing is to paint a vivid image with as few words as possible, and you are able to do this. Especially with your verb usage; "wagging, swaying mop of tendrils" "nauseating limb" and "clicking, whining, bucking" were some of my favorites. Vibrant and creative verb usage is definitely one of your strengths.
Super eager for more :)
Author's Response:
I wonder how much it would cost to have this entire review tattooed on my back.
Date: 03/30/11 08:51 am Title: The Thing!
Oh wow. This sounds awesome already.
Author's Response:
RIGHTEOUS.