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Reviewer: BillsBlasphemy483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/11 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 4

over all i love this. i would really like to read moreif you want to write more.

Reviewer: Bmk0100 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/12/11 11:31 pm Title: Chapter 4

i miss this story =[

Reviewer: BillplusAbby Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 12:00 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this so far! when do you think you'll be finished with the rest? I really wanna continue reading! ^_^

Reviewer: MiseryRebel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

 Its been a long time :(
 I don't mean to be pushy, but I really want to read more.
 Are you not continuing this story?

Reviewer: ingrid42billionstars Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 4

that was epic! i love it so far and cant wait until you update on it

Reviewer: ingrid42billionstars Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 2

haha :D

Reviewer: ingrid42billionstars Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was great!

Reviewer: Bmk0100 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/11 12:19 am Title: Chapter 4

ahh amazing =] caaant wait to read more! soo cute yet full of curiousityy i love ittt! pleeease update sooon!

Reviewer: MiseryRebel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/28/11 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 4

I love it!
Cannot wait for more~

Reviewer: thluvr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow. That was really good. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thank you!!

Reviewer: life_story Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 11:02 am Title: Chapter 4

You left me with suspense?? no no no i want more :)) hahaha i really hope 2 see more in the near future

Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter. I'm happy you're looking forward to it! Thanks for saying so.

Reviewer: jerrybelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/11 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 4

i love this please write more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I am!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/11 04:42 am Title: Chapter 4

hmmm, this is fascinating. i can't wait to figure out what is going on. =)

Author's Response: That's awesome to hear! Thank you.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/11 02:23 am Title: Chapter 4

Hmmm even more curious now about Bill, he seems to be a very lost and troubled individual. Why didn't Tom ask who did that to Bill? That would have been one of my first questions though Tom's still very wary so I guess that's understandable. I loved that Tom had the intuitiveness to think that Bill had no one to talk too and that he needed someone, even if he's unsure if he wants to be that someone. Though it seems Bill has taken that choice away anyway. Can't wait for more. *hugs*

Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback (and hug!) It's going to be fun revealing more about the characters. Like you said, Tom is wary to warm to Bill for a few reasons, but he's not so bad when it comes right down to it, leading to Bill's trusting him.

Reviewer: TomKRox Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 4

oh wow thats suprising that Bill is trusting Tom with what no one will know.

Author's Response: He doesn't really want to--or so he says--but Tom is perfect for the part. ;) Thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Sieren Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

huh?

please update ASAP

Author's Response: I'll aim to. Thanks!

Reviewer: Waffels Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

WOEIAA! So glad u updated! I want more and I want it soon :D Keep up the good work!! :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the update. Thank you for the feedback!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 4

huh. okay. lol

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 4

huh. okay. lol

Author's Response: Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/11 02:00 pm Title: Chapter 4

This is so interesting! I don't have clue what you've got planned and that's how I like it! I like to be surprised.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like surprises; Tom gets a lot of them. He might come to like them too! :-)

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