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Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 03:39 am Title: Carouselambra

thanks for the update!

Author's Response: no problem, thank you for the review!!

Reviewer: tomk234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 01:36 am Title: Carouselambra

Very nice, can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: thank you, i'm writing the 4th chapter, if i'm lucky and my betareader has the time it should be up sometime next week, stay tuned ;)

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 12:42 am Title: Carouselambra

I love the way the story is progressing. Your narrative style is totally enrapturing. Great job!

Author's Response: thank you so much! it makes me delighted to hear you like it.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 07:06 pm Title: Dazed & Confused

Thanks for the update. I'm enjoying this story and seeing where it goes. i really like the interaction between the twins, it feels very real.

Author's Response: that is so nice to hear, because that is sort of what i aim for :)

Reviewer: tomk234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 11:09 pm Title: Dazed & Confused

like this story a lot, can't wait to rea more :)

Author's Response: thank you! there will be more pretty soon :)

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/11 07:51 pm Title: Communication breakdown

hmmm, interesting beginning. I look forward to seeing where this goes. =) keep up the good work.

Author's Response: thank you for the review! look out for the 2nd chapter, should be up soon.

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