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Reviewer: brotherlylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 08:56 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

want more. ps this is really amazing and good and drew me in immediately and all that other great stuff. also your end notes make me occasionally cackle out loud.

Author's Response:

I like your handle, it is relevant to my interests, ty

rn

/chortles against a backdrop of lightening

Reviewer: pureblood_queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 06:11 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

I'm absolutely in love with this fic! I read it all at once and now I'm STARVING for the next update!
Maybe it is wishful thinking but I felt the boys were all full of ust.

Author's Response:

OMG THAT IS AWESOME this fic has been crushing on you since first semester, keeps putting notes in your locker

rn

I'M STARVING FOR NACHOS, WE REACH A STALEMATE

rn

Maybe there are. MAYBE THEY ARE.

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 02:39 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

i just love this story. It's soo funny and entertaining! I can't get enough! The sarcasm and snarky remarks just make my day every time. I always laugh so hard, my eyes start watering... hahahahaha i can't wait for another update!

Author's Response:

Why you too cool for me Ludo? :(

rn

I MAKE PEOPLE CRY. I should put that on my resume.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 02:02 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

omg I love capri sun! *is jealous*

Actually you let it slip in your last response to me, and I merely confirmed it with your bio, because in the response it could've just been a typing glitch

Its ok you don't have to lie to me, it was totally because the twins are there isn't it? Don't feel bad, I felt like moving there when I heard too, then I realized I gots no money to move with, and transferring colleges would be a real bitch

Simone is really a secret vampire hunter isn't she? And she made Bill a lasgna full of it to make sure he wasn't tricking her baby into a false sense of security before devouring him whole. In all senses of the term.

damnit why's you have to go and ruin the surprise?! You're gonna have to change the chapter it comes in now, so I will still be shocked appalled and mildly aroused when that spanking happens.

Have you ever had jumbo jelly beans? They are amazing, they're almost as big as my thumb, whih I have a small hand but still, pretty damn huge for a jelly bean. If you aren't diabetic or anything, I could send you a bag if you'd like...if its not too creepy to send me your address.

Author's Response:

Yeah tha's right, BE JEALOUS

rn

OH SHI to be honest I barely remember what I say, as I have the attention span of a cockatoo, I have that in common with Billsus

rn

Oh, you're getting schooled 'cause you all ~fancy, OIC

rn

You know, it's a reasonable suspicion tbh. Looking all Edwardy, building shrines to Robert Pattinson, and so forth

rn

I will make it chapter 21 instead. :D

rn

I HAVEN'T AND I WANT THEM send them soon before I lose my house, email me harlot

Reviewer: yellow-hello Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 01:32 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

And I forgot this one: I fucking seriously adore and love those witty remarks and snide snarls. They crack me up every single time, because they come off so naturally. :D



Author's Response:

Thanks! I made them myself in shop class! :D

Reviewer: yellow-hello Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 01:28 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

DEAR JESUS! MORE OF THIS STORY, NAU! :D This is, like, fucking amazing. The plot and everything, it truly is my second favourite. Plus, your wording and the use of words is remarkable.

Oh, and just in case you have run out of it: much inspiration to ya. c:



Author's Response:

Dude, it's cool, you don't have to use my full name, you can just call my Saucy J, all the arcangels do

rn

SECOND FAVORITE, I MUST STRIVE HARDER- no but srsly, out of curiosity, what's your number 1 favorite? RECS PLS

rn

/absorbs inspiration like sunlight

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 12:25 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

I just read this whole story through, having seen it featured on the front page. I think you're doing an amazing job with it! The relationship is building beautifully, not at all too fast as sometimes happens in these types of stories. And I adore your use of banter! It doesn't sound forced at all and has had me laughing out loud a few times.

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Whoa, props to you! How long did it take you? Damn, that is some commitment. Much obliged! :D

rn

I had no idea getting featured would not only get me so many readers, but so many ROCKLOBSTER reviews! Seriously awesome.

rn

The banter is one of my favorite parts to write, so I'm glad we share that enthusiasm! :D

rn

Thanks for reading through and reviewing! SO MANY THANKS LIKE YOU DON'T EVEN-

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 10:41 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

This story reads like hot salted buttered popcorn and a really good flick. The kind where you want to savour the scene yet anticipate the next. And I definitely am!

Author's Response:

You got me all excited at "hot, salted", then mildly less aroused at "popcorn", but then again, I'm the guy with the old-fashioned popcorn machine, so that was pretty much like telling me you want my body. YOU DO, DON'T YOU, YOU SCANDALOUS THING

rn

I'm eager to oblige! Stay tuned, dude!

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 10:36 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

This is one of the best things I've ever read! I adore this Bill, and this whole universe, and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Dude, awesome! I love to hear that! It's like mercilessly scarring my child by putting her in a pageant, and having it validated by other parents. CHOICE. <3

Reviewer: PoorMedea Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 05:22 am Title: A Force of Nature

Haha, I love the idea of Bill punching someone in the face! I think it's a nice change of pace to read a Bill that can really stand up for himself.

Congrats on the feature btw!

Author's Response:

It's fun! If you haven't already, I suggest you try it. I MEAN WRITE IT. Yeah.

rn

That was pretty much all I was aiming for, a Bill in high school that could kick ass, take names, and knew how to do his own nails.

rn

Thanks elebenty jillions, dude! Totally not a long-time fan shrieking at hearing from you! Totally keeping it real here! Holla!

Reviewer: blackglitter Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 03:42 am Title: A Force of Nature

Bill punching someone in the face is HOT and a refreshing change. Kick-ass. xD

Author's Response:

'Hot' is a new one! Glad you enjoyed the gratuitous violence - I know I did :D

Reviewer: WeStoleEternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 02:28 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

Hahaha~

Author's Response:

HOHOHO

Reviewer: WeStoleEternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 02:06 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

Does it now?

With each word written by your hand my heart beats a maddening, sweet tune by the name 'Elation'.

I fear sweet words will have to suffice, for I too lack such delicacies at the moment. How saddening this fact is, no?

Tsk, tsk. One must always remember to return Home every once in a while. For who could know what wondrous news awaits?

Author's Response:

MAYBE.

rn

And my heart, too, keeps time. <3

rn

/lies on the ground in protest

rn

And/or nachos.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 01:57 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

Woot! How awesome it was to click my 'Tracked' to reread some stuff, and I see the *~blue ribbon~* next to Cupid's Chokehold!

Congrats!

Author's Response:

I know! I was congratulated before I even saw it, haha, NEVER WOULD HAVE KNOWN

rn

MY SOCKS ARE ALL TWISTED WITH GLEE

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 01:51 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

before i go anywhere with this, i must say in response to the title, probably lick it up...;P

okay, bill's a bitch and i can't wait for them to get a little sexual. i'm sure bill will be just as bitchprincess as he is normally :3 at least until he's gone for it. oh bill, what's tom gonna do with you, beatin on cars and junk...hmm, imma go out on a limb and suggest that perhaps the person bill did this for is/was his mother who may or may not be dead? that's the only theory i'm rollin on. yah, and "your milkshake brings all the vultures to the yard" is priceless

did you book the flight for our honeymoon yet??

Author's Response:

Aaaaand now I'm distracted.

rn

Bill's a BIG OL' BITCH. Apparently this chapter was full of unintentional sexual frustration. IT IS TIME FOR THEM TO BONE, APPARENTLY.

rn

His mother, hm. /strokes goatee

rn

I figured we were going to be spending it inside anyways, so I booked a hotel. P.S. don't bother packing clotheses, ty

Reviewer: WeStoleEternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 01:01 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

Tsk, tsk.

Ah, Vicoden. I know thee well. j/k

Indeed. At the very least the school year is merely days away from ending. Summer's name resonates like a sort of blissful oblivion.

I simply devou- ahem - "nibbled" at a mind-numbing amount of chocolate confectioneries.

Congratulations on getting featured!

Author's Response:

Sseriously, my roommate was on THE EDGE! OF GLORRRYYYYY no but srsly, of killing me, Vicodin makes me all talky

rn

The way your name echos in my heart, I know this particular joy well <3

rn

Oh shit mang, hit me up with some of that, DYING OF UNSWEET RN

rn

Dude, thanks! I wouldn't have even noticed, hahaha!

Reviewer: LilithTHF Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 12:51 am Title: Crowning Achievement

Hey, I'm really loving this. It's nice to see/read the twins as tougher, darker, deeper characters. Thanks!

And btw, I can't get my head around those sheets either! O_o

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm always glad to hear that, since it's what I was aiming for, and I love writing 'em!

rn

I want to wrap my HANDS around those sheets and just... just wring the life out of them D:<

Reviewer: LilithTHF Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 10:11 pm Title: A Force of Nature

Ha! Loved it!! ^^

Author's Response:

CHOICE :D

Reviewer: WeStoleEternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 10:06 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

Must have been during his mad get-away.

Are you feeling better now?

I've determined the definition to be the following: School + System = Utter, pointless bullshit. :)

Rinds Honey? Well, I'm not particularly a fan of honey in general, so...

Author's Response:

I know, Jesus, watch it you jerk

rn

Much better, with the assistance of my good friend Vicodin :D

rn

AMEN, HONEY, AMEN

rn

What the- THEN HOW DID YOU GET SO SWEET, SURGERIES

Reviewer: WeStoleEternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 09:05 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

Indeed. Speaking of - How did this whole bike incident occur?

Thank you, but I need to get my final score before I do that. ;P

How very true. Nature hates me and taunts me at every inopportune moment she can find - not that I'm bitter or anything of the like... >_>

Author's Response:

It was Bill, that little bitch-

rn

No j/k was minding my own business, got clipped, fell, hit my head, INSTANT CONCUSSION

rn

I have no idea what is schooling I don't even

rn

I am. I AM BITTER, BITTER LIKE RINDS HONEY

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