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Reviewer: xxxkitty94katxxx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 02:43 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

ILOVEDTHEEND
xD
twas hilarious
i

Author's Response:

Thanks! I made it myself! :D

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 02:19 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

gaaah, why'd Bill scare the hell out of us?!?!?!!?!? ಠ_ಠ

Author's Response:

BECAUSE HE'S A JERK. ಠ_ಠ

Reviewer: LiviKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 02:14 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

oooooh scaryyy yush 3 hours, too much? i didnt wanna miss nufang

Author's Response:

I was just super impressed!

rn

Super impressed you posted this like 8 times too! Damn!

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 02:06 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

Kibbles!!! *glomps* This was a actually a fairly long chapter, so it must've been epically long on your arm.

Sooo Nate. He is a self insert isn't he? He was wonderfully hilarious and didn't want to take a hint. I really do think Bill could learn to like him as a friend. I imagine he just takes some getting used to. You know, small doses to build up a tolerance.

It sucks that Bushido stole/had someone steal Bill's bike. Because seriously? Gotta have alot of hate for someone to steal a bike with no wheels on it.

So, the cornrow fairy. Any relation to the tooth fairy? Because if they are the tooth fairy should totally take some pointer from CRF cuz getting cornrow in exchange for a dreadlock is totally worth more than the fifty cents a piece I got for my teeth.

I am So glad I decided to stay up and read this. It was wonderfully hilarious. I can't possibly compliment it enough. Großes Kino. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

KIBBLES ZOMG I LOVE LOVE THIS no but where are my jumbo beans

rn

Hahaha, NO. Immensely flattered at that, though. PAY ME TO BE ALL UP ON YOU, MISFITS

rn

Bushido's kind of a douche in this, sry2say. OR IS HE

rn

Dude, I knew a little girl who got 100$ for her first lost tooth, and 50$ for every one after that. I HATE HER.

rn

V v dank, habibti! KEEP ON TRUCKIN'

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 01:36 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

Lmfao, amazing how I got the Charlotte's Web ref immediately, yet it took me a while to figure out who "Jasmine and Belle" were. And this coming from someone with Disney in my veins >.<
Probably it was the way they were talking about them XD

And there was a section of present tense when Tom and Nate were talking.

And damn, my heartbeat like stopped and then quickened when Nate came out in that ridiculously offensive getup.

Author's Response:

In your veins? Sounds terminal, gurl.

rn

You mean people don't lie around talking about fucking Disney characters? (BTW, I would bone Gaston so hard his chin would shrivel.)

rn

AHA! THANK YOU! I rely on you overmuch for these things.

rn

GOOD, I AM GLAD. It should have been a very OH HOLY SHIT moment, I'm glad it came across!

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 01:34 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

Nate is such a little shit! Love him. And Bill is getting all soft and mushy...in his own special way:D

Author's Response:

I love that about him, makes him so hard and yet so enjoyable to write.

rn

Like super sassy oatmeal, genau

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 01:31 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

This story is fucking amazing. I just want you to know that as soon as I didn't get blown away in this evening's tornadoes, I read it all in one sitting. Ahmazing. Really. Thank you.

Author's Response:

Tornadoes! GURL WHERE YOU AT, MY WAIFU WAS ALSO IN TORNADER COUNTRY D: STAY SAFE BROSEPH

rn

That being said, thank you for not dying long enough to read this all the way through, and leave a review! I appreciate that. Shows dedication.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 01:30 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

Love

Author's Response:

Gurl, makin' me come on AIM-

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 01:26 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

Loved the reference. Loved the dialogue more. Your lines are like Tracy & Hepburn in a snit.

The deal with Anis gets curiouser and curiouser.

Big congratulations on the feature, btw. :)

Author's Response:

Excuse me while I become quietly aroused at the Tracy and Hepburn reference, and plot devious ways for you to leave your man and marry me while it's still legal.

rn

Indeed. >:D

rn

Thank you! You guys are supercalifragifuckingexpealidocious!

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/25/11 01:25 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

This chapter was hilarious! So many winner lines. I'm gonna start saying "what's the doodle, chicken noodle?"

Author's Response:

Haha, whoa, that was quick! Do you just lay around waiting for me? Mmmmm, Daddy like.

rn

Please do! Can't take the credit for that one; my sister's coming up with winner's like that 24/7.

Reviewer: mincou Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/11 06:16 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

just found this fic, love it, it feels like a drug. the conversations are gold, the story fabulous, fantastic work!

Author's Response:

I feel like blasting Ke$ha right now

rn

YOUR FIC, YOUR FIC, YOUR FIC IS MY DRUUUGGGG, YOUR FIC, YOUR FIC, YOUR FIIICCCCC

rn

The exchange rate on those convos are through the roof

Reviewer: HaiZOE Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/11 05:51 pm Title: A Force of Nature

I can see why you wanted to write Bill punching someone - that was just too good. And all I can think of is that Mean Girls quote; "one time, she punched me in the face. It was awesome!" xD

Author's Response:

IT WAS LIKE MAD AWESOME BRO

rn

Hahahaha! Points for Mean Girls! Because Bill might seem like your typical slut-faced ho-bag but in reality he's so much more than that.

Reviewer: writtenaengel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/11 02:11 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

So honestly I was not too keen on reading a fic that isn't already completed OR where Tom and Bill aren't related, but from the first chapter this blew my mind. It's so incredibly well written, it feels like you could actually be there with the characters. They interaction between them is priceless and I admit I laughed out loud a lot when reading some of their conversations. I am slightly frustrated at the lack of slashy goodness and what Bill and Tom's stories are, but I just freaking love this fic. I have read A LOT of fanfiction, but this is by far one of the best and deff one of my favorites. I can't wait for you to update!!!! I am hooked on this fic!!

Author's Response:

I love reviews like this! Frank, brutally honest, complimentary with a hint of NEW CONVERT SMELL.

rn

I'm really glad you took a chance on me and my story, and not only that, enjoyed it!

rn

Hahaha, I have been receiving many reports of sexual frustration, and trust me when I say YOU SHALL BE SLAKED AND THEN SOME just like, eventually

rn

Let's hope I can keep you baited! I look forward to hearing more of your thoughts on this!

Reviewer: LiviKaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/11 01:07 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

is it bad tht i read 15 chappies and am only reviewing this one? or that it only took me 3 hours? i sure hope not cuz this story is just awesome never read bill like that :)

Author's Response:

Gurrrrl, NO. There ain't nothing wrong with reviewing, EVER. BABY, YOU WERE BORN TO REVIEW THIS WAY

rn

Dude, 3 hours? Really? Dude.

rn

Always happy to hear that - the best compliment ever! NEW BILLSUS

Reviewer: tomsteddybillscandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/24/11 12:25 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

i've already left a review for this chapter but then I saw this featured and I am soooo mad excited right now i'm just a reader at that. it's just i REALLY love this fic it makes me go ;ALKDJF;LAKFAK! Congrats! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you! You did this, you made this happen, and that is something I can never hope to repay. <3

Reviewer: brotherlylove Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 08:56 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

want more. ps this is really amazing and good and drew me in immediately and all that other great stuff. also your end notes make me occasionally cackle out loud.

Author's Response:

I like your handle, it is relevant to my interests, ty

rn

/chortles against a backdrop of lightening

Reviewer: pureblood_queen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 06:11 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

I'm absolutely in love with this fic! I read it all at once and now I'm STARVING for the next update!
Maybe it is wishful thinking but I felt the boys were all full of ust.

Author's Response:

OMG THAT IS AWESOME this fic has been crushing on you since first semester, keeps putting notes in your locker

rn

I'M STARVING FOR NACHOS, WE REACH A STALEMATE

rn

Maybe there are. MAYBE THEY ARE.

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 02:39 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

i just love this story. It's soo funny and entertaining! I can't get enough! The sarcasm and snarky remarks just make my day every time. I always laugh so hard, my eyes start watering... hahahahaha i can't wait for another update!

Author's Response:

Why you too cool for me Ludo? :(

rn

I MAKE PEOPLE CRY. I should put that on my resume.

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 02:02 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

omg I love capri sun! *is jealous*

Actually you let it slip in your last response to me, and I merely confirmed it with your bio, because in the response it could've just been a typing glitch

Its ok you don't have to lie to me, it was totally because the twins are there isn't it? Don't feel bad, I felt like moving there when I heard too, then I realized I gots no money to move with, and transferring colleges would be a real bitch

Simone is really a secret vampire hunter isn't she? And she made Bill a lasgna full of it to make sure he wasn't tricking her baby into a false sense of security before devouring him whole. In all senses of the term.

damnit why's you have to go and ruin the surprise?! You're gonna have to change the chapter it comes in now, so I will still be shocked appalled and mildly aroused when that spanking happens.

Have you ever had jumbo jelly beans? They are amazing, they're almost as big as my thumb, whih I have a small hand but still, pretty damn huge for a jelly bean. If you aren't diabetic or anything, I could send you a bag if you'd like...if its not too creepy to send me your address.

Author's Response:

Yeah tha's right, BE JEALOUS

rn

OH SHI to be honest I barely remember what I say, as I have the attention span of a cockatoo, I have that in common with Billsus

rn

Oh, you're getting schooled 'cause you all ~fancy, OIC

rn

You know, it's a reasonable suspicion tbh. Looking all Edwardy, building shrines to Robert Pattinson, and so forth

rn

I will make it chapter 21 instead. :D

rn

I HAVEN'T AND I WANT THEM send them soon before I lose my house, email me harlot

Reviewer: yellow-hello Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/11 01:32 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

And I forgot this one: I fucking seriously adore and love those witty remarks and snide snarls. They crack me up every single time, because they come off so naturally. :D



Author's Response:

Thanks! I made them myself in shop class! :D

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