Date: 05/28/11 03:24 am Title: Breakable
ah!! how scary!! poor Bill, and Tom, who is scared to death. thanks for the speedy update!
Author's Response:
You're very welcome! I hope the quality held up to the speed D:
Date: 05/28/11 03:15 am Title: Breakable
YOU. Ugh, my heart. Where's my poetry now, huh?
In the beginning of the chapter, I was thinking about how I was gonna love all over the vision of Tom with long, smooth hair. And the dialogue (always with the dialogue), and whoa, in chapter 17, Tom's past is coming back to haunt him.
But then the vision of Bill in the alley, beat to shit just. My heart, man.
Author's Response:
IN THE GUTTER, SWIRLING AWAY WITH BILL'S BLOOD
rnHe does make a beautiful princess, doesn't he? Honestly, prettiest thug of my life
rnReally? I thought the dialogue was sort of lacking this time around, huh.
rn/gently massages your ventricles
rnBe easy, bro, be easy. Everything will be cool
Date: 05/28/11 03:03 am Title: Breakable
NOOOOOOOOOO not Bill *sobs* He better be okay. Tell me that Beartrap had nothing to do with that? I'm not happy!!
I love Rap-punzel, very clever and cute. The banter between these two just fills me with giddiness. I just love them. Not happy about Andreas, he's not allowed to hurt Tom. You hearing me Kittykat? I love this, and I needs more precious. *shoves you in my cleavage*
Author's Response:
Oh, piffle, you know he'll be fine, this story isn't nowhere NEAR filling it's gay quota thanks
rnAs for Beartrap and Andreas: :D
rn/dives in
Date: 05/28/11 02:59 am Title: Breakable
I did NOT see that coming O.O >.<
Maybe I'll make a more coherent review later.
Author's Response:
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA /wheezes
rnCan't wait :D
Date: 05/28/11 02:32 am Title: Breakable
WHATTTT! how could you end it like this! WHAT IS HAPPENING whyyyyyyyy?
Author's Response:
It was actually pretty easy, I just stopped writing after that point and then posted it
rnWHO KNOWS well I mean I do but whether I will share is debatable, there's like this entire bowl of nachos and a box of wine, I might be occupied for a while
Date: 05/28/11 02:26 am Title: Breakable
Jesus! I didn't even see that coming a little bit! I'm mentally freaking out right now! You must update asap! You got me all worked up, lol. Despite the sad twist at the end, this was a great chapter! :D
Author's Response:
/cackles like a bitch
Date: 05/28/11 02:13 am Title: Breakable
WELL I'M BACK. And I DID NOT see it coming. So harharhar, laugh's on me. Do this again, this thing where you post a chapter again, soon - And I think we'll become the best of friends.
Author's Response:
Oh honey you don't want a quick update, you want a good chapter. I know you, inside and out. I've read Grey's Anatomy.
Date: 05/27/11 09:38 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
:O oh, tomi, you've got such a good deal there! ;) i've got to say that i LOVE bill's attitude. this keeps getting more interesting as i keep reading.
Author's Response:
I know right? Shit Bill, lemme live with you
rnThanks, you just might be the only one, haha!
Date: 05/27/11 09:17 pm Title: A Force of Nature
haha i loved the last line! ^^ so perfect to describe his new-found love for bill. yep, also, wasn't expecting bill to punch someone. i have read fics where he is so defenseless but definitely not in this one.
Author's Response:
Haha, me too, my fave part of that chapter tbh
rnNo, this is DENFINITELY not a weak defenseless cowering Bill story, haha. In fact it was partially written in response to that stereotype.
Date: 05/27/11 09:09 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
lol i wonder how bill will change 'poor' tom's life. interesting chapter.
Author's Response:
For the worse, before the better probably.
Date: 05/27/11 12:55 pm Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate
Sometimes I get in a mood. And I come here to read Fan Fiction; it doesn't happen all that often. Maybe once every three months or so. And I'm really, really glad it was your story I chose to read. I will be checking back sooner than I usually do for updates.
Author's Response:
Wow. That is... really, really flattering. Thank you, thank you very much. Especially for bothering to say anything at all.
Date: 05/27/11 11:51 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate
Have I told you how much I love this story? I have? Well, I'll just say it again, then :) I really love this story!
Author's Response:
WELL IF YOU LOVE IT SO MUCH MAYBE YOU SHOULD MARRY IT
rnno j/k please don't, I need it, and if you marry it it'll feel all satisfied and complete and won't bother being finished
rnHAPPY PEOPLE DON'T GET SHIT DONE
Date: 05/27/11 12:50 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate
DID YOU KNOW?!?!? Your story is really, really effing good.
Author's Response:
I DID NOT. THANK YOU :D
Date: 05/26/11 11:06 pm Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate
AH! I want more!!!!!! This is awesome! (: I love it!
Author's Response:
For a second I forgot where I was, and was like OH MY GOD YOUR HANDLE REMINDS ME OF A SONG HAVE YOU EVER HEARD OF TOKIO HOTEL
rnthen I remembered where we were
rnso I didn't
rnBUT THANKS for reviewing, and loving on this bb so much!
Date: 05/26/11 10:26 pm Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate
So I just wanted you to know I have developed a healthy obsession with this fic. I have been looking on here multiple times a day to see if you have updated, and I almost died when I saw that you had indeed! I freaking love this fic, enough said!!
So I'm kind of excited for the dreads to cornrows scenes, I think they'll maybe hold some slashy goodness. And I loved how this chapter had a few slash worthy moments! I sense the romance is finally, finally, budding more.
Hmm and I still want to know more about Tom and Bill's stories.
So, I obviously can't wait for you to update!!! And I can't wait for the shit to go down!!! =D
p.s. Jw but how many chapters do you think that this will end up being?
p.p.s You are one of my fav writers on here, and I love your Author and End notes!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I appreciate the head's up.
rnHahahaha, I hope I don't disappoint! But yep, things are gonna get slashy rull quick, just you watch.
rnThat too is coming up soon, never fear!
rnUPDATING SOON, LIKE REALLY SOON
rnP.S. I have no fuqing idea, man. I just write until the story's finished. I am awful at that planning shit.
rnP.P.S. I'm going to send this to my parents so they can hang it on their wall instead of a high school diploma. ONE DAY THEY'LL BE PROUD OF ME SOB SOB
Date: 05/26/11 04:21 pm Title: A Force of Nature
Hahahaha Bill is hilarious xD I have feeling I'll be able to look forward to more hilar Bill comments. You seriously have a wonderful gift with words! So witty :D I really love where this is going.
And as for your review fix (cheers for your author response) I'm here to give it you ya :D mmmm.
Author's Response:
I hope so, as that is all I am good for. Snark, laundry, and popping out babies. /cries softly
rnDo authors usually not reply? D: SHIT IF I WANNA BE COOL I BETTER REFRAIN.
rn... I will also accept midget porn.
Date: 05/26/11 03:57 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
This is such a wonderful start :D I absolutely adore your writing style already, it's quirky and fresh and so much fun to read! I'll definitely be continuing with this fic :3
Author's Response:
Why thank you! And glad to have you, gurl! Lemme know your thoughts as you go through, nothing satisfies me sexually anymore except reviews and midget porn. :(
Date: 05/26/11 01:36 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
I am glad.
Author's Response:
I am Leichenwasser, how do
Date: 05/26/11 01:17 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Shall I assume then that this pleases you?
Well a Princess by any other name is just as sweet, no?
Email perhaps, AIM,or - yes - to a man of the cloth. ;)
Author's Response:
Beyond measure. <3
rnI'm leichenwasser by gmail, and corpsewater by AIM because some loser already took my proper name. Jerk.
Date: 05/26/11 12:57 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Then I shall care for it gently.
Your skills of written word are beyond my comprehension. I find myself spellbound to the story you have so cleverly laid out. I am enraptured by the manner in which you depict Bill and Tom's growing relationship - the tension between them rolling in and out like the waves of a vast and mysterious ocean.
You, yourself have enthralled me with your witty remarks and your vivacious personality. You truly are a Princess of the most mystifying kind.
Author's Response:
/heart stutters, clutches at a nearby wall
rnThis mortal form is not prepared to withstand the truthfulness of your poetry, I tremble, I crumble, in the tumult of your virtue
rnAlso, you called me a Princess. MY WEAKNESS
rnWe need to take this to Twitter. Or email. Or to a man of the cloth so we may be as dude and bro forever.