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Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 11:48 am Title: Breakable

OHHHH SHEEEYAT.

D: I'm horrified! I'm really suspicious that it was Bushido and his gang, but the only thing I can think is that they did it because they think Bill trashed his car. But maybe it wasn't them. Maybe it was the people whose car he did trash? I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO MAKE OF THIS. ;_;

On a separate note, I am still so totally gone for you and the brilliance that is this story. *hides shyly* Seriously, you're like, one of the most brilliant authors ever. *_____* I refuse to read your other fics until this one is done, because if I read them all at the same time, I'll run out of reading material sooner. Gotta stretch it out, y'know? =)

Author's Response:

I LOVE HEARING THEORIES, KEEP 'EM COMIN'

rn

And good! I don't want anyone to get it :D

rn

Hahaha, if you hold off until I'm done with this one, YOU WILL HAVE A LONG-ASS EMPTY-ASS WAIT, SRY2SAY

rn

But seriously, flattering, thank you so much! You're always so endlessly flattering, and I don't get it, BUT I LOVE IT. Kinda like how I feel about Rubik's Cubes.

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 11:45 am Title: Breakable

DUDE. NO. Just. Fuck. That was horrible. Not the writing, that's always fantastic... just what happened. Heh. But, I guueessss it was probably needed ŽŽ Even so. No. Can't wait for more ;D

Author's Response:

DUDE. YES.

rn

And yes! Though I am a fan of senseless violence, in this case, it serves a purpose. CAN YOU SAY TURNING POINT

Reviewer: mincou Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 11:44 am Title: Breakable

Really like this fic! This chapter reminded of a line from The Message by Nas; "But a thug changes, and love changes and best friends become strangers."
I got the feeling that there might be something more beneath the surface of Tom's and Andi's animosity.
It's awesome that you updated so quick, and I really look forward to the next chapter! :D

Author's Response:

Thanks, and dude, that line fits this PERFECTLY, I'll need to check out that song!

rn

There just might be.

rn

Don't get used to this update schedule, haha!

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 10:41 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

Omg please narrate my life.

Or just give me your Bill.

You work wonders with words, did I say that already? Well it's worth repeating, huh.

AND ALSO IN RESPONSE TO YOUR LAST RESPONSE yes people do reply but not everyone, doesn't matter I don't think 'cause you're cool anyhow. I just love getting author responses, dunno why :3

Author's Response:

PAY ME IN DONUTS AND I JUST MIGHT

rn

Prolly the same reason why reviews are awesome! ESPECIALLY YOURS. You get all enthusiastic, I FOOKIN' LAHV THAT

Reviewer: kissandtell Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 10:39 am Title: Breakable

I have to admit that I did foresee something like this but not this exactly. Wonderful writing.

Author's Response:

SOOTHSAYER, SHOULD I BEWARE THE IDES OF MARCH

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 10:28 am Title: Breakable

OH NO BILL NOOO!!! Tom and his thuggin past better be enough to keep Bill safe. Or is his past only gonna endanger Bill even more! Drama llama has arrived! D:

Author's Response:

YES BILL YES or so Tom says, sometime in the future

rn

OMG YOU GAIZ, DRAMA BOMB

Reviewer: epitomeofdesire Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 09:54 am Title: Breakable

Omg!!! Poor Bill..... I'm gonna have nightmares picturing his mangled body :,(

Author's Response:

MY WORK HERE IS DONE

Reviewer: KristineTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 08:22 am Title: Breakable

CLIFFHANGERRR. I'mma hang you up in a closet till you've written the next chapter.

Author's Response:

/dangles from a coathook, mournfully eating a granola bar

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 08:03 am Title: Breakable

I did not lol, Tom is frustrating me being friends with B(something). Love the story, keep up the good work ^^

Author's Response:

Buuuuuuschnitzel? :D

rn

Thanks, I just might!

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 07:19 am Title: Breakable

OH NO! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO BILL?! :(

This chapter was really shocking, I didnīt expected something like this. Poor Bill... I think Bushido is behind this.

And poor Tom... We donīt know very much about his past but I think bloody Bill remind him of someone from past... someone who is probably dead.

I hope Bill be ok soon, I miss his sweet discusions with Tom :D

Oh and have I said I love this story? :-)

Author's Response:

Broke him a little :D NO BUT IT WASN'T ME

rn

You just may be right! STOP BEING SO PERCEPTIVE, YOU'RE SPOILING EVERYTHING

rn

YOU HAVE, BUT I NEVER TIRE OF HEARING IT

Reviewer: emynona Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 07:17 am Title: Breakable

I'm so scared right now. Poor Bill. :((((
Please update soon?

Author's Response:

NO

rn

J/K I'll get right on it ASAP

Reviewer: ms_hopefulcynic Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 05:43 am Title: Breakable

So you are fantastic. I kinda want to have your artificially inseminated children because they would be wonderful. And no, that isn't the Taco Bell and copious amounts of alcohol I've consumed tonight talking... I swear...

Author's Response:

AND YOU DIDN'T

rn

FUCKING

rn

SHARE?

rn

No, fuck you, babies denied, you are clearly a selfish bitch and my baby dressing wants nothing to do with you, good day madam

rn

.... lol who am I kidding, c'mere you crazy kid /noogie

Reviewer: dee25u Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 05:18 am Title: Breakable

Noooooooo! Not Bill! Who were those guys? ! Tomi came just in time, any later poor Bill would have been beyond repair. OMG, it's getting more complicated. I lovvvvvve it!

Author's Response:

THE GAY MAFIA

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 05:04 am Title: Breakable

Oh fuck.

Yes, I know. I am so bright today.

Author's Response:

You are forever radiant in my eyes.

Reviewer: WeStoleEternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 04:56 am Title: Breakable

Adventure Time. 'nuff said.

Author's Response:

I knew I loved you for a reason.

rn

Here I wrote this for you

rn

Tomi, why did you eat my fries

rn

I bought them, and they were mine

rn

But you ate them, yeah you ate my fries

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And I schrei'ed, but you didn't hear me schrei

rn

What kind of twin eats his brother's fries

rn

And doesn't look him in the eyes

rn

Tomi there was smudged eyeliner there

rn

If you saw it would you even care

rn

 

Reviewer: tomsteddybillscandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 04:52 am Title: Breakable

OH MY... i knew something bad's gonna happen. i mean, that taco bell is just to good to be true. can i just say, bill is the luckiest dude in the world for being able to see tom with his hair down when rebraiding.. UGH! and I'm talking about this fic and real life. well, bill is lucky for being with tom all the time in general. 



Author's Response:

It is, isn't it? Shit, I miss Taco Bell sfm. I am both poor, and out of range. I need a sugarparent just to keep me in tacos and empanadas.

rn

Bitch better recognize. /snap snap

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 04:32 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

Whatchu wanna know? lol... I'm a hairdresser, better known as a Hair Ho... You know the type....

Author's Response:

I live in LA, I fuqing well better

rn

That is fascinating tbh, you need to do something with my shaggy mop

rn

I will pay you in nonpareils and chapters

rn

/cheap. ass. bitch.

Reviewer: Hoshika Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 04:09 am Title: Breakable

Oh noes o.o Poor Billa :( *Puts a nurse's hat on dear Tomi* Yaaay, that'll make it all better ^-^ Anywaaaays... Loved it :D
From Miss I'm-Still-Sorry-I-Called-You-A-Lady :3 x

Author's Response:

Thugged out nurses, ugh, yeah, ugh

rn

That, and a CAT scan or six. Maybe some chicken noodle soup, a mother's love... OH WAIT L O L

rn

/jerk

rn

Signed, Mr. I've Been Called Worse and Is Sort of Flattered TBH

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 03:54 am Title: Breakable

Oh no! Must know what happens next! Hopefully soon?

Author's Response:

MAYBE

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/11 03:37 am Title: Breakable

Oh.Mah.Gawd. You know Imma be trippin and flippin tomorrow about this, while Im supposed to be a Hair Ho, right? How am I supposed to concentrate?! O_O Imma be all worried that Bill's in an alley, dying and shit, and fuck someone's hair up, and not in the good way! *wails and goes to find the box of tissues*

Author's Response:

TEAR THEM WEAVES UP GURL

rn

And do it with the knowledge that Bill is not dying, he's just... aquired some wear and tear, is all.

rn

TELL ME MORE OF THIS HAIR HOING /smokes pipe, strokes beard

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