Date: 05/29/11 08:38 am Title: Breakable
BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLL
*wails*
*sobs on you*
btw my notes totally look like Bill's. Except with doodles too. /overachiever
Anyway, back to misery.
MAKE IT BETTER OR ELSE I WILL CRY ALL OVER YOUR GUCCI
Author's Response:
WHY YOU LITTLE BITCH, THAT GUCCI COSTS MORE THAN THREE GENERATIONS OF YOUR IMPOVERISHED FAMILY /slaps you with a glove
rnJ/K no, I'm a firm believer in unconventional happy endings, never fear, dawg
Date: 05/29/11 07:17 am Title: Breakable
Oh God. I love this story *__________*
Really one of the best I've read so far (and I've read maaaany xD).
Pleaaaase update soon. Poor Bill .___. and poor Tom...
Awwww... so bad what happenend in the last chapter. Never expected that.
Author's Response:
Dude, for real? Thanks, that's a HUGE compliment!
rnI HAVE PLANS, NEVER FEAR unfortunately I'm writing this from a dark trunk, having been abducted for the weekend
Date: 05/29/11 02:16 am Title: Breakable
OH GOD NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
D:
Author's Response:
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11eleventy1!!!!!!
Date: 05/28/11 10:30 pm Title: Breakable
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! oh noooooo! bill, you can't DIE, you still have to have HOT NASTY SEX with Tom!!!!! ahhh, bad guys! bad bad bad. D:
Author's Response:
DIE? Dude, no, that's like the one thing I can't write, the line I cannot cross. Which... is weird and sad, but whatever
rnIT WILL BE SO NASTY, SO NASTY YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW, GONNA SCRUB BRUSHES AND COMET WHEN THEY'RE DONE
Date: 05/28/11 09:53 pm Title: Breakable
O____O I'm not even gonna try to leave a coherent review right now! Just update soon please, my heart can't take that much stress!
Author's Response:
He'll be fine, I promise! /gently massages ventricles
Date: 05/28/11 09:34 pm Title: Breakable
OH JESUS I WOULD NEVER HAVE EXPECTED THIS TO HAPPEN
Author's Response:
BOOM, YEAH, WHAT NOW
Date: 05/28/11 08:03 pm Title: Breakable
o_O
hum!! what happened?
Author's Response:
They had a tea party! With fists! :D
Date: 05/28/11 07:39 pm Title: Round One: Fight!
Dialogue from freaking GOD. How do you do it, I don't get it. Your talent soars and I'm waaaaaay down on the ground *_*
Never stop writing, and I'll most likely never stop reading. Your stuff is gold!
Author's Response:
I waited until God went to get another Coke and then I jacked his notes, TELL NO ONE
rnAlso, BULLSHIT. We are soaring wingtip to wingtip, our wingspans casting shadows over mere mortals, MAGNIFICENT PEGASUSESESESESES
rnShit, I gotta sell this crap
Date: 05/28/11 07:15 pm Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
Well I like Nate, Misfits escapee or not :3 Please may we see more of him? Or you know, just more of his texts, they were rather amusing.
I'm looking forward to seeing how Tom survives in this "seamstress' paradise."
:D
Dude you write so good!
Author's Response:
You know it, gurl. /snap snap
rnBy the skin of his teeth, probably.
rn/beams proudly
Date: 05/28/11 05:42 pm Title: Breakable
oh noes! drama indeed. and I'm liking the implication of tom's emotions when he is thinking 'hogawd not bill, he be mah bitchy bff snugglebunny. I wub him and his pretty hair.' (...well, okay. you didn't write that. but that's what you MEANT to write, surely.) because it shows how attached he is to bill, and that he means more to him than he himself has realised. ;) (AND DFSJHKGDFKLJHGSDFJKHGDFJKHDFGKJHDFG BILL'S WANGST WHEN HIS BIKE WAS STOLEN WAS GOLD, M'DEAR. perfectly offset to the general panache of your writing, which is a brand of awesome of its own.)
and your nathan (or 'nayfun' as kelly says it) is brillopants to ridiculous degrees. I KIND OF WANT TO SEE HIM STEALING PICK AND MIX WHILE DRESSED IN DRAG. or give someone a styrofoam wedgie. (idk how it would work out physically, I just like how those two words sound together.)
I enjoy this fic to such a degree that I don't even know what to comment on without wanting to quote and keyboardsmash all over the place, which is a nice change from wanting to puke on people for being so horrible at creating good characters. YOURS ARE PERFECT BB FDJKLHSFGKJHAGKGAFHJJHDFGJHB. (now go fix bill pretty please. XDb)
Author's Response:
I'm just gonna print out this review and staple it to a body pillow and curl up with it like it's my boyfran
rnSTOP READING MY CHAPTER NOTES, OKAY, I FEEL VIOLATED j/k you write Tom better than I do
rnWell, now I have to work 'styrofoam wedgie' in here somewhere. NAYFUN
rnI WOULD APPRECIATE THAT EQUALLY AS MUCH, FEEL FREE TO CAPSLOCK RAGE AND QUOTE AT ME.
Date: 05/28/11 04:27 pm Title: Jerkle Gym
lol tom is definitely having a hard time to deal with bill's attitude.
Author's Response:
He'll learn, all things in time and with the assistance of alcohol.
Date: 05/28/11 04:08 pm Title: Round One: Fight!
awww tom is infinitely interested in bill! haha hope everything flaws as 'smoothly' between them.
Author's Response:
YOU CAN HOPE
Date: 05/28/11 04:05 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
You never cease to amaze me with your extraordinary talents. You brought a tear to my eye and made me question "Why, why did you eat those fries, Tomi?"
Author's Response:
Genau, my poetic talents are limitless, nigh godlike
Date: 05/28/11 04:04 pm Title: Breakable
So I was soooo excited when I saw you had updated, it made my day, but then I get to the end of this chapter and see you left a cliffhanger....Way to ruin my day! lol Ugh how can you do that? Have Bill all bloody and limp in Tom's arms, and just be like "mwahahah i'm gonna leave a cliffhanger"? lol
I knew some sh*t was gonna go down tho! Either Bushido or Andreas did this hmmm maybe Tom will have to get revenge now...
I am happy about how worried Tom is about Bill tho, slasy goodness is getting closer!
Overall I liked this chapter (but then again I always like the chapters cuz I love this fic), but I despise cliffhangers, they're EVILLLLL!!!
You do realize that everyone will be going crazy waiting for you to update!! Gah omg I already am going crazy waiting, and I blame you.
But I shall forgive you because you are amazing!!!!!! And I know the next chapter will be amazing, because this fic is so epic!!!! =D
Author's Response:
LONG REVIEWS ARE MY BLACK TAR HEROIN, KEEP IT COMINGGGGGG
rnI specialize in ruining days, AND LIVES!
rnCloser and closer AND YET CLOSER I SWEAR TO YOU
rnThanks for all that faith you put in me! HANG IN THERE DAWG
Date: 05/28/11 03:54 pm Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
hehe but bill has got to get his clothes from somewhere, right?
see, tom, i told you! jk
up to the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
IKR? It costs to look that damn good. /flips hair
Date: 05/28/11 03:50 pm Title: Breakable
Oh My god Bill you rucklig gonna stay with tom now okay??? Good, you better listen to me.... Fuck it, why did you make this happen? Damn it. Though it was a very good chapter!:)
Author's Response:
Your handle is srsly addicting
rnI DO IT BECAUSE YOUR TEARS OF DISTRESS KEEP ME YOUNG. Also, it's important to the plot. PROMISE.
Date: 05/28/11 03:42 pm Title: Breakable
AGH!! Noooo DONT HURT BILLY- throws fit-
Author's Response:
TOO BAD, SUX 2 B U
rnJ/K it was just this one time, promise
rn/crosses fingers behind back
Date: 05/28/11 02:31 pm Title: Breakable
WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK JUST HAPPENED!? In no fucking way did I see THAT coming, shiiit. Who ever they were, this ainīt over. Can you feel how angry and shocked I am? And this is just fiction... Damn Tom, why you had to try to surprise Bill and not go out to look for him. Aaaah canīt wait for the next chapter to see whatīs happening now : D
Author's Response:
IDK MY BFF JILL
rnOh Hell no it ain't over. BILL WON'T LET IT BE OVER.
rnAND YET YOU MUST, I DEMAND IT j/k working on it rn
Date: 05/28/11 01:48 pm Title: Breakable
Poor Bill
Author's Response:
IKR? 3 jobs, and he never seems to break even
Date: 05/28/11 12:10 pm Title: Breakable
I'm 100% sure Miss Cleo didn't see that coming :P
But damn, Bill is too pretty and sassy to get beat up to that extent. Now Tom is gonna have to control him when he attempts to go on a rampage when he's healed.
I'm wondering is it was a random attack, but w/ Bill and his attitude you can never tell >.<
Author's Response:
You know, maybe, it's true
rnChoke chains and muzzles may be called for
rnYOU NEVER CAN, CAN YOU >:D