Date: 05/28/11 03:50 pm Title: Breakable
Oh My god Bill you rucklig gonna stay with tom now okay??? Good, you better listen to me.... Fuck it, why did you make this happen? Damn it. Though it was a very good chapter!:)
Author's Response:
Your handle is srsly addicting
rnI DO IT BECAUSE YOUR TEARS OF DISTRESS KEEP ME YOUNG. Also, it's important to the plot. PROMISE.
Date: 05/28/11 03:42 pm Title: Breakable
AGH!! Noooo DONT HURT BILLY- throws fit-
Author's Response:
TOO BAD, SUX 2 B U
rnJ/K it was just this one time, promise
rn/crosses fingers behind back
Date: 05/28/11 02:31 pm Title: Breakable
WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK JUST HAPPENED!? In no fucking way did I see THAT coming, shiiit. Who ever they were, this ainīt over. Can you feel how angry and shocked I am? And this is just fiction... Damn Tom, why you had to try to surprise Bill and not go out to look for him. Aaaah canīt wait for the next chapter to see whatīs happening now : D
Author's Response:
IDK MY BFF JILL
rnOh Hell no it ain't over. BILL WON'T LET IT BE OVER.
rnAND YET YOU MUST, I DEMAND IT j/k working on it rn
Date: 05/28/11 01:48 pm Title: Breakable
Poor Bill
Author's Response:
IKR? 3 jobs, and he never seems to break even
Date: 05/28/11 12:10 pm Title: Breakable
I'm 100% sure Miss Cleo didn't see that coming :P
But damn, Bill is too pretty and sassy to get beat up to that extent. Now Tom is gonna have to control him when he attempts to go on a rampage when he's healed.
I'm wondering is it was a random attack, but w/ Bill and his attitude you can never tell >.<
Author's Response:
You know, maybe, it's true
rnChoke chains and muzzles may be called for
rnYOU NEVER CAN, CAN YOU >:D
Date: 05/28/11 11:48 am Title: Breakable
OHHHH SHEEEYAT.
D: I'm horrified! I'm really suspicious that it was Bushido and his gang, but the only thing I can think is that they did it because they think Bill trashed his car. But maybe it wasn't them. Maybe it was the people whose car he did trash? I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO MAKE OF THIS. ;_;
On a separate note, I am still so totally gone for you and the brilliance that is this story. *hides shyly* Seriously, you're like, one of the most brilliant authors ever. *_____* I refuse to read your other fics until this one is done, because if I read them all at the same time, I'll run out of reading material sooner. Gotta stretch it out, y'know? =)
Author's Response:
I LOVE HEARING THEORIES, KEEP 'EM COMIN'
rnAnd good! I don't want anyone to get it :D
rnHahaha, if you hold off until I'm done with this one, YOU WILL HAVE A LONG-ASS EMPTY-ASS WAIT, SRY2SAY
rnBut seriously, flattering, thank you so much! You're always so endlessly flattering, and I don't get it, BUT I LOVE IT. Kinda like how I feel about Rubik's Cubes.
Date: 05/28/11 11:45 am Title: Breakable
DUDE. NO. Just. Fuck. That was horrible. Not the writing, that's always fantastic... just what happened. Heh. But, I guueessss it was probably needed ŽŽ Even so. No. Can't wait for more ;D
Author's Response:
DUDE. YES.
rnAnd yes! Though I am a fan of senseless violence, in this case, it serves a purpose. CAN YOU SAY TURNING POINT
Date: 05/28/11 11:44 am Title: Breakable
Really like this fic! This chapter reminded of a line from The Message by Nas; "But a thug changes, and love changes and best friends become strangers."
I got the feeling that there might be something more beneath the surface of Tom's and Andi's animosity.
It's awesome that you updated so quick, and I really look forward to the next chapter! :D
Author's Response:
Thanks, and dude, that line fits this PERFECTLY, I'll need to check out that song!
rnThere just might be.
rnDon't get used to this update schedule, haha!
Date: 05/28/11 10:41 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Omg please narrate my life.
Or just give me your Bill.
You work wonders with words, did I say that already? Well it's worth repeating, huh.
AND ALSO IN RESPONSE TO YOUR LAST RESPONSE yes people do reply but not everyone, doesn't matter I don't think 'cause you're cool anyhow. I just love getting author responses, dunno why :3
Author's Response:
PAY ME IN DONUTS AND I JUST MIGHT
rnProlly the same reason why reviews are awesome! ESPECIALLY YOURS. You get all enthusiastic, I FOOKIN' LAHV THAT
Date: 05/28/11 10:39 am Title: Breakable
I have to admit that I did foresee something like this but not this exactly. Wonderful writing.
Author's Response:
SOOTHSAYER, SHOULD I BEWARE THE IDES OF MARCH
Date: 05/28/11 10:28 am Title: Breakable
OH NO BILL NOOO!!! Tom and his thuggin past better be enough to keep Bill safe. Or is his past only gonna endanger Bill even more! Drama llama has arrived! D:
Author's Response:
YES BILL YES or so Tom says, sometime in the future
rnOMG YOU GAIZ, DRAMA BOMB
Date: 05/28/11 09:54 am Title: Breakable
Omg!!! Poor Bill..... I'm gonna have nightmares picturing his mangled body :,(
Author's Response:
MY WORK HERE IS DONE
Date: 05/28/11 08:22 am Title: Breakable
CLIFFHANGERRR. I'mma hang you up in a closet till you've written the next chapter.
Author's Response:
/dangles from a coathook, mournfully eating a granola bar
Date: 05/28/11 08:03 am Title: Breakable
I did not lol, Tom is frustrating me being friends with B(something). Love the story, keep up the good work ^^
Author's Response:
Buuuuuuschnitzel? :D
rnThanks, I just might!
Date: 05/28/11 07:19 am Title: Breakable
OH NO! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO BILL?! :(
This chapter was really shocking, I didnīt expected something like this. Poor Bill... I think Bushido is behind this.
And poor Tom... We donīt know very much about his past but I think bloody Bill remind him of someone from past... someone who is probably dead.
I hope Bill be ok soon, I miss his sweet discusions with Tom :D
Oh and have I said I love this story? :-)
Author's Response:
Broke him a little :D NO BUT IT WASN'T ME
rnYou just may be right! STOP BEING SO PERCEPTIVE, YOU'RE SPOILING EVERYTHING
rnYOU HAVE, BUT I NEVER TIRE OF HEARING IT
Date: 05/28/11 07:17 am Title: Breakable
I'm so scared right now. Poor Bill. :((((
Please update soon?
Author's Response:
NO
rnJ/K I'll get right on it ASAP
Date: 05/28/11 05:43 am Title: Breakable
So you are fantastic. I kinda want to have your artificially inseminated children because they would be wonderful. And no, that isn't the Taco Bell and copious amounts of alcohol I've consumed tonight talking... I swear...
Author's Response:
AND YOU DIDN'T
rnFUCKING
rnSHARE?
rnNo, fuck you, babies denied, you are clearly a selfish bitch and my baby dressing wants nothing to do with you, good day madam
rn.... lol who am I kidding, c'mere you crazy kid /noogie
Date: 05/28/11 05:18 am Title: Breakable
Noooooooo! Not Bill! Who were those guys? ! Tomi came just in time, any later poor Bill would have been beyond repair. OMG, it's getting more complicated. I lovvvvvve it!
Author's Response:
THE GAY MAFIA
Date: 05/28/11 05:04 am Title: Breakable
Oh fuck.
Yes, I know. I am so bright today.
Author's Response:
You are forever radiant in my eyes.
Date: 05/28/11 04:56 am Title: Breakable
Adventure Time. 'nuff said.
Author's Response:
I knew I loved you for a reason.
rnHere I wrote this for you
rnTomi, why did you eat my fries
rnI bought them, and they were mine
rnBut you ate them, yeah you ate my fries
rnAnd I schrei'ed, but you didn't hear me schrei
rnWhat kind of twin eats his brother's fries
rnAnd doesn't look him in the eyes
rnTomi there was smudged eyeliner there
rnIf you saw it would you even care
rn