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Reviewer: applesinheaven Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 03:49 pm Title: Perfect Nobody

Oh wow. You got me this time. I cried.....just a little bit. The words were so perfectly weaved together and the plot of the overall story is sound. Bill's background story was so intense and his time and the hospital too. You pegged them so brilliantly that we can feel the tension of them both. I can't tell you how much I love this story and I thank you for sharing it. I can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

GOT YOUR NOSE :D /tweaks

rn

I love reviews like this; they are everything I love to hear. Thank you for taking the time to not only read but review. You make this twice as worthwhile. <3

Reviewer: tilda_93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 12:25 pm Title: Perfect Nobody

This is so real.

Author's Response:

Fact. I am an oracle.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/11 01:28 am Title: Perfect Nobody

oh for fucks sake, I havent even been with you for 3 chapters and your already delying it -headfuckingdesk-
amazing chapter blah -insert what people alred said for I am to lazy-
on another note .... I now have a small taco truck TACO TRUCK. I like tacos

Author's Response:

I do these things just to hurt you.

rn

LAZY TACO FUCKER

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 09:43 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

aw that is whoreable.
I will defiantly stalk I mean follow you on twitter

Author's Response:

UNH UNH

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 09:27 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

I left for my aunts for a visit! I never left you, my heart is always with you!

Nah, your body is worth much much more than a dinky $70 dress.It's not worth possibly getting aids :I

Author's Response:

HI I'M TALKING TO YOU ON TWITTER RIGHT NOW :D

rn

Also, you overestimate the worth of my meatsack

Reviewer: Didyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 05:41 pm Title: Perfect Nobody

*Crying* This story is so good :)

Author's Response:

Here, pls cry into this bone goblet. The tears of beautiful people keep me young.

rn

That, and Diet Pepsi.

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 01:46 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

yes, you always need time to make out with your roomate. lol.

Author's Response:

Honestly, not enough hours in the day.

Reviewer: alexy275 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 10:47 am Title: Perfect Nobody

Please update soon, this is such an amazing story, I love every bit of it, you're an amazing author!

Author's Response:

NO, FUQ U

rn

J/k working on a new chapter as we speak. Or, well... whatever.

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 10:46 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

Oh, you can be all up in my icebox whenever, baby ;)

I WOULD. BUT THAT'S KIND OF HARD TO SEND THROUGH THE INTERNETS.

Author's Response:

/lounges amongst your Capri Suns

rn

FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF-

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 10:34 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

LOL WHAT OMG NOT ANOTHER ONE! YOU AND POOKYKABUKI!! *hides under the rug*

Author's Response:

YES, ME AND THAT PERSON

rn

Hey, we have indisputable good taste. /shrugs, leans like a pimp

rn

Also make sure my dawg D. Trump gets that rug back

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/11 05:58 am Title: Perfect Nobody

i loved that song you recommended :) and this chapter was absolutely amazing, I love the whole feeling put into it , specially the ending

Author's Response:

Thanks! Check out more by her + her old band, Lambretta! They do English music almost exclusively!

rn

Thanks for that, I really wanted it to pack a punch!

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 11:58 pm Title: Perfect Nobody

I haven't been reading long, I still need to go back through the earlier chapters, but this, to me, is all coming together in this chapter. Brilliantly written and intensely emotional. Applause and a tip of the hat to you - bravo, and I look forward to reading much more.

Author's Response:

So I'll just come right out and say it.

rn

I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT TO SAY.

rn

I was stunned to discover you now write for not one, but TWO of my favorite fandoms. Yep. Back in the day, I read your Gundam Wing stuff, hahaha.

rn

So to have you not only review, but praise me, is just... wow. An overwhelming feeling. Thank you so, so much. <3

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 11:20 pm Title: Perfect Nobody

I like how everything was explained in this picture and the emotional growing in it

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 10:55 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

My mother doesn't think we are, and we don't exactly have the same rights. I'm Inuk, bitches ;D You know, Eskimo? Bwahaha be jealous of my sexy ;)

ALSO. I HAVE NO MONEY. MIGHT BE AN ISSUE.

Author's Response:

Would it be very forward to say I want to be all up in your igloo? Probably racially insensitive, though.

rn

PAY ME IN DIET PEPSI, THAT WAS LITERALLY MY LAST JOB

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 10:24 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

^burns notes without reading* Though, I must say, my girl cooties are not terribly girly at all. They can't even be bothered to make sure I wear make up out of the house most days. My cootie are such lazy ass slackers

Author's Response:

Lately, neither can I. I'm the guy who went to get froyo in my polar bear jammies and heels.

Reviewer: writtenaengel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 06:59 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

Well already 4 days was a terrible wait that felt like forever, I guess I don't have a choice but to try and be patient.

Hmm a garden wedding, I think I can work with that hahah

When and where, baby, when and where... =)

Author's Response:

Or you can be doctor and I'll be patient. :D

rn

2012, the ruins of civilization pls RSVP

Reviewer: cellardoor Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 06:56 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

erg, I need to use my english teaching degree for SOMETHING. plus, it's not half as fun writing comments on my students' stories since I can't use my majestic wit and sarcasm. err, yeah.

THESE THINGS DON'T COME FOR FREE. WHERE IS MY STYROFOAM WEDGIE? jk, I'm a cheap ho.
(...no srsly, where is it?)

I'm more lambretta-savvy, really. but linda is something of a national treasure for us lucky, lucky swedenlanders, so of course. ;)

Author's Response:

YOU HAVE AN ENGLISH TEACHING DEGREE. Damn, that's impressive. English is my FIRST language and I'm barely fluent in it. I am however well versed in Denglish. THANKS OMA :D

rn

NO SRSLY IT'LL BE IN AN UPCOMING CHAPTER, HONESTLY

rn

Mmmm, Lambretta. <3 She's gorgeous, and she makes some BOMB ASS MUSIC. I jammed out to "For All My Girls" earlier, and then I cued up Kent because HOLY SHIT THE BUBBLEGUM POP I CANNOT-

rn

If you have any recs, please, give them unto me!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 03:57 pm Title: Perfect Nobody

hahaha, the way you worked the twin angle into this one is priceless. LOL. oh, tom...that's one way to do it...

"I'm starting to see the resemblance," he said. "Way to kick a man when he's down." LOL omg, the lines THE LINES!!

aww, cocky, smartass bill was humbled by tom's confounding loveliness! aw, man, bushido underrated the sob story, it's def not "a bit" of one :/ but i'm glad he finally told tom, and that he's starting to rely on him.

it TOTALLY answered my questions, except for the all-important one which is whenwhereandwhy are they going to fuck? but that's okay. save a few mysteries...and go ahead and take good care of the bullshit, i'll be waiting patiently. go recharge your bitchwizard

Author's Response:

One way. The other way is to wrangle him onto a comfortable surface and not stop until he asks you not to.

rn

SOMEBODY READ THIS STORY WITH A ROLLED UP DOLLAR BILL IN HAND... AND NOSE

rn

Yeah, well, they're all jerks sometimes. Bushido more than most.

rn

When: Soon

rn

Where: Probably the floor. Of the Escalade.

rn

Why: Because it's fun.

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 11:39 am Title: Perfect Nobody

This chapter was beautiful, and I love the insight into Bill's character. Tom's such a sweetheart.

Author's Response:

Thanks! And yeah, he's a real softie. <3

Reviewer: hilary1014 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/11 05:24 am Title: Perfect Nobody

i just started reading tonight and i've fallen hard in love with this story

Author's Response:

Well, awesome! Glad to have you! Stick around, hopefully I can keep you coming back ;)

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