Date: 06/06/11 09:30 am Title: A Force of Nature
Oh that was good. So fucking good. I don't really condone violence but Bill punching a gangbanger is just too good. Gets me all hot and bothered when he goes all Neanderthal ;-) I should sleep dammit! Damn all this fics haha. Love your style ;-) *huggles*
Author's Response:
OO GURL YOU KNOW WHAT PAPI LIKES TO HEAR
rnIt is a law of nature that all exceptions are made for Billsus Khrist.
Date: 06/06/11 02:57 am Title: Breakable
Hmmm I'm actually surprise the attack happened to Bill. The way I got a hint something bad was gonna happen was when Tom came bearing tacos and Bill wasnt there. I am very curious how Andreas comes into all of this! What has Tom done in his past? Will Bushido be a part of it, of whats to come? And Bill does he know Andreas? So many questions!
Author's Response:
Really? NICE.
rnNEXT TIME, ON DRAGON BALL Z
Date: 06/06/11 02:36 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate
LoL Nate sounds like a awesome friend to have! My fav here, "No, Tom, its alright, Bill said softly, and then did the most dangerous thing of all. He smiled." Hahaha Tom sure knows Bill well. Also I wanna say that I love how you arent rushing things with Tom and Bill. Their relationship is naturally growing. (stubborn!Tom and Snarky!Bill). Usually other fics have them going at each others throat by now, kissing and having sex. BUT NOT YOU! So, in a way, thanks.
Author's Response:
SMILING BILL IS DANGER BILL
rnThat was something else I really really wanted to play out; a slow, steady build, something a little more realistic. I'm so glad that you guys are actually liking it and not asking where all the dicks got to
Date: 06/06/11 01:43 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys
I can understand how Tom feels when Bill took off. Cause like my bro he takes off and does crazy shit. Like the time I got a call saying he got shot (Happy to say it wasnt true. Found my bro at a party after a hours search.) I liked when Tom and Bill were both arguing in the ride back home. From the meatloaf to Bills hair and the slap fight! Favorite line "Next red light so help me Jesus, I am going to yank your weave." Made me laugh for five mins!
Author's Response:
I wish you didn't. :/ I know how that is. (Except my bro actually got stabbed, haha. It was in the shoulder and didn't even need stitches, still, all the family was there, it was a big to-do)
rnThat fight was purely for my own enjoyment, truth be told it would have gone on for a chapter if I hadn't told myself to step off
Date: 06/06/11 01:23 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Hmmm YOU SAID IT NOT ME!
Date: 06/06/11 12:54 am Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
I think this was my favorite chapter! It just had everything from seriousness to humor. What Kay One said was sad " Some of us are blind, even with our eyes open." But what made me laugh was the "Cant I just drive pass and push you out the door, and come pick you up in the event I didnt kill you?" The way Tom and Bill interact with each other reminds me of me and my crazy friend. And Bill/Bushido fighting for Tom reminds me when two kids fight over a teddy bear!
Author's Response:
I love Kay One. He strikes me as the best mate that's always cleaning up after Bushido. He's Bu's Tom, hahaha, and Bu is Kay's Bill. TRUE STORY.
rnThat is exactly how it is. I SAW HIM FIRST, HE'S MINE
Date: 06/05/11 10:50 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
LoL I would love to see a pimp out snail, saddly I'm pretty sure they'll die in the heat of where I live. Awww socked hand Bill looks adorable :3 You know Bills favorite color was orange? *pictures Bill in his orange and blue jacket* But than again he has also said red, black and white.
Author's Response:
YOU SEE IT NEXT CHAPTER IN SO THERE'S THAT
rnI think it's awesome that he likes such a zaney color, not that he wears much of it. He's prolly outgrown that jacket now, awwww, poor baby.
Date: 06/05/11 09:25 pm Title: Perfect Nobody
May may may! I was crying the last three chapter! they'r awesome! I really like your story, and this Tom is adorable! Everytime I was reading the way you made him be I feel so touched... Just for the record, that kind of people really exist, they live for that, for make others feel that they're not alone in this world but sometimes we are so blind that we can't see them but they keep around.
Thank's for writing this, i really enjoyed.
Author's Response:
I love that I could make you feel that way! It makes me feel amazing, thank you so much. <3
rnIt's my pleasure! Thanks for taking the time to read and review, especially in another language! Thank you so, so much!
Date: 06/05/11 07:29 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
Toms speech I must admit made me teary eyed. I'm so glad that Bill listened and allow Tom to stay. Me? I would have still kicked him out, but then probably regret it later thinking "Damn! Now I have to pay for all the bills!!!". Also this line made me giggle like crazy " You again, he hissed, I'll have to set out more bitch traps."
Author's Response:
Hahaha, me too, to be honest. Luckily this Bill is a little more forgiving. And poor enough to be swayed.
rnThat one was pretty inspired, I admit.
Date: 06/05/11 07:09 pm Title: Whoopsiedoodles
"You say you are, but you'll do it again anyways. I know how it works, and I don't want to hear whatever you want to say to make yourself feel better." Goddess that just struck a cord with me. My brother is always, ALWAYS doing crazy shit and I just *sigh* dont want to deal with him. But the next day comes and he says sorry, hangs around for a few days doing nothing but than takes off and the shit starts again.
Author's Response:
Man, I always hate hearing people can relate to those parts of my writing. I wish better for you guys, 'cause that shit's fucked up. I wish you related more to the waffles.
Date: 06/05/11 06:50 pm Title: Crowning Achievement
I actually had no idea what a fitted sheet was until I asked my mother. She said its the sheet thats on my bed! Now I finally know :D I'm so smart! *beams happily* " If he didnt value his freedom so much, Tom would've given him an ultimatum." For a coffee stain?!?! Damn Tom you are harsh. Although you'll be happy to know I dont drink coffee, so NO STAINS!
Author's Response:
HOW OLD ARE YOU, WHAT THE HELL
rnDude coffee stains are the WORST. Like, impossible to get out.
Date: 06/05/11 06:35 pm Title: Kicking and Screaming
I dont know why but out of everything in the chapter I like this the most " If you can choose MAC over Maybelline you got to be able to defend the choice." Also I wanna say that I am happy that you made Bill strong. Mostly everyone writes Bill as a defensless skinny scared crying weak guy. But you made him proud strong brave takes no shit kinda guy. And I must say that is refreshing.
Author's Response:
It's a reasonable statement.
rnThanks, he's been a TON of fun to write, it's icing on the cake that you guys like him too!
Date: 06/05/11 06:13 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2
"Well, he sighed into the silence. I guess I had better eat those fucking pancakes." I love you. I would propose to you but I'm pretty sure that you already have many wives. And I'm not that kind of person to share *shurgging* So happy that Bushido is there and Kay One! *sigh happily*
Author's Response:
Hey, it's legal in Utah, let's go for it, we can breed a ToHo cult
rnYES, ANOTHER ERSGUTERJUNGE STAN /high-fives
Date: 06/05/11 05:59 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen
I fricken laughed out loud with this one " Bill sat their centre like Christ at the last supper, if Jesus was an arrogant bitch." I could picture that so clearly! And scared my father while he was driving. HAPPY TO BE ALIVE! I dont know why but I keep picturing or thinking Nate as Andreas! @_O
Author's Response:
I should shoop this some time. It is worthy of a deep Photoshopping.
rnHahahaha NO. HE IS NOT COMPARABLE TO THE CHIN.
Date: 06/05/11 05:40 pm Title: Jerkle Gym
I think everyones favorite line in this chapter is " I could build a fucking jungle gym with the poles wedged up your ass". I said that to my mother and all she said to me was "Stop talking about my ass", other people around us just stare strangely at us. I HAS A COOL MOM! We were at a yardsale0 I BOUGHT A HAMMER! >:D
Author's Response:
True story. At the time I thought it was retarded. I WAS WRONG.
rnSHOW ME THIS HAMMER, IS IT IMBUED WITH THE WILL OF THE GODS, IS YOUR BROTHER LOKI THE TRICKSTER GOD
Date: 06/05/11 05:06 pm Title: Round One: Fight!
Awww Tom is such a cutie :3 "By the grace of God and RedBull" AMEN to that yo, AMEN!!!
Author's Response:
Isn't he? /pinches his cheek, gets slapped
rnPREACH HONEY
Date: 06/05/11 04:55 pm Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
I can just imagine Toms surprise when seeing the dresses *giggle* Awwww I love Toms fathers little speech T_T I wish my father was more like that toward my own brother but NO just yelling *sigh* hmmmm I want grill cheese O_O
Author's Response:
I want grilled cheese too.
rnAnd a father. :(
rnJ/K I totally have one he's just in storage somewhere
Date: 06/05/11 04:40 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Well isnt Bill such a ray of sunshine?!?! If 'sunshine' means a bucket of rusted nails then yes, indeed he is! ^^ It also seems to me he wants Tom to move in with him after Tom said between '600 and 11'. Bill do you need some money help?!
Author's Response:
NAILED IT /slapped
rnBet your sweet peas he does.
Date: 06/05/11 04:06 pm Title: A Force of Nature
*__* You have no idea how much I LOVE YOU! And this only the second chapter. I love a badass!Bill and one that can throw punches and elbow bitches in the face! Oh Tom it seems to me that this is 'love at first sight' you just dont know it yet! XD
Author's Response:
I CAN ONLY HOPE IT'S AT LEAST HALF AS MUCH AS I LOVE YOU.
rnSeriously, you left a review for like every chapter. THAT IS SO AWESOME I CANNOT EVEN
rnI really wanted to experiment with going against the grain! Bill punching bitches in the face sounded about right.
Date: 06/05/11 03:49 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Haha I THINK I read this story before, about months ago but I honestly cant remember for the life of me! Anywho awesome start! I wish I went to a school like this when I still went to high school. Would have been awesome!!! Where I went it was less than 250 students with HIGH SCHOOL AND JUNIOR HIGH SCHOOL STUDENTS COMBINED! Anyway getting off topic. Again AWESOMESAUSE!
Author's Response:
CUPID'S CHOKEHOLD: SO AWESOME, YOU'LL FORGET ABOUT IT. This should have gone into my feature tbh
rnA school that apparently has no classes which Bill and Tom Kaulitz attend? FUCK YEAH BRO
rnDude, at least you weren't homeschooled. Class of one.