Date: 06/08/11 01:17 pm Title: Saying Grace
This was gentle, sentimental, breathtaking (at the end when Bill told Tom he is his best friend), funny (Bill furiously scratching his head or retarded dog, poor Scotty :D), very emotional, so long (I love long chapters) and very cute... I can see them next morning.... Billīs head lying on Tomīs chest, sleeping in his arms... :-) You move a lot in your sleep, everything can happen during night :D
I knew it! I knew from the beginning that Bill is virgin and I am soooo happy that his first everything will be with Tom :-) I canīt wait to read something of the "first times" - and I donīt mean necessary sex, just their first kiss will be enough (for now :-) If I am on cloud nine reading when Bill is saying he likes Tom, I donīt know what I will do by a love making scene... I will probably pass out from emotions :D
AND I have to make a very big confession here: I have read this at work!... two times!... well, I havenīt done much work today :)
I absolutely love you, thank you so much for update :-)
Author's Response:
I can see that too... IN THE FUTURE. The nearish future.
rnHahaha, yeah, he doesn't exactly make it easy to get withing arm's length let alone sexing range. There will be a lot of firsts and a lot of repeats just to make sure they get it right :)
rnTWO TIMES? AT WORK? Dude, you know how to flatter. <3
rnI'm glad it's mutual. <3 You are so very welcome.
Date: 06/08/11 12:41 pm Title: Saying Grace
i am now walking with purple hearts on me. may i have the honor of washing your feet with my hair? *insert a string of filipino adorations here* kudos to tom for making the first move! *waits with puppy eyes for the next chapter*
Author's Response:
O WELL MABUHAY THERE
rnTom always has to make the first move, jfc, why is his mancrush so incompetent
Date: 06/08/11 11:56 am Title: Saying Grace
I LOVE YOU!
Author's Response:
IT IS TOO LITTLE TOO LATE, I HAVE ALREADY LEFT YOU FOR RODRIGO
Date: 06/08/11 11:55 am Title: Saying Grace
ALSO. I totally forgot to say (though I think I've said it enough that you already know what I'm about to say before I say it) THE ONE LINERS WERE AMAZING. I can't even pick a favorite. Good god, you've got to be like, the funniest dude alive. I can't decide whether you're funnier than Dane Cook or close second. BUt I think you might actually be funnier. Just saying.
And lol, why do I get the feeling Bill is gay but doesn't want to admit it? Or maybe bisexual. Or maybe straight, with an attraction to ~Tom~ lol. Whatever, their straight asses are going to end tattooed with each others' names in like, five years, so.... haha! *sashays off*
Author's Response:
FUNNIER THAN DANE COOK. IS SUCH A THING POSSIBLE.
rnBill = stupid. I don't want to spoil anything, but yes, I think we can all agree there are ass tattoos in their future.
Date: 06/08/11 11:50 am Title: Saying Grace
dfkalsfjdasfa I have all kinds of love for you. Seriously, if you were here, I'd be humping your leg like a maniac.
DFJKDLFJDALSKFHDLS. I know I already keyboard mashed once, and am closing in on the limit but GAH! I just... what is there to say? This is pure perfection, plain and simple.
I admire and really respect that you're taking your time and giving realistic pacing in terms of the progression of Bill and Tom's relationship.
I love that Bill is finally opening up, and that they're becoming closer. The fact that Bill didn't flip his shit when Tom asked if he was gay was a mark of how far they've come, but the biggest mark for me was that Tom felt comfortable--felt like it was okay--to ask. If that conversation had happened chapters earlier, I know it would've had a different outcome, and Tom would probably have a few injuries, bahaha.
Bill finally agreed to see Tom's parents, and all I can say is "FINALLY! YES!" He needs to badly to realize just how amazing he is as a person. Tom told him several times, Simone told him, everyone around him is telling him this, and it's heart breaking that he's letting his feelings of self worth be determined by the actions of two horribly selfish parents, and one step parent who was no better.
And Tom. Tom, Tom, Tom, that wasn't a breakthrough that I was expecting, but it was so heart wrenchingly wonderful that he did that, that he finally realized just how good he has it, and how amazing his parents are. He's spent so much time trying to be Bill's support, that I don't think he had the time to let it fully hit him that his parents were only trying to do the same for him.
This chapter was just... beautiful. IT was beautiful in so many ways, and you're brilliant, and this story is amazing, and dfjldfjsalfjdlasfa. AHHHH! /slumps over and tries not to cry ♥
Author's Response:
LONG REVIEW LONG REVIEW LONG REVIEW /claps
rnGo ahead, I've been going through a dry spell
rnTHERE IS NO LIMIT. Smash away my little corn niblet. <3
rnTHANK YOU. I cannot get enough of that. I'm so overwhelmingly glad that you guys love it as much as I do. <3
rnYeah, no kidding. Tom would have been the one behind the dumpsters. J/K Bill would never let anyone find the body
rnBill is unreasonably stupid when it comes to important shit like that. He's the Macguyver of daily survival, but when it comes down to shit that really matters, he rides the emotional short bus right on to Oblivious High.
rnTom's fambly is awesome, and I say that with absolute bias.
rnThank you, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU. You keep coming back and I'm not sure why, but I'm grateful in a thousand different ways.
Date: 06/08/11 11:34 am Title: Saying Grace
You made my fucking night ♥
Author's Response:
My pleasure, as fucking always <3
Date: 06/08/11 11:14 am Title: Perfect Nobody
;______________________;
Author's Response:
YES, WEEP IN ABUNDANCE, INTO THIS CHALICE THAT I MAY DRINK OF YOUR TEARS AND STAY BEAUTIFUL ALWAYS
Date: 06/08/11 09:43 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
WANKSOCK!!!!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!
OH YES YOU FUCKING DID!
Oh how much I would love to hear you ramble all day... seriously freking love this story and I may have to rip my lungs out soon so I wont laugh every 5 seconds.
But seriously (>.>) This is an amazing fic and bloody well done and thankyou.
WANKSOCK!!!
Pombaww
Author's Response:
BET YOUR SWEET SUGAR-CRUSTED ASS I DID
rnWe should hang out, say around 4:20, my place
rnYou are powerfully welcome.
rnPOMBAWW
rnWord to your massive fanny
Date: 06/08/11 05:39 am Title: Saying Grace
YES, damn girl, you've caught me, I'm here just for Nate D:
Anyway *the biggest SQUEEEE ever*
I can't wait for their bonding... And I mean BONDING XD *giggle*
Author's Response:
You little bi-
rnBONDING LIKE MECHANISMS, I WONDER WHO WILL BE THE FEMALE COUPLER
Date: 06/08/11 05:09 am Title: Saying Grace
i love them sleeping in the same bed. i also love that Tom called him his best friend and then that Bill said it back. Super cute. Great chapter, thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
You are most emphatically welcome! Those were some of my favorite parts, too!
Date: 06/08/11 05:02 am Title: Saying Grace
Thank you for updating so soon. You can't imagine how much I needed this delightful distraction. Your foresight and benevolence never cease to amaze me Princess.
Author's Response:
I can imagine! I CAN IMAGINE ANYTHING I PLEASE TYVM
rnYou may kiss my rings. And make me popcorn. Honestly, I am so good to you, allowing you to do these things for me.
Date: 06/08/11 03:40 am Title: Saying Grace
"Scotty's tail wagged obliviously, happy to have his face squished by his favorite person." omg. LOL. this chappie had me crying, then this had me crying laughing. dude, can't even...pinpoint the awesome of this chapter, but i'll say, not only did it have all of the bitchwizard banter that comes standard with you, but also the tearjerkers, and heart-melting-into-a-puddle-of-goo moments to die for. and then BED TIME TOUCH! dude, you really outdid yourself this time.
NOOO IMPLOSION? that sounds bad, but isnt glitter good, generally? :/ please, honey, no need to be alone anymore, i'm RIGHT HERE D: kay? *pats...ravishes*
Ich muss durch den Monsun...dann wird Alles gut. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted to wring as many bodily fluids as possible from you, so I'm satisfied on that point, thanks.
rnGlitter is great UNTIL YOU GET IT IN YOUR EYES AND IT STABS LIKE SHRAPNEL OH SWEET GOD
rnDude no stop serenading me you know my heart was long ago commandeered by Diet Pepsi and naan bread
Date: 06/08/11 02:49 am Title: Saying Grace
Lmfao I really do lovee the way you word things.
Im mommys special little solider, right?
Author's Response:
That sounds inexplicably dirty to me.
Date: 06/08/11 02:41 am Title: Saying Grace
I really really really enjoy this story. You're very entertaining, great humor, and the character and plot development is perfect. Can't wait to find out who was behind Bill's attack and see how Bill and Tom's relationship progresses. YUM
Author's Response:
Wow, that's actually the first time I've been praised instead of the story, hahaha! Thanks!
rnMore to come on all of that, as it were! DELISH.
Date: 06/08/11 02:04 am Title: Saying Grace
Mmm, yeah, that touch at the end was good.
Tom's family IS amazing, and Bill fits right in, whether he knows it or not.
And the toenail painting. I fucking love these boys.
Author's Response:
Man, it was such a relief to put that in there. FUCKING FINALLY.
rnI love writing happy famblies, true facts.
rnHey I'm only one OH. Oh. Oh. ;_;
Date: 06/08/11 01:47 am Title: Saying Grace
Loved it! I am very much looking forward to more! XD
Author's Response:
Me too, son. Me too.
Date: 06/08/11 01:27 am Title: Saying Grace
Thank you for getting your priorities straight and actually listening to the demands of your groupies. You would have had a full blown revolt on your hands if you neglected us. I was working on the banners.
Now to the story...I am loving the tentative gayness...they are both so deep in denial. Gold nail polish on his toes? Might as well tattoo a rainbow on his ass.
Now please donate your sperm so i can have pretty and clever children.
Author's Response:
PUT THOSE BANNER SKILLS TO GOOD USE I still have naked stories tyvm
rnThe best part is that it was the straight guy's idea.
rnShould I just like... jerk it into the box, or into an envelope, or... I've never done this before, you'll have to excuse me
Date: 06/08/11 12:55 am Title: Saying Grace
Really, really good chapter.
Author's Response:
Really, really awesome review. <3
Date: 06/08/11 12:50 am Title: Saying Grace
That was an awesome chapter! Bill's a virgin? And they're finally bonding for realz!! Who saw that coming? The parts with Tom's parents were touching. This was the best chapter ever! You have filled my heart with love.
Author's Response:
Bill is a virgin because everyone's afraid he'll go praying mantis and kill them after
rnI so totally didn't tear up writing that, no, shut up, you don't know anything
rnYou have more than amply returned the favor, darlin'. Thank you. <3
Date: 06/08/11 12:27 am Title: Saying Grace
FINALLY! the romance is coming in woohoo! XD I especially loved this chapter! :)
Author's Response:
Jeez you act like I've been cockblocking you for 19 chapters or sthing