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Reviewer: cellardoor Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 05:37 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

haha, as long as you're feeling like you got some bb. *winks*

thing about royals is that they'd probably just cover the dumpster in sequins, pop open some champagne, and claim it was the new place to partay.

oooh, I like your sister. I want a blue kawasaki ninja. NINJAH. (although, with a vespa, a scarf, and an italian accent you can claim cultural heritage, which is like a get out of jail free card in the EU.)

realism in characters is very important, because if you don't have that then no matter how brilliant your plot is you simply do not have a story. that said, I am all for the wackiest supernatural/sci-fi things. (I once wrote sci-fi mpreg on a challenge. good tiems.) although, your realistic realism is awesomeshizzles, and sometimes there is no room for spacemen with funky eyebrows.

THEY MUST HAVE WIRED YOU WRONG. SWEAT GOES IN THE SKIN.

the invisible tennis ball didn't work. apparently (despite appearances) my dog has teh brainz.

that is always nice to hear from über-awesome people. and here I have been talking about tentacle!hair. you're brilliant.

*squishes* bitte sehr mein strudel. ;) (wow, I really need to get my bitch out or people are going to start thinking I'm NICE. no more afternoon tea invitations. and for SOME REASON, IDEKY I started thinking about this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uICCpXJKApA) err, clearly you're a chosen one since I find so many things to comment on. >.>

Author's Response:

This is the truest thing I have ever heard in my life. (I have an inbred hatred for Royals. Hem.)

rn

I WANT A CHOPPER SO I CAN YELL "GET TO DA CHOPPAH"

rn

.... I'm gonna have to read that.

rn

It works on all the dogs I've been around. And occasionally on me.

rn

HAHAHAHA OH MY GOD BEST THING EVER I FOOKIN LUV YA

Reviewer: Anthem369 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 04:33 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

Nice:)

Author's Response:

Thanks bro :D

Reviewer: EmilyExorsist Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/11 10:41 am Title: Crowning Achievement

ohmigsh so turns out I have no life irl OR online. WHICH MEANS I'VE BEEN ABSENT FROM THIS FIC FOR WAY TOO LONG. *guilt*

Exams abducted me. Are still abducting me. But whatever, some things just have to be done. Like reading this :]

Actually, I've been meaning to say this forever. Since starting this fic at least. I like how slow your taking the ~relationship~ in this fic. I mean, right now there's not even many signs that there will even BE one. Which is new and good and fresh because so often Bill and Tom want at each other like hungry, sexshually charged lions. But in this, there is actually something MOAR to build on first.

I like this, you know I do. Or, I hope you do *LUVS ON FIC*

Also, I'm sure you've been told by now that you're not the only one who feels stupid folding fitted sheets. HOW DO THEY WORK?! Ironing them is even worse ŽŽ

Author's Response:

WELCOME TO MY LIFE except for, you know, I don'tactually go to school, strive to better myself, etc.

rn

Thank you so much, it makes my day every damn time someone brings this up, because it really is one of the most important things I strive for with this. A relationship isn't all about sex or roses, man, there's gotta be more. BUT THERE WILL BE SEXSHUALLY CHARGED LIONSES LATER. I hope. God willing.

rn

Let's hold hands, okay? Okay.

rn

..... you iron them?

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 07:05 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

I don't even know :/

IT'S CALLED IQALUIT, NUNAVUT. GOOGLE THAT SHIT. and it would be cool if you were here, coz then there would be THREE people who like Tokio Hotel in this town.

Reviewer: TokioFan89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 04:42 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

Haha, anything sounds dirty to you though :P, I joke I joke, I kid i kid.
I forgot what you done had said to make me think of that movie, Get Him To The Greek.
Love you! Smiley Face.

Author's Response:

Nope, you got it about right.

rn

Man, I really need to see that movie at some point.

Reviewer: zabixa Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 03:24 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

you come up with the funniest shit i have ever read. its the best when i finish reading a chapter then read your little comment afterwork. you are funny shit.

Author's Response:

Why thank you! I am humorous poops. <3

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 03:22 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

SHIT! Who told you about the baby!? I'm still working to figure out if its yours or if it's Bu's.

Author's Response:

If you shagged Bu, I got nothing but respect. Keep it real, gurl.

Reviewer: JadisBW Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 11:46 am Title: Saying Grace

I adore you and your story...marry me...

Author's Response:

Dude, do this shit properly. You gotta ask my parents for my hand in marriage, dawg. I'm just traditional like that.

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 09:44 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

YES YOU WERE. FUCKING HOT, BABY.

....Your roommate sounds like he could use the taste of my awesome badass kickass-ness that turns everyone into caring people :3
...HA, I don't even know what caring is... Anypoodle, you wanna talk about it, I'm here for youuuuu~

YOU THINK IT'S CHILLY WHERE YOU ARE? It was SNOWING on JUNE 8th where I live ŽŽ BUT OKAI

Author's Response:

What is caring is it a fashion label

rn

WHEREVER YOU ARE I WANT TO BE mostly because I love you but ALSO BECAUSE I WOULD LIKE TO FREEZE MY TITS OFF PLS

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 02:07 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

haha no just excited is all :)

Reviewer: writtenaengel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 01:57 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

Seriously, this was just a sick joke? I can't say i'm pleased to hear that... You're a bitch, and btw I say that as a term of endearment when it comes to you =)

Now be serious here, do you honestly think serial killers spend their time reading Tom/Bill fics? hahah Actually, that would be a bit funny.

p.s. Oh how lovely! I love Daisies lol

Author's Response:

Thanks! I try.

rn

No but srsly. I am constantly working on this one, it's one of my favorites. But I also like my other projects. Gotta show 'em some love, too.

rn

.... there are people who don't?

rn

Daisies are the shit, no lie.

Reviewer: Slashmistress Holly Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 04:34 pm Title: Saying Grace

I wasn't expecting this to be updated so soon and then it was and I was like YUUSSSSSSSSSSSS. I'm glad your life is glitter and confetti filled. And those boys are just too cute

Author's Response:

I WASN'T EXPECTING IT EITHER TBH. I TOLD YOU GUYS I WAS STILL WORKING ON IT.

rn

 

Reviewer: FishPanda Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 01:39 pm Title: Saying Grace

This chapter was AMAZING. I'm so glad Bill's starting to let people in. And the dialogue! Seriously, that is the best part about this fic, how do you come up with all of that? So awesome.

Author's Response:

I leave money under my pillow and the zinger fairy leaves me cue cards.

Reviewer: kazenoarashi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 07:48 am Title: Saying Grace

Delayed review is delayed.

Firstly, I am loving how each character is developing and how Bill seems to be opening up to Tom. It's a wonderful thing to behold! It's not easy to trust someone after years and years of your trust being thrown back in your face and stomped to pieces right in front of you. I love how things seem to be looking up for Bill.

Secondly, I bawled like a baby when I read that part where Tom went back home and just blurted everything out to his parents. OMG, it's not easy admitting all that and I really, really felt for him. I envy families who are so close together that saying a heartfelt 'I love you' is an everyday thing and a hug is freely shared between children and their parents. Whoever has that is very, very lucky.

I thought my crying jaunt was over after that, but nooooo. You made Bill come to dinner at Tom's and whoa! All my waterworks started again.

I just want to hug this fic's Bill. And hug him and snuggle him and wrap him up in cotton and keep him safe. *sniffles* I'd kick his parents if I can find them, too.

Oh my aching heart... *hangs heart on clothesline* Hopefully it gets its shape back.

Author's Response:

I know it's like you have a life or something, lame

rn

Thanks! For me, that's the most important part of the story, that the characters grow, and most importantly, grow together. <3

rn

GOOD, I'M GLAD, because so did I. It's something I think a lot of people can related to - in at least so much as that they want it.

rn

Whoa, really? That wasn't my intention, but IT'S TOTALLY AWESOME.

rn

Hahahaha, Y U SEW CUTE HABIBTI

Reviewer: epitomeofdesire Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/11 05:34 am Title: Saying Grace

Hee hee!! Great chapter as usual. Loved it when Tom said: "He's not a guest, he's a Bill." Lol!

Author's Response:

It's so true though.

rn

HE'S NOT A LADY HE'S A SISTER /Aristocats

Reviewer: zkmmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 05:32 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

I should have just read this to get me out of my funk :) Love the snark so much. I just want to crash tackle Bill and Tom and smoosh them together lol.

Author's Response:

I would prefer you be funk-free, but I'm happy I can help in any way I can. <3

rn

AND PLEASE DO. THEY ARE BOTH IDIOTS. SAVE ME SOME TROUBLE.

Reviewer: fyredancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 04:59 pm Title: Saying Grace

You're jerking me around and I'm liking it too much. :P

Author's Response:

This is how 90% of my relationships go. :(

rn

NO BUT IN EARNEST, I'm glad you keep coming back for more punishment :D

Reviewer: -SB- Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 01:56 pm Title: Saying Grace

I practically jumped in joy when I saw that you HAD updated this regardless to what you told us ;).
This was sooooooooo long and I enjoyed it. Tom painting Billīs toenails, nice :D And theyīre sleeping in the same bed, and Bill finally went to dinner at "Tomīs place", it was very nice and the meeting between Scotty and Bill was kind of funny.
And now, Tomīs emotions are growing and getting deeper!! RIGHT!!??

Author's Response:

I'm cool, great, a jerk, etc.

rn

I know, I didn't know it was turning into such a monster, jfc

rn

RIGHT.

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 01:44 pm Title: Saying Grace

Hi again, my second review for this chapter :)

I forgot to write about Bill and his orientation... (just because I like this chapter so much, during day I wrote notes what I wanted to say in review but I didnīt have pen and paper with me all the time so I just remembered I wanted to add something more....)

I think that Bill is gay, he just donīt know it (he didnīt have any relationship so he really doesnīt know if he likes girls or boys or both) or he donīt want to talk about it, because he likes Tom more than just a friend and he donīt like the feeling. But in his case it is normal, people he had loved, hurt him and now he is afraid of love and friendship...

And Tom...well Tom is bi, apparently he likes girls very much :D but he is beginning to like Bill the same way, when holding or touching him feels right :-)

So... I believe I have written everything I wanted now :-)

Author's Response:

SECOND REVIEW SECOND REVIEW :D /claps

rn

I like that you're putting so much thought into it, because it's not a cut and dried issue, at least not on the surface. It's a complicated issue for him, and I'm glad it's so thought-provoking for you. I cannot tell you just HOW MUCH I love hearing your thoughts on issues like this, it's really helpful, and super interesting!

rn

Also: dude you take notes? YOU ARE MORE HARDCORE THAN I WILL EVER BE.

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 01:25 pm Title: Saying Grace

LOVE. love love love love. Dude. Dude, you get me all excited and shit. INBED. No, I was kidding. (not really.) ANYPOODLE, DUN CRY ALONE. BITCHPLEASE.
Yup. loved this. you're cool.

Author's Response:

I KNOW, I WAS THERE, SMOKING A CIGARETTE

rn

I wasn't crying alone, my roommate was there, filing his nails and calling me a disgrace

rn

You know, it is a bit chilly in here. C'MERE. <3

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