Date: 06/28/11 07:37 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
ONE BIG HAPPY FUCKING MEAL. BUT I'M A VEGETARIAN, OKAY?! ORDER ME FRIES, AND WE'LL BE MARRIED TOMORROW.
Author's Response:
LOL NO I WANT TO ORDER FIRES
Date: 06/28/11 07:31 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
I HAVE NO ARGUMENTS, LOVE. WHEN AND WHERE?!
Author's Response:
TOMORROW, MCDONALDS
Date: 06/28/11 07:31 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Tom is so cute being all over protective and jealous. Can't wait for more! :D
Author's Response:
Me neither! :D
Date: 06/28/11 07:28 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
I LOVE YOU
Author's Response:
WELL IF YOU LOVE ME SO MUCH WHY DON'T YOU MARRY ME
Date: 06/28/11 07:22 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Fantastic long chapter! LOVE it xDD
Author's Response:
FANTASTISCH, GENAU
Date: 06/28/11 07:02 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
I love, love, love their dynamic. Seriously! It's just so.... oh! Tom is so protective of Bill in a way that he deems motherly, but it kind of seems more... boyfriend-ish. :B Heh heh heh. Really though, I love their ever shifting dynamic. It's so subtle, yet so detectable, and... and... and Tom needing Bill to be close to him, omg awwww!
It's so interesting, because it's like you have aspects of IRL Bill and Tom's twin relationship--the need to be close, the need to look out for each other--and aspects of Fic!Bill and Tom's growing relationship. It makes for such a realistic read, and I'm just adoring this.
And AWWWWW SHEEEEYIT. Tom's gettin' a little jealous, isn't he? >:)
Also, THE WIT. It never fails to amaze me. Tetanus shots and lollipops lol. Sweet lord, I don't know where you come up with this stuff but share it? You know I got the Boring DNA. :|
Also, stop running from me on twitter, and I can slather you with even more praise, bro. :P Jk. About the running, not the praise. ^_^
Don't worry about the length, long chapters are awesome--the more to read, the better, I always say. ^_^
Author's Response:
Their dynamic is a HUGE part of what makes this so much fun to write. IDK what I'm gonna do when they go ~steady. Which is, uh, s**n. Like... rull damn s**n.
rnI strive for realism! So I'm glad it comes off as at least reasonably feasible. D:
rnMore than a little. LOOK JUST BACK OFF BILLSUS OKAY NONE OF Y'ALL KNOW HOW TO HANDLE HIM, OKAY
rnReally? It felt flat this chapter. :|
rnRunning? I can no more outrun you than I can my own heart, you are as much a part of me, if not more vital. /strokes your cheek
Date: 06/28/11 06:57 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
His first kiss was stolen! But the girl didn't know any better :( Tom is fueled by the power of jealousy rage.
Author's Response:
Tom's gonna chase her down and slap her until she gives it back. WHO DOES SHE THINK SHE IS, TOM?
Date: 06/28/11 06:56 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Ok, that's it. I'm adopting you and you're coming to ---actually, no, let's just get our own place and we can have spa nights and movie nights and let's get pissing drunk nights and let's do shit all nights.
I loved all this and I reallyreallyreally love Lola and man, poor Tom, poor BILL with his first kiss stolen.
YES TOM, WHO IS GOING TO MAKE IT BETTER FOR HIM NOW, HMMMM?
And shit, now Tom's gotta watch out for Bushido as well. >.>
YIKES!
Author's Response:
OH MY GOD. YES. YES. PLEASE. YES. DO WANT.
rnThat means everything to me! Man, I get so anxious about this story sometimes...
rnTHAT KISS SO TOTALLY DOESN'T COUNT ALRIGHT
rnBushido's just mad 'cause Tom's sex on toast and he's more awkward sexual advances on oatmeal.
Date: 06/28/11 06:38 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Soooooooo
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
Tom is so in love with Bill
cant wait for the next update! :))
Author's Response:
THAT. IS. AWESOME.
rnHe really is. Too bad they're both idiots.
rnMe neither! :D
Date: 06/28/11 06:33 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Psh, we were SO patient. Been drinking too much Haterade I see. Hater.
Bill is just so considerate of poor neurotic Tom and his clean freak ways...Can I get one to help with my pigsty of a room?
Also, the ad at the bottom of this page says 'No CC Required' but I say YOU SHUT YOUR WHORE MOUTH WHEN BILLY MAYS IS TALKING TO YOU to that.
I can't help humming Copacabana every time Lola is mentioned. She is perpetually wearing a fancy feather covered headdress in my mind. Designed by Bill, of course.
Love Torrie.
Author's Response:
I remember when Gail Devers, the runner, once told me that. Man. Good times.
rnI'm more of a Tom than a Bill in that respect. LETS DO THIS. /rolls up sleeves
rnHAHAHAHA I FSCKIN LOVE YA MATE
rnShe would too. Though all that comes to mind is Bill in that Lagerfeld shoot. Haha, man.
rnCrumpets, Kittles
Date: 06/27/11 08:55 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
I cannot describe what I feel when I read this chapter; Once I was under the influence of some prohibited substances , I had the sensation of being hurled out of the Earth’s orbit and eventually stop at the moon, fully engulfed by that sensation of endowment talking with the seven deadly sins. Man, I have to stop smoking. This, or reading your fic. I can’t really determine which one’s healthier or which one’s having a very bad effect on my personal well-being.
And that’s a compliment honey bee.
The point is that you made me happy – the bitch is back! He’s probably falling in love but he’s still back, still a bitch and he’s still got the brains. I thought that after that beating he’d turn into a pathetic piece of human carcass with no memory at all, but you can’t do that...can you?
„I’m awesome and everyone will love me” that part =)))))))) Good one. I think you’d do great at a stand up comedy. That or being a shrink. You should really consider these jobs. Really.
I’d marry you.
Do you have the ring?
Author's Response:
We should smoke up together and sort that shit out. Shit sounds deep, bro.
Date: 06/22/11 05:16 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
first story to completely capture my attention.
the choice of wording is so clever i laugh so much reading this. awesome plot. this is greatness.
Author's Response:
Whoa! That's a Helluva compliment! Thanks a jillion and a third!
rnI'm glad I can make you laugh! That's the best part. <3
Date: 06/20/11 02:39 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Pretty please with sugar on top update!
Author's Response:
I DEMAND BRIBERY
rnI accept epochs espousing my otherworldly beauty and cash money.
rn... and Diet Pepsi.
Date: 06/18/11 10:25 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
god demanding little biotch aren't you? Fine, gimme a few minutes to find it. I shall email you shortly
Date: 06/14/11 08:46 pm Title: Saying Grace
Really, I am sorry about it not being longer, I seriously spent like an hour on the other one, I just didn't have time to rewrite it all at midnight.
You can get your own jellybeans from now on. They fixed their website. www.jumbojellybeans.com just go to the order online button. Heads up though, annoying candy related music will blar out of your speakers as soon as you get there.
Just because I can throw big words around occasionally doesn't mean I write well. But thank you... you know what? If you would like I will e-mail you the only thing I have ever written and felt was good enough to post online. It isn't TH fanfic though, its Mortal Instrumetns fic. Go ahead and send me an e-mail if you would like to see it.
Good, you should use it. Everyone should. We'll make it a thing.
aww *blushes* Thanks, you mean a lot to me too.
Author's Response:
... jerq.
rnBITCH, EXCUSE YOU, I AM MUCH TOO FANCY TO PURCHASE MY OWN JELLYBEANS j/k ordered all of the pink ones, all of them
rnNO. SEND IT TO ME. HERE. NOW. PLEASE.
rn
Date: 06/13/11 08:45 pm Title: Saying Grace
You have no idea how angery I am!!! >:( I lefted like a killer review for you and it didn't show the entire thing!!!!! Instead only the first part of it showed up! T_T Well I am lazy to re-type the whole thing so maybe next time I'll do it again. But for the one on the bottom *points down* That part of the chapter made me tear-eyed since its just so close to the heart for me!
Date: 06/13/11 08:42 pm Title: Saying Grace
"You ask that all the time," Tom half sobbed, "both of you, and I used to... I used to be so annoyed by it, but I get it now, I get why you do it and I don't want you guys to quit asking, or quit worrying about me, or calling me, or telling me to be safe, okay? I don't want... I don't want to lose that."
Gah, Tom!
Author's Response:
I absolutely did not cry writing that scene.
Date: 06/13/11 08:30 pm Title: Perfect Nobody
"Tom didn't know the skinny boy in the coarse hospital gown, with the lank black hair and smudged, bruised face; didn't recognise the chipped, broken nails on the splinted and casted hands. He'd been so desperate to see Bill, to see that he was okay, and this was just... anticlimatic, unfulfilling. Bill wasn't okay. And now that he was here, Tom didn't know what to do with himself, with either of them."
Yeah that pretty much brought tears to my eyes, will infact it was the entire chapter that made me tear eyed. Cause like a year ago my brother got stabbed five times. And we didn't find out about till three days later by one of his friends at a basketball game. We called everywhere for him, asking questions and found out he was in a hospital about three hours drive. We got there and in my mind I was thinking like "Hows he gonna tell my parents what happen, what my parents would do, what kinda trouble he was gonna be in." But once we stepped through the door all of those thoughts went out of my head once I saw the condition my bro was in. He just looked so 'weak'. Like he didn't look like my brother! Than we found out he had heart surgery cause one of the stabbings hit his heart. And gah! It still pisses me off that the police didn't even tell us anything about what happened to my brother! We actually tracked the police down and my mother just bitched the cop out who was there when my bro was transported to the hospital.
So, anyway, yeah. I like this chapter, I love this chapter. Its so realistic. And Bills story is pretty sad. It must be even more worst for your parents to leave you, than for them being died.
Author's Response:
While it's awesome that it came across as relateable, which I strive for, I really sort of hate that it brought back such awful memories for you. I'm sorry for that. :(
Date: 06/13/11 08:04 pm Title: Saying Grace
This is honestly one of my favorite stories on THF. It's so realistic, I'm so glad I can slowly see Bill and Tom's friendship building up unlike other stories where they're already screwin each other in the first few chapters. It's also hilarious too, the only story with sarcastic and cute moments that makes me laugh. I can't get enough of this. You are seriously such an amazing author, like I would get a time machine and bring myself to the future just so I can read the rest of this story. But until then, I guess I'll just have to wait for the next chapter. Thanks for the update :)
Author's Response:
Yeah hi can I just frame this and hang it on the wall where my university degrees should go? Thanks.
rnYou are a total sweetheart. Thank you so, so much for taking the time to tell me this; it makes me light up like Christmas. You make this all so worth it.
Date: 06/13/11 05:01 pm Title: Saying Grace
I always look forward to reading your work. It made my unbelievably shitty day 10x better. :D thanx
Author's Response:
I am always, always happy to bring a smile to your face. <3