Date: 06/29/11 02:51 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Oooooo Tom is so smitten, he's getting all protective and jealous! I adore them and their snarking, their banter and caustic comments just make me so happy.
Bill better be careful he might actually be nice to Tom and then the world will end. But OMG Jenny stole his first kiss, that's so not kewl. Though it wasn't really a kiss more like a lip hug *nods*
Love this chapter Kitty Kat gives me warm fuzzies *smooshes*
Author's Response:
Bill's nice! In his... own... sepcial, way.
rnLOL A LIP HUG, I ADORE THIS, HAHAHA
Date: 06/29/11 02:48 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Hahaha-oh~ I need to go mimis. =_= I'll try to be more eloquent once I get a decent amount of sleep.
Author's Response:
Mimis, d'aaawwww <3
rnYour eloquence is conveyed in every way, from spoken word to the grace in your stride <3
Date: 06/29/11 01:51 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
If i had to quote my fav parts, i would have to quote this whole chapter. Thank you for anothe bloody fkn fab update. OK, enough with all the mushy shit. *thugs and knives*
Author's Response:
MISTRESS
rn/prostrates myself
Date: 06/29/11 01:29 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Another great chapter by the amazing author.
I kinda felt bad for Tom in the part of this chapter, I think he needs to show Bill his true feelings for him.
As for Bill, I feel bad that his mom doesn't even care to search for him but hopefully Tom can be all the support Bill needs.
Author's Response:
Do I look like a dinner roll, 'cause you are just buttering me up <3
rnHe will... as soon as he cops to what those feelings are. :/
rnI think he will be. <3
Date: 06/29/11 12:55 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
PS: Also, there weren't any errors in this chapter :D
But remember that "its" is without an apostrophe when in the possessive.
Author's Response:
I was gonna say! I was wondering! It's just not a Daissa review otherwise. <3
rnI always stumble on that, dammit!
Date: 06/29/11 12:48 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Dude, they're almost as long as my penis. The chapters, I mean. And I was very patient, honey. Waiting. Constantly. For you. Just... Just waiting. For you. And your glorious manjuic- story. Story. I meant story. ANYPOODLE, this was fab. And they should just kiss, coz I sit here, eating Laffy Taffy and just WAITING. Just waiting for them to kiss. WHile I eat my Laffy Taffy.
Author's Response:
You DO have an enormous dick.
rnMY BABY MAYONNAISE, YES, I KNOW
rnThat's a lot of waiting. And Laffy Taffy.
rnBut uh. You won't be waiting much longer. :D
Date: 06/29/11 12:46 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Poor Tom! I don't even like cheese but I'll eat his cheese biscuits with him.
And why in the world did I picture that first scene at night? I was thrown for several seconds when Bill made to go out for the day with Lola. OOOOOOHHH, it's because Tom mentioned the pizza XDD In my house we only get pizza at night.
This bit:
"Yep, caught a movie and spent the rest of the time wandering around. Think he's had a long day though."
Holy crap, I totally misunderstood this at first XD I didn't see that it was Lola talking, so thought it was Bill. And with the last sentence I thought he was referring to his own middle finger having a long day.
Lmao, more misunderstandings. When Tom said "He's my brother" I was all, the hell? Then I realized he's talking in gangsta jargon, hehe.
Haha! And I totally would have followed Bill, too. After the note, I mean.
Lol, how was Tom even hearing that conversation? The quad... A big open space. He would've had to be standing next to them XD Or hiding under some seats! XD
He was glad. Maybe the kiss wouldn't imprint. There was time to salvage it yet. -- Lolol, and who do you have in mind to salvage it, Tom?
Holy geez. This was long. The chapter and the damn review, haha!
Author's Response:
My cheese biscuits are AMAZINGLY GOOD. Like you have no idea. One day I will bake you some.
rnHahaha, um, WHOOPSIEDOODLES
rnSTOP POINTING OUT ALL THE INCONSISTENCIES OKAY SOB SOB j/k you are totally correct
rnHe obviously wants Nate to fill that role
rnI LIKE 'EM LIKE THAT
Date: 06/29/11 12:35 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
"He's one of mine, now. Under my fucking protection.
Was that supposed to give me goosebumps? Because it definitely did.
You're amazing, I love you, and I'm so sorry I tried to retract your royal-nessity. /hands back sash and tiara/ It's a bit stained, but nothing some good 'ole paint-thinner can't take care of. Heh. *grovels*
Author's Response:
I AM GLAD. I enjoyed that bit myself, some. :D
rnYou can be such a bitch sometimes :'(
rnYET I KEEP COMING BACK WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME SOBBITY
Date: 06/29/11 12:26 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
This chapter was so long and packed with happenings! It's kinda all washing over me now.
I love the glimpses into Bill's heart; he's really the kindest guy, curious about his mother, helping Jenny, caring for and valuing Tom and Lola. He's a sweety! He's just a sour jawbreaker with a sweet center. I love that he and Tom are still sleeping together.
Tom surprised me with his gangsterness against Bushido. It resurfaced rather quickly! Tom, I'll eat all your cheese biscuits! But Tom wouldn't care, he wanted Bill to eat them.
Author's Response:
PACKED WITH HAPPENIN'S
rnThat is the perfect description of him, thank you. May just have to use that one.
rnIt's true. There is only one manchild he wants to stuff with biscuits.
Date: 06/29/11 12:12 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
I WANT MORE!!!! This is so good this chapter was amazing please PLEASE write another chapter quickly im dying of impatience already haha
Author's Response:
NO NOT UNTIL YOU USE SOME MANNER OF PUNCTUATION j/k already have the next one plotted
Date: 06/28/11 11:49 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Ah~ Isn't it so cool that we contain only natural colors and natural flavors? B)
Author's Response:
TRUMPETS
Date: 06/28/11 11:48 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
*glomps* Cheese biscuits? Like from Red Lobster? Except like a thousand times better becaue they are homemade? I want some, thwy sound delicious, even if Tom doesn't think they turned out amaing, I am sure they did. I don't understand whats wrong with Bill, cheese biscuits go feliciously well with peppermint ice cream and swedish fish.
I am glad that Lola visited, and got Bill out of the house, but wtf is the meaning of Pink Birds? Flamingoes? What!?*wibbles* I'm so confused...
I am so glad to see that Lola is happy with Tom and his ability to take care of Bill. Their little chat was very spiffy.
It was...wow, Awesome, with a capital A, seeing how whipped Tom was at lunch. And I loved the whole thing with Anis right before that. When Anis was all "I don't get it" I was thin king 'isn't it obvious? He's Tom's Bitch, not in the fun dirty sex way, just the literal he's a bitch, and Tom's, but still Tom's Bitch.' But we shall nwver say that in front of Bill, just like we will never mention his gooey center, or his delicate flowerness deep inside.
I'm psyched to find out that the car situation wasn't his step dad's, even if he deserves it. This is a much better reason to have done that. I am so proud of him for helping her, and for ltting her down so gently and nicely.
Aww, I just want to pinch his jealous lttle cheeks!! Tom was just so wonderful this chapter. But they are both wonderful every chapter.
Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see more soon! *hugs*
Author's Response:
Yep! I make 'em at home myself, actually. /chuffed with myself
rnDiet Pepsi + Swedish Fish = strangely delish NyQuil flavoring
rnHahaha, there's a story behind that. When my sister was little and learning to read, she saw a sign that said "Park Blvd". She immediately started to shriek PINK BIRD PINK BIRD and my mother spazzed, thinking there was a flamingo on the road, haha. It's meant to be a bit confusing though; it's an inside joke between Bill and Lola. One day Tom. One day you will have inside jokes too.
rnSpiffy :D
rnTom is so totally whipped. And yes Bill is his bitch... in all those ways. Eventually. :D
rn~delicate flowerness~
rnBill's an awesome guy like that. Of course, I may be biased.
rnPINCH THEM, PINCH HIS LITTLE CHERUB CHEEKS
Date: 06/28/11 11:22 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
Okay, just wanted to make things awkward, now that the deed is done.
I was all like gahhhh when Tom was jealous at whats her face. And Bill for being a la douche.
AND THEN NORMAL BITCH TAKING HIS KISS, HOW DARE SHE!
Mwaha, I like the long chapters!
Author's Response:
BASIC BITCH, CAN'T KISS
rnTom'll fix that up straight away, as it were.
Date: 06/28/11 11:13 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
So by the phone call I'm guessing that Bills birthday is coming up? Gah! I am so glad you updated! This is my favorite story on here! :D And I was right, Bushido didnt do it! ( he's too good of a guy to do that) Now to wait again for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yes! So far, you're the only one to remark upon that! Yes.
rnOh well why thank you, that's a huge compliment! :D
rnYeah, Bushido's like a bigger, meaner version of Bill. And Kay One is his Tom.
Date: 06/28/11 10:18 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Tom's a goner. No hope for the boy.
I wish I had something more brilliant to say, but I really only have yay! and YES! and More! Please? :)
Author's Response:
Oh yeah. Once you go Bill, you'll never get your fill. Or... so I've been told.
rnEVERY WORD IS LIKE UNTO A GLIMMERING BEACON
Date: 06/28/11 10:16 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
this was amazing :)
Author's Response:
Yet never quite as amazing as you. <3
Date: 06/28/11 08:20 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
I always get so excited when I see that you have updated the story because this story is really good! :D
Author's Response:
Why you adorable little chicken nugget :D <3
rnThank you!
Date: 06/28/11 07:46 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
This update totally made my day! I adore your long chapters!! Awww Tom is so sweet and protective and jealous and in love and I love him! With that said, this kiss totally doesnt count and Tom can still be his first kiss! Go Tom :)
Author's Response:
Well thank you muchly! :D
rnGO TEAM TOM
Date: 06/28/11 07:46 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Dirty Kit.
Date: 06/28/11 07:41 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
FUCK YOU
Author's Response:
DON'T MIND IF YOU DO