Date: 07/06/11 03:00 am Title: Sherlock Homo
-tackles- You bastard Wassee! How dare you write something so epic as this! Truly the nerve of you. And to think I love this chapter, psh blasphemy!
Lmao But seriously it was really good and about fucking time! I was wondering when you were gunna get to the relatinshipish shit, but I guess the wait was well worth it :D
BTW The ST. Michael's thing feels almost like a recap of last night. Dunno lmao. Now get your ass in gear and write more >D
Love you :D
Author's Response:
/rolls/ GODDAMNIT, I FUCKING KNEW IT
rnI'll get to it.... right now :D
rnI was going to mention it, but you guys were talking so fast, and she seemed really single-minded D: So I was like WHATEVER THEY'LL FIND OUT TOMORROW and by they I mean you
rnLove you, bitchface :D <3
Date: 07/06/11 02:33 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Woah, I thought Tom was faking being sick at first. Or that it was just mental.
I don't know why, but this really made me laugh XD > and Scotty bounded off to the side with an ecstatic yip, certain that fun and games were going to happen now that people were on their feet.
So he leaned in, and he kissed him. > Can you believe that my first thought was, Oh no! He's gonna get him sick!!
XDD
Oh my gosh :D *writhes*
Author's Response:
Oh he's mental alright. You gotta be to kiss a Bill.
rnHaha, me too!
rnI'd believe it! I THOUGHT IT TOO.
rnHahaha, you're so cute! I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 07/06/11 02:29 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Okay. I was actually surprised that Bill kissed back O_o' I thought that he was gonna be hella shocked, that he was gonna yell/punch/throw something at Tom. But no, instead HE KISSED BACK!!! And after all this time when Tom said he ain't no homo. But now I am wondering how they gonna act next chapter. Will they pretend that the kiss never happened? Are they gonna be all lovely dovely? Will Bill still be his snarky-badass-self? WILL TOM EVER GET HIS CORNROWS?!?! (by the way I am pretty sure I spelt that wrong)
Author's Response:
You know, I thought the same thing. But nope, apparetly I underestimated myself.
rnSTAY TUNED, SAME BAT TIME, SAME BAT CHANNEL
rnAND YES HE WILL GET HIS GORGEOUS CORNROWS
Date: 07/06/11 02:23 am Title: Sherlock Homo
FINALLY!!!!
i have waited for this moment since the firsst chapter.
i'm really glad they're swapping spit.
really, really glad.
Author's Response:
IT ONLY TOOK THEM HALF THE BRONZE AGE, GET IT TOGETHER GUYS
rnI hope it lived up! :D
Date: 07/06/11 02:21 am Title: Sherlock Homo
"His mouth was sort of big; when he argued, he'd open it wide, as if to fit his entire argument in there."
As you know, you had me at peg. I cracked up at the first line and magically, my awful day was forgotten and in the trash, painful ribs notwithstanding but that's something I can deal with. That line above, I choked on my OJ cos I remembered you talking about how Bill's mouth actually horrifies you cos it's so big and well, you had me blowing OJ out my nose for the next minute.
And everything else.. the family.. too little too late. Strikes a chord and yet, I can't feel depressed about it because there is redemption at the end. And it gives me faith even after the shit that went down yesterday. I feel your story more than you can imagine. LoE too of course but strangely beginning to be able to identify with this one too.
And finally the end. Gosh, exactly what a first kiss ought to be like. So sweet in it's imperfection but that's what makes it so perfect. Who needs fireworks?
Though for someone who likes it rough, you can sure write it sweet ;-)
And the title was exceedingly apt! I loved it.
♥
Author's Response:
HE LOOKS LIKE A BASKING SHARK OH MY GODDDD
rnI'm so glad, so so glad that I could take away at least some of the pain, and give you something better. Hopefully, in time, you just might get your resolution as well. I really want that for you, in every way, in every aspect of your life.
rnI know, I suprised myself. I don't do romance, to be honest; I was crazy mad uncertain of how it'd come off. But it seems I did alright this time. <3
rnHahaha, thanks! I think so too. <3
Date: 07/06/11 02:02 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Watching Bill get flustered around Tom's family was so adorable! And seeing Bill care for sick Tom was really sweet! Bill's a sour jawbreaker, I tell you; hard and sour layers on the outside, but considerable time spent sucking and licking leads to a sweet, sugary center. Maybe someday, Tom and Bill can start on a journey to discover Bill's sweet center together. It will be arduous and not without peril, but they'll have each other. And together, they will find love. ^^
I was getting excited when Tom started analyzing why people think Bill attractive. "Yes!" I thought. "Tom is finally looking at Bill as more than just a roomate! Finally they can fall in love."
And then, the kiss! It was sweet in that it was not that sweet. I re-read those last several paragraphs probably five times, letting them wash over me. What a perfect moment! It was consistent with the rest of the story. Bill doesn't taste sweet; just like Bill, like what they ate last, and like cigarettes.
And then your chapter end notes cracked me up, and I lost that sweet sappy mood. Just throw the errant nipples in later. They wouldn't have fit here -- not at all -- but I can imagine them coming into play later.
I love semicolons too. And hyphenated clauses, and ellipses. And quiet sexually ambiguous word choices.
Thanks so much for this story! This is the kind of story I'd save to my computer when it's complete. It's found a place in my heart.
Author's Response:
I'm trying to calculate how small the font would have to be to get this tattooed on my chest.
rnI'm glad you got excited at that! It's something I've had in the works for AGES now, it's great to see other people were as excited about it as I was, hahaha!
rnI love writing unromance. I really do. I'm so, SO glad you enjoyed it too. <3
rnOh, there will be nipples. OH YES. There will be nipples.
rnThank you so much! ITS RAINING ON MY FACE, I AM SO HAPPY TO HEAR YOU SAY THAT
Date: 07/06/11 01:58 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Well you have been a busy boy!
They kissed *bounces like a loon*
The idea of Tom taxidermied into a bottle opener is both disturbing and fabulous at the same time. Weird. Poor Tom being sick, and Bill not sure how to nurse him better. It was really sweet of Bill to call Nate, and they weren't as snarky as usual.
Tom parents are really awesome, the bike is going to be great for Bill's freedom yet it reduces car time spent together. *wry nod*
Tom's slow realisation that it was just Bill being 'Bill' was sweet, and kisses, gah love it.
More please sir as I need to know what happens. *smooshes my Kitty Kat*
Author's Response:
NOT REALLY. No lie, this was written in like 4 hours on about as much sleep, like... last night, hahaha
rnI KNOW IT'S ABOUT DAMNED TIME
rnThat's just how they roll. They could be sexy and romantic, but that's more your territory than mine. <3
rnI love Tom's parents. I daydream about them adopting me, but then realize I already have a great Mama. <3
rnTHEY RUN AWAY TOGETHER AND GET MARRIED AND HAVE BABIES oh god I don't know how to write romance what am I doing
Date: 07/06/11 01:53 am Title: Sherlock Homo
One of the sweetest kisses I've ever read :')
Author's Response:
Thank you! One of the sweetest reviews I've ever read. <3
Date: 07/06/11 01:44 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Nate sighed. "I hate to see him go, but love to watch him leave."
I hear this exact line about three times a week. Sans Nate, of course (though if Robert Sheehan wanted to throw it out at me, I wouldn't complain.)
Also, ee, kisses! Bout time. ;)
Author's Response:
My interest is piqued. Twitter me more about this. /puffs pipe
rnRobert Sheehan is my homeboy.
rnIKR, THEY ARE BOTH SO INFURIATINGLY STUPID-
Date: 07/06/11 01:39 am Title: Sherlock Homo
beautiful. just beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thank you, much obliged!
Date: 07/06/11 01:36 am Title: Sherlock Homo
That...the end of that chapter. Dude. That was ridiculously gorgeous. I don't even care about the errant missing nipples. That kiss was perfect in all it's imperfection. Nothing sweet, but just right. And the family comment from Mrs. K. And the bike and St. Michael. I love this whole chapter in so many ways.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was really worried about it, it's sort of you know... important, and I didn't want to fuck it up D:
rnHe gets a family! And a Tom. AND A TOTALLY SWEET NEW BIKE, YYYEEEEAAAHHHH
rnSt. Michael is my patron too, hahaha. I'M SO IMAGINATIVE, BREAKING THE MOLD AND SO FORTH
Date: 07/03/11 05:56 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Awesome chapter! Tom's getting a little jealous... I love how protective he is, and the way Bill lets him be protective.
Author's Response:
My favorite parts as well!
Date: 07/02/11 05:33 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN NOT NATE THEN WHO ELSE?"
ME, OF COURSE!
You know... You better uptade quickly before I freaking burst from excitement. Seriously, this story makes me all JDHSKJDHAKJHDSJKL *flail*
Author's Response:
OH MY B LEMME JUST REWRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER
rn/updates
Date: 07/01/11 07:07 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
okay i haven't even made it through the first bit and i already have a huge grin on my face.
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Awesome! Always glad to put a smile on your face. <3
Date: 06/30/11 09:34 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
OMG! So many things happening!! Tom jealous and protective (even getting Bill's back hard with Bushido) and Bill's first kiss... So AWWWW... Hahahaha
Sooooo loving this! Thanks, keep up the good work! ^^
Author's Response:
I KNOW I KNOW AND I EVEN CHOPPED SOME THINGS OUT, HOLY HERA
rnThank you, I will do!
Date: 06/30/11 08:55 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Oh! o///o Thank you. You are too generous in regard to myself. I could never hope to match the grace and beauty of such a Princess as yourself.
Author's Response:
Of course not - you exceed it, in every way. <3
Date: 06/30/11 06:30 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
I LOVE how these things get so long! Loved this chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you!
Date: 06/30/11 05:44 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
oh my goodness, that was amazing. Once again, you have wrote another terrific chapter that made me squeal like a mouse all over the place. It's so cute how Tom is so protective over Bill and I love Jealousy on Tom, it's such a hot thing. Maybe next time we'll get to see the jealous side of Bill? :) Anyways, I love your story, it's like the only one I really care about and track on this site. Can't wait for the next chapter, thank you soo much for updating
Author's Response:
Whoa, that's a mighty compliment right there! Thank you muchly!
rnI agree, though. A jealous, overprotective Tom is a hot Tom. Not... that I can think of a Tom that isn't hot. But you get me. I know you do.
Date: 06/30/11 01:55 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
hiiii! lov this chapter, jaaa poor chicken nugget!!!
You ask that and i say "the longer the better" xD
Keep writting!!!
Author's Response:
Hay gurl haaayyyyyy
rnYou keep translating! AND REVIEWING!
Date: 06/30/11 12:03 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Omg! This is the first time I write a review for this story, I hardly ever write a review 'til the story is finished, but I'm making an exception with this one. I have to tell you that I love the way you write, it makes me laugh the conversations that Bill and Tom have, so full of irony and that stuff. And their way of showing how much they like each other is pretty weird, but I like it anyway. I love the fact that Bill's a completely bitch in this story, he's usually the sweet and weak one, but not in this story. I fell in love with "Cupid's Chokehold" since I read the first chapter, 'cause it's like something different and cool. And although I don't speak english properly and it's really hard for me to understand it (sometimes), I've managed to understand every word I've read, that's nice I think and I've also improved my english a lot by reading stories haha xD Now, talking about this chapter, How on hell did Jenny dare to ruin Bill's first kiss? It was supposed that Tom would give it to him, and that girl fucked it up. Grrr *steam coming out my ears* Anyway it was plain to see that Tom was dying of jealously. When will he realize that he's head over heels in love for Bill? Come on, it's about time! I want more action between Bill & Tom, you know what I mean right? *blush*...Great chapter! I hope you upload the next chapter pretty soon, 'cause this one took you long and I thought I'd die for waiting that much. Lots of love, and bear hugs!
Author's Response:
LONG REVIEW, LONG REVIEW! :D
rnYour English is actually better than most Americans I know, hahaha. You've done well, my child. <3
rnFear not! There will be plenty of gay to go around - starting very, very soon. :D
rnI WILL TAKE THESE BEAR HUGS, ALL OF THEM