Date: 07/06/11 10:30 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaah!! They kissed! They kissed!! *takes deep breath.exhale* I feel like I'm watching my mom's telenovelas where she starts screaming like loca because something very dramatic happened. It feels so good to read this. Heh. So much for leaving him to die, eh Bill? I think we all knew Bill was going to step up to the plate when it was Tom who had to be taken care of. He did it like a pro! ;) I am so happy that Bill has gained a family besides Lola and her mom. It really warmed my heart. I feel so warm and fuzzy now. Thank you for writing this amazing chapter. I love it!
Author's Response:
FUCK YEAH TELENOVELAS I think what this story needs is a sweeping dramatic intro
rnDude Bill's not a pro that's my other story NO I KID I KID
rnYou're very welcome! Keep coming back!
Date: 07/06/11 10:14 am Title: Sherlock Homo
OMG. ASDFASDFASDFASDFASDF THEY KISSED. And it was so freaking perfect, oh my god. I loved this whole chapter. Stinking cute.
Author's Response:
AFTER ONLY 20 CHAPTERS BHCWDSJCHBNKJ I NEARLY GAVE MYSELF AN ANEURYSM
rn/sniffs it
rnWell... it may be a day or two off it's expiration date...
Date: 07/06/11 10:08 am Title: Sherlock Homo
""You're warm."
"Enough about my compassionate soul, am I going to live?" Tom pleaded, reaching up to yank at Bill's towel." my favorite part XD
Author's Response:
One of mine too, haha! Glad you liked more than the kissy parts! XD
Date: 07/06/11 09:33 am Title: Sherlock Homo
This chapter was just perfect! It was perfection, everything about it was so good. Its not going to fast, or slow and we all know it was just a matter of time before the first kiss but i just didnt know when it was going to happen. And at the end of this chapter it ws just the perfect first keep! I'm in love with this story and the way you write, i just had this stupid smile on my face while i was reading (at my job by the way haha) and i was so happy to see this new chapter. Thank you, you made my day much better with this chapter!
Author's Response:
And you have now passed on that stupid smile to me. Thank you so much!
rnI'm reading this in my jammies, while avoiding the dishes! :D
Date: 07/06/11 08:49 am Title: Sherlock Homo
OMG FINALLY THEY KISSED! 20 chapters with nothing and then, BOOM! They kissed! OMG seriously. I can die happily now.
Author's Response:
EXCUSE YOU, NOTHING
rnNo but seriously. Don't die. If I write your eulogy the next chapter will be late.
Date: 07/06/11 08:36 am Title: Sherlock Homo
I think this has been one of my favourite chappies.
Author's Response:
Haha, chappies~
rnNo but srsly, THANK YOU. <3
Date: 07/06/11 07:34 am Title: Sherlock Homo
THIS. THIS. UNEXPECTED. SPEECHLESS. THANK YOU.
Author's Response:
Hahaha! YOU. WELCOME. VERY.
Date: 07/06/11 07:28 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Hell fucking yeah! The moment i've been waiting for xDDDD Perfect!
Author's Response:
I picture you running around like you've just scored a goal at the end of a football game.
rnGGGGGGOOOOOOOOAAAAAAALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
Date: 07/06/11 07:15 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Holy shit.
Author's Response:
Technically it hasn't been canonized yet.
Date: 07/06/11 06:48 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Oh my god kisseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessssss *W*
*tackles you*
Perfectly written, perfectly built up twin kisses are my favorite. And I really really hope you are planning to update soon this time because you just *can't* leave off with kisses and make us wait forever. ._. I'm greedy I know I'm sorry~ *begs for forgiveness...and more kisses*
Author's Response:
YOU AGAIN.
rnYou reviewed ;_; BRB LIFE COMPLETE
rnThey're my favorite too! Man, I deliberated over this shit way too long.
rnTHERE IS ALWAYS MORE KISSES kissing Tom is a gateway drug now Bill will be forced to move onto harder shit to get his fix
Date: 07/06/11 06:26 am Title: Sherlock Homo
the last bit was just amazing, so sudden and so perfect :D
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted it like that, haha!
Date: 07/06/11 05:48 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Oh my Gooooood *explodes with excitement*
THEY KISSED *squeal* it wasn't me but Tom is definitely OK! haha awwwwwwwwwwwwwww *squeal*
And Simone is sooooooooooooo SWEET! :3
And I loved how Tom was trying to figure out what's so attractive in Bill XD (took him long enough)
Just AHHHMAZING! *.*
Author's Response:
NATHALICIOUS, DEFINITION, MAKE KELLY GO CRAZY
rnsorry sorry I'll stop
rnYES, FINALLY, UGHHHHHH
rnNGL, I love writing Tom's parents. They should have a sidestory where they solve homicides.
rnThank you!
Date: 07/06/11 05:17 am Title: Sherlock Homo
omg this is so beautiful!! finally they kissed *_*
Author's Response:
Thank you! About time they got around to it.
Date: 07/06/11 05:06 am Title: Sherlock Homo
yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Best review ever tbh
Date: 07/06/11 04:49 am Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
I love how stupid they are. They are so obviously more than friends. they act completely like lovers. great chapter, i'm so glad i still have one more to go. =)
Author's Response:
They really are just dumb as box of rocks, perfectly suited for one another.
Date: 07/06/11 04:48 am Title: Sherlock Homo
I'm so glad they kissed! I love the way you've done this slow build, but I was definitely ready for them to take the next step.
Author's Response:
I think by 20 chapters EVEN MY DEAD GRANDMOTHER WAS. Not that she's dead. But if she was, she totally would have been. Rigoddamndiculous.
Date: 07/06/11 04:01 am Title: Sherlock Homo
This is a beautiful new addition and the song is a perfect to accompaniment for a kiss of such depth and new-found passion.
Wonderfully done, my Princess.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU, I RATHER THOUGHT SO MYSELF about the song I am not riddled with hubris ty ty
rnI knew it was you as soon as you called me Princess. Missed you. <3
Date: 07/06/11 03:48 am Title: Sherlock Homo
If I didn't know any better, I'd say Bill was just a pasty, white, scrawny, chicken-legged boy.
OH WAIT. He is. But he pulls it off, even in stretch pants and stubble.
But I love this entire chapter! It was really touching when Simone called Bill family. I teared up a bit. Just a bit.
AND THEY KISSED. EACH OTHER. Bill must really almost like Tom if he let such a Phlegm Meister kiss him.
Author's Response:
How are we not best friends yet, let's hold hands
rnIt's better than when Bill makes out with his hand at night, you know, for practice
rnHaha, Phlegm Meister. FACT.
Date: 07/06/11 03:31 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
soo hi i finally decided to review because i just wanted to let you know i squeal really unattractively every time i see you've updated.
i love your writing style so much with all the humor and whatnots~ it makes me smile :)
anywhos onto this chapter~~ i thought it was a pretty perfect build up to their ~*~fist kiss~*~ which was sweet
and the part where they were talking about a stuffed Tom and using him as a bottle opener my first thought was JD's stuffed dog on scrubs. lol it made me laugh.
and idk if you noticed but almost all of your chapter titles sound like they could be porn movies...o.0
sooo i hope you update soon :)
Author's Response:
Hi I like your handle, our handles should hook up sometime
rnI'm pleased as peaches that I can make you smile. Nothing better, in my opinion.
rnHahaha, oh man, I loved that dog.
rnI... I never realized that. I... wow. Just wow.
Date: 07/06/11 03:29 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
AND I WILL BECAUSE I FUCKING LOVE MY BUMBLEMUS PRIME! Actually, I so thought that Bumble Bee would be the next Prime; like no lie.
Psh, It's really her. If it wasn't for her I wouldn't have even half as good of a story. But I'm thankful for that. But who cares D: You're story is amazing. I think I might check out your other ones too, I mean I always am lookin' for more things to read.
But it was a lot of fun talkin' with you last night too :D I may be tired as shit today, but it's kept me in a good mood.
Author's Response:
AMIRITE? /highfives your face
rnDO NOT READ LAW OF ENTROPY, IT IS BAD AND YOU WILL NEVER LOOK ME IN THE EYE AGAIN.
rnWe need to do that again. /quits my job, moved back in with parents, OH WAIT