Date: 07/06/11 08:06 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
More soon, please!
Date: 07/06/11 07:44 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
I dun care if it's graphic D:! I wanna read it.
-hugs- We can have no life together! -sniffle-
Date: 07/06/11 07:39 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
ahhhhhhh boy kissessss finallyyy! i am so happyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.
Date: 07/06/11 06:16 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
lmao you know just because you said not to read it, I will. So far you've yet to do anything to turn me off from you :l
-pat- enjoy living with them. When ever you wanna do that again hit me because I'm lame and my life is the internet XD
Author's Response:
It has graphic raeps in it, NO
rn... so is mine. /cries myself to sleep
Date: 07/06/11 05:47 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
OMG this chapter is amazing and perfect and that everything that is wonderful in the world.
PS. I freaking love semicolons too, I enjoy them very much
Author's Response:
EVEN THOSE LITTLE BUTTER MINTS?
rnWe're totes like, besties
Date: 07/06/11 05:26 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
YAY THEY KISSED :)
Author's Response:
HOLY SHIT HOLY SHIT
Date: 07/06/11 04:59 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
I'M SOWWY FOR MAKING YOU CRAZY! :(
I'm addicted and I just can't get enough *sings*
Author's Response:
NO YOU'RE NOT YOU NEVER ARE oh are those roses
Date: 07/06/11 03:58 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
"I hate to see him go, but love to watch him leave"?! Oh, how I love Nate's little moments!! xD
And that was a sweet end... *sigh* ;)
Author's Response:
Speaking of sweet ends...
rn/watches Bill walk away
Date: 07/06/11 03:57 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
I DON'T HAVE WORDS.
I love this story because it's just... it's just! It just is.
I love this story because it's not merely about the romance. At first, I kind of had the impression that once they realized their feelings for each other, the romance would become the primary aspect, because that's just how most stories seem to go. But it didn't happen that way, and I'm so grateful; I love it! I mean, even with something as pivotal as their first kiss, it wasn't all rainbows and butterflies; it was just something that happened, and that's all there was to it, and it's such a cool way to go about things. I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE YOUR WRITING OKAY? ;~;
I've never heard that song. How have I never heard this song? >_> In any case, it's perfect for Bill and Tom in general, I agree. I just reread the final scene with that music playing. Hoooooooly shit. *_*
Author's Response:
HOW DID YOU KNOW I WAS THINKING ABOUT YOU TODAY oh right twins
rnBTW tell no one but Bill making pancakes was imitating your shimmy to Marry the Night, jsyk
rnSTOP MAKING ME TEAR UP YOU JERQ no but srsly, I wrote this kiss and I was legit like OH MY GOD WHAT AM I DOING I DON'T WRITE ROMANCE WHAT AM I DOING OH SWEET GOD but then my Mom bought me granola bars and I was like I GOT DIS
rnIn all seriousness though, I really wanted to write a story that wasn't heavy-handed on the romance, that took things a little more lightly. I'm pleased as peaches that so many people are enjoying this so much, because tbh, I thought nobody would even read this past the first chapter. :/
rnI KNOW RIGHT, TOTALLY DIDN'T LISTEN TO THAT SONG IN THE SHOWER AND SWOON OVER THE IMPLICATIONS
Date: 07/06/11 03:45 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
FINALLY!
Author's Response:
IKR
Date: 07/06/11 03:42 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
Okay, my first kiss wasn't necessarily bad, but if it were a fraction as good as that one...
*sigh*
THEY FINALLY KISSED. F'yeah. It was so lazy and sweet, and when they kissed, it was so good that I walked away satisfied. xD
Author's Response:
I just... I imagined you hitching up your britches and going, "Yup. That was a good one," and then swaggering away
Date: 07/06/11 02:49 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
well that's good. does this fandom kinda freak you out sometimes when you have this moment when you suddenly realize just how many pervy people there are in it? it freaks me out sometimes...
well if it's like any other facebook relationship then my handle plans on telling your handle it loves it on the second day of dating and it's typing up a love poem that doesn't even make sense as their status right now. haha
Author's Response:
It freaks me out ALWAYS. I dunno if it's just the fact that I'm chill, or that I have a diq, but neither are really an invitation for marriage/sexytiems
rnNot that I'm not down for porn, I mean, I'm on THF, I'm still a human bean, but GOOD LORD
rnThis is the most action I've gotten this week and it's for my handle /choked sob, bites knuckles
Date: 07/06/11 02:17 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
my handle just gave your handle a flirtatious wink ;) it would love to hook up with your handle sometime lol
and i realized after i sent you the review that telling you your chapter titles sounded like porn movies was probably i weird thing to say but then i was like whateves~
Author's Response:
Dude, no
rnI'm super chillax, brah
rnSay whatever, unless it's about like, boning me IRL and planning for it etc.
rnSometimes, this fandom...
rnAnyways our handles are Facebook official now
Date: 07/06/11 01:37 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
*starry eyes* They're going to make beautiful babies together.
Author's Response:
AND TERRIBLE PARENTS.
Date: 07/06/11 01:26 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
half past Fuck This Shit o'clock
best line ever!
this chapter was amazing! loved the kiss, and tom's realization that it was everything about bill that he was attracted to. lovely!
Author's Response:
I use it routinely, usually when my own roommate stays up late gaming.
rnThank you!
Date: 07/06/11 12:55 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
I am absolutely... SPEECHLESS!
WOW!
However there is a few things I want to say :-)
Iīm not going to write how amazing Tomīs parents are... Or how cute is confused and jealous Tom. Or how I liked the idea of "the nurse Bill" - then would be this review too long :-)
But there is something I am obligated to comment....
"So he leaned in, and he kissed him."
This one sentence made me forget everything else from this chapter. You wrote it so genial, like it was something normal but it was a huge moment, very important for every reader. I mean, oh my god, they kissed!!!
This was the most emotional part of this chapter - for me - I felt like I
just got my first kiss. You described it so simple, maybe because of this it was so powerful and intense - just simply love.
And you ended it there! What am I supposed to do until next update? I think I just have to read it again and again and .... again. You better post the new chapter soon :-) I wonīt admit how many times I have read the kissing part (I feel so pathetic, like I donīt have things to do... only reading this chapter.) I wish I had this story as a finished book then I could read it nonstop. This is so frustrating about fanfictions in progress... itīs about waiting... But the pro is, you can truly enjoy published chapters and than you will look forward to every new day, maybe there will be an update :)
So, please please continue soon.
PS: I am so curious about what Bill thinks, a penny for his thoughts :-)
Author's Response:
Review, too long? What a ridiculous notion. Next you will tell me the earth is round and orbits the sun. CARRY ON, YOU
rnYou leave the best reviews, honestly. Every time I doubt whether I did something right, if a scene came out the way I wanted, you review and prove I did alright. I cannot thank you enough for that.
rn"I felt like I just got my first kiss." No I'm not crying over how beautiful that is, leave me alone
rnHey, every time you feel like you have nothing better to do than read this, remember that I have nothing better to do than to write it.
rnBill's really stupid so he's probably thinking something along the lines of "That was nice. I should finish that essay for tomorrow."
Date: 07/06/11 12:33 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
Dammit!! I almost forgot to gush about Nate! I knew he couldn't stay away for too long, but so long he keeps his hands to himself...lookie but no touchie, Nate. Love Nate! And love you for bringing him back. =D
Author's Response:
WHO DOESN'T LOVE A GOOD NATE EVERY NOW AND AGAIN
rnNate's going to get slapped so hard next he puts the moves on Bill. HE IS A DELICATE FLOWER OKAY
Date: 07/06/11 10:58 am Title: Sherlock Homo
THEY KISSED!
omg i am dying!
loved this chapter! :))
Author's Response:
IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME
Date: 07/06/11 10:36 am Title: Sherlock Homo
*attempts to breakdance*
whell fi na LAY
They better be rutting like bunnies in the next chapter if you know what i'm saying (you know what i'm saying)
That was nearly as satisfying as knoking one out Pombaww
You should give your wagina an adrenalin shot 'coz I'm loving it.
Brilliant chapter as always great way to stay up past my should-be-sleeping-right-now bedtime.
Author's Response:
/steps on your belly :D
rnDude. It took me 20 chapters for them to just kiss without really touching. IN YOUR DREAMS SWEETHEART
rnPOMBAWWWWW
rnBABY ARE YOU MCDONALD'S CAUSE I'M LOVIN' IT
Date: 07/06/11 10:30 am Title: Sherlock Homo
I fucking love ittt!!!!!
Author's Response:
HIGH FIVE BRO