Date: 07/26/11 08:37 am Title: Breakable
Ok I just have to say, this is one of the most quotable stories ever. There's too many to even call out. I'd be here all day in a 4 chapter best of the banter feature. so yea thanks.
Date: 07/22/11 07:25 am Title: Sherlock Homo
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. LIKE YOU DONT UNDERSTAND. YOU ARE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL PERSON.
Date: 07/20/11 11:56 pm Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
marry me, 4 serious)))i did choke on my spit though)
Date: 07/20/11 09:59 pm Title: Kicking and Screaming
ok so this is brilliant and edgy and fucking ... mellifluous. lol.
and um, i don`t wanna creep u out (too much) or anything, but i love u for writing this way. and when i say i love you i mean it in the most homosexual way possible))
Date: 07/20/11 11:32 am Title: Sherlock Homo
Awe the ending was so sweet.
Date: 07/19/11 11:46 am Title: Sherlock Homo
AAAAAaa.... so cute, love your story :)
Date: 07/17/11 08:06 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Oh, I see how it is now. You respond to Mohan but not to me. You love her more now don't you? Was I not the one who sent you amazing jellybeans?...I'm just kidding, but seriously if you need more jellybean to feed your muse tell me.
Date: 07/16/11 12:48 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
I squealed when Tom kissed Bill. It was cute. Thank you!
Date: 07/13/11 11:42 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
I stayed up all last night to read what there is of this story so far and I've fallen in love with it. Too many of my tracked stories have been abandoned. Please don't let this become one of them. I love this so much. :)
Date: 07/13/11 03:18 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
Omgosh, they had their first kiss!! That was so cute and realistic :') I loved all the little sarcastic jokes they say to eachother in this chapter, actually I love it in every chapter. Keep up the amazing work!
Date: 07/11/11 08:51 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
Ahem. Who's an ass hat for not reviewing in forever? This girl.
But I'm just gonna go ahead and say that you have been doing quite smashingly in my absence. More than than actually. Spectacularly! Ok no, I think 'smashingly' is a more powerful word.
And well, I don't mind that you left out the nipples, because if and when they finally do appear, they will just be that much more satisfying.
I have honestly made out to that song before. So I'd say that it was a good choice. Btw, I enjoyed the kissing quite a lot. And I also just really enjoy this story, k?
Looking forward to nipples! #lolwutkbye
Author's Response:
Who loves you anyways? THIS GUY.
rn"Smashingly" is such a fancy adjective. Let's go with that.
rnAWESOME. It's on my to-do list to be honest. Well, so is Georg but that's besides the point.
rnNO FOLLOW ME ON TWITTER wait are you
Date: 07/10/11 05:04 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
You THING. I should have been doing something more productive like writing instead of reading the latest two chapters of your story - twice.
My belly shouldn't have swirled all warm at the description of Tom and Bill's first kiss; I shouldn't feel this much glee at the dialogue; and I probably shouldn't be writing all this lest it gives you a swelled head. And yeah, you'd go there, you THING.
Write more, soon!!
Author's Response:
I AM AN IT TYVM
rnNope, you should definitely give me a swelled head. Uh, platonically. DAMMIT.
rnPoint is, THANK YOU SO MUCH. I love hearing that you loved the kiss as much as Bill did :D I MEAN
Date: 07/10/11 03:47 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
Oh my god. Yayayayayayay
Date: 07/09/11 09:38 am Title: Sherlock Homo
WELL???? OMG, It's surprising me!! It was so.... smooth, sweet. I thought Bill will immediately reject the kuss!! God,, super!
Author's Response:
Hell no, he knows a good thing when he sees it!
Date: 07/09/11 02:11 am Title: Sherlock Homo
LOVE. IT. kISSING. HA. HA.
Date: 07/09/11 02:11 am Title: Sherlock Homo
LOVE. IT. kISSING. HA. HA,
Date: 07/08/11 03:02 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
Hehe! I just caught this through my meticulous raking.
and s box of tissues on the table
And this one:
until the it looked fresh
after Bill had bulled Tom into putting his coat on > Lol, is that supposed to be bulled or bullied? I've never heard the former.
And yeah, that's it. Also, I love semicolons too :O
PS: I dread that Bill will snap out of the moment and act like nothing happened XD
Date: 07/08/11 02:39 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
Jajajajaja You really should know that I don't undertand your author's note jajaja ^^ but I love the chapter, i'm feeling realli happy right now, like if was me who has that fantastic kiss, or listen to that wonderful word from Tom's parents... You made my day! I can see the sun shining outside! I trough that the sky was... aaah... you know when have a lot of clouds? jeje I can't remember -.-
But, in other lines, Thanks for the amazing Chapter!
Date: 07/08/11 02:11 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
the pace of this story is realistic. i think i enjoy that the most :)
also you got this chapter out so fast made my morning. cant fucking wait for more : D
Date: 07/07/11 07:04 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
They finally kissed!!!! Yay!!!