Reviews For Cupid's Chokehold
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Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/01/11 12:25 pm Title: Sherlock Homo

to Daissa: God bless you for this information :-D I was wondering why it takes so long to update :-) Hopefuly new chapter will be here soon...

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/11 03:13 am Title: Sherlock Homo

Two days till Leichenwasser comes back home!

Reviewer: nathalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/11 02:58 pm Title: Sherlock Homo

*knock knock*

Reviewer: DSnort Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/26/11 08:37 am Title: Breakable

Ok I just have to say, this is one of the most quotable stories ever. There's too many to even call out. I'd be here all day in a 4 chapter best of the banter feature. so yea thanks.

Reviewer: Gossamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/22/11 07:25 am Title: Sherlock Homo

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH. LIKE YOU DONT UNDERSTAND. YOU ARE SUCH A BEAUTIFUL PERSON.

Reviewer: shaggydog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 11:56 pm Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends

marry me, 4 serious)))i did choke on my spit though)

Reviewer: shaggydog Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 09:59 pm Title: Kicking and Screaming

ok so this is brilliant and edgy and fucking ... mellifluous. lol.
and um, i don`t wanna creep u out (too much) or anything, but i love u for writing this way. and when i say i love you i mean it in the most homosexual way possible))

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/20/11 11:32 am Title: Sherlock Homo

Awe the ending was so sweet.

Reviewer: Didyme Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/11 11:46 am Title: Sherlock Homo

AAAAAaa.... so cute, love your story :)

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/11 08:06 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

Oh, I see how it is now. You respond to Mohan but not to me. You love her more now don't you? Was I not the one who sent you amazing jellybeans?...I'm just kidding, but seriously if you need more jellybean to feed your muse tell me.

Reviewer: applesinheaven Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/11 12:48 pm Title: Sherlock Homo

I squealed when Tom kissed Bill. It was cute. Thank you!

Reviewer: jeanisfunny Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 11:42 pm Title: Sherlock Homo

I stayed up all last night to read what there is of this story so far and I've fallen in love with it. Too many of my tracked stories have been abandoned. Please don't let this become one of them. I love this so much. :)

Reviewer: alexy275 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/13/11 03:18 pm Title: Sherlock Homo

Omgosh, they had their first kiss!! That was so cute and realistic :') I loved all the little sarcastic jokes they say to eachother in this chapter, actually I love it in every chapter. Keep up the amazing work!

Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/11 08:51 pm Title: Sherlock Homo

Ahem. Who's an ass hat for not reviewing in forever? This girl.

But I'm just gonna go ahead and say that you have been doing quite smashingly in my absence. More than than actually. Spectacularly! Ok no, I think 'smashingly' is a more powerful word.

And well, I don't mind that you left out the nipples, because if and when they finally do appear, they will just be that much more satisfying.

I have honestly made out to that song before. So I'd say that it was a good choice. Btw, I enjoyed the kissing quite a lot. And I also just really enjoy this story, k?

Looking forward to nipples! #lolwutkbye

Author's Response:

Who loves you anyways? THIS GUY.

rn

"Smashingly" is such a fancy adjective. Let's go with that.

rn

AWESOME. It's on my to-do list to be honest. Well, so is Georg but that's besides the point.

rn

NO FOLLOW ME ON TWITTER wait are you

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 05:04 pm Title: Sherlock Homo

You THING. I should have been doing something more productive like writing instead of reading the latest two chapters of your story - twice.

My belly shouldn't have swirled all warm at the description of Tom and Bill's first kiss; I shouldn't feel this much glee at the dialogue; and I probably shouldn't be writing all this lest it gives you a swelled head. And yeah, you'd go there, you THING.

Write more, soon!!

Author's Response:

I AM AN IT TYVM

rn

Nope, you should definitely give me a swelled head. Uh, platonically. DAMMIT.

rn

Point is, THANK YOU SO MUCH. I love hearing that you loved the kiss as much as Bill did :D I MEAN

Reviewer: Hanna_LiebeTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 03:47 pm Title: Sherlock Homo

Oh my god. Yayayayayayay

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 09:38 am Title: Sherlock Homo

WELL???? OMG, It's surprising me!! It was so.... smooth, sweet. I thought Bill will immediately reject the kuss!! God,, super!

Author's Response:

Hell no, he knows a good thing when he sees it!

Reviewer: gabby2102010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 02:11 am Title: Sherlock Homo

LOVE. IT. kISSING. HA. HA.

Reviewer: gabby2102010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/11 02:11 am Title: Sherlock Homo

LOVE. IT. kISSING. HA. HA,

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 03:02 pm Title: Sherlock Homo

Hehe! I just caught this through my meticulous raking.
and s box of tissues on the table

And this one:
until the it looked fresh

after Bill had bulled Tom into putting his coat on > Lol, is that supposed to be bulled or bullied? I've never heard the former.

And yeah, that's it. Also, I love semicolons too :O

PS: I dread that Bill will snap out of the moment and act like nothing happened XD

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