Date: 08/04/11 01:49 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
I can't put how much I love this into words. You made it all awkward and endearing and sweet and real. Thanks for the update hun.
Date: 08/04/11 01:11 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
I liked it, the way you show us each wall falling :)
Date: 08/04/11 01:08 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
AAWWW..................... romance! so beautiful... so sweet, I know Bill is sweet sometimes, :* you have no idea how well written this story is...
Date: 08/04/11 12:54 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
There is no doubt that you can definitely write some damn good romance. Everything is so sweet between them now and it's just so...sweet and nice and pleasant. I'm glad you updated this now and not one year later but I hope the next update is as fast as your time allows you to do so :)
Date: 08/04/11 12:47 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
*glomps* YOU'RE BAAACK!!!!! I'm so happy. I will not be verbally nor physically berating you. But *brandishes cast iron skillet* I came armed. I will defend you from anyone who tries.
You...bake your potatoes to mash them? Awesome. Whenever I want mashed potatos at a restaurant I get a baked and mash it myself at the table. Much better that way. Though it does seem like a bit of a was of gas/electric to do that at home. When I'm at home an want a bakd or mashed potatoes I just poke a few hole in them, toss them in one of those foldy sandwich bags, and pop them in the microwave for about five minutes, depeding on size. But whatever floats your boat I suppose. It was a fun scene regardless.
I am really loving the emotion you put into thes characters.I don't care what you say about yourself. You should see about getting yourself published. You are that good.
I love that Tom wants to be gentle with Bill, because Bill derserves it for once. I am so happy to see that Bill is opening up, and accepting Tom's affection.
The whole chapter was fluffy and sweet and romantic and wondcrful...and then we got the call. Bill's birthday passed, and he didn't do anything for it. That is so sad. I'm glad Tom did something for him, even if he didn't tell Billthats what it was or. And oh my goodness, that was probably the sadest home video I have ever heard of. I can't blame Bill for wanting to hide it from people. But really Bill, why must you hurt yourself like that?
Splendid work this chapter. I can't wait to see what yu bring us next. I'm still hoping for a surprise Bill made suit for Tom, sketch form or whole. Something. Keep up the fantastic work. *hugs*
Date: 08/04/11 12:24 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
This was a very sweet chapter! Tom's a great guy to try and salvage what was left of Bill's birthday. I love both sides of Bill, the bitch side and the shy awkward kissy side. Your dialogue kicks ass, I love reading it! I basically just adore this story to pieces.
Date: 08/04/11 12:15 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
Awwww
Date: 08/03/11 11:43 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
kisses *___* You did such a wonderful job. I just adore this story. :)
Date: 08/03/11 11:40 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
you know, the funny thing is, every time i think about this story it gets updated. this was an amazing chapter as usual, and i LOVE the kissing scenes. and the end....oh, Tom is a sweetheart. and i feel so bad for Bill.
Date: 08/03/11 11:34 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
I was just so happy to see the update. And I love that they haven't just hopped into bed to do the nasty. This is so cool, that it's taking time. Thank you!
Date: 08/03/11 11:17 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
Let see here.
A fruit bowl?
Why you keep sayin youre bad at shit? You are fuckin amazing JSYK!
And I wish I had your brain, so I could write a masterpiece like you have here. *jealous*
Anyways .... yeah.
Date: 08/03/11 11:16 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
You ever wonder why people make zucchini cookies? Cause I sure as hell do. Moving on, I loved this chapter. I've loved this from the get-go. And back to the cookies. So my neighbor made these cookies. They looked like brownie drops or somethin. I tried one, and then was informed that they were made of zucchini. WHO DOES THAT?!
Date: 08/03/11 11:06 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
This whole chapter was awesome. So so worth the wait! And I must say you're pretty amazing at writing romance! Love what's going on between them, I find it really realistic and absolutely adorable! Loooooved it ! Can't wait to read more !
Date: 08/03/11 10:57 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
I once was stoned and made mashed potato O.o true story. Weird coincidence. I ended up making out with someone that night, though. Hm. ANYPOODLE! This. Was. Awesome. The wait was worth it, coz you are an amazing author and this story just makes my heart race with the amazing. Bill and Tom and Tom and Bill. Ugh. Fantastic. ILOVEYOU
Date: 08/03/11 10:11 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
The progression is perfect; and quite frankly, you're such a talented writer. I don't see why you couldn't get published, if you really wanted to. Honestly? My opinion is that you should get this fic published. I would buy it, and mail it to you to get it signed (and possibly take myself too lol), no lie~~~ ♥
Bill is slowly opening up to Tom, and Tom is feeling all proud and special because he likes Bill, but doesn't realize it! I'm wondering exactly what Tom's story is; we know Bill's past, but still don't know Tom's. I'm wondering if it's something that will wrench him and Bill apart, or draw them closer to each other, and I'm wondering what his life was like that he can't recognize the "symptoms" of having feelings for someone else. But at the same time, he does acknowledge the symptoms. I love how he looks at his feelings for Bill so matter-of-factly. He recognizes that Bill gives him butterflies, he recognizes that he loves pretty much everything about Bill, flaws included; but he can't put it together to see the big picture. But that's not necessarily a bad thing, is it?
Also, omg, you and this roommate, Leich. Seriously. Lol
ALSO, come back to me, I miss my kitten caboodle. ;~; I've been leaning out the window, staring at the sunrise and sunset wistfully, while sniffling into a lacy handkerchief. And now, to close the melodramatic imagery with a bit of Fort Minor: WHERE'D YOU GO? I MISS YOU SO. SEEMS LIKE IT'S BEEN FOREVER SINCE YOU'VE BEEN ONLINE. *weeps*
Date: 08/03/11 10:02 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
this was a fun chapter! :D Loved it
Date: 08/03/11 09:08 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
*basks and rolls around in this chapter*
Also, I totally was lost in the beginning XDD I'd assumed it would pick up a few moments after the end of the last chapter. But it was car trouble XD
Date: 08/03/11 08:37 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
Our poor abused sheep. For real. I'll have you know I have never fucked a sheep in my life. Although my passport says i'm English not Kiwi so maybe it doesn't count.
I cackled for a good long while at the start of the chapter. Re-read it 3x cos I was laughing so hard. On the first pass I was picturing Tom sitting on Bill's ass and my face was legit o.O cos I thought woah.. moving WAY TOO FAST. And then read the next paragraph and almost fell off my couch. If I get concussion #3 it'll be your fault.
So much of the dialogue etc in this chapter just screams you (and Macfrosty to a certain extent XD). And I am slightly horrified that you guys laughed till you actually peed. I hope you disinfected your kitchen...
You do romance just fine jsyk :-)
Date: 08/03/11 08:16 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
Wonderful job I can't wait for the next chapter x
Date: 08/01/11 02:59 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
Amazing More please!