Date: 09/09/11 12:29 pm Title: In Between
Larry should be an official THF character IMO. XD
-glomps you- Thankies for the new chapter!! It was awesome! <3
Author's Response:
Hahahaha, I know! I HAVE ALREADY DRAWN HIM EROTICALLY, ALL HE NEEDS IS A BANNER.
rnYou're very welcome! Thanks for the review!
Date: 09/09/11 12:28 pm Title: In Between
OK, I was halfway asleep when I read the latest offering from your gifted mind. If I have to quote my favourite part, I would probably have to copy and paste the whole chapter, BALLS, THE WHOLE STORY!
I honestly love how you make it all so real, not glossed over and too perfect. They are snarkey, awkward and downright rude at times. At any moment I could expect one of them to have a ball hair stuck in an elastic and beating the other one up because of it (made since in my mind, OK?)
I actually teared up a bit at Tom’s breakdown. Surprised Bill didn’t tell him to grow a pair, since we know he has so much tact when it comes to sensitive situations. The man is all heart and shit. Just don’t get snot and tears on his skinnies.
I have to once again thank you for such a brilliant story.
Author's Response:
BALLS YOU SAY, YOU HAVE MY ATTENTION as usual as usual
rnHahahaha! Man, it'll have to happen some day. They are awkward dorks, f'real. I know I was at eighteen. Though I was never that cool, or handsome... /wistful gaze into the sunset
rnI'm glad it struck a chord! NGL, I did a little too. Tom is definitely the more emotionally driven character. Bill is deliciously repressed. MAKES HIM A MONSTER IN THE SACK.
rnThank YOU gurl! You always leave such great reviews - it makes posting totally worth it, thank you!
Date: 09/09/11 11:49 am Title: In Between
um...damn that was hot!
Author's Response:
OVER FRESH
Date: 09/09/11 11:21 am Title: In Between
These chapters are worth the wait, Dreggs! I love how they're going further in their relations, yet aren't jumping in headfirst, you know? Sometimes there are moments of insecurity, hesitance, displeasure, uncomfortableness... It makes it very real to me. I reread the last two chapters before this one to reorient myself to their new relationship, and I love how you're depicting it!
Their snarky comments provide endless entertainment to me-- you're so clever! Their dialogue is so cutting and endearing. I wish I was that witty, but instead all I can say are sexually inappropriate comebacks.
Your punctuation is stellar! I am an avid fan of your correctly and geniusly used semicolons and hyphens. :3 It tickles my left parietal lobe. Look what you do to me~
And then all their fooling around. I was chewing gum as I read, when I got to them and their experimental rubbing... Gum forgotten.
That scene in the park was very touching. Teardrop is still inside Baby Thug, no matter how he tries to front. Earlier, I reviewed and said this was the kind of story I would save forever. I say that again, and with stronger conviction.
Long review is long. But you know why? Cuz awesome Dreggs is awesome -- that's why.
Author's Response:
HOW DO YOU KNOW JUST WHAT TO SAY /croons into your hair/ Did you ever know that you're my heeerrrooooo...
rnI am not this clever in real life. Ask Kirsten. She will tell you of my inability to fartmoan on cue.
rnActually, though I'm a private grammar Nazi, Kirsten lent a hand this time around! ROUND OF APPLAUSE AND BUTTERBEER PLEASE.
rnGUM FORGOTTEN brb chortling
rnThank you so, so much for this review, it's just the kind I like - in depth and effusive. :D I really feel like you're enjoying the story, getting as into it as I am, and nothing makes me happier! (Bill with black hair maybe.)
Date: 09/09/11 10:46 am Title: In Between
I missed you!!! Tons!!! I kept waiting, anxiously, for you to update, and usual you don't disappoint.
I see the boys have reached a new level in their relationship. I simply love how you bring them together. Their progression seems so natural and never frustrating. I have found fics where I've yelled out in frustration: "Just shag already!!" I don't get that here, and surprisingly enough, I'm ok with that.
So Andreas is the kind of guy who blames the whole freaking world but himself? Me thinks he needs an intervention of the divine kind...or the Bitch Bill kind. Whichever comes first. Seriously, though, I do understand his stance. Wanting someone to hurt as much as you are or worse is a very easy thing to slip into, also the hardest to overcome. I actually feel sorry for him, but hope that he realizes that kind of anger has to be let go. Nothing he does will bring his little brother back.
Well, luv, I will patiently (read 'edge of my seat and refreshing THF every half hour') wait for the next chapter. I really have missed you so. *hugs*
Author's Response:
I missed you too! C'MON, GROUPHUG
rnI have to say, that is the compliment I value the most; I always worry I rush into things, so knowing that everything seems relatively smooth and natural makes me pleased as peaches. <3
rnAndreas has issues, but hey, who in this story doesn't?
rnHahaha! Next one will be a while yet - working on my FQF and then likely the next chapter of Law of Entropy! But please stay tuned, I love love LOVE your reviews!
Date: 09/09/11 10:38 am Title: In Between
Another brilliant one. Thank you.
Author's Response:
HAPPY BIRTHDAY GURLFRAN :D
Date: 09/09/11 08:56 am Title: In Between
I KNEW IT WAS LARRY!!!!!!!!!!! This was so good - I loved every minute of it. And I was SO not expecting the "Wanna fool around" :P. I LOVE it.
Author's Response:
BUT HOW DID YOU KNOW
rnI mean, who doesn't like fooling around every now and again.
Date: 09/09/11 08:35 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
I have wanting to review this in like forever, only I wasn't gonna do anything until I'd finished my story. Moral of the story: ambition can be a bitch.
You already know how much I love this story, so I'll just stop...you're not buying that, huh? 'K. I'll tell you.
Take that Jenny. That line made me feel like cheering for Tom. It was such a tiny little triumph but it meant so much to him - is he even aware at this point how deeply in uh, Bill he is? *face palms* You KNOW what I mean.
"Lucy I'm home." Just because I do love Lucy, your awesomeness has increased. Again.
The art imitating life potato beater incident. Love love. Were you Bill or Tom in this?
The kissing and finally the tentative touches are my lovely bedtime stories. And just so you know, I WILL be needing more soon.
Author's Response:
It is! That is why I have sworn it off and resigned myself to living in my mother's basement.
rnHahaha, no. Tom is a smart boy and a good boy, but when it comes to Bill he's fucking retarded. That's just part of the joy I guess.
rnI was the Bill. u_u
rnHow lovely! I just updated with a long-ass chapter :D
Date: 09/09/11 08:25 am Title: In Between
Rawr! I like it, like it! *eyebrow wiggle* ilu, Kit. :3
I'mma get to reading though! I've been waiting for this update for..... well, since your last update. LOL
Date: 09/09/11 07:59 am Title: In Between
HOLY MOTHER OF SCHEISSE IS THIS A LONG CHAPTER! AND FINALLY UPDATED! I will read later though. I'mma decorate my room with candles and get lot's of popcorn ready. :3
Author's Response:
HAHAHA, I AM REPLYING!
rnNo but srsly I have no idea how this happened
rnThere is, uh... /coughs/ A need for those candles.
Date: 09/04/11 01:58 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
LOL the comment below me. I actually learnt my lesson when one writer made her characters die and said that's how well the story will go if we push her to update. I say take your time if the story keeps being as awesome.
Date: 08/18/11 02:52 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Ooooooooh, what would life be without the radiance of love? Is there a Romeo wothout his Juliet? A Richard without his Rose? Prince Charming without his Cinderella? Mickey without his Minnie? Batman without his Catwoman? Tom without his Bill?
I hope you realize there is something rather awkward concerning their...how should I call it? I can’t really think about a name right now but the point is that I was expecting a Cruel Intentions (only the first movie) kind of relationship. You know she was the „Everybody loves me and I intend to keep it that way” and the „You’re just a toy, Sebastian. A little toy I like to play with” kind of girl and he was the „I’m sick of sleeping with these insipid Manhattan debutantes. Nothing shocks them anymore” kind of thug.
See the resemblance? No? Maybe I got the wrong idea but oh, well there is still hope.
And I love you. For bringing Nate back to life! FINALLY! I was starting to think that wild, dark times were rumbling towards us but he (my beloved hero), saved the world (and Tom from brain-eating parasites).
You are the feminine version of Michael McIntyre. I might be turning bisexual.
And you are writing romance. I might be starting to lose my last shred of sanity.
Bill enjoys it. I need a hospital check-in.
And turn that Jenny girl into an octopus.
And yeah I was ....gone.. these months. But God had mercy and sent me back so here I am, freshly arrived from Heaven, turning on my computer, reading long-ass chapters, almost dying from laughter (again).
I need a health insurance.
Date: 08/17/11 06:34 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
Gah! You have no idea how happy you made me! :) I had no idea you already updated (last time I read this was july) and so I am HAPPY!
Date: 08/09/11 06:08 am Title: Crowning Achievement
omg...my mom keeps comming to my room becuz i cant stop yelling "BURN BITCH!!!!"
this story is truly amazing! love it
Date: 08/08/11 10:02 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
N'awwww I'm all warm with the fuzzies *snuggleglompsyou*
All the artisans in the world couldn't create something as beautiful as Bill even if they squinted. *fact*
GAH so much sucky face, makes Alli a happy kitty!! *bounce* It's so adorable because it's so sweet and natural and just bone-melting goodness.
Lovin on Lola right now, and Tom for changing his plans and making something sweet and special for Bill. *wibble*
I love you for the brilliant sappy fluff my darling quirky kitty.
Date: 08/08/11 07:16 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
You mentioned new Zealand
let's get married
Date: 08/07/11 09:59 am Title: Jerkle Gym
This is literally genius.
Date: 08/07/11 09:33 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Oh, my god! I love this Bill! awesome!
Date: 08/07/11 12:15 am Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
omg lol to your potato accident and i read all of the story it's really good can't wait for the next chapter :3
Date: 08/06/11 07:01 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Absolutely fucking amazing.
Pretty fucking please update.
PLEASE.