Date: 09/10/11 01:52 am Title: In Between
Everything keeps getting better with each new chapter. Why are you so awesome?
Author's Response:
I don't know. We keep going in for tests, but they're inconclusive. The prognosis is grim.
rnlewl j/k I suck but I love you
Date: 09/10/11 12:45 am Title: In Between
I wasn't expecting that from Andreas' side of the story, but I can see why he would kind of be upset at Tom now, but to hurt Bill over it? (assuming he was the one responsible) doesn't make a lot of sense to me. If I was in his situation, I would want to make the one responsible (or at least who I thought was responsible) hurt, not some innocent person. There just wouldn't be as much satisfaction emotionally hurting someone as opposed to physically (not that I condone violence, or would ever go out of my way to hurt someone, lol) Great chapter! Not only did we get one fooling around scene, but we got two! And a little Madonna is never a bad thing either! She's not one you would typically think to come up in a TH story XD I already said great chapter, so I will just quickly mention how much I love you for writing this story and leave it at that :D
Author's Response:
I think physical violence, in the heat of the moment, is satisfying; but then they heal, but what they've done, the way they've hurt you, doesn't. So you start to get creative, and that's where the need for revenge starts to take hold.
rnTwo, TWO DRYHUMPS! AH AH AH AH okay but srsly tho
rnSssshhhh, sssshhhhh. I know. I know. /cradles you to my manbosom
Date: 09/09/11 11:41 pm Title: In Between
i love this chapter- nice and long. and their relationship is so nice....it's like one moment, they dont really seem to like each other much, then the next moment they're dry humping on couches and in guest rooms. if that's not love, i dont know what is.
Author's Response:
Well I certainly don't know what is!
rnNo srsly what's love is it something you eat
Date: 09/09/11 09:57 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Just call on your Zwilling when you need a hand. We all need somebody to LEEEEEEAAAAAAANNNN OOON ^_^
Date: 09/09/11 09:32 pm Title: In Between
so good so so so so good *_______*
Author's Response:
I KNOW YOU ARE BUT WHAT AM I
Date: 09/09/11 08:52 pm Title: In Between
I love you and your stories so fuckin much.
Author's Response:
/presses a hand to my chest as tears well in my eyes
rnYou... you never told me, I...
rn/passionate snogging ensues
Date: 09/09/11 08:13 pm Title: In Between
I had actual tears in my eyes when they were in the park. I
Author's Response:
Did you shed them? I need them. Like Bill, tears sustain my ageless beauty.
Date: 09/09/11 08:07 pm Title: In Between
I instantly thought of Larry the Lizard XD ROFL
Damn that lizard is famous lol
So much smack talk in this chapter i loved it.
Author's Response:
I KNOW I hear he's gone blonde now like, what is that
Date: 09/09/11 06:07 pm Title: In Between
Fabulous. Love it to pieces.
Author's Response:
Fabulous. Love you to pieces. <3
Date: 09/09/11 05:41 pm Title: In Between
Extra long chapter? You spoil us. :)
I was fully expecting more tentative touches, slowly aware shy looks so I was knocked back and loving where you're taking these two. I'm altogether far too gleeful about it. Was surprised that Bill was so relaxed about finding out about his hospital bill though - thought he'd raise a bit of hell for the sake of his pride.
I really like that there's still a balance with what's happening between Tom and Bill and how they are with each other normally. The sharpness, the jokes, and Bill's masculinity for what it is, still there.
Ha, didn't even think of Lola's mum as Madonna. She's not the maternal girl.
Author's Response:
Hi there! :D
rnMUTUAL MASTURBATION IS A GATEWAY DRUG. They have no idea what they have begun... /haunted look
rnBill has a penis. :( Why do people keep forgetting it at home. :(
rnNo, she's a... MATERIAL GIRL AHAHAHAHAHAHA- /shot in the face
Date: 09/09/11 05:29 pm Title: In Between
Shit! I cannot express how much in love I am with the relationship between Bill & Tom. I can't get enough of these two nor can I get enough of this story. I can hardly wait until ur next post!
Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you, thank you! One of my all-time favorite things to hear, along with "I don't think that's gonna fit" and the sound of a can of Diet Pepsi being cracked open.
Date: 09/09/11 05:22 pm Title: In Between
I was so glad to see another chapter of this, and such a long one, too!
This story just keep getting better and better.
Author's Response:
You again! :D I'M SO GLAD YOU'RE ENJOYING THIS.
rnIt would be awkward if it was just me, fawning over you and your stories, you know... /coughs
Date: 09/09/11 04:33 pm Title: In Between
I love that they're so sweet to each other. ...and I mean that in a very ironically serious way. LOL
I'm quite worried about this Andreas business, but I guess I trust you enough to make it all okay in the end (even if there's lots of awesome angsty drama in between).
Author's Response:
They're sweet! In their... own... retarded... way. :D
rnPeople will get punched in the face, pancakes will be eaten, peepees will be pleasured, AND ALL WILL BE GREAT. And alliterative.
Date: 09/09/11 04:12 pm Title: In Between
OH HOLY COW how freaking long was that *totally in love*
Author's Response:
I know! THIS CHAPTER IS HUNG LIKE A HORSE.
Date: 09/09/11 03:35 pm Title: In Between
What can I say that I haven't said already? Nothing. You know the way this makes me feel.
Oh wait, I know! Larry is VERY pleased. He would like to thank you for the exposure, and to let you know that he is making a website.
www.iwantyourvirginblood.com (I have a fear that this site might already exist...)
He's really hoping to get a lot of virgins. So if you know any? Just saying. He'd really appreciate you passing along the word, brah.
OKAYILOVEYOUBYE
Author's Response:
YOU AGAIN /hisses
rnI keep rereading your email and quietly urinating in excitement. Basically I can only read it in the bathroom, for sanitary purposes.
rnoh god it's prolly already does-
rnHAHAHAHAHAHAHA what are virgins are they a fashion label
rnOKAYILOVEYOUTALKTOYOULATERBUHBYE
Date: 09/09/11 03:29 pm Title: In Between
You got me at hello and I'm not leaving. I just...I don't even know what to give you for a review here, because I just love EVERYTHING about this story.
And you.
Oh god, here comes the sap...
Just....imma go now, ok? *blows you kisses*
Author's Response:
PLEASE DON'T GO /80's ballad
rnI'm just happy you read it and liked it :D That's all I need in life. That, and assless chaps.
Date: 09/09/11 02:35 pm Title: In Between
I love you. Please marry me. And no, no one's ass is getting kicked. Only yours if you stop this amazing romance
Author's Response:
I can't. I am engaged to a delightful grapefruit, and I am a man of my word.
Date: 09/09/11 02:06 pm Title: In Between
Of course that was Larry. How many flying, color changing lizards, with a lust for virgin blood do you think there are?
All through the park scene I just could not get the chorus of Lean On Me out of my head. I very rarely have reason for it to get in there, but when it does it sticks in there for weeks, So, yea, Thanks for that. *cough*
I feel very badfor what happened to Andrew, but Andreas needs to realize that its not all Tom's fault either. Bill is right, Andrew had freewill, nobody forced him to join, and Tom didn't pull the trigger that killed him. He tried to save him. Tom did play a part, but he was not the sole factor. Someone need to give Andreas a bit of a reality check.
I think I love Rocco. How old is he supposed to be 10/12-ish?
Ohh, delightful sexy times. Itsamazing how Bill can look at his body and sees it one way, and Tom looks at him and sees something so different. I just can't believe they are still trying to deny whats going on between them. "If He doesn't see anything and vice versa" pfft. Silly boys.
I'm starting to think you might have been joking about the sexy spanking in chapter 25. I was so looking forward to it too. *sighs* I just don't tink they are going to get that comfortable with eachother in two more chapters...
Can't wait to see more. Keep up the amazing work!
Author's Response:
/pours my cognac, puffs on a cigar, relishes your review as usual
rnLEAN ON ME, WHEN YOU'RE A TOOOOMMMM, I'LL BE YOUR BILL, I'LL HELP YOU CARRRYYYY OOONNNNN
rnHow about Bill's fist in his face? Will that suffice? :D
rnIn actuality Rocco is about 10 or so, as I recall. :D
rnBoys are dumb, sry2say. Especially ones with hang-ups, like Snill and Snom. Gosh, those guys.
rnHahaha, yes. Never believe anything I say. Everything is a joke to me, and I'm also retarded, so I forget things as soon as I say them. TBH I didn't even think we'd get this far.
rnWhy thanks! I THINK I WILL.
Date: 09/09/11 02:01 pm Title: In Between
Eeee! What's this? Two orgasms in one chapter? XD
And squee! Underwater kiss! And yay! Larry! Uh, I mean NOTLarry!
I thought Bill handled the encounter with Andreas really well. And wut, two brothers named 'Andreas' and 'Andy'. Their parents couldn't think of any other name?
Author's Response:
TWO FOR THE PRICE OF ONE that is to say for free
rnUNLARRY, NEGALARRY
rnIt runs in my family to have alliterative names, haha, Margaret and Michael, Joel, Jennifer, Justin, Kevin and Kuybhcnudsjbnc. You know. Normal names.
Date: 09/09/11 01:23 pm Title: In Between
This story is a synonym for word perfection.... I love it so much from the first chapter, you brought some new fresh air here :) I just donīt know what to say, what I didnīt write in my previous reviews... If this story will be published someday I wonīt hesitate for a second and buy it.
You have a great sense not only for humor, but for serious things too... You are very talented and I hope you will do writing professionaly (but then you had to say your real name so I could buy your books :D )
So, enough for your ego and back to this chapter :)
Everytime you make a longer pause between updates I am sure you are writing a long chapter and this time it was really really long chapter. That is great because its like a delicious cake that you can savor with tiny bites and when there is nothing left on the plate you are full and satisfied .
You are writing a lot of sex scenes lately, huh? :D I am not complaining, not at all, keep writing it, I am really enjoying it :) Bill is so sweet, analyzing everything, the progress of their "friendship" is great. I have to admit, I was a little bit afraid of this new relationship thing. I thought it would be more difficult for you to write their snarky conversations, their teasing, when they are more intimate, but I am glad that they are the good old Bill and Tom, who I love so much.
And I love you too, of course :)
Thanks again :)
Author's Response:
I'm just going to sit here, sunburnt from the radiance of this review, okay? Hand me the aloe vera, I'm starting to peel.
rnMY REAL NAME IS WALTHER BURLINGTON III, LOOK FOR ME ON THE INTERNET SOON
rnI gotta admit, I'm as surprised as you are. I'm not a romance writer. :( But so far, so good! :D And man am I glad to hear you're, uh, behind the sex scenes. I'm always so anxious about them! Like now you know what I'm like in bed. (Which is PHENOMENAL btw) (that was a lie I am an awkward giraffe)
rnI love you too! LETS KISS WITH TONGUES