Date: 09/18/11 06:39 pm Title: In Between
I just adore this story. the boys are both so funny, their banter to easy and hilarious. This is becoming one of my all time favorite stories. keep up the great work, i can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Whoa, thank you so much! I'm stoked to hear it! I hope it continues to live up <3
Date: 09/17/11 10:48 pm Title: In Between
I absolutely enjoy reading your story, not many authors can write a good story with an awesome plot and amazing content. This is such a cool story and I'm so glad you still are constantly updating, keep up the amazing job
Author's Response:
Dude, thank you! I love to hear from you guys, and I especially love to hear this! Thanks for reading so far, and stopping to review! I hope you keep coming back!
Date: 09/17/11 09:56 pm Title: I Kissed a Boy and I Liked It
Fabulous chapter! I'm so glad I still have another one to read!
Date: 09/15/11 05:45 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
As you should, my face is amazing :D
Drama whooorrreeee~ But yes, Drama IRL can suckmypenis.
WELL WHATEVER, I AM SECRETLY YOU. And coz I was just fucking so badass, that I went straight to seventh :P
Date: 09/14/11 03:34 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Oh, but how I love making you squeal like a Tomnus! Everyone should squeal like a Tomnus. Twould stop wars. And shit. MY FACE IS ACTUALLY VERY SQUISHY, FYI.
It feels like, yeah? I actually have no clue how long it's been :P
DRAMMAAA~ Woot. Good luck with that, hon (: I'M SURE TWILL TURN OUT FAB.
OKAY I LOVE YOU MORE AND YES, SEE YOU IN SIXTH GRADE. I'LL BE THE OBESE KID WITH PIMPLES WHO SITS NEXT TO YOU. ...I actually have no clue if that's what sixth grade is like but I want it to be like that, kay?
Author's Response:
I knoooowwwww, I like to play with ittttttt.... :D /squishes
rnI'm a drama whore! ... as long as it stays on the interbutts.
rnLOL NO I AM AFRAID THAT WOULD BE ME wait how do you not know what the sixth grade is like
Date: 09/14/11 01:20 pm Title: In Between
Gaaaah! So sexy! Every chapter is better than the one before and I'm totally in love with this fic. Thank you for this huge chapter, it's like a Big Bang in itself! Loved it! Perfect chapter, funny sexy and interesting!
Author's Response:
Bonjour! :D And that is all the French I can claim to know. u_u
rnHahaha, whoa, thanks! I'm so, so happy you liked it so much! You keep me going! <3
Date: 09/13/11 06:18 pm Title: In Between
I very much enjoyed the sexyness in this chapter. Also this fic never fails to make me lol IRL and that's why I love it :D
Author's Response:
I'm so glad to hear it! I am not a master at writing the sexytiems. u_u SO I AM VERY REASSURED BY ALL OF THIS, TY
rnAnd I love you! For reviewing, and also for being sweeter than cupcakes!
Date: 09/12/11 11:12 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
This story is unfolding appropriately, believably and at the right pace - slowly!
You have taken your good, sweet, patient and well crafted writing time to this point, DO NOT let the horn dogs encourage you to go any faster than these 2 oh so genuine believable young men would naturally go. Being a Mom of one young man (currently thinks he’s bi?) and surrogate mom to many of his friends (2 gays friend in a pose of 8), I know what these boys were going through. You are a guy so you know the lovely, eager yet oh so guarded mind of an eighteen year old boy.
All to say you are writing this story perfectly in dialogue, character development, prose and pace. Condos my dear
coco
Author's Response:
This is EXACTLY what I love to hear! There is no greater praise for me than to be told things are happening as realistically as possible, and that the characters are relatable! Thank you so, so, so much for reassuring and encouraging me! I appreciate it like you wouldn't believe.
rnBelieve me, the horn dogs can entertain themselves, haha. I'mma do what I want, how I want, with who I want, and that's why I have herpes. JUST KIDDING JUST KIDDING it's chlamydia.
rnLike any teenage boy, there's curious, and then there's HOLY SHIT I THINK I LIKE GUYS, and it's a big difference, though it may not seem it. Two guys who were straight until recently will do a whooooole lot of soul-searching before diving into balls-deep anal sex. SORRY FOLKS, DEMS THE BRAKES.
rnYou seem really cool, and not just for flattering me, haha! If you ain't already, join me on Twitter, or even email me!
Date: 09/12/11 06:40 am Title: In Between
I think this chapter killed me. It was just what I needed after my day today, so thank you.
Frottage; todays favourite word.
I love the scene in the park, it was so adorable to see them opening up and trusting each other enough to share their hurt. Same with the talk in the bedroom, it makes me so happy.
I'm a proud Mama *snuggles and stuffs you in my pouch*
Author's Response:
I'm glad! It's always there to brighten your days, even if I'm not. :(
rnFrottage is a good word. Nice to bump into, repeatedly.
rnYES!! Hahaha, those parts were hard as Hell, so thank you!
rn/curls up into a little ball on top of textbooks
Date: 09/11/11 08:06 pm Title: In Between
I loved the chapter.. yeah, it is possible i've said I loved another before but it is true. I really really like the way your write, you made me laugh and almost cry in the same chapter. You've kept me chained to your story from the very beginning. And I plan on keeping attached to it some more.
Love is a powerful force, this boys will discover it's strength soon enough.
See you next chapter.
xoxoxx
Author's Response:
LOVE ME LOVE ME, SAY THAT YOU LOVE MEEEEEEE
rnI feel like I should just... just let you write all my summaries, ALL THE SUMMARIES OKAY, ALL OF THEM.
rnI hope I see you there! Thank you so much, for sticking this out!
Date: 09/11/11 03:08 pm Title: In Between
Um... wow
Author's Response:
Um... thanks :D
Date: 09/10/11 05:23 pm Title: In Between
But I LIKE your version of mushy and suckface. I really, really do. I like that the dam didn't just break and they end up banging on the couch. They're still taking it slow and careful.
MADGE! *facepalm* Of COURSE it's Madge. Good grief, my derp.
This was a fantastic update. Absolutely satisfying, though maybe not sticky boxers satisfying, BUT CLOSE. >_>
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I can't speak for other guys, but unless you're both gay and know it, skipping straight ahead to banging is pretty damned rare, haha. THEY'RE STILL FEELING STUFF OUT but mostly each other, le cough.
rnI adore your derps! I feel better if awesome people derp too. <3
rnBUT CLOSE. <3 I'm so, so glad you enjoyed it, thank you!
Date: 09/10/11 04:36 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Nein Wassee no die ;-; I'll cry like forever..FOREVER! That's a long time.
ooooooohHHH i guess I need to relearn my aminals. o.o
Yeeeeessss sexy time! You've come so far since the first post -dabs at eye with your shirt- Eeew dude this smells; wash it.
"Life As We Know It" Is a redonkulussly cute/ funny movie. One of my favuorites right now :X
Date: 09/10/11 02:29 pm Title: In Between
LAAAAAAAARY~ You know, that part just made this story a million times better? not that it wasn't already like, one of the most fucking awesome stories one here. Ever. Legit. And dearlord. THE PORNZ. Twas not full porn. but it was full of awesome porn. Did that make sense? No? GOOD.
But really. I missed this story more than even I realized. And it hasn't even been that long since an update. I'M ADDICTED, LOVE. truly. Utterly. Addicted. I just love this so much ^^ The way you write Bill, so bitchy but so lovable, and Tomi being all... Cute-like. IT MAKES ME WANNA LA LA. Honestly though. You're so fucking talented. Truly. I want to cry, with how amazing this is. And now that Tom and Bill finally have a semi-sort of relationship, I know that I will just love this story more and more. BUT OHMIGAWD IT WAS SO MUSHY. I adored it. The mush. It overwhelmed me. IN THE BEST OF WAYS.
Yeah, that;s all I've got. ILOVEYOU.
Author's Response:
No stop you're making me squeal like a Tomnus /squishes your face into strange shapes
rnHas it really not been that long? D: IT FEELS LIKE AN AGE. But I'm so glad you're sticking around!
rnNow that they're sort of boning and sucking face a lot, you know what this means. RELATIONSHIP DRAMA. And exploring feelings oh God why am I doing this to myself
rnOKAY I LOVE YOU TOO SEE YOU ON TWITTER LEWL HDGDL SEE YOU IN THE SIXTH GRADE~
Date: 09/10/11 09:34 am Title: In Between
I LOVE this chapter!!! They did it! twice! I really like the change in Bill. He finally started opening up, though he's stupid! he could have a house with a pool...
Talking about stupid, Why does he think Tom is so smart? I've got the impression he is far smarter than Tom!
I can't wait to see how things will develop between them!
Author's Response:
Hahaha! Yeah, him and Tom are just two retarded peas in a dysfunctional pod. <3
rnTom is book smart! But Bill is street smart. TOGETHER THEY ARE still totally retarded.
Date: 09/10/11 08:48 am Title: In Between
As if I didn't fangirl this, and you, hard enough already you come here and you give me this.
Unf. Unf unf and another time, unf.
I don't know what to say other than that this is my favorite fic right now. Hands down.
Author's Response:
I know I'm such a bastard, but kiss me anyways
rnDude. THAT IS MORE THAN ENOUGH. THANK YOU. <3
Date: 09/10/11 08:11 am Title: In Between
this was good and funny and sexy X3
Author's Response:
Stop describing yourself jeez
Date: 09/10/11 05:04 am Title: In Between
hmm... my favorite quote from chapter 12 '
"Words can lose power, when they're said too often. Like when you say 'I love you' over and over and over again, it stops meaning anything. They're just words, and you start to doubt what they mean - whether they mean anything at all anymore. 'I'm sorry' is the same way.Instead of saying 'I'm sorry' or 'please forgive me', I want to say this instead - be patient with me. Have faith in me. I'm just Tom. I'm only 18, and I'm going to make mistakes - but I learn from them." (Tom Kaulitz, Cupid's Chokehold by Leichenwasser)" this quote weally affect me... after that I always remember that words can lose power., so I say what exactly Tom said when someone wouldn't forgive me =) I always put it on my profile
Author's Response:
;_; I... I'm not crying, and I'm not totally touched by this, and... and... ;_;
rn;_; Okay thats it, GROUP HUG, JUST YOU AND ME ;_;
Date: 09/10/11 03:33 am Title: In Between
DUDE OH MY FUCKIN' GAWD :OOOOOOOOOOOO Fuckin' amazzzzing...That's what Bill said.
Lmao dude, I nearly flipped fuckin' shit when I saw that you posted. And I nearly died when I saw the bit about the lizard. Hrm I wonder where on earth I could have seen that before...Any clue?
But yay Bill and Tom had sexy (ish) time Bil and Tom had sexy (ish) time...pft no I'm not some little third grader who is sooo entertained by sexy (ish) time! -looks up porn and giggles-
You know this review is strictly just a ramble, because well I feel like rambling and talking.
You know what I should do? I should give my opinion on every single sentence you wrote in the chapter, then duuuuuuuude that'd be like one long review about how amazing you and this story is! Dude Imma do it O.O!!!!!!!
OKay! First sentence! -clears throat-
"What are you doing this weekend?" - Well I was really hoping it was going to be Bill asking Tom on a date, but in the end I'm extremely happy with how it turned out!
"Bill asked from the bathroom, raising his voice to be heard since Tom was on the couch in the living room, lacing his shoes and waiting on Bill, as usual." - Well this one made me think of Bill standing in the bathroom attempting to style his new BLOND HAIR. WTF I mean really ;-;
MEeeeeeh this is to tedious. Let's just leave it at I love this chapter. I love this story.AAAANNNNNNDD I LOVE APPLESAUCE. But that's beside the point.
I love you Wassee ;D
P.S I really want to write a story about Bill and Tom based off of the movie "Life as we know it" With you. Yup that is all, thank you kindly -nods-
Author's Response:
YESSSSSSS SURRAH LIKES IT, I CAN FINALLY DIE AT PEACE no j/k I can't die until this is finished sobbu
rnLizard what lizard I'm pretty sure it was an antelope
rnIT WAS VERY SEXY TIEMS OKAY /throws a book, realizes how much I liked that book, goes to pick it up
rnI ALSO LIKE APPLESAUCE AND WORDS, MARVELOUS.
rnNo but "Life As We Know It" what is this what
Date: 09/10/11 03:05 am Title: In Between
*rolls around in this like Kaulitz-kits catnip* Awwwwwww yeeeeeeeeeeeah.
So that makes Lola.......LOURDES?
Author's Response:
Ahahahaha! OH YOU. <3
rnLOL NO yes. /hangs head