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Reviewer: Ryuuzaki_L Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/06/11 08:03 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

You'd think there'd be a limit to how many times you can re-read a fic... SO WRONG. Beating all world records here! #Officiallyhasnolife

Reviewer: YaoiBubbleKnickKnacks Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/04/11 04:01 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

This is a really good story! Please continue it!

Reviewer: kazenoarashi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/11 09:28 am Title: The Teenage Dream

OMG LOL! The angst! The angst!

Not.

I utterly enjoyed this second courtship. It wasn't as emotionally taxing as the first time, but no less as enjoyable to read about :) It's courting Bill, Bill's way :P

And creamed corn? I can say that I've tried it once, raw, and once, cooked. And both times I swore not to touch it again, if I have any knowledge of it. Team Tom!

Reviewer: ChunyGurl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/11 07:10 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

LoL the change frog reminds me of Narutos bag! xD

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/11 02:30 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

I'm in love with this story.

Reviewer: mamare Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/11 01:24 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

That change frog is incredibly cute, just like this chapter ;)

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/11 09:04 am Title: The Teenage Dream

Sweetheart you have just made my day/night/week thingie. Loved this chapter so much from the teasing to the outright fistycuffs and all the sweet mush in between. They are perfect together, so much that it makes my heart ache fit to burst. The note passing was especially gorgeous, and Tom's outburst *giggles* I am happy that they managed to sort out the perceptions of their relationship, and hope that maybe they'll realize that they have something special and nurture it. Love this Kit, so damn much *snugglesmooshes*

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/11 10:57 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

they are just so freaking cute and perfect together!! I love the frog. =)

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/11 07:27 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

I kinda wish I had reviewed this when I first read it cause I know I had many things to say (all goods) but I can't really remember now... Anyways, I know I loved this chapter, the humor was perfect as usual and it was just so entertaining to read. Your writing is truly brilliant. LOL that frog.... omg! I can remember how excited I was to see the word count on this chapter too, ``less is more`` is so overrated.

Reviewer: bink257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/11 11:34 pm Title: Saying Grace

Woohoo for growing bromance leading into yummy :D

Reviewer: rabidkitteh Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/11 10:24 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

i love the change frog

Reviewer: bink257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/11 08:55 pm Title: Breakable

To me, this is like THfic-crack. I stayed up into the wee hours last night reading (screw work, reading this was more important, not that I actually finished it anyway). I highly enjoy reading your diva Bill and thuglet Tom. I'm impressed with your snide comments and snarky comebacks. I am not so good thinking on my feet unfortunately, so I can admire a quick turn of phrase.
Also, OMG, poor beaten Bill and Tom. I bet Bushido is not involved and will be pissed it happened? Hopefully? I shall see...

Reviewer: SunlovestheMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/11 06:38 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

Thanks for the eggplant recipe. Will try out maybe tomorrow, though shredding with a fork sounds tricky; the skin is shred-proof, no?

Wildly inappropriate comments welcomed in this space. I'm not desperate, that's just my alter ego coming out.

I will HOLD you to make Tom fulfill ALLLL of Bill's Tom-based fantasies because the CHANGE FROG GOD says so. And yes, indeedy, it is now a THING.

Reviewer: Dianqa2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/11 04:44 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

I love this story so so so soo much. it's dear to my heart and i can be excited enough about the new chapter.. god more please! and never end it double please!!

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/11 11:56 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you x20000 Did that help?
Well, I love that you love making me laugh because it means that I get to laugh which makes me happy. AND CANNED FOODS. NO. JUST NO. FOOD. DOES NOT BELONG IN CANS. OR, AT LEAST.. NOT S'POSED TO BE EATEN FROM THE CAN. NO.

.......... Well, we had a class trip, and it was to these waterfalls (there were like 8 of them and we had to hike and it was so fucking gross, fuck me running, I hated it) and I held out my Sammy (frog) because she was going to hold him for my while I tried my hardest to open my water bottle (fucker wouldn't budge) and she was pretending to throw it into the water, then it slipped out of her hands. Had my bus tickets in there, fucker. You're right, it probably was very intentional.

Er. You're welcome. I guess. Thank YOU for writing something so awesome. Makes me happy.

Reviewer: Ryuuzaki_L Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/11 11:01 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

Every time I finish a chapter I die a little inside because I know there's no more. I'M SO DRAMATIC BUT IT'S THE TRUTH. #SOB

Author's Response:

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Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/11 08:39 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

Hi, what is a change frog? Is it a frog that changes its chonies a lot? Please let me know asap.

Sincerely,
iamalpaca.tumblr.com

LEWL. JUST KIDDING.

You are aware of my sentiments on this chapter. But hey, I may as well reiterate how much I love this story.

I can't wait to see what your beautiful and zany mind conjures up next.

K, bye!

Author's Response:

LOL DOTTUMBLERDOTCOM LYING BITCH <3

rn

Me neither! GRAB MY MOOBS AND LETS COAST AWAY~

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/11 08:38 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

Aww, the frog purse is so cute, lol. You had me worried there for a while with how Bill withdrew and what not. But I'm happy everything worked itself out in the end. Great chapter! Can't wait to read more XD

Author's Response:

I'm a big proponent for happy endings! They may not be traditional happy endings, but everything wraps up, and everyone is at least satisfied. <3

rn

Me neither! Eeeeeeeeeee!

Reviewer: TKmkXy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/11 08:04 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

Once again amazing work! Love it, it made my day seeing this updated. I really love this side of Bill, he's not sure whathe wants from Tom but he's willing to give it all up so Tom can be happy. And the frog change purse made me smile ^_^ so cute!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you do! Bill doesn't like it, but he's been outvoted by pretty much everyone, so...

rn

Isn't it just? I ADORE THAT LITTLE GREEN BITCH

Reviewer: pandasarelovex Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/11 07:30 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

That change frog is adorable...and I'm still in love with this story and it makes me happy when I get an e-mail saying it's been updated. Btw, I'm totally jealous of their relationship. Tom is a male and he COOKS!

I also love the creative and witty things the characters say. They crack me up. Some of my favorites from this chapter are...

"You totally jerked the gherkin while you were workin',"

and

"Bullshit you're being a fucking Snow Queen, so either give me some fucking Turkish Delight or knock it off" (Reference to Narnia? I was excited that I understood this.)

Having a tickle fight ending with a kiss is one of my ~dreams~. And Tom must have a secret tickle spot somewhere... -suspicious look-

Have a wonderful day or night!

Author's Response:

He does cook! Bb boy likes food, and if Mama ain't there to make it, he gotta get it somehow!

rn

Hahaha! I love writing dialogue, I'm glad you had fun with it too!

rn

It's terribly unrealistic :D But hey, a guy can dream, and so can a girl. <3

rn

You have one yourself too now y'hear? :D

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