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Reviewer: onion5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 10:10 am Title: Saying Grace

PeaBill! i fucking pissed my self! amazing!

Author's Response:

Onions~

rn

Yay! Hopefully because it was funny! Otherwise you should get that looked at.

Reviewer: onion5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 07:20 am Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

Oh my god! the ending of this chapter made me laugh so much! heehee!

Reviewer: onion5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 04:30 am Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends

I love the story and can i just say.. the cute lil random bits you put at the end cheer me up so much! heehee THREESOME! oh yeh. ahahaha

Author's Response:

3SUM FUR SHUR lol no I can't

rn

I'm so glad I get to brighten your day! This eases my heart, thank you. <3

Reviewer: Bkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 02:29 am Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Amazing...........

Author's Response:

I KNOW YOU ARE BUT WHAT AM I

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 12:55 am Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

With two separate jerking off scenes and me being a big perv, I think it goes with out saying how much I enjoyed this XD I also liked the fact that they both sort of, in a way, acknowledged that they aren't just fooling around, but that they are actually attracted to each other. I can't wait to see what happens with our boys next XD

Author's Response:

Neither can I! MAYBE SHIT CAN ACTUALLY SORT OF GET RESOLVED NOW JFC THESE GUYS ARE IDIOTS-

rn

Thank you for reviewing, again and again and again!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 12:39 am Title: The Teenage Dream

The banter between these two...genius-nothing but genius! I love this SO much, it's a great story and I enjoy the humor so much, I can't help but laugh out loud at the wise cracks between them!!!!

Author's Response:

Jeez Louise, thank you, thank you! I'm always so, so happy to make you laugh out loud! I want nothing more. <3

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 12:19 am Title: Jerkle Gym

LOL, I'm definitely loving this. That last line was too funny and considering what we know of Bill to this point, still can be proven right. ;) Love their banter, love how Tom doesn't back off and how he seems to be making a dent in Bill's armour, a small one, yes, but it's a good start. :D



Author's Response:

Slow and steady wins the race! Or in this case, Bill. <3 I hope you enjoy the rest just as much!! <3

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 12:13 am Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Those boys need to jerk off more, it's the only way any thinking gets done with those two pssh.

I hope they realize more shit and act on it in the next chapter lmao. I'll beat you with a Tuna if not Wassee >.>

Author's Response:

Seriously. Idiots. Ffffff.

rn

DEFINITELY. And I hate tuna pls don't touch me

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 11:37 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Geeeeeeeeeeez. Sexually Frustrated Panda both hates and loves you for this chapter. Guh *____*

I wonder where Bushido heard that Tom and Bill were fucking around with Lola? That kiss, though? Yeah, I laughed. Out loud. And I love their 'holy shit this bastard turned me fucking gay' moments xD

A+, Kitsturbator.


Oh, and average? Reeeally? Boy, y u so modest?

Author's Response:

Forgive me Panda. I hear the chicks at the San Diego Zoo put out, though, if that helps.

rn

School rumor mill! The most and yet LEAST reliable source of information on the planet. Tom mentions a GF when he yells at Bill, Tom mentions later it has something to do with Lola, and BOOM ALL OF A SUDDEN LOVE TRIANGLE WHAT THE-

rn

KISTURBATOR. That is a new one. BRB CHANGING MY TWITTER NAME KAY

rn

I don't like to brag, just drag~

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 11:10 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Someone has been watching Pretty Woman...It was you wasn't it? Its okay, you can admit it.

Damn Scotty, ruining a perfect moment.

Oh Anis...fricking blowing up without any real facts. Who the hell told him that shit about Bill and Tom both being after Lola? And why would be believe Tom was involved when hes never even seen them interact? I kinda get Bill, he doesn't like Bill, and thinks Bill doesn't 'know his place' with Lola as it is...yea. He really showed off his jackass idiot colors today.

I loved Simone in the chapter. So motherly. And I could totally picture her giving them the 'mom look' when she saw them all beaten up.

omg *drools* Tom...


omg *drools some more* Bill...

Awesome, awesome work as always. Keep up the amazingly awesome work, I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response:

N... no. No. >_>

rn

Buschnitzel's just a jackass in this story. He's more emotionally motivated than intellectually. He and Bill are the same that way. MATCH MADE IN HEAVEN??

rn

I love writing about Simone. <3 Mommy issues ahoy~

rn

/hands you a kleenex

rn

Thank you!! I hope I continue to not disappoint!!

Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 11:02 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Oh well this was really nais and all but when are they going to bone?

Kthxbye.

:D

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Author's Response:

Fuck off back to Peru, alpaca~

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 10:09 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Oh dear god, they are BLIND. Everything Tom was thinking about Bill and what he wanted for Bill and wanting to DO for Bill screams that he's in love. Yeah, it's different than anything from before, but every love is. Silly, silly boy. Also, Bill.

I have to say that the jerk off scenes were freaking amazing. I swear, I could see everything. So damn well done.

Also, Bill has a fambly. :)

Author's Response:

I LOVE READING YOUR REVIEWS, JS

rn

Just to reiterate, you're pretty much the whole reason I dove in head first here. <3 Thank you so much for everything you do, and everything you say. <3

rn

Tom STILL has to do everything first. C'mon Bill, get your shit together.

rn

And I'm glad the porn was good! I always worry about that!

rn

Bill has a fambly. <3

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 09:58 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Woah! XD Realizations! Amazing :3

Author's Response:

IT'S ABOUT DAMNED TIME

Reviewer: heartsdesire456 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 09:43 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

I really like this story. It's very original!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 09:43 pm Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns

Tom's parents seem quite normal and their reactions to him moving out were well, for lack of a better word, moving. Just like they should be. I'm really intrigued by all we've learned from Bill so far, especially with what Tom found on that second bedroom.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I love hearing that the parents I write are believeable and likeable. <3 They're a big part of the story!

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 09:28 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

*giggles* Loving this Bill! Heehee, it's just too funny how different he is from how he looks like. Love how he keeps Tom guessing. These two living together is going to be fun to read.



Author's Response:

I can't wait for you to read further! Tell me what you think, I love all of your reviews!!

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 09:08 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Hmm. Can I add you to my favorite things? I mean, in a non-creepy way. Especially not in a Julie Andrews-y type of way. That woman freaks me out. Anyways, Yeah. Imma go eat my chocolates now. Bye!

Author's Response:

You can! Please do! I want to join MohanRocks in your list of favorites! BUT IN RETURN I ASK MUCH. I ask that I keep you... and make you watch The Sound of Music with me.

rn

CHOCOLATLLLLLLLLLL

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 09:01 pm Title: A Force of Nature

I've been meaning to read this story for a while. I've had it tracked for months, but one thing or the other had prevented me from actually reading it until now and wow, now I'm both sorry and not for it. Sorry because I've been missing out on what seems a wonderful story and not sorry because now I have twenty-something more chapters to go through until I catch up. I'm really enjoying this. Bill is a force to be reckoned with, despite his looks and Tom really seems to be making an effort to change his ways. I just love seeing this happen through Tom's eyes, giving us the element of surprise at how things develop, since he had no clue (and neither did I) that Bill actually could take care of things himself like that, hee. Off to read more. :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you took a chance on me and Cupid's Chokehold! I hope we don't disappoint! Thank you for leaving so many wonderful reviews, but even if you don't review, I hope you continue to enjoy it anyways! Thank you!!

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 09:01 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Guess who made me smile today? You did. With this update. Love it.

Author's Response:

Guess you made ME smile today? You did. With this review. Love you.

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/16/11 08:18 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

lolllllllllll, oh god that was good, ooh they're gettting ever closer...i have to say, my favorite bit was the scene in the bathroom with ani...oh, and with seth or whoever at work :) steph? yah, okay. they're soooo cute and soooo...dating, in a very strange yet very cute sense.

oh, the denial...and the realizations...;3 yes, i think i wouldn't mind a moment of silent appreciation for any part of the naked male body, as long as it's bill or tom touching or thinking about it xD ooh, bill, did he just what i though he just?? he soooo wants to take it xP

hot stuff, and ridiculously clever as ever (haha, lame rhyme)

oooooooh you're so close to 1,000 reviews!! congrats in advance for your epic winness

Author's Response:

They've been dating for months now, they're just too dumb to realize it. Idiots. <3

rn

AND YES BILL DID DO WHAT YOU'RE IMPLYING, AND MAYBE YES, YES HE DOES.

rn

Haha, awesome review~ As always. You're my sunshine, you have to know that. <3 Thank you for contributing so epically to all these reviews!! With the banner, and with your support, and with your reviews, just... thank you so much, for everything!

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