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Reviewer: MiseryRebel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/22/11 11:53 am Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

 1) Hot ... hothothothot!!!
 2) Haha! Fuck'in queer Bill!!! xD
 3) UP. DATE!

 This is PERFECT >XD



Author's Response:

NO I WILL NEVER UPDATE AGAIN j/k just did

rn

Thank you so much for finding me and this story, and for reviewing so much! You've really buttered my bagel. <3

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/11 05:03 am Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

*wipes up drool wiht kleenex* Thank you. And heeeey, congrats on over a thousand reviews!! *throws confetti*

Author's Response:

Thank you! I held MohanRocks' dog hostage so she'd get me there, so it probably doesn't count.

Reviewer: Estricnina Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/11 12:04 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Ahhhkay, so I've finally caught up. I wonder why I didn't read this story sooner? Haha, at any rate, sending appreciation your way, it's given me quite a few laughs! The strongest feature, is the unique and very clever banter. It comes very natural! It's definitely my favourite part of this story. Last line of this chapter is kind of like... noshitsherlock. XD Haha~ Anyhoo, looking forward to an update soon! :)

Author's Response:

Hahaha! Thank you so much for giving me and this story a chance, and even more, reviewing! THANK YOU!!

rn

I love writing the dialogue for this, I have way too much fun with it! I'm just glad you enjoy it too. :D

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/21/11 07:44 am Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

*is puddle on the floor* You Sir, have killed me so, so sweetly. I thank you.

*flails* they are both so close to admitting that they want MORE from each other! Eeep *wiggles excitedly*

Tom's jealousy at seeing Bill doing things that he only considers Bill doing with him was perfect, the indignation that someone else shared that with Bill is certainly a jolt to Tom

LMAO I loved the whole scene in the caffeteria, Bill being so relaxed and comfortable with Tom to give him a piggy back was just awesome. Beartrap Bu getting his thug on and protecting Lola's virtue and I wish I could've seen his 'OH MAI GAWD' face when Tom kissed Bill and Bill smacked him one. *chortle*

I adored the dressing down they both got from Simone and Gordon and how chastised they both were. Loved the piano scene, there may have been tears (I hope you're happy O.o) and Bill asking about the money and Simone basically saying you're family was too sweet. *sobs*

You are killing me here Mr Kitty Kat, I love this but the chapters are getting so long I have to have a pen and paper so I can take notes LOL. Love you my sweet boy, *shoves you in my pouch* Let's bounce!

Author's Response:

OH HAI MAMA :D

rn

I love this reviiiiieeeeewwwwww <3 It's so in depth and flattering and long and just THANK YOU. You don't have to read my shit, but you do, and I love that. Thank you!!

rn

BEARTRAP BU, I HAD FORGOTTEN /horror face

rn

 

Reviewer: Nonconman Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/20/11 06:26 am Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

ooh, look at Bill, his fantasy showed that he got uke-ish tendency, that's great xD how come he just known that he was gay?

Author's Response:

I had to look up what uke meant, hahaha. YES. A little. Maybe.

rn

Dude, gay is a hard conclusion to come to! AS IT WERE.

Reviewer: MiseryRebel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/19/11 08:37 pm Title: Saying Grace

 Hmmm .... I LOVE THIS CHAPTER xD
 In fact I love this whole fucking story.
 Detail- A+
 Word choice- A+
 Perfection- A+
 Gay Bill and Tom CUTENESS- AAAAA+++++

 Again ... I LOVE IT!~♥

Reviewer: MiseryRebel Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/18/11 09:21 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

 *giggles* Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaan I loved this chapter xD

Reviewer: Quality Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/18/11 02:42 pm Title: A Force of Nature

This is AWESOME. Bill is such a bamf.

Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 11:58 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

1,000 ALPACAS

Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 11:57 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly

Haha, I remember talking about Capri Suns with you back when this was first posted.

And you said that you like the Strawberry ones. And it was really hard for me not to judge you for that.

But I'm really glad I didn't.

Because you're my alpaca.

Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 11:54 pm Title: Whoopsiedoodles

The title of this chapter still delights me!

Reviewer: Ryuuzaki_L Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 08:56 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

The sex stuff is hot, cannot deny that, but I'm a horribly mushy person who wants romance so I demand it to appear in the next chapter. That's right. I DEMAND STUFF NOW, you owe it to me, I'm menstruating. ;~;

*throws self on you* Who am I kidding, do whatever you want with them, I'll still find a way to turn it around and make it all gooey in my head.

I love you. Marry me. ♥

Reviewer: bink257 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 08:35 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

I always find the fighting between Tom and Bill very entertaining. Tom feeling jealous of Steph made me chuckle.
Oooh, the boys got all sexy on their own, hot! I look forward to them fumbling about with each other while they explore liking each other while probably not talking to each other about it.

Author's Response:

YOU KNOW THIS STORY INSIDE AND OUT. HOW DARE YOU.

rn

lol no I love you lets hold hands okay

Reviewer: LifeLoveMusic Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 07:46 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Nice. Thanks for updating. I loved the cute fight in front of Bushido

Author's Response:

Thank you! And thanks for reviewing, you moonpie! :D

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 06:56 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

How can we be related if you hate tuna! ;-;

Reviewer: missy nix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 03:39 pm Title: The Teenage Dream

yay for kiss and make up! :D
and I'm strongly on Bill's side about canned food! *glomps chicken noodle out of the can* I swear canned food tastes best when eaten that way - directly outta the can! (because I do that too heh heh)
btw did I mention that you're super awesome? :D I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY! *insert 'less than three' here*

Author's Response:

Even if you have, I LOVE HEARING IT. SAY IT MORE, SAY IT AGAIN, SAY IT ALWAYS <3

rn

Mmmmmm, canned foods. (Not Spam though. Ugh.)

Reviewer: wannasleep Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 03:18 pm Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

That was mature, Bill... cuz you're so manly..
Anywaaay, I enjoyed the chapter too much, tho I wish MY imagination was as good as theirs. Oh I just can't wait to see what happens.

Author's Response:

Yeah, he's... he's just special.

rn

The only way to get better is with practise :D LOTS AND LOTS OF PRACTISE

Reviewer: AllorNothing Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 11:14 am Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

I really love this story, and I love how you write both from Tom and Bill's point of view :) Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you like seeing both sides of the story! Thanks for reviewing, buttercup!

Reviewer: lynn Ivan Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 10:49 am Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

Thug Lite!! I'm dead, you killed me...

Author's Response:

NOOOOOOOO! WHY GOD, WHYYYYYYYYYY!!

Reviewer: BrokenMirror Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/17/11 10:32 am Title: Just a Hop, Skip and a Wank

jfrheiuheriougheorguyguter. Dead. Pay for my funeral or something. Unf.

Okay, so now they will do this to each other, yes yes yes?

This is still my favorite fic at the moment, jsyk.

Author's Response:

How about I through myself on your casket and tear at my hair and weep disconsolately and we call it even?

rn

YES YES YES.

rn

No shut up you amaze me, okay, you're like my Lady Gaga, like, where did you come from <3

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