omg. omg omg.. I fucking love you. I don't think I've ever reviewed but I'm just a creepy stalker type of person but yeah. I was saving everything I have to say in one review, maybe the end or some shit but I just fucking love your ight now. <3

Okay, now we've got that out of the way. This story is amazing, I just adore your characterization of Bill and Tom and how their fucked up relationship works. Honestly, I shake with excitement whenever I see this updated.

This is just awesome and oh I fucking love Nate too. Can I keep him?

Last time, you said that if I added you to my favorites, to become one of my favorite things, I'd have to watch The Sound of Music with you. And I must tell you that I despise that movie, and all other musicals as such. We can thank years and years of show choir and stage presence for that. That effin show Glee makes that shit look easy, whereas I feel like I need therapy and possibly some sort of PTSD training to get over that. Moving on, I did add you to my favorites, and I was pleased as punch to see that this had been updated, for real. This story is written in real time, and I love it, so so much. I think, that if it were a real novel that I could hold in my hands, it'd be high up on the bookshelf-tattered, worn down, and dog eared to the max, forever loved like my Erma Bombeck novels. Yeah, I think I'd put it right next to 1984, and One Flew Over the Septic Tank, or perhaps next to If Life Is a Bowl of Cherries, Then What am I doing In the Pits?...yeah. It's that good. Enough of my ramblings, I am going to go make some tea for my screaming migraine, would you like some?

I dunno, cream cheese has never steered me wrong in the emotional department. Its pretty smart stuff. We have pretty good conversations when I'm making, or eating, cheesecake, and potato soup. mmhhmm *nods*

Oh my goodness, that video Tom showed Bill's mom was amazing. Every momonet of it was perfect. As was the pic Tom first showed her.

That really would be the perfect pressie for Bill. I hope it works. I loved that whole scene with her was really good. I never understood how people can't understand that, yea, he deserves better, but he wants you, and you need to straighten your shit out.

Omg, I knew Bill was tailoring. I thought it was going tob e a suit, but it being you, I really should've known better.

YYAAAAYY. They did it!!!...wait a minute *looks back at chapter*....no they didn't, not really. *is confused* How did that happen?... It was looking so promising, and they are happy ...but...whaaaa??? Those bastards. *huffs*

Wow.."I'd say no homo, buuut" was wonderful. I am really happy they got some things sorted out about what they are.*hugs them, gets slapped away by Bill*

Awesome chapter. Keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to see more1!! *huggles*

btw, its almost halloween, and I was thinking its just not halloween without jumbo jelly beans... was it the pink ones you liked?

Oh God, and here I thought they were so casually talking while... YOU KNOW *dirty mind* I was a bit disappointed ._. Naaah, the rest was just so wonderfully, beautifully sweet that I forgot about my disappointment right away *SQUEEEEEEEE* I loved all their reflections about each other + the end fjsakfjkdsajfkd *fangirling* :3 It totally made me smile!!!1

I love YOU too! But... It's not even now :( Cuz I love you and I love this story. And there's only you, who loves me... Does Cupid's Chokehold loves me too? :(((((

PS. And sowwy for making you crazy... I'm really trying not to but sometimes I just can't stop myself :3 *hands roses*

Dammit, you... *shakes tablet violently* Cut me off...again. Just wanted to repeat that you have a gift. You may be a thug, but you ain't shit for brains. Shit for brains can't write amazing stories like you do. C'mon now, do you see Bushido writing stuff like this?? Hell no! Keep it up, you're doing great, luv! *hugs*

Yayyyay! That was some great progress indeed! I feel so happy for them, it was about time they realize that they both feel the same way. I really like how you describe their sentiments, how they want to make each other happy, how they love every little aspect of their life together... it's adorable! Thank for another long and brilliant chapter =D

This was so sweeet :))) Wonderful chapter, do you know the feeling when you just can´t help yourself and have to grin like an idiot? Well, that is how I look right now :D But it is ok, because I like grinning - better that than the sad feeling during the scene with Bill´s mother.... Would you tell us her story? I am curious... What had happened to her? I don´t want to judge her, nobody should... Tom was a little bit cruel and said pretty strong words. I know it hurt her, but I am 99 % sure she will be there for Bill at Christmas.

By the way, I love the video with Bill and Scotty :) This was genial, with some humour you had lightened the whole sad scene....

Oh, I almost forgot! The beginning was great :D... But since you have done it once before, I knew it wasn´t THAT you wanted us to think it was (oh god, that sentence killed me, I hope it make sence :D ). I was only curious what they were doing... So Tom is cross-dressing now? :D

Every part of this chapter was perfect. I really liked he conversation between Tom and his father.. Did someone tell you this words? Or it is "made by Leichenwasser"? When I am reading something nice and wise, I am always wondering if it comes from the head of the autor or if it is some personal experience...

But it is the last past of this chapter what I liked the most. Bill is just iresistible.... It is possible that I love him more than Tom? :) So sweet, my sugar Bill :D.
But you ruined my good mood! When I saw the word "naked" I was like "yes, finally" :D, and then.... nothing! You are playing with us... But, of course, something more interesting had happened. So they are officialy dating now or what?

Ok, enough for now, but this will be continued with next chapter :)
Thanks ;)

this story is really good...like really really! it's already in my favorites

You know, this story surprises me every chapter. I was certain the last chapter was the best, and then you pop out of the woodwork and surpass my expectations.

On to the story itself. You really have a talent for writing the characters feelings. I can almost see and feel what they feel, and it is amazing.

Thank you for entertaining us and sharing this with us.

I am so glad they finally admitted their feelings...sort off:D

Now let me enjoy my heatwave and cheap wine.

You're a bad influence you know, I should really be studying right now XD But the allure of this chapter was to great. And it was worth it. This was very sweet, and I was happy to see them finally admit their feelings...sort of. And as always, you keep me wanting more!