Date: 10/25/11 05:40 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
The story is amazing as usual, *claps hands for progress*
I cried from laughter because of the chapter end notes, your seriously hilarious... better than those stupid stand-up comedy shows that play on TV at random times of the day xD
Date: 10/25/11 03:11 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
YOU'RE SO GODDAMN FUNNY!!!!!!!!!! ARARAAARGGHHHH!!! asojgaäjgäpsojg¨psOJG
Date: 10/25/11 02:10 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
I love ittttttt god this is the best story EVER *__*
Date: 10/25/11 01:16 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
Aww, that was awesome. Tom certainly had a lot of balls to go to Bill's mum all up like that. O__O Tom was cute the way he was reiterating things his father had said, haha~ I always got frustrated and rolled my eyes when Tom would say no homo before, being like, you're kinda already drifting in there buddy... but I laughed aloud at last in triumph during this chapter. Whoo~~ Can't wait for a new update! :)
Date: 10/25/11 12:03 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
wtf I thought they're already in a 'relationship' but apparently everything won't be that simple in this story! xD o yeaaa I am glad we moving on, little by little. an WHY Bill always being so difficult to Tom, like he got thousands way to deny his true feelings. it just make me so urgh!
Date: 10/25/11 03:28 am Title: Solve for Y Not
My dear Princess, let us not insult the cream cheese.
Please forgive me for my lengthy absence, it seems that life revels in appearing in the most inopportune moments.
It did, however, allow me to return to a magnificent feast of updates on your behalf. One of which I partook joyously and sated my hunger.
I am very pleased with the progression of the story and wait at the ready to watch the upcoming events unfold.
Kudos, dear Princess. Your loyal subject is overwhelmed with joy.
Date: 10/25/11 02:05 am Title: Solve for Y Not
haha, I really liked this chapter but honestly, the end notes might be the best part of all of it :D
Date: 10/25/11 01:12 am Title: Solve for Y Not
Holy hell, I honestly forgot how to breathe. From the second the sexin' started (which man, you do so good, just sayin') my heart was just hammering like hell but then! THEN! Tom started talking and I thought Bill was gonna freak (even though, yeah, cream cheese, you want this, you idiot). Couldn't. Breathe.
Okay, but Bill's mom. Oh man, oh man. I hope she can and I HOPE that it's what Bill wants because if it's not and it doesn't work, the fallout will be horrific and searing. I'm cringing just a little.
BUT THAT LAST SCENE. YES.
Date: 10/25/11 12:01 am Title: Solve for Y Not
That introduction was pretty much the best ever. Hands down. Hands up. Hands sideways. Hands down your pants. I don't even know. That unveiling line with Tom in the dress killed me! You!!! You taking advantage of our dirty minds, I love you so much. By the way, have you ever played Final Fantasy 7?
Dear sweet thug baby Tom is really giving love a lot of thought. My heart melts~ And he's going for the gift that counts, one that'll get Bill right in the heart. Hopefully in a good way like a well-planted kiss; and not a barbed arrow or something.
Oh golly, confessions! Bill is coming (lewls) to grow comfortable with the idea of Good Enough. I think they're plenty good enough for each other. /hugs
Did I mention I really like your voice? I don't mean your larynx voice (which is neat-o, don't get me wrong) but the voice with which you write? Your style. I like it. You got style.
Date: 10/25/11 12:00 am Title: Solve for Y Not
lmao I'm so fucking happy that they are now what ever they are XD
Those idiots are like some badly scripted soap opera that you can't help but watch while shoving buckets of cream cheese into your mouth while watching it. :l
Date: 10/24/11 09:17 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
I realize that I haven't reviewed in fifty million chapters, but it's because this story is so amazing and every chapter leaves me speechless. I've read this one three times, and I still have nothing.
Except that I wish all relationships could be like theirs.
(And I'm as anxious as I am nervous for a Christmas call from Bill's mom. What if he gets mad at Tom? What if she's mean to him? What if Bill gets MAD at Tom? *bites nails*)
Date: 10/24/11 08:50 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
So I´m really not much of a reviewer, but I just had to come out and tell you that this is absolutley brilliant, the whole thing, the slow bouilding of their relatioship, the way the characterization of the boys, I find that this is really one of the most original and actually cool Bills I´ve ever read, pretty and all but also such a bad ass, taking care of himself and others,not just pretty and silly and girly, so yeah... the whole thing is fabulous, thank you for it.
Love for everyone around :)
Date: 10/24/11 08:24 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
Previously on Cupid's Chokehold: Oh fuck. He's turned me gay.
*reads chapter*
Zomg this is super long. I'mma go check the wordcount when I'm done.
"I'm pretty sure this means I have feelings for you," Tom groaned. "This may even be love." -- OH NO DX .... :P
Lol @ Tom's run-on sentence/thought.
as he tossed a tennis ball (a real one) -- Haha, I didn't even remember the fake tennis ball until I saw that parenthetical remark. (I love parenthetical remarks) Woh, just did one right there...
Yeah... Rather recently I've come to the same conclusion as what Gordon is saying. If you wait for perfection, you might let someone slip by who'll provide as much happiness as you're going to get in this life. And that's "good enough", as he keeps saying ;)
(Rawr, it's been like two hours since I started reading XDD I keep getting distracted from this mammoth)
Blue or red? I'm pretty sure real!Tom's favorite color is red.
and hair scared up into it's mohawk -- Rawr again, person, no apostrophe in "its". Anyway, hair can be scared into a shape? That's useful information.
"Billy's a blonde." -- Lol! The nickname and the use of an 'e' at the end instantly made me think of a female. I write 'blond' for a male and 'blonde' for a female, by preference :P
Grrrr, the mom basically just "fuckyoufuckyou" at the end, there. Zomg, Tom, don't vandalize on money. Also, the 'pls' shortening kinda ruins the seriousness of it :P
(Oops!! I got absolutely distracted watching a game walkthrough on youtube. I swear, I started reading this at noon my time, and now it's... five XDDD *ducks*)
Geeah!! *aka, squeeing noise* Tom saying all those phrases that Gordon used, telling him to Bill :DD
I'm tearing up, what? What the hell is this?!
Awwww, what a wonderful and super-long chapter that I managed to plow through eventually XDD
PS: And what a giant review I just left, too XD
Date: 10/24/11 08:02 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
oh my god oh my god oh my god dfghj.
Date: 10/24/11 07:50 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
oh my gustav. this story just makes me so giddy happy.
Date: 10/24/11 07:39 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
Finally!! I was pretty sure they were never going to get out of their own way. Looking forward to lots and lots of the naked thing :)
Date: 10/24/11 07:31 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
I found this after wading through all the old stories I haven't read yet. I love so much about it. Bill and Tom are fantastic and the story drew me right in. I was cheering out loud and crying at various parts. You are a very talented writer. I felt like I was hanging on every word and my heart was in my throat half the time. I don't know what else I can say to communicate how in love I am with this amazing story. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
Date: 10/24/11 07:24 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
Holy fucking shit fuck yes i love you oh my god that was fucking good enough marry me oh my god i fucking love this story and oh my god i want a boyfriend and sexual frustration and holy crap this is good
Date: 10/24/11 05:41 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
The video on Tom's phone of him and Bill in his parent's backyard was so cute. And so embarrassing for Tom to show Bill's mother! HAHA
OMG they actually talked about their feelings! Now we shall have to see if Bill can keep cool about it and not freak out. I bet he'll start freaking at some point though.
Mmmm, I look forward to seeing them have nekkid sexytimes together.
Date: 10/24/11 05:11 pm Title: Solve for Y Not
How do you do this, seriously. You have to excuse my lack of reviewing skills, but I love this so much and furhfiurhr. I just want to take both of them and huggle them and ftrhfhruihf. I'd huggle you too, because you're amazing and this is my favorite story and my favorite Bill and my favorite Tom.
Over and out xD