oh. my. GOD!

oh, and this...

"If Hell looks like this, I should probably look into sinning a little more,"

EPIC LINE!

Author's Response:

Hahaha, thanks! AND OMG YAY YOU POSTED TO BRB BUSY TONIGHT

i miss this DD: update please!

 GAH xD
 I now proclaim that to be a new word... if it isn't already, with multiple definitions.
 This story is addicting frustrating at the same time -__-
 But its too good to be mad about xD

 And y'know what this story needs? Hm? Do ya?
 .... another update ^.^
 I need more of my drug >:D

I'm just going to throw out there that I spent the past couple hours reading this for the first time (a couple hours because I spent intervals Tumbling, some of which was in regards to this story) and if I didn't have to get up in five hours I'd still be seated on my computer reading. Because I am typing this from my phone because I couldn't not write anything.

Not sure if I have ever laughed this much at a fic that wasn't crack or specifically humor. Bill is a perfect little cunt and I love him so far and even though the Chronic Bitchitis Bill is used a lot omg he is so perfect here that I'm as enraptured as Tom is. I am going to spend my uneventful upcoming weekend reading this and then I am possibly going to whine about needing updates and completely torture my followers with my complaints.

I am still laughing at the, "I'm back."/"I'm front," thing and I don't even know why because it was an awful joke but still hilarious and I should go to bed because it's three but bless you, sir, for writing quality fic.

Author's Response:

I totally haven't responded to any of the other recent reviews because I am douchebag of truly titanic proportions

Loved it!! The little tension and drama between bill and Tom was so hot :')

Leave it to me to start reading a 26 chapter story as soon as Nanowrimo starts. Go me! Ehehehee. Okay, so, I've tweeted you a couple times, I think, and I don't really know you, but, dude, I FOOKIN' LUHV YA. I mean, er, you're a very talented writer and I've thoroughly enjoyed reading these insanely long chapters over the course of yesterday and today. Yes. That's what I meant. Exactly. xD

Borrowed or not, you make Nate freaking awesome. And I like how much you have Tom say "awesome" in this, 'cause then I don't feel like I have that shit of a vocabulary. Though maybe I really shouldn't be comparing my vocabulary to that of a fictional character who is also called retarded nine times out of ten in the story... Hmm. Anyway, I love this. Nate and Tom talking about fucking Disney princesses just about did me in last night, not gonna lie. I can't imagine how readers have dealt with all this sexual tension and build up you've been throwing out, seeing as how I didn't even want to break my eyes away from the screen long enough for a few hours of sleep. But I did. Grudgingly. My left eye's all bloodshot today, though. I blame you, jsyk. No offense.

And maybe I should just stop rambling and get out of your hair, but I felt I should leave some sort of lengthy review, since I failed at commenting while reading. But I'd get to the end of a chapter to find the site had logged me out because I'm freaking slow at reading half the time. So I finally said fuck it and opened the print version so no more clicking next, yay! But that also made me skip on comments, and for this I apologize. 'Cause you probably would've gotten some deliriously happy comments late last night, man. xD But, anyway, this is a fantastic story, pacing's great, the feelings are real, their lame jokes are awesome, and I'm glad I finally found my way here. Thanks for sharing this. :D

And for what it's worth, I feel like a total dumbass every time I try to fold a fitted sheet.

Ahhh! I've missed this story so much! I can't believe I left this site for nearly a month! I feel so behind! I hope I never have to do that again.

Reading this story just makes my day every time. Reading anything you've written just makes my day. Which is why I stalk you on twitter so that if I don't have time to read fic updates at least I get a small dose of your amazingness. So. Much. Love. for you and your stories. Please never stop being fabulous.

I'm so happy to see some emotional progress between Bill and Tom! About time those two loveable dumbfucks wised up. And here you said you couldn't write romance! You seem to be doing marvelously from what I can see. I am a little worried about that confrontation with Bushido about Lola though. Who's been spreading rumors? I sense some future conflict perhaps?

But seriously, where have you been all my life?

hehehehe, finally !!!! and yeah that was wealy nice. "hug you"

I love this. All of this.

LOL! Bill is such creamy cream cheese, and Tom makes the perfect bagel :)

I really love how everything is paced; it's not too rushed, and I love how things seem so tentative at times, and how unsure both parties are because they ARE unsure. It's really realistic, and I really like that in a fic :)