Date: 12/13/11 08:59 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
tehehe this is great! i can see Tom saying and doing these things! keep it up!
Date: 12/12/11 02:37 am Title: Bad Things
That beginning scene was so amazing at capturing the frantic fever of their sex. Wow.
Bushido said "sexy times." Who says that in real life and not on the internet? Bu, you weird man.
Even now that they've had the sexy times, Bill is still as stubborn as a mule. Tom is whipped. Maybe they're both mules, but Tom is the more conceding one. Ugh, Bill. How do you stand writing him? He's so difficult. You should write him running into a wall repeatedly until he agrees to get over himself.
Tom may have not gotten honey on Bill's couch, but he did get it on Bill's crotch. I applaud the boy for getting Bill this far! Three, four sexual encounters in one chapter after them just piddling around before! I'm so proud of them! And of you~ 27 chapters of pure awesome.
I've actually already read this chapter 3 times. It's just so long and amazing that I have to process it again and again in order to leave a coherent review. I love your writing, it's really good!
Date: 12/10/11 04:03 am Title: Bad Things
This story is the absolute best!
Date: 12/09/11 11:50 pm Title: Bad Things
Awww...so gushingly sweet, and that wasn't because of the honey, either :)
Have I told you how I love the pacing of this story? Well, I do! I love that you're not rushing things :) Lovelovelove!
Just an aside, though. I noticed that you have a penchant for using 'tenative' instead of 'tentative' :P
Date: 12/08/11 11:24 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
I'm getting caught up to you and I'm upset about it. You wanted to know why I was leery of this one - as a rule I've never really liked one of the high school fics, but more than that it was the part about Bill being a dressmaker. Right away all my head alarms went off because I feared him being turbo, turbo gay in the story. I like a strong characterization of Bill - I believe the real guy is probably hard as nails for all that he comes off fluffy. So then I start reading and BAM - he punches Anis in the mouth straight out of the gate, and you totally had me. Completely blew what I was expecting right out of the water. The thing that really, supremely makes me jealous though is all this amazing dialogue that just flows through the entire thing like water. How do you DO that? Don't answer, I know the answer - you've either got that skill or you don't. You've got it though, really, supremely have got it. Please make this longer, very very longer if possible. And yes I'm reading Entropy, I'm also reading Two Bring the Moon - they're about equally heart wrenching. You're like finding a pretty lion in the road. It's beautiful and you want to pet it, but you know it will probably eat you. I think I've rambled enough...
Date: 12/08/11 11:19 pm Title: Sherlock Homo
oh. my. goodness.
i worked an entire shift waiting to read this chapter.
I am pretty sure my entire apartment building heard me squealing with delight by the time I got to the end of this chapter.
Seriously, though, the way you described Tom realizing what was so attractive about Bill... it was pure genius! Written perfection... And the kiss!! *squeal!!* There is nothing sexier than a cigarette and BBQ sauce kiss. omg.
excuse me while I go sit in the snowbank naked, because GD do I need to cool off.
Date: 12/08/11 01:21 pm Title: The Green Eyed Tomnus
Omg. The suspense in this chapter was so good it made me late for work. It also made me too late to get Starbucks, so I'm blaming my cranky salesgirl attitude on you and your magical way with words.
I also have to wait until I get home to read the next chapter. The next eight hours of my life are going to be agonizing. (insert a pathetic, sad puppy face here)
Author's Response:
Yet you're getting closer and closer to yet more suspense! And teenage angst! And drama! And answers! AND SEXYTIEMS. I hope you enjoy all of these things! I can't wait to hear your opinion on all of it - I know you'll give it to me straight! As it were.
rnWe'll see you when you get home! Have a great day, and I love you! Eat a healthy lunch, that always helps!
rnThanks a millions for reviewing! I know you don't have to, so I super appreciate the time!
Date: 12/08/11 05:27 am Title: Bad Things
I like the way you set up the pace of their relationship. But it would be nice if you speed up a little ... just a suggestion though.
I'm sorry, I can't form a coherent review right now. I can't stop thinking about how it would be when Bill finally give up and let Tom fuck him *nosebleed*
Author's Response:
IT'LL BE AWESOME. Or so I hope. Thank you so much for all your patience!! I know it hasn't been easy, but I love that you've stuck it out. I'll try my damnedest to make it worth the wait!!
Date: 12/07/11 07:16 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
I have no idea why, but I didn't want to like this. It kept popping up as updated and I kept avoiding it even though it had your name on it. Now I'm, what, ten or fifteen chapters in and utterly addicted as usual. Violent Bill is... epic. At least it's not ripping my heart from my chest and stomping the hell out of it like SOME of your other fics do. Yet. Oh, and yes your story is brilliant, addictive and insane, as usual. You're one of the writers on this site whose skill makes me positively green with envy.
Author's Response:
Really!! That's really interesting, is it because it was unfinished, or something about it was outside your comfort zone...? I'm genuinely curious!
rnLiterally the whole point of writing this was JUST to write a violent, bitchy Bill, haha. I really only planned on writing the first chapter... then it just, snowballed, hahaha. I'm sure it's obvious in some parts that I'm just doing whateverthefuck, hahaha.
rnOh I see someone read Law of Entropy, haha, sorry about that-
rnThank you, so much! I love to hear it, of course, but I love even more than you gave me a chance - and it was worth it! I'm so glad you actually enjoy this story and the characters, and I hope you continue to do so for a long time to come!! Thank you!!
Date: 12/07/11 04:00 am Title: Bad Things
You, sir, are a genius. I am so, so, SO in love with your wit and writing style. How old are you, if I may ask? Not that it matters really, I AM JUST SO CURIOUS BECAUSE YOU ARE SO GOOD KJDHGFODSHFO9DYEKTHNFSV. You should consider writing homoerotic fiction (or just writing) for a living.
Author's Response:
And yet I still manage to spill hot tea down my front at least once a day. IDIOT SAVANT MAYHAP??
rnI turned 22 in September - same week and same age as Bill and Tom, haha.
rnI really have considered making writing a career, but I like eating on a daily basis too much. :( But it is still, and will always be my dream! I wrote a horror novel at like, 8. I've always, always loved writing, and I pretty much always will. I'm just glad THF is here for me and people like me, and that you guys are so sweet and cool and supportive and just... I LOVE YOU OKAY, I JUST DO.
rnThank you so much for not only reading, but also reviewing!!
Date: 12/06/11 10:30 pm Title: Bad Things
That was sooo hot **drools**
Author's Response:
Hahaha, thanks! I'm always worried how well my sexcapades translate to paper! Er, written word? Haha, thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 12/06/11 09:43 pm Title: Bad Things
I'm completely at a loss for words here. I think I'd end up playing cheesy rock ballads at you. What a lovely, lovely, lovely loving chapter. I'm pretty sure I read this whole thing with a smile on my face! Thank YOU for this fabulous, er, consummation.
Author's Response:
I WOULD NOT OBJECT TO THAT okay but let me fangirl for a mo' because you know I squeal and slap things when you read and review my shit so eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee zomgyay
rnANYWAYS, YES, THANK YOU. Your enjoyment means a lot to me! You write some of the best adult stuff out there! And I'm always happy to make folks smile. <3
Date: 12/06/11 10:30 am Title: Bad Things
"You are the best Tom a Bill could ask for," Hahaha I totally love them! they're so sweet sometimes! And others, they just suck, c'mon! need drugs for that?! argh, alcohol would do the same! weeell that's what I do... Haha.
And no, Tom's not a saint, he got with virgin Bill! and they're doing pretty bad things... but pretty non less. Ok, I got you point!
Awesome chapter ^^
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I loved that line too! Wow that sounded really egotistical, promise you'll love me inspite of my freakishly large head okay
rnI've always considered weed a relatively minor offense, and going by Bill's past, drinking isn't really an option. :D IT IS FOR ME THOUGH, LETS RUN THIS MOTHUH
rnTOM TOOK HIS DUDEGINITY! But I think we can all agree that it's awesome he did.
rnThank you! So, so much! I can't wait to hear from you again soon!
Date: 12/05/11 10:00 pm Title: Bad Things
My love for this story is massive! This story is so awesome it could make Vulcans go into spontaneous Pon Farr out of frakking season!
Author's Response:
YOU CAN'T JUST GO AND EQUATE MY STORY TO VULCANS AND ESCAPE UNLOVED, ROUGHLY AND VIOLENTLY LOVED
rnNow I want Tom to fight Georg for T'Bill, frigid bitch
Date: 12/05/11 02:18 am Title: Bad Things
I think it's pretty bad that I thought about leaving work early to get home to read this. I have a serious problem. Is there medication for that? Because I totally just qualified for health insurance at work.
Holyfuckingshit, those two! I can't believe they had to smoke a bizzle just to get all mushy with each other. It was great- but poor Nate. They fucked up his high, what dicks.
That conversation between Tom and Bu? LOLFOREVER. I'm sure neither of them could think of too many things that could be more uncomfortable...except maybe Bill being present. But then it would've lasted for all of what, 3 seconds? Tom got sappy and Bu took it like a G...that's what's up.
I can't believe you were nervous to write smut, fuck I nearly got a nosebleed. /standing ovation
Don't think you're getting off that easily, Kit. With that long of a wait, we're DEFINITELY going to 3rd base /creepy pedo!face
'nuff said. ♥
Author's Response:
FAT REVIEW, FAT REVIEW /claps like a bitch
rnDude, high five for insurance qualification! Now what of your 401K
rnNate gets to walk to his girlfriend's house and get le secks! It all works out, for everyone's privates. <3
rnBu is a man's man! But not like Tom is. Defo not like Bill is. Apparently. Maybe? Huh.
rnOkay but BRB bragging the rest of the day about this
rnMy darling... /tenderly strokes your pedo!face/ We already have. In our hearts. In our hearts.
rnSo if during any major surgical procedure they find a condom around your heart, well... I like to play it safe.
Date: 12/05/11 01:54 am Title: Bad Things
A chapter full of sexytimes and confessions of the heart couldn't possibly be anything short of amazing. I just hope that after they come down from their high that they don't forget about what they said and go back to only being fuck buddies. Can't wait to read more XD
Author's Response:
Oh best believe Bill's gonna try. "What? No I don't even like you, you smell like hot dog water leave me alone"
rnAnd that is when Tom reveals the wire he'd been wearing the ENTIRE TIME.
Date: 12/04/11 10:30 pm Title: Bad Things
oh god, i don't know what to say! this was hot. glad to see Tom taking it hard in the mouth like a good little bitch. just the way it's supposed to be.
Author's Response:
Hahaha! THIS MADE ME LAUGH THOUGH ALRIGHT, HAHA.
rnI have a minor fetish for Tom giving head. /le cough
rnHe didn't take it too hard! Bill was berry nice this time around.
Date: 12/04/11 05:22 pm Title: Bad Things
First, I just wanna let you know how brilliant your updates are. They ALWAYS make me feel better and I adore the fact that they are so long... this way, I can really think of nothing other than this universe for a while when I'm reading. The fact that your writing is brilliant is another reason why I'm so excited to receive the email telling me you updated =D
Yay for sexytimes!! It's probably because you're a man but your sexy scenes always feel more realistic than most of the stuff I read. It's hot, what can I say =P
LOVE the way they act with each other, how good they are together, I'm so attached to the characters so it's amazing to see them so happy!
Oh and of course the humor is just spot on and perfect. Love the whole fic and you. That's all. xD
Author's Response:
I always love hearing from you! On Twitter and here too! You're always so sweet and insightful, I love knowing what you think of my stories, and just things in general! I should say it more often, but it means the world to me that you've stuck this out, for so long! It's been a year now, isn't it? That is so amazing, I cannot thank you enough!!
rnI'm glad you enjoy my sex scenes! Truth be told, this is really the first time I've honestly written smut, haha! I'M SO NAHVOUS TONIGHT
rnMan, you have just made me smile so, so big! That is the best compliment in the world, that you've grown attached to them! I LOVE to hear that!!
rnThat isn't all! Because I love you and your reviews, too <3
Date: 12/04/11 05:21 pm Title: Bad Things
This was most definitely worth the wait!
I should really be back home at my mom's right now, but instead when my dad came in to get rid of me I told him to screw off until I was finished reading this.... and I have fucking French homework and Math to do -___- Grr! Damn you and your freakishly fucking awesome fic!!!!
Anyway, loved it a lot xD
Smell ya later!!!!~♥
Author's Response:
Smell ya later, who are you, where is you license to be so cute, lets see some identification-
rnHahaha, I feel you! This took like 8 years just because of studying - not to mention work! IT'S HARD WORK BEING SO AWESOME lol no I'm just like rully dumb
rnGo! Do your homework! Next update, I wanna know how you're doing!
rnI love your face, thanks for reading AND reviewing!