Date: 01/29/12 12:55 am Title: A Christmas Story
so'kay for the sap its christmas sap one of the few times of the year when sap is allowed like halloween or long weekends
Date: 01/28/12 11:22 pm Title: Bad Things
I love this series and your comments always make me smile. Yes mam may I have another and I dont mean no soup. and an fyi a million years ago the first time my hubby told me he loved me we were 19 and stoned so go figure and I got laid LOL
Date: 01/28/12 03:37 pm Title: A Christmas Story
I want to see their Post it Tree! I just canīt imagine it. But I am sure Billīs ornaments were the best, because he is into fashion so he knows all the good things when he see it.
The scene with the the gorgeous girl and not jealous Bill... Well, Bill said he would be livid if Tom would sleep with her. True, but he forgot to add that he would be heartbroken too. I hope we will see jealous Bill one day, I mean really jealous, I want him to be possessive about Tom so much :)
Tender Bill? OMG yes, I want to see it. The tender Bill in kitchen was nice. He needs a little more practice to be comfortable with these things, but I am sure in the end he will enjoy every minute of cuddling with Tom. Just like with Tom parents. Bill was so uncertain and nervous when he met them for the first time and look at him now.... He had no problems with having sex with their son in their house! Tom wanted to tell his parents that they are dating but after this chapter I believe that they have some suspicion. Bathroom sex... :))))
Bill, I am 100 % sure Tom didn't talk about trees ;)
Bill has a family now... Real mum and dad and everything what belongs to it. And I am so happy for him because he deserves it all... The pajama tradition was so sweet... (art code for fugly? :D Tom-Tom, you bad boy :D) it was like officially adopting Bill :D But I am really afraid that now you should probably change the pairing to twincest - related :D His relationship with Simon is so beautiful, and sweet too. I donīt know what else to write because you wrote it there exactly... Bill worships Simone. Now I am only waiting for Simone to want brush Bills beautiful black hair :D Family idyll. Billīs ornament from Simone, stocking from Gordon and from Tom....? I am confused, because I donīt remember what was the second gift from Tom... Did I forget something? But to be honest, I liked Billīs gift the most. It was so original and the note was...WOW. I donīt know what to say. He wants to try :DD Are they engaged? lol And I know what should Tom give Bill, it would be perfect with the drapes....couch cover :D Then they could do there everything without worrying about its well being :D
Christmas mass... Tom donīt think God was there for him when he needed it the most? But he has Bill now. If his past was different, he may never meet Bill. Wishes need some time, miracles donīt happen during one night :) And this was so nice : "Things like that, like Christmas, have less to do with faith, and more to do with the people that matter." I totally agree :)
Do I need to say that words like: dominating + Bill make the most sexy combination in the world? It really is :D I am not going to write a lot about this bathroom scene... only that I felt like I was watching some porn movie.. like I was looking at it and could see every detail. Great Job. Great, fantastic and impressive. And when Bill put Tomīs hands on his ass... I was like OMG, they are going to...? :D
Awww.... they made their little comfy nest on the floor :) And Tom practically told Bill that he love him. He didnīt use the L-word but the "hole in me" is very similar I think.
Aaaaand Tom got his first blowjob from Bill :D But I really think it was only thank to that little mistletoe above his crotch :D That was funny. I had luck that I was alone in work at the moment when I was reading this, because I admit, I laughed. I love you so much because of this, that you make me laugh, not only smile. And there was so much more, I adore their conversations, how could they openly talk about giving or not giving the blowjobs and other things :) Like "powder your nose." What a shame that Tom donīt use make up :D
But back to the blowjob, you are very distracting, do you know it? I want to write about everything and then I am jumping from one thing the next and back :) So, blowjob. " "Hey, get the fuck out of here, blowjob under construction," he snapped." Would it be weird if I use this phrase one day? I will probably not, but I love it anyway :D It was totally awesome.... One rapper from my country is famous for his "You killed it", what is used as slang here. So, you killed it, and you killed me, because I was dying from cheek aches and belly aches I had from all the laughing... Please tell me, WHERE are all this phrases coming from? I want it too...
And I want to see Tom dance macarena! I really really want to! He has perfect hips for it :D
The end was a little sad. To be honest, I thought it will be so, new beginnings are not easy. What were Bill and his mum talking about? I hope it doesnīt end here and they will be in phone contact from time to time. At least.
And Bill practically admitted he love Tom. Hallelujah. Now I have only one wish left, keep writing this story for forever, okay? When I see how all things are slowly being fixed, I have the sad feeling that CC is going to end soon :(
Date: 01/28/12 03:03 pm Title: A Christmas Story
cooking in crackpots, i see. simone, i'm surprised at you xD. omg HOW'VE YOU BEEN?? missed you fiercely!! how is it that you always come in with these novels of chapters and they're just better and better every time??? I MEAN, HOW?? dudeeeeeee soo hot and effin cute. Christmas should always be like this, oh, and the little near-L confession at the end wasn't bad either ;P they are so in lesbian
Date: 01/28/12 02:25 pm Title: A Christmas Story
Oh, that was so cute!! Moms are always moms, and its good for simone to have another kind of son. i'm going to star loving that woman.
I lov this chapter! I read it with a smile on the face all the time, sappy, but wonderful. Thanks again for this amazing story!!
Date: 01/28/12 01:30 pm Title: A Christmas Story
Wow. I haven't read this in a while and ive been rereading it over the last couple of days. Its come so far and I absoultely love it. I cannot wait for what is next to come. :) thank you for being awesome.
Date: 01/28/12 10:23 am Title: A Christmas Story
You absolutely made me cry, then made my glasses fog up.
Date: 01/28/12 07:57 am Title: A Christmas Story
Love this chapter god damnit!! Can't wait for another chapter :'''D
Date: 01/28/12 12:42 am Title: A Christmas Story
See, you give me all these feeeeelings and I don't know what to do about it other than whimper, wriggle and wildly fangirl you. Since I did all my squeeing on Twitter earlier, I shall try to give you a coherent review (but I make no guarantees that it won't devolve again into mindless pawing at you and begging for more. Or humping your leg, but we'll hope it doesn't come to that).
First of all, any update from you is always worth the wait because it’s about the quality, not the quantity. So, stop your apologizing for making us wait.
I really love Tom's parents more every time we see them. We all know they weren’t perfect and there were issues, but here they are so kind and selfless. However, I feel kind of bad for them because the boys turn into 5-year-olds when fighting over breakfast and I think Simone should have whacked them with a rolled-up newspaper. Then again, she seems pretty perceptive, so I wonder what she's noticed about the two of them because if there's one thing Bill and Tom ain't, it's subtle.
I adore how Tom’s getting smart about handling Bill. Tom is being so brave and honest with his feelings, like he’s really growing up.
But Bill’s lying to himself to protect himself breaks my heart. I can completely understand him, but it’s so hard to imagine feeling completely alone and unloved. That line about if he knew what he did to make people not love him anymore tore me apart. He’s still an unwanted child with all the scars from growing up abused and I just to hold him and pet him but he’d rip my face off, even without Wolverine claws (that line was flawless, by the way.) You hit these emotions so dead-on and really make the reader feel them so powerfully.
Okay, so you got me misty-eyed a couple times with the kitchen scene and Bill wondering if his mom kept his Christmas ornaments, but I downright sobbed at the entire scene in the bed on the floor. That was amazing.
Your sense of humor and the wit you give these guys, it’s why you’re one of my absolute favorites. All the little details make these guys so vivid and alive, like Tom’s anxious shriek when Bill hugged him from behind. It’s so real.
Only your Bill could snark while he's giving his first blowjob and make that priceless line. Coming right after that highly emotional, draining scene, I snorted so loud at his comment.
I'm not even qualified to comment on how hot your makeout scenes are. I’m just sitting here taking notes, wishing I could watch it live and then knowing I’d die of a massive nosebleed in the finest anime tradition before I could ever begin taking notes. What a way to go...
I'm so sorry for the long-winded review, but I think you're amazing. You're neat and so is this story. :3
P.S. I’ve never agreed more with an author’s note. We must keep our focus on what’s truly important – imagining them naked and perhaps one day hoping for a sex tape to leak. Fandom can surely unite on that! Rally around!
Date: 01/28/12 12:33 am Title: A Christmas Story
Holy fuck fazoli! This somehow just gets better and better with each passing chapter.
The flawless banter is perfectly balanced by the angst.
This needs to be saved for posterity O__O
PS: Totally read that note as "cheesy blowjob" and got a sudden unwanted image of a person eating a cheeseburger while sucking off another and getting cheese all over his dick. Egad X.x
Date: 01/28/12 12:01 am Title: A Christmas Story
Da fug!? Say it already! Its not that hard you dingbats >.<
Reffering to your last reply: ".... who are you, where is you license to be so cute, lets see some identification-"
The names Robin; or Tweet if you like those kitty nicknames ;P Would you believe me if I told you I left it at home? And if that don't work then I'm afraid I'll just have to sick my equally adorable girlyfriend on you ^^
And you wanted to know 'bout my homework? o.O Where's your life? Lol! Eeeh, got it done but my French teacher was still a bitch to me about it.... "Pas assez bon!" She said... =.= Dumb frog doesn't know good quality writing then ;) lol
This chapter is going into my Top 10 Fave Chappys of All Time (yes, I enjoy long titles, sue me!) Blowjobs, a dash of fluff, snappy comebacks (I love smart asses xD) what more could a gay loving fag like me want!? Don't answer that ;3
Now I want more... dammit >.> This is worse then drugs!
THANK YOU FOR NOT DYING AND UPDATING AGAIN! NOW UPDATE AGAIN!
And I like your face too... though I've never seen it ^^ If you forget what I'm rambling about then a quick visit to your reply to my last review should jack your memory... oops, I mean jog :D
Date: 01/27/12 10:23 pm Title: A Christmas Story
Just thinking about the drama that's about to definitely happen s**n makes me wanna jump from the window but idgaf because blowjobs asdfhjlk/.
Date: 01/27/12 09:40 pm Title: A Christmas Story
So I was gonna go to bed but then this fic lured me in as always, seducing me to stay up til 4 am with its awesomeness.
Seriously though. I could just marry this. And your long chapters, god I love you for those. Even if they do make me stay up way longer than I should. Oh well, I regret nothing.
Stay fabulous!
Date: 01/27/12 09:25 pm Title: A Christmas Story
I started reading this right before I had to leave for work, and I was so desperate and excited for your update that I downloaded it onto my kindle and read it AT work during my lunch break, in plain sight of my boss. I witness the blowjob in front of my boss. I couldn't contain my facial expressions XD!
You are such an amazing writer. Dick hobbyist is a brilliant expression!
In response to your last response to the review I posted on the last chapter - none of that makes you sound like a creep. Well, except for the bit about how I smell. But since you're such an amazing writer, I don't think I'm all that freaked out about you knowing how I smell.
I'm happy that Tom finally got some lovin'. Bill is a little bit spoiled by him, but not in a bad, annoying unbalanced way. It's just really sweet that Tom cares so much. And it's sweet that Bill feels so much for him too, but just can't seem to fully trust Tom or the feelings he has. Such a special story! Now I'm the one apologizing for being chatty. I missed you too ♥.
Date: 01/27/12 06:08 pm Title: A Christmas Story
ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!! Lmao :P I love this story...it's my life o.o wait, what? .....pshhh haha
Date: 01/27/12 05:33 pm Title: A Christmas Story
I jizzed so hard when Bill gave Tom his gift. And not even the sexy gift (Which, as always, was amazingly written). just the normal, cute, note part. What can I say, I'm a sucker for that shit.
YOU m'dear, have yet to disappoint me with your writing. In fact, when I saw this was updated, it made my day! It feels like the ToHo fandom has been quiet lately, at least for me, but you've given me hope that I shall once again adore this site and all it's wonders (:
Also, you're cool.
And you know Marianas Trench. So. Even more cool.
Date: 01/27/12 04:38 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Oh God I got Tears in my eyes. This was so beautiful!
Date: 01/27/12 04:13 pm Title: A Christmas Story
I HAVE A TEAR IN MY EYE! HOW DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?
Date: 01/27/12 03:05 pm Title: A Christmas Story
I think that this has to be one of the best stories that I have read here. It totally holds my intrest and Bill and Tom are amazing in their interaction. Never a dull moment. You have to keep the story going for a long time . I actually look forward to your new chapter postings and I can't wait till the boys take their relationship to the next level.
Date: 01/27/12 02:42 pm Title: A Christmas Story
HIIII THERE! I'm actually writing this comment from Cupid's Chokehold Heaven *waves* Do you know this place?
Well, it's FANTASTIC here! Just, God... MARVELOUS! I'm always so happy and excited when I finally can get in here! Firstly - because of the amount of time I spend here. Secondly - because of how beautiful/sexy/brilliant/funny* is here! Thirdly - I met those two guys, Bill and Tim. Or Robert maybe? Whatever. Just wanted to say that they are weally AMAZING!! And OMG they SO love each other! I weally adore their full of bitchness, humor but most of all care and love relationship *___* Their sexy times make me all fjhsahdklsafls (yeah, I peep...). And finally - J U S T B E C A U S E!
LET ME L-WORD YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU *runs with arms wide open*
* choose the right word depending on the chapter! But... basically they all express every single one of them!
