Date: 04/01/11 12:58 am Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
I am really loving this...
Now where is tom gonna sleep since the second bedroom is a work room?
Author's Response:
Glad to hear it! And he will sleep in the freezer, where he can acclimate to Bill's frigidity.
Date: 03/31/11 11:07 pm Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
OMG TOM, DELETE THOSE TEXTS
Gah, I don't even want to know what would happen if Bill saw those "tranny" comments. Usually in fics, I want drama, but this is bordering on *scared*.
And even though it said "dress-making" in the summary, hehe, there's still a bit of surprise. I would not put dress-making as a hobby of someone with that personality XD
Is Tom supposed to sleep in the second bedroom? O.o Or on the couch?
Author's Response:
I KNOW, RUN GURL RUN
rnHahaha, scared? That's a new one! Tell me more. /strokes mustache
rnMORE TO BE REVEALED SOON, SAME BILL TIME, SAME BILL CHANNEL
Date: 03/31/11 10:22 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
p.s. Bill's snarky, tough-love brand of friend-making is kind of adorable. I feel like Tom has no idea what he's gotten himself into.
Author's Response:
NO. IDEA. WHATSOEVER.
rnOh my gawsh Bill, so bossy
Date: 03/31/11 10:12 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Love it. I love Bill's character so far; he puts on a cold front, but he seems almost eager to find some companionship. It takes true talent, though, to welcome someone into your home while still managing to come off as aloof. He seems very pushy, perhaps because he's afraid of being pushed himself; he can't even invite Tom to come live with him. He commands Tom to live with him. It seems like a way for Bill to not admit that he's interested in befriending Tom, if he can act like he is the one initiating contact. He sounds like a proper control-freak.
Or I could be way off base and my psychology class is just getting to me.
Author's Response:
He's a bossy little control-freak, he really is. Reasons for that come into play later, but until then... well, good luck Tom. Praying for you, big guy.
rnThankfully Tom is stubborn and used to getting his way. AIN'T NOBODY GONNA TAKE HIM DOWN at least not without a fight.
Date: 03/31/11 06:09 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Yesssss. I think snarky Bill is one of my favorite characterizations. This is fantastic so far. The Bill punch was epic
Author's Response:
EPIC, YESSS GOOOODDDD
Date: 03/31/11 01:11 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
GAH I loved this, their interaction was priceless!! Bill is so sardonic and yet you can tell that underneath he's a sweetie. I love Tom's complete amazement at Bill giving him his key. I swear I could hear his jaw drop. I can't wait for more, loving this honey. just for this you get a huge *smooshes*
Author's Response:
You said sardonic, BRB weeping tears of hot joy
rnSMOOSHED AND HAPPY HERE <3
Date: 03/31/11 12:36 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Oh my, this is so awesome! Especially Bill! I want more *heart* : )
Author's Response:
A human heart, for me? Thank you, you shouldn't have! :D <3
Date: 03/31/11 12:35 am Title: A Force of Nature
OMG Bill is feisty! I like it. Yay for Tom having the concern and want to protect Bill. See he has it in him to be a better person. I'm usually all team Bill but I think Tom needs me more right now. *hugs* I'm a touchy feely person LOL
Author's Response:
Gotta say, diggin' on all these hugs, bro, keep 'em coming
rnTom does! TEAM TOM YA'LL
Date: 03/31/11 12:11 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Seems like Tom's been through a rough time even if it's has been his own making. I hope this time he can make the change that he needs. Really loved the way this just flowed, awesome. *hugs*
Author's Response:
Hugs, for me, really? MOXIOUS. :D
rnI like that you've developed a soft spot for Tom! Bill seems to be eclipsing him, hahaha!
Date: 03/30/11 08:55 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Your Bill is awesome. I am in love with him.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! AWESOMESNACKS. <3
Date: 03/30/11 07:29 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
I just love this Bill so much!! I can't wait for Tom to move in. =) Thanks for the speedy update!
Author's Response:
Right on! Hope I don't disappoint!
Date: 03/30/11 07:20 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Wow. That was quite an exchange between those 2. I'm terminally impressed with this story.
Author's Response:
Dude, thanks! Glad to hear it!
Date: 03/30/11 05:41 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Haha, holy crap. Why was Bill so damn eager to get a roommate XDD More importantly, why does he think he can trust Tom?
But this part: Bill shrugged. “Long enough.” He didn’t give anything else, but Tom took the answer and decided it was an invitation to continue. He handed the newspaper to Bill absently. “I’m looking for a new place, and I want to know what areas to avoid.”
Tom's dialogue at the end should be in a new paragraph ;)
Author's Response:
IT'S COMPLICATED OKAY /slap slap
rnDude, thanks for the head's up! Don't I feel like donuthole. I'll edit it ASAP!
Date: 03/30/11 03:20 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Bill is really just a little ray of sunshine, isn't he? LMAO
Author's Response:
If by sunshine you mean brass knuckles, THEN YES, RAY OF BRASS KNUCKLES
rnHe's just so cuddly, I wish he would toughen up, gawsh
Date: 03/30/11 03:18 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Bill is so bad-ass. I already love this so much
Author's Response:
Happy to hear you're enjoying this as much as I am!
Date: 03/30/11 12:44 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
A DAINTY SWEETHEART!!! Which Bill are you talking about?! That boy is.. I can't even explain. How do you break someone's fingers with a fountain pen lol.
He's just pure attitude. I'd ask him to marry me if I didn't already know he would tell me to fuck off XD
Author's Response:
He just wanted a reason to use his fountain pen. HE WILL FIND A WAY.
rnHe digs on the chicks. But marriage is a beartrap and he has good instincts towards self-preservation so... yeah, probably.
rnEITHER WAY I LOVE YOU, HOLD ME
Date: 03/30/11 12:42 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
Bill is such a fierce, hardass! To repeat an earlier sentiment (and your original title, hehe), tough as nails. I love it! He's not taking any bullshit, and he's so witty, which by turn means you're so witty--I love, love, love your wit and humor, by the way; it's so sharp and quick, and left me starry eyed and thrilled the entire time, haha!
Ohh, I wonder what Tom is getting himself into. I love their dynamic already--Tom trying to change for the better and Bill, who won't take any B.S. from anyone. I wonder if that attitude will be conducive to Tom's trying to change, or tempt him down the wrong road at some point.
As usual, I WILL BE PATIENTLY WAITING, WITH A BIG SILLY GRIN ON MY FACE. ♥
Author's Response:
JUST ACKNOWLEDGE THAT YOU'RE ATTRACTED TO ME ALREADY, GAWSH
rnI'm so glad you're having as much fun with this as I did, haha! REALLY TOO MUCH FUN. /ignores all other responsibilities i.e. eating, sleeping, bathing
rnTom is getting himself into a world of trouble. And it will be AWESOME.
Date: 03/30/11 06:00 am Title: A Force of Nature
“You go down easier than your girlfriend. Beg pardon.” absolute epicness!!! lmao. i love violent and strong bill. he doesnt need any little bitch to defend him:D
Author's Response:
/snap snap
rnSO MUCH 'YOU GO GIRL' SPIRIT! Loving it.
Date: 03/30/11 01:03 am Title: A Force of Nature
That was short, sweet and amazing. I grinned the entire time. Thank you!
Author's Response:
Grins are my business :D
rnThat's not true. Washing dishes is my business. I'm sorry. ;_;
Date: 03/29/11 09:55 pm Title: A Force of Nature
Not to review-spam your story, but I sent it through the site. Did you check junk mail, just in case? If it's really not there, I can rewrite + resend.
Author's Response:
Massive derp on my behalf, many apologies, and also a reply :D