Reviews For Cupid's Chokehold
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Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 10:02 pm Title: Round One: Fight!

Oh I love it!! The interaction between these two makes my toes curl! I do believe that Bill may have found the perfect match for his derisive humour. I now have an insane urge to iron my drapes, LOL *tackleglomps*

Author's Response:

IRON PLEATS INTO THEM as that it is what I do with my Saturday nights /sob sob

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 10:00 pm Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns

I like it! Tom still has a way to go; his insensitivity towards transgender people is pretty blatant in how he texts his friends, but I feel like he's possibly putting up a front to maintain friendships, seeing as he was attracted to Bill.

OKAY OKAY I ADMIT IT, I AM FALLING FOR YOU SLOWLY BUT SURELY :P

*runs off to read the next chapter, hiding my face behind my hands, giggling girlishly*

Author's Response:

In this story, Bill isn't actually transgendered, but the term is used popularly to describe anyone whose looks veer towards the opposite sex. It's not accurate, and a lot of people are offended by it, but people don't know any better. /shrugs

rn

A WHOLE NEW WOOOORRRLLLDDDD

rn

/leans chin in hands, smiles stupidly after you

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 10:17 am Title: Round One: Fight!

I love the way Tom and Bill interact.

Author's Response:

RIGHTEOUS.

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 10:09 am Title: Round One: Fight!

Baby thug and the bitch...*giggles* sounds like a fairytale:)

Author's Response:

You know, it sort of is :D

rn

Except Prince Charming holds his gun sideways, and Cinderella smokes like a chimney and uses 4 letter words

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 04:39 am Title: Round One: Fight!

I just adore this story. I love both Bill and Tom, they are such unique characters. Thanks for the super speedy updates!

Author's Response:

PRAY THAT I CAN MAINTAIN MY PACE. These are all pre-written chapters, so D:

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 03:08 am Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns

Oh dear, what has Tom gotten himself into? Is he supposed to live in that second bedroom? I can't wait to see what happen when Bill arrives home and they discuss things more in depth. Thank you for the update. *squishes*

Author's Response:

YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND.

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 12:58 am Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns

I am really loving this...

Now where is tom gonna sleep since the second bedroom is a work room?

Author's Response:

Glad to hear it! And he will sleep in the freezer, where he can acclimate to Bill's frigidity.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 11:07 pm Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns

OMG TOM, DELETE THOSE TEXTS
Gah, I don't even want to know what would happen if Bill saw those "tranny" comments. Usually in fics, I want drama, but this is bordering on *scared*.

And even though it said "dress-making" in the summary, hehe, there's still a bit of surprise. I would not put dress-making as a hobby of someone with that personality XD

Is Tom supposed to sleep in the second bedroom? O.o Or on the couch?

Author's Response:

I KNOW, RUN GURL RUN

rn

Hahaha, scared? That's a new one! Tell me more. /strokes mustache

rn

MORE TO BE REVEALED SOON, SAME BILL TIME, SAME BILL CHANNEL

Reviewer: Ghostie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 10:22 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

p.s. Bill's snarky, tough-love brand of friend-making is kind of adorable. I feel like Tom has no idea what he's gotten himself into.

Author's Response:

NO. IDEA. WHATSOEVER.

rn

Oh my gawsh Bill, so bossy

Reviewer: Ghostie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 10:12 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

Love it. I love Bill's character so far; he puts on a cold front, but he seems almost eager to find some companionship. It takes true talent, though, to welcome someone into your home while still managing to come off as aloof. He seems very pushy, perhaps because he's afraid of being pushed himself; he can't even invite Tom to come live with him. He commands Tom to live with him. It seems like a way for Bill to not admit that he's interested in befriending Tom, if he can act like he is the one initiating contact. He sounds like a proper control-freak.

Or I could be way off base and my psychology class is just getting to me.

Author's Response:

He's a bossy little control-freak, he really is. Reasons for that come into play later, but until then... well, good luck Tom. Praying for you, big guy.

rn

Thankfully Tom is stubborn and used to getting his way. AIN'T NOBODY GONNA TAKE HIM DOWN at least not without a fight.

Reviewer: ms_hopefulcynic Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 06:09 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

Yesssss. I think snarky Bill is one of my favorite characterizations. This is fantastic so far. The Bill punch was epic

Author's Response:

EPIC, YESSS GOOOODDDD

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 01:11 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

GAH I loved this, their interaction was priceless!! Bill is so sardonic and yet you can tell that underneath he's a sweetie. I love Tom's complete amazement at Bill giving him his key. I swear I could hear his jaw drop. I can't wait for more, loving this honey. just for this you get a huge *smooshes*

Author's Response:

You said sardonic, BRB weeping tears of hot joy

rn

SMOOSHED AND HAPPY HERE <3

Reviewer: -SB- Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 12:36 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

Oh my, this is so awesome! Especially Bill! I want more *heart* : )

Author's Response:

A human heart, for me? Thank you, you shouldn't have! :D <3

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 12:35 am Title: A Force of Nature

OMG Bill is feisty! I like it. Yay for Tom having the concern and want to protect Bill. See he has it in him to be a better person. I'm usually all team Bill but I think Tom needs me more right now. *hugs* I'm a touchy feely person LOL

Author's Response:

Gotta say, diggin' on all these hugs, bro, keep 'em coming

rn

Tom does! TEAM TOM YA'LL

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/11 12:11 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

Seems like Tom's been through a rough time even if it's has been his own making. I hope this time he can make the change that he needs. Really loved the way this just flowed, awesome. *hugs*

Author's Response:

Hugs, for me, really? MOXIOUS. :D

rn

I like that you've developed a soft spot for Tom! Bill seems to be eclipsing him, hahaha!

Reviewer: Halcyon_MOD Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 08:55 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

Your Bill is awesome. I am in love with him.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! AWESOMESNACKS. <3

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 07:29 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

I just love this Bill so much!! I can't wait for Tom to move in. =) Thanks for the speedy update!

Author's Response:

Right on! Hope I don't disappoint!

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 07:20 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

Wow. That was quite an exchange between those 2. I'm terminally impressed with this story.



Author's Response:

Dude, thanks! Glad to hear it!

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 05:41 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

Haha, holy crap. Why was Bill so damn eager to get a roommate XDD More importantly, why does he think he can trust Tom?

But this part: Bill shrugged. “Long enough.” He didn’t give anything else, but Tom took the answer and decided it was an invitation to continue. He handed the newspaper to Bill absently. “I’m looking for a new place, and I want to know what areas to avoid.”

Tom's dialogue at the end should be in a new paragraph ;)

Author's Response:

IT'S COMPLICATED OKAY /slap slap

rn

Dude, thanks for the head's up! Don't I feel like donuthole. I'll edit it ASAP!

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/30/11 03:20 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

Bill is really just a little ray of sunshine, isn't he? LMAO

Author's Response:

If by sunshine you mean brass knuckles, THEN YES, RAY OF BRASS KNUCKLES

rn

He's just so cuddly, I wish he would toughen up, gawsh

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