Date: 04/11/11 01:02 am Title: In Absence of the Queen
I am kinda in love with Nate!!!! Just wanna squeeeeeeez the life outa him:)
Author's Response:
PLEASE DO NOT, I NEED HIM FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER D:
Date: 04/10/11 11:01 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen
Yay, a new chapter! I was starting to wonder where you'd run off to. :P
I absolutely love that Nate and Tom have a bromance going on; the more I read, the more I kept volleying between "They're so going to hook up at some point" and "Nah, they're just bros, dude."
MISFITS AND MS. ALBA, LOL I SUSPECTED AS MUCH. I was totally going to call you out on it, so when I saw that you did it yourself in the end notes, my face dropped a little, not gonna lie. YOU SNEAKY, BRILLIANT BEING, YOU.
Author's Response:
I ran off to the land of Responsibility. With any luck, I won't be going back. It is a terrible place.
rnHahahaha, good. A good, deep bromance should always have the possibility of drunken mistakes neither talks about.
rnI AM SO SORRY, SHOULD I REMOVE THE NOTE, I FEEL JUST AWFUL REALLY
Date: 04/05/11 07:07 pm Title: Jerkle Gym
Ha, the end note's a classic. Love that.
Author's Response:
Thank you, thank you. :D
Date: 04/05/11 01:43 pm Title: Jerkle Gym
First, I wanted to reply to your response to my other review. =) I didn't think that Bill was transgendered; what I meant was that in Tom using a term like "Tranny," he showed his own sort of... eh... disdain (may not be the right word) and disregard for the feelings of those who are transgendered. =) Just wanted to clear that up! ^^
And now, to review this chapter! Oh, Bill and Tom. The chemistry between them is so potent--razor sharp and harsh, kind of sweet. Bill is such a hardass, and Tom is so stubborn. Between the two of them, I feel like they might reach a stalemate that would only be broken by one of them kicking the other behind the joint of their knees, haha!
Oh, Bill. So bitchy. I get the feeling that it's his way of flirting. But then... maybe not. IT'S SO HARD TO TELL.
Also, you're brilliant. Brilliant.
And did you just make a luanlegacy reference in your end notes? *___* I... you.... *starry eyed* YOU'RE TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE BUT I WILL NOT SAY MORE BECAUSE I AM RESISTING. *runs away*
RESISTANCE~ >:)
Author's Response:
OOOOOHHHHHHHHHH giblets
rnI keep reading this comment over and over, and it just keeps getting better and better. You are so amazing for me~
rnBill is pretty much retarded. He thinks he's being totally friendly. No Bill. No. You're being a snotbubble.
rn/LUMINOUS
rnDO NOT BE AFRAID. I love you.
Date: 04/05/11 08:48 am Title: Jerkle Gym
Great. Super. Hammer. Alles! I laughed so hard at this: “I could build a fucking jungle gym with the poles wedged up your ass!” OMG, I don´t know how I´m still laughing at it, maybe I´m tired...
But yes, Bill is so awesome in this and so is Tom. Keep writing ; )
Author's Response:
Y-You said hammer /heart flutters madly
rnNGL, I laughed, and I wrote it, which is actually... actually sort of lame.
rnThank you so much for all your encouragement! And please tell me your initials stand for Squirrel Bait, it would please me to no end.
Date: 04/05/11 05:29 am Title: Jerkle Gym
Bill certainly had his snark on! It's going to take some to cut through the bitter rind that Bill has himself wrapped in but it'll be fun to watch. Love the jungle gym remark, that's something to store away for future use. LOL Can't wait for more *smooshes*
Author's Response:
Gurl you know it /snap snap
rnNothing would make me happier than if you used this. Please. I will give you a dollar.
Date: 04/05/11 05:17 am Title: Jerkle Gym
This is fantastic xD Looking forward to reading more =)
Author's Response:
Thanks a trillions! :D I love your handle, and I'm already perusing your stories!
Date: 04/05/11 04:03 am Title: Jerkle Gym
Lmao @ your ending note.
Man, I just cannot picture Bill riding a bike. In real life or here. And especially with those boots. Danger, that. Better not be heels.
Author's Response:
I debated with myself, but I won so I posted it.
rnThat's part of the fun. The OH MY GIBLETS WHAT THE PINOCHLE factor.
Date: 04/05/11 03:45 am Title: Jerkle Gym
Lol, thank you for another hilarious and wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for another awesome review! I'mma spread it on toast and enjoy it leisurely with my morning paper.
Date: 04/05/11 02:19 am Title: Jerkle Gym
“I could build a fucking jungle gym with the poles wedged up your ass!”
LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
LOVING THIS REVIEW
Date: 04/02/11 01:27 am Title: Round One: Fight!
Those two have quite the chemistry. Baby Thug and Unimpressed, Terminally, are swiftly becoming some of my favorite people.
Author's Response:
Whoa dude, thanks! That means so much to me! I'm glad others are enjoying the dynamic as much as me. :D
Date: 04/02/11 01:22 am Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
Maybe Bill's just a seamstre--- *thinks* seamster? Like, he makes clothes, but doesn't wear them? I dunno.
Author's Response:
I actually had to look that up. The proper term is "dressmaker", apparently. How gloriously unisexed. :D
rnAnd yes, yes he is. :D FABULOUS
Date: 04/01/11 10:29 pm Title: Round One: Fight!
Oh my gosh! You're just on fire with the update speed! Haha, I actually thought this one was last time's at first.
And oooo, Tom wants to clean? Reminds me of real!Tom with his germaphobe rumor, wearing gloves all da time.
Author's Response:
Don't get used to it D: These are all pre-written chapters, after I finish those, I will be undelicately fscked.
rnInside that enormous shirt is a soccer mom, waiting to spit on a napkin and smear it on Bill's face
Date: 04/01/11 10:08 pm Title: Round One: Fight!
FJKDLFJDKLASFD OKAY OKAY I LOVE YOU. LOVE. I. LOVE. YOU.
Seriously dalfjda the wit-the razor sharp wit! The banter! I actually had to read it a second time to figure out what was going on, and god, your story is so refreshing. I'm going all over the place right now, but *___________________*
Author's Response:
HOW FORWARD, PLEASE, RESTRAIN YOURSELF /slaps delicately at you
rnlol j/k lay it on me <3
rnRefreshing! That's a new one! Lemme just tattoo that on my neck
Date: 04/01/11 10:02 pm Title: Round One: Fight!
Oh I love it!! The interaction between these two makes my toes curl! I do believe that Bill may have found the perfect match for his derisive humour. I now have an insane urge to iron my drapes, LOL *tackleglomps*
Author's Response:
IRON PLEATS INTO THEM as that it is what I do with my Saturday nights /sob sob
Date: 04/01/11 10:00 pm Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
I like it! Tom still has a way to go; his insensitivity towards transgender people is pretty blatant in how he texts his friends, but I feel like he's possibly putting up a front to maintain friendships, seeing as he was attracted to Bill.
OKAY OKAY I ADMIT IT, I AM FALLING FOR YOU SLOWLY BUT SURELY :P
*runs off to read the next chapter, hiding my face behind my hands, giggling girlishly*
Author's Response:
In this story, Bill isn't actually transgendered, but the term is used popularly to describe anyone whose looks veer towards the opposite sex. It's not accurate, and a lot of people are offended by it, but people don't know any better. /shrugs
rnA WHOLE NEW WOOOORRRLLLDDDD
rn/leans chin in hands, smiles stupidly after you
Date: 04/01/11 10:17 am Title: Round One: Fight!
I love the way Tom and Bill interact.
Author's Response:
RIGHTEOUS.
Date: 04/01/11 10:09 am Title: Round One: Fight!
Baby thug and the bitch...*giggles* sounds like a fairytale:)
Author's Response:
You know, it sort of is :D
rnExcept Prince Charming holds his gun sideways, and Cinderella smokes like a chimney and uses 4 letter words
Date: 04/01/11 04:39 am Title: Round One: Fight!
I just adore this story. I love both Bill and Tom, they are such unique characters. Thanks for the super speedy updates!
Author's Response:
PRAY THAT I CAN MAINTAIN MY PACE. These are all pre-written chapters, so D:
Date: 04/01/11 03:08 am Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
Oh dear, what has Tom gotten himself into? Is he supposed to live in that second bedroom? I can't wait to see what happen when Bill arrives home and they discuss things more in depth. Thank you for the update. *squishes*
Author's Response:
YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND.