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Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/11 06:39 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2

Hello! I just want to tell you that I love the way you write. And I love this story. I'd passed over it several times but it kept calling to me so here I am! Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

Oh dude, thank you! That is so awesome of you, thanks! I'm glad to hear I finally lured you in! I can't wait for the next chapter either! :B

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/11 05:55 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2

Great chapter :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/13/11 05:34 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2

"And listen to another litany of bitches, whores, and the ghetto? I’ll bike, thanks. And eat those fucking pancakes, or so help me God-“ Really, he is such a ray of sunshine! LMAO

Author's Response:

He's just so cuddly and sweet, I can see why Tom likes him so much! :D

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 09:37 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen

I adore Nate! Omgosh, he's so awesome xD Great chapter! Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Dude, thanks a ton! If you haven't already, you should check out the show I stole him from, "Misfits"! IT'S TOTES FAB.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 05:35 am Title: In Absence of the Queen

Nate seems like a hoot! Not sure I like this Jessica girl, she seems to be moving in far too quick *glares* I'm with Tom, I seriously want to know more about Bill. What makes the man tick? *snuggles*

Author's Response:

Hahaha, I'm glad you like him! If you haven't already, you should check out 'Misfits', the show I stole him from!

rn

Don't sweat the Jessicas, as they say! And more Billsus and Tomnus to come, just for you, BB!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 01:52 am Title: In Absence of the Queen

Thanks for the update, I look forward to the next interaction between Tom and Bill.

Author's Response:

Thank YOU! :D

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/11 01:02 am Title: In Absence of the Queen

I am kinda in love with Nate!!!! Just wanna squeeeeeeez the life outa him:)

Author's Response:

PLEASE DO NOT, I NEED HIM FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER D:

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/11 11:01 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen

Yay, a new chapter! I was starting to wonder where you'd run off to. :P

I absolutely love that Nate and Tom have a bromance going on; the more I read, the more I kept volleying between "They're so going to hook up at some point" and "Nah, they're just bros, dude."

MISFITS AND MS. ALBA, LOL I SUSPECTED AS MUCH. I was totally going to call you out on it, so when I saw that you did it yourself in the end notes, my face dropped a little, not gonna lie. YOU SNEAKY, BRILLIANT BEING, YOU.

Author's Response:

I ran off to the land of Responsibility. With any luck, I won't be going back. It is a terrible place.

rn

Hahahaha, good. A good, deep bromance should always have the possibility of drunken mistakes neither talks about.

rn

I AM SO SORRY, SHOULD I REMOVE THE NOTE, I FEEL JUST AWFUL REALLY

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 07:07 pm Title: Jerkle Gym

Ha, the end note's a classic. Love that.



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you. :D

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 01:43 pm Title: Jerkle Gym

First, I wanted to reply to your response to my other review. =) I didn't think that Bill was transgendered; what I meant was that in Tom using a term like "Tranny," he showed his own sort of... eh... disdain (may not be the right word) and disregard for the feelings of those who are transgendered. =) Just wanted to clear that up! ^^

And now, to review this chapter! Oh, Bill and Tom. The chemistry between them is so potent--razor sharp and harsh, kind of sweet. Bill is such a hardass, and Tom is so stubborn. Between the two of them, I feel like they might reach a stalemate that would only be broken by one of them kicking the other behind the joint of their knees, haha!

Oh, Bill. So bitchy. I get the feeling that it's his way of flirting. But then... maybe not. IT'S SO HARD TO TELL.

Also, you're brilliant. Brilliant.

And did you just make a luanlegacy reference in your end notes? *___* I... you.... *starry eyed* YOU'RE TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE BUT I WILL NOT SAY MORE BECAUSE I AM RESISTING. *runs away*

RESISTANCE~ >:)

Author's Response:

OOOOOHHHHHHHHHH giblets

rn

I keep reading this comment over and over, and it just keeps getting better and better. You are so amazing for me~

rn

Bill is pretty much retarded. He thinks he's being totally friendly. No Bill. No. You're being a snotbubble.

rn

/LUMINOUS

rn

DO NOT BE AFRAID. I love you.

Reviewer: -SB- Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 08:48 am Title: Jerkle Gym

Great. Super. Hammer. Alles! I laughed so hard at this: “I could build a fucking jungle gym with the poles wedged up your ass!” OMG, I don´t know how I´m still laughing at it, maybe I´m tired...
But yes, Bill is so awesome in this and so is Tom. Keep writing ; )

Author's Response:

Y-You said hammer /heart flutters madly

rn

NGL, I laughed, and I wrote it, which is actually... actually sort of lame.

rn

Thank you so much for all your encouragement! And please tell me your initials stand for Squirrel Bait, it would please me to no end.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 05:29 am Title: Jerkle Gym

Bill certainly had his snark on! It's going to take some to cut through the bitter rind that Bill has himself wrapped in but it'll be fun to watch. Love the jungle gym remark, that's something to store away for future use. LOL Can't wait for more *smooshes*

Author's Response:

Gurl you know it /snap snap

rn

Nothing would make me happier than if you used this. Please. I will give you a dollar.

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 05:17 am Title: Jerkle Gym

This is fantastic xD Looking forward to reading more =)

Author's Response:

Thanks a trillions! :D I love your handle, and I'm already perusing your stories!

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 04:03 am Title: Jerkle Gym

Lmao @ your ending note.

Man, I just cannot picture Bill riding a bike. In real life or here. And especially with those boots. Danger, that. Better not be heels.

Author's Response:

I debated with myself, but I won so I posted it.

rn

That's part of the fun. The OH MY GIBLETS WHAT THE PINOCHLE factor.

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 03:45 am Title: Jerkle Gym

Lol, thank you for another hilarious and wonderful chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you for another awesome review! I'mma spread it on toast and enjoy it leisurely with my morning paper.

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 02:19 am Title: Jerkle Gym

“I could build a fucking jungle gym with the poles wedged up your ass!”

LOVE IT!

Author's Response:

LOVING THIS REVIEW

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 01:27 am Title: Round One: Fight!

Those two have quite the chemistry. Baby Thug and Unimpressed, Terminally, are swiftly becoming some of my favorite people.



Author's Response:

Whoa dude, thanks! That means so much to me! I'm glad others are enjoying the dynamic as much as me. :D

Reviewer: Lady Tiadalma Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/11 01:22 am Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns

Maybe Bill's just a seamstre--- *thinks* seamster? Like, he makes clothes, but doesn't wear them? I dunno.



Author's Response:

I actually had to look that up. The proper term is "dressmaker", apparently. How gloriously unisexed. :D

rn

And yes, yes he is. :D FABULOUS

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 10:29 pm Title: Round One: Fight!

Oh my gosh! You're just on fire with the update speed! Haha, I actually thought this one was last time's at first.

And oooo, Tom wants to clean? Reminds me of real!Tom with his germaphobe rumor, wearing gloves all da time.

Author's Response:

Don't get used to it D: These are all pre-written chapters, after I finish those, I will be undelicately fscked.

rn

Inside that enormous shirt is a soccer mom, waiting to spit on a napkin and smear it on Bill's face

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/11 10:08 pm Title: Round One: Fight!

FJKDLFJDKLASFD OKAY OKAY I LOVE YOU. LOVE. I. LOVE. YOU.

Seriously dalfjda the wit-the razor sharp wit! The banter! I actually had to read it a second time to figure out what was going on, and god, your story is so refreshing. I'm going all over the place right now, but *___________________*

Author's Response:

HOW FORWARD, PLEASE, RESTRAIN YOURSELF /slaps delicately at you

rn

lol j/k lay it on me <3

rn

Refreshing! That's a new one! Lemme just tattoo that on my neck

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