Date: 04/19/11 04:34 am Title: Kicking and Screaming
i loved this chapter. great great character development, though Bill fights it every step of the way. =)
Author's Response:
He's a fighter not a lover
rn.... yet
Date: 04/19/11 03:47 am Title: Kicking and Screaming
Lol, I love this xD
Author's Response:
I love you :D
Date: 04/19/11 02:06 am Title: Kicking and Screaming
oh darn, the end of the road for now i see. shoot, now what will i do with my last hour of wakefulness? oh maybe that studying that i put off till now, thanks for that. lol, i shall blame you for my german dialogue sucking at life. :)
Author's Response:
That's okay, I'll help you!
rnRepeat after me, ICH LIEBEN LEICHENWASSER
Date: 04/19/11 01:43 am Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2
hmm, I'm missing me some quality snark. Only for lack of opportunity of course, all snark given was of quality :)
Author's Response:
Oh no I see how it is, my manhood being in question, have brought shame to my family
rnNo it's alright
rnReally
rnBRB seppuku
Date: 04/19/11 01:29 am Title: In Absence of the Queen
love Funyuns. :3 at any time of day
Author's Response:
I like to wear them as bracelets and eat them off my arms. I mean, that's just me, though.
Date: 04/19/11 01:10 am Title: Kicking and Screaming
"Any siblings," Tom asked wryly.
"Not after I was finished."
"You're a suburbanite mama's boy gangster with a legally forgotten rap sheet and a sincere desire to iron drapes and organize spice racks."
Just wanna cuddle him to death! lol
Author's Response:
Don't you just? If it weren't for the possibility that poisonous barbs would be deployed, I think more people might try it.
Date: 04/19/11 01:04 am Title: Jerkle Gym
x3 id play in that jungle gym...
Author's Response:
Gurl who DON'T want to get all up in dat ass.
Date: 04/19/11 12:42 am Title: Round One: Fight!
aw, baby thug. lol this is too amazing, even if they never get down to the birds and the bees, just the freaking dialog has me
Author's Response:
Sssshhh, it's alright, I love you. This sealed it. Ssshhh, ssshhhh.
Date: 04/19/11 12:32 am Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
LOL a drag queen. doubt it
Author's Response:
You are right to doubt.
Date: 04/18/11 11:53 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
haha maybe a dainty cold-hearted bitch xD omg, you're genius. you know what this story needs? A BANNER! cuz otherwise it gets overlooked like it seems to be, based on reviews, and it shouldn't be cuz its very well written and witty to boot. you're the total package, babe. i would totally make one for you and be that awesome, but I'm not confident in my skillz. lol, who knows, maybe I'll give it a whirl (but no promises and if i make one you aren't obligated to use it, cuz that'd be mean xD)
Author's Response:
Oh, so dainty.
rnOH NO I'M SORRY I ALREADY HAVE A SUPER FABULOUS BANNER MADE FOR ME BUT TY TY
Date: 04/18/11 11:32 pm Title: A Force of Nature
LOL omg, okay shotgun wedding, i've done it and jumped the gun: I love this. shit, I'm knocked up, but you'd better not leave me up a creek since it's your responsibility, too! don't leave me, k?
bill is just TOO delicious, and if you can come up with lines like that, you're a bitchwizard. and i mean that in the best of ways
Author's Response:
I want a Vegas wedding. FYI I can't wear white to the altar, so... yeah, I'm looking into shades of red.
rnI'm a level 9 bitchwizard deluxe
Date: 04/18/11 11:25 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
LOL glitter and used condoms, okay, love this purely for that line. well, not exclusively, but my relationship with the rest of the fic is too new to be called love, that'd just be rushing things and before you knew it, i'd wind up knocked up and alone D:
Author's Response:
Naw gurl I'mma man of my word, once I get you pregnant with interest in my stories I always pay up
Date: 04/18/11 07:44 pm Title: Kicking and Screaming
Ah yes I do love a good goatee stroke. And I have a great love for this chapter. Perfect combination.
Author's Response:
Like PB&J only a little sexy
rnWell sexier than usual
rn... that's normal, right
Date: 04/18/11 07:08 pm Title: Kicking and Screaming
Hahahahahah iron drapes
Author's Response:
Better than the Iron Curtain amirite
Date: 04/18/11 06:55 pm Title: Kicking and Screaming
Bill is officially the biggest badass. EVER. And... uh, that's all I can say, really >_>
Also, I have to thank you. THANK YOU for taking your time. Thank you for not making Bill and Tom go at each other's throats one minute, and start dry humping in a closet the next. Thank you for leaving the land of romance as a still dry desert rather than turning it into an oasis overnight, and leaving no hints of possible relationships other than Tom's persistent curiosity, which, by the way, comes off as nothing more than merely curiosity. Seriously, if you didn't have the pairing listed, I wouldn't know they might end up involved at all, so... basically, thank you for the pacing. Also, I love you. *cough* I MEAN WHAT? UPDATE SOON, I SAID. >_>
*runs off*
Author's Response:
I'm so glad that wasn't all you had to say, because what followed after was pretty much the coolest thing since they put peanu butter and jelly in he same jar.
rnThis review really does mean the world to me. I wanted their relationship to build gradually and grow naturally; I didn't want anything to be too obvious or tired. So thank you so much for saying this, it really made my life. <3
Date: 04/18/11 06:40 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2
How did I miss this update? >_> AY! In any case, I adored it as usual. Bill is a bit easier on the go when he's sleepy, I see. ;) But he certainly made up for it the next morning. I love how he threatened Tom into eating pancakes. xD He's just determined to be abrasive, isn't he? Haha!
*runs off to read more*
Author's Response:
MAGIC
rnHe's just so sensitive when it comes to his pancakes.
Date: 04/18/11 05:18 pm Title: Kicking and Screaming
That was quite entertaining. Bill is an interesting man full of weird little quirks. I wonder why he wants to give such a strong and fierce "don't you mess with me, I'm a badass" persona. Hm.
Tom is really amusing too, Bill has him pegged. One day Tom will buy this huge-ass baggy gangsta apron for when he makes pasta.
Author's Response:
Thanks for that! Like to know he's got you interested :D
rnHoly crap why is that not already 'shooped and on my harddrive, I require this in earnest
Date: 04/14/11 03:53 am Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2
Thanks for the update. I really liked Tom's dream, it was very appropriate. =)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I thought it came out alright too!
Date: 04/14/11 12:14 am Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2
Oho, looks like Tom's tapping into Bill's inner-softie ;)
Author's Response:
He'll be sucked in soon enough. :D
Date: 04/13/11 07:13 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2
Lol, Bill xD Hopefully Tom's slowly breaking him down.
Author's Response:
BET YOUR SWEET MUFFINS