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Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/12 02:07 pm Title: Breakable

Noooooooooooooo!!!! Ohh, poor Bill, and Tom caring about him so much. *sobs*

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Date: 02/11/12 01:47 pm Title: The Good, the Bad, and the Nate

Bwahahaha, Nate likes Bill kicking his ass. :) I was ready for some major violence when Bill saw him wearing the dress, but this cracked me up. :)

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/12 01:21 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

I just have to say I really like the way you've personified Bill through this whole fic. He's stronger than he's usually portrayed, and you can tell that the way he's always had to take care of himself has made him that way. It's also refreshing to read him as a guy who leaves dishes in the sink and is a smartass to everyone.

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Date: 02/11/12 12:44 pm Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends

Your chapter notes are the best, lol.

And Bill at a fabric store amuses me. >:D I can totally see it. I have a thing for fabric stores myself. :)

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/12 02:26 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

Meep! I love that they're warming up to each other. :DDDD Now I must sleep, but will resume soon. This is such a fun read!

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/12 02:14 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly

I can't stop reading this and it's 1:15am. *shakes fist at you* Okay, one more chapter tonight and THAT'S IT!

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Date: 02/11/12 01:55 am Title: Crowning Achievement

Aww, Bill left him money for the burger. So stubborn Bill, just give in and like Tom already!!!

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Date: 02/11/12 01:49 am Title: Kicking and Screaming

*reads on with bated breath* I love this, I really do. :)

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Date: 02/11/12 01:35 am Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2

Tom, don't be friends with Bushido!!! That is all.

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Date: 02/11/12 01:27 am Title: In Absence of the Queen

That is so true about Funyuns. Tom and Nate amuse me. >:D

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Date: 02/11/12 01:16 am Title: Jerkle Gym

I love that Bill makes him bring his bag--I have a feeling that real-life Bill makes Tom carry his bags too. ;)

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Date: 02/11/12 01:07 am Title: Round One: Fight!

Ahaha, aww, just had the cutest mental image of Tom ironing drapes, or his bandanas. Love their little verbal spats too.

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/12 12:59 am Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns

Hee! Love Tom's reaction after discovering the room of dresses. :) Hope he doesn't bolt! And tThe characterization of his relationship with his parents seems really spot on.

Reviewer: Remy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/12 12:47 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

Eeeep! I love this! Tom really has no other choice--who can say no to Bill?!? I love both of their characterizations in this and have to say, it looks like an interesting ride. :)

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/08/12 10:55 am Title: A Christmas Story

This was an awesome chapter my Kitty Kat *smooshes* I laughed, I cried and I'm sure at some point I was quite possibly drooling. You always know how to bring out the best in me. I know I love you 100% no doubts, no ifs, but definitely butts. *pouch, shove...you know the rest*

Reviewer: SephoraChise Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/12 12:33 am Title: Breakable

Tom with loose blonde hair always conjures this image:

http://youtu.be/jdXyVX-ZPrM

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Date: 02/04/12 12:30 am Title: A Christmas Story

I'll have you know that Heavy Metal Lover is my favorite song on Born This Way, and it is with endless hope that someday I will makeout and/or have sexytime to this song. Just thought you should know

Reviewer: SweetBlasphemy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/12 05:08 am Title: A Christmas Story

Holy man, you have some talent!

The character and plot development you've created so far is really quite something. It's fantastic.

I really like how you remember certain unresolved certain and bring them around again to complete the story's (so far)circularity. It's really awesome.

Seriously, keep writing.

Reviewer: mrsjennakaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/31/12 03:07 pm Title: A Christmas Story

this is sweet. way too sweet. but i like it, and Bill reminds me of you so much.
also, and this is a little funny, somewhere near the top when Tom and Bill arrive at the parent's house, Simone says she's gonna make some apple cider, and she asks Gordon to get the crackpot. here's the section:
"At least you can say you got into the spirit of things," Simone laughed. "Go on, boys. I'm going to make us some apple cider. Gordon, can you help me get the crackpot down?"
it's a great laugh, really it is, but i dont know if you meant to have that there, or if it was just a typo...but i swear to you, i'll be laughing about this for the next week or so. thank you for more shits and giggles.

Reviewer: oktober Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/31/12 01:09 am Title: A Christmas Story

sweet sensual Jesus.
This chapter was really um, hard, for me to read.. I flailed, giggled, squealed, ran laps around my apartment (which got my cat all riled up, and how he is biting at my ankles!)
... oh and i got so excited i dumped red wine on my Pokemon blanket, but it's okay, i already got the stain out. Pikachu kinda looks like he got his period a little bit, though. haha!

You have outdone yourself yet again, and oh goodness, your bathroom-blow job scene was what mine only wishes to be! It probably took me about an hour to read though, because I kept having to scream into my pillow to avoid noise complaints - my downstairs neighbors moved out because me and the roomie can't stop screaming and fangirling...

ALSO, holy fuck, the idea of Bill being a real cumslut? FUUUUU *eyes roll back in head* why do you write things that are so fucking sexy? WHY! (whatever the reason, please do not stop)

ALSO: Heavy Metal Lover is a fucking amazing sex song, but Marianas Trench?! *bites fist* i cannot even.

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