Reviews For Cupid's Chokehold
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Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 06:28 pm Title: Crowning Achievement

I love how they tease each other xD

Author's Response:

BESTIES :D

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 03:43 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen

Oh my-4:20 huh? LOL I can't wait to see why Bill is such a bitch-gotta be some reason!

Author's Response:

/cough

rn

He looked into gymnastics first, but when they told him boys weren't allowed to do rhythmic routines, he quit.

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 03:32 pm Title: Crowning Achievement

no your not and i love sassy bill. i have a feeling his parents died that's why he has a thing about people leaving him and only looking out for himself.



Author's Response:

Thank you ;_; I needed to hear that.

rn

I love Sassypants too, glad to hear I'm not alone.

rn

LOVE hearing your theories and ideas!

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 02:53 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen

funyuns are the shit....just saying.



Author's Response:

Word.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 02:49 pm Title: Jerkle Gym

Oh lord how i'm loving this story! The banter between them is priceless!

Author's Response:

My heart just skipped a beat out of pure happiness. Thanks, dawg :D

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 01:49 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

Oh, and regarding the folded fitted sheets - it's not too hard, but takes a bit of practice and patience.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YHTyH2nuFAw

Author's Response:

MY ANGEL <3

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 01:46 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

I love this story. The bantering between Tom and Bill has me laughing, out loud, loudly. I especially liked the "shortbus" remark.

Author's Response:

Hahaha, awesome! Always glad to hear it! These guys. <3

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 01:01 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

Kitty has claws! Defense mechanism maybe? Bill and Tom living together will be interesting!

Author's Response:

Defense mechanism certainly, and it sure as Hell wiill!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 12:54 pm Title: A Force of Nature

Thank you-I love tough Bill! Really enjoying reading so far and working on catching up!

Author's Response:

Me too! I think there should be more of him, it's an interesting dynamic to play with.

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 10:09 am Title: Crowning Achievement

Dude, If i knew how to do it, i would tell you, but my mom refuses to let me in on her secret! she folds it so it looks like a flat sheet! I shit you not.

Author's Response:

Y SO SCHEISTY SOTHERN'S MUTTI?

Reviewer: kazenoarashi Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 10:06 am Title: Crowning Achievement

Fitted sheets are a laundry folder's nightmare DDD:

Egads, I am enjoying this story so much! Falling in love with these characters already :) Their chemistry is so precious!

Author's Response:

We do not die when love is dead, but rather when I am forced to fold a lumpy sheet.

rn

Egads, is it? Sporting!

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 08:46 am Title: Crowning Achievement

Fitted sheets and I have a love-hate relationship. *nods* Yay for a non snarky sentence from Bill, there's hope yet! Poor Bill, he lives such a busy and hectic life, it's good that Tom is there now to ease his pain. LOL I'm sure Bill would argue the point with me on that. Thank you darling *squishes & feeds you easter eggs*

Author's Response:

There is always hope! And where there isn't hope, bandaids and hydrogen peroxide.

rn

You made this Good Friday a GREAT Friday

rn

 

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 07:09 am Title: Crowning Achievement

Haha! Not at all! I always feel weird folding fitted sheets. Damn the bunches and lack of corners that makes it all uneven.

Tired!Bill is... entertaining XD
I don't suppose there will be trouble down the line when/if Bill finds out it wasn't actually Tom who fixed the water heater.

Author's Response:

My roommate tried to show me once, but he didn't remember either, because is as stupid as a canteloupe.

rn

Tired!Bill is miserable without his first cup of bitchiness in the morning. Or cuddles.

rn

Mmmmmmmmaaayyyyyyybe :D

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/22/11 06:04 am Title: Crowning Achievement

Folding a fitted sheet is an art form. you have to do it just right.

Author's Response:

DUDE, YOU GOTTA HELP ME

rn

SEND ME DETAILED INSTRUCTIONS, POSSIBLY WITH PICTURES

rn

I AM DISAPPOINTING MY FAMILY

Reviewer: tomsteddybillscandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/21/11 08:36 am Title: Kicking and Screaming

wow i love bill being all manly and getting into fist fights like that. it's something that you don't see or rather read everyday. XD i love this fic! and most especially, i love how you write! and the development phase of the relationship between tom and bill is just perfect! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, and thank you! Wow, I feel like I owe you money now. Love that you're enjoying the development!

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/11 11:04 pm Title: Kicking and Screaming

Finally got around to reading this and so worth it. The sarcasm is pure gold, makes me think of me XD I'm looking forward to more soon :D

Author's Response:

I would dearly love to get to know you! :D

rn

What won you 'round? Was it the banner? It was the banner wasn't it.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/20/11 02:47 am Title: Kicking and Screaming

Bill certainly is a strange one, good thing that Tom is slowly unraveling the mystery. I can only imagine the pain a bottle to the face must be, good on Bill for sticking up for the little guy but damn that was brutal. Had to giggle at Tom's wet-wipes and detergent stick. Fastidious fellow that he is. Great chapter honey, *snuggles*

Author's Response:

Just can't keep his knuckles to himself, that one. /shakes head, tsks

rn

Tom knows that the key to true gangsta appeal is a tidy appearance. Word.

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/11 02:51 pm Title: Kicking and Screaming

Can I just say (again) how much I love love Bad-ass!Bill? And he's already pretty much pinned poor Tom's personality. I love the direction in which this is going so far :)

Author's Response:

Yes, you may. /lofty bitch

rn

I'm glad you can even SEE the direction, hahahaha

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/11 07:38 am Title: Kicking and Screaming

+1 Bill is a total bad ass XD A bit confusing in his motives but awesome lol. A bottle of Sprite never seemed so dangerous before lol.

Author's Response:

Think of him next time you drink any Coke products! :D

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/11 05:04 am Title: Kicking and Screaming

That Tom has wet wipes and a detergent pen (Tide-to-go? XD) is fricking hilarious.

Yeah, Bill, because a person who goes around defending people to ensure that they get suspension so that they have more personal time, isn't far-fetched at all..

"You're a suburbanite mama's boy gangster with a legally forgotten rap sheet and a sincere desire to iron drapes and organize spice racks." - Oh my god XD That made me chuckle out loud despite it's super late and my sister's sleeping.

Oh, and: You were armed, and they weren’t. - Kind of interesting to call having a soda bottle as being "armed". Even more interesting that I'd first read it as him having a soda *can* instead of a glass bottle. XD Even more awkward/badass.

Author's Response:

I have them too. It's what keeps me gangsta.

rn

I disrupted your home life, yaaaayyyyyy! :D

rn

Schools are the ultrastoops that way, for real. Don't even get me started. Unless you want to. Then I will. I totally will.

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