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Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 01:57 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

*gets down on knees and shouts at the sky* Nooooooooooooo....

This is horrible DX What a setback.

Author's Response:

/spits Coke, lewls into forever

rn

No but srsly, how awesome is it that I've made you howl to the sky? SO AWESOME.

Reviewer: ms_hopefulcynic Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 01:43 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

I would like to take this moment to declare my undying love for you. Hang on; let me rephrase that. I would like to declare my undying love for your writing style. Your writing is on a level not often seen on a fanfiction website and your witty humor and clever phrasing are quite refreshing. It's rather fantastic, really. I look forward to seeing what you come up with in the future :)

Author's Response:

Oh God, I've waited so long to hear you s-

rn

Oh. Oh my writing. Oh. Right. Okay. No heartbreak. It's all good. /pours myself another Red Bull and vodka, cries myself to sleep

rn

I LOVE EVERYTHING YOU SAID HERE. I am so eager and excited to see you appreciating the different dynamics of this story! CANNOT THANK YOU ENOUGH. <3

rn

I have a few more stories up, but none I update as religiously as this one. The closest in feel is 'Peculiar Stars' - feel free to check it out, I'd love to hear your opinion on it as well!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 01:35 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

ah crap! bill obvs has some previous drunk ppl issues. maybe daddy issues. and tom just rubbed some medeterranian salt crystals into it. damn. i hope tomi can make it up to his queen. i have a feeling that nathan would be turned on by now if he were tom, all that ball-squashing taking place...

by the way, i'm really diggin your banner, i might need to get her/him/it to make one for me too...;)

Author's Response:

Who DOESN'T have Daddy issues, right? .... right?

rn

MEDITERRANEAN, SHIT YOU FANCY

rn

LOL aaawwwwww, his queen <3 Shipping that so hard. ALSO PLS QUIT READING MY DIARY/MY HEART, TY

rn

You can't afford her, honey. /flips hair

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 01:31 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

omg i'm getting new theories...okay his father obviously had a drinking problem and his mother....still thinking about that one. he seems to have a problem with male authoritative figures so alot of his anger is from his father. i can't wait for him to open up.



Author's Response:

I have to say, I LOVE hearing your theories, and seeing how you psychoanalyse the guys! It's super insightful, and more enjoyable than you might think! I'd love to hear more!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 01:04 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Oh shit is right, lol. Seems like Bill has some issues of his own he needs to deal with. Poor Tom, he really does feel bad :(

Author's Response:

He weally, weally does. Bill's such a jerk sometimes, and Tom's a little dumb.

Reviewer: Liss92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:53 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

"End Notes: OOOOOHHHHHHHHHH SHIT"...enough said :)

Author's Response:

Mmmmmhm. /snap snap

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:51 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Bill has a hair trigger, damn. I feel bad for Tom, but Bill did say.

I'm worried about where this is going with Anis. I don't think Tom's walking away so easily.

Author's Response:

He certainly does. I want this to be a case of "they were both wrong" - because 90% of the time, it takes two to tango. Looking at you, Mr. Sensitive.

rn

Hohohohoho, we'll see, we'll see...

Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:15 am Title: Crowning Achievement

It is an incredibly awkward thing to do. Folding a sheet, that is. I typically crumple it into a wad and call it a day. It is just not meant to be folded!

Oh and good chapter. I shall be happily awaiting the next!

Author's Response:

HOW DID YOU KNOW I WAS UPDATING TONIGHT, REVEAL TO ME YOUR SECRETS

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:08 am Title: Crowning Achievement

No next button! I will be here, waiting for an update! This fic is just awesome, thanks for sharing it with us!

Author's Response:

I updated just now, just for you <3

rn

Okay that's a lie but in a way, I did, and... there's another chapter

rn

So there's that

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:02 am Title: Kicking and Screaming

Bill is very intriguing and I really like learning about him a bit more in this chapter. Love the pace of this fic, it's perfect!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I try! No really. I do. Thank you. THANK YOU. /sobs

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:53 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2

I hope Tom is strong enough to not go back to his old habits. He's doing really good so far!

Author's Response:

He's got you in his corner, he could do a lot worse!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:46 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen

Love the scene with Nate, he's a funny guy and it's really cool to read about his interactions with Tom!

This line is brilliant: ``Bill sat at their centre like Christ at the last supper, if Jesus was an arrogant bitch. ``

Author's Response:

I love love love writing Nate! I gotta do it - check out the show I jacked him from, Misfits! AND KNOW NO REGRETS

rn

Thanks, I thought that one was a beaut myself! :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:39 pm Title: Jerkle Gym

I'm officially addicted to this fic! So so good, I just can't stop reading even if I'm super tired and it's way past my bet time =P I can't wait to read how their relationship is gonna evolve!

Author's Response:

WELL TOO BAD THERE IS NO BETTY FORD FOR FANFIC, HAHAHAHAHA but no srsly, awesome

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:31 pm Title: Round One: Fight!

This is such a good read! Hilarious and so interesting! I haven't read a lot of fic with this type of Bill and it's really refreshing!

Author's Response:

Refreshing, that's a new one! Usually I get "ugh" or "what the fuq is wrong with you", sometimes "you are an affront to God"

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:26 pm Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns

I'm becoming more and more addicted to this fic with every chapter that I read! It's very well written and entertaining, exactly what I was looking for! =D

Author's Response:

Dude, awesome! Hope they don't develop a 12-step program.

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:20 pm Title: Unimpressed, Terminally

OMg I LOVE Bill in this! He's just awesome! Them being roommate is gonna be interesting for sure!

Author's Response:

Thanks! He's a ton of fun to write, always happy to hear he's equally as fun to read!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:11 pm Title: A Force of Nature

And I really liked reading about Bill punching someone in the face! The characters are so fascinating already, can't wait to learn more about them! Love the last line of this chapter!

Author's Response:

Hahaha, thanks! Whoa, so many reviews, better pull up my britches

rn

/slogs

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:06 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

Someone recommended this fic to me and I'm glad she did cause this seems really good! Very interesting first chapter, I can't wait to see where you're gonna take this!

Author's Response:

Was it Lady GaGa? It was Lady GaGa wasn't it.

rn

She's such a stan, honestly, it's embarassing

Reviewer: thisfakename Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 02:21 am Title: Crowning Achievement

Your dialogue makes me very happy, oh yes it does.

Author's Response:

WHO THE FUQ ARE YOU, SOMEONE FAKE, WITH NAMES NO DOUBT

Reviewer: moniixmoore Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 12:47 am Title: Crowning Achievement

no u are not fitted sheets are hard to fold....

love your story :D

Author's Response:

Oh well why thank you kindly! /tips hat

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