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Reviewer: tomsteddybillscandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 10:58 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

oh my.... *sigh* bill is such a mystery to me. 



Author's Response:

I think Bill is a mystery to everyone. Especially Bill.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 10:42 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Bill's got issues with something. Dang. Tom's just caught in the crossfire. Tom's not a drunk, and he's changed his gang ways. Ohhhh shit!!! That was my reaction too.

Author's Response:

Bill's got issues with EVERYTHING. He's got VOLUMES.

rn

Tom's a cool guy wrapped up in a dude with serious shit to work through. TBH IDK why he sticks around. He's a saint in oversized clotheses.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 10:12 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

wow...I think Tom just opened up a lot of past anger and hurt in Bill and god help Tom...and Bill!

Author's Response:

It's a good thing! .... it just doesn't feel like it right now.

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 06:02 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

I suspect Bill have some deep feelings about drinking.

Author's Response:

WHO TOLD YOU

Reviewer: Giulietta192 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 05:40 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

I have the feeling of CHRIST BILL IS NOT A BIG DEAL ahhaa but for him it is of course. Old stuff coming up?

Author's Response:

Oh hi :D

rn

Dude, it's TOTALLY not a big deal - to anyone that isn't Bill. He's more sensitive than he lets on, especially when he lies around in the sun all day without sunscreen. SO TENDER. Also, peely.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 02:16 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Lmfao, this part's confusing, though: He went to his room, which was still at least 50% boxes, and changed his clothes, woke up(?), and at a loss finally sat on the edge of his bed.

Author's Response:

No shut up you don't know anything your English is terrible

rn

.... I didn't mean it I love you, am lost without you, sob sob

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 01:57 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

*gets down on knees and shouts at the sky* Nooooooooooooo....

This is horrible DX What a setback.

Author's Response:

/spits Coke, lewls into forever

rn

No but srsly, how awesome is it that I've made you howl to the sky? SO AWESOME.

Reviewer: ms_hopefulcynic Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 01:43 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

I would like to take this moment to declare my undying love for you. Hang on; let me rephrase that. I would like to declare my undying love for your writing style. Your writing is on a level not often seen on a fanfiction website and your witty humor and clever phrasing are quite refreshing. It's rather fantastic, really. I look forward to seeing what you come up with in the future :)

Author's Response:

Oh God, I've waited so long to hear you s-

rn

Oh. Oh my writing. Oh. Right. Okay. No heartbreak. It's all good. /pours myself another Red Bull and vodka, cries myself to sleep

rn

I LOVE EVERYTHING YOU SAID HERE. I am so eager and excited to see you appreciating the different dynamics of this story! CANNOT THANK YOU ENOUGH. <3

rn

I have a few more stories up, but none I update as religiously as this one. The closest in feel is 'Peculiar Stars' - feel free to check it out, I'd love to hear your opinion on it as well!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 01:35 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

ah crap! bill obvs has some previous drunk ppl issues. maybe daddy issues. and tom just rubbed some medeterranian salt crystals into it. damn. i hope tomi can make it up to his queen. i have a feeling that nathan would be turned on by now if he were tom, all that ball-squashing taking place...

by the way, i'm really diggin your banner, i might need to get her/him/it to make one for me too...;)

Author's Response:

Who DOESN'T have Daddy issues, right? .... right?

rn

MEDITERRANEAN, SHIT YOU FANCY

rn

LOL aaawwwwww, his queen <3 Shipping that so hard. ALSO PLS QUIT READING MY DIARY/MY HEART, TY

rn

You can't afford her, honey. /flips hair

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 01:31 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

omg i'm getting new theories...okay his father obviously had a drinking problem and his mother....still thinking about that one. he seems to have a problem with male authoritative figures so alot of his anger is from his father. i can't wait for him to open up.



Author's Response:

I have to say, I LOVE hearing your theories, and seeing how you psychoanalyse the guys! It's super insightful, and more enjoyable than you might think! I'd love to hear more!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 01:04 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Oh shit is right, lol. Seems like Bill has some issues of his own he needs to deal with. Poor Tom, he really does feel bad :(

Author's Response:

He weally, weally does. Bill's such a jerk sometimes, and Tom's a little dumb.

Reviewer: Liss92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:53 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

"End Notes: OOOOOHHHHHHHHHH SHIT"...enough said :)

Author's Response:

Mmmmmhm. /snap snap

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:51 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Bill has a hair trigger, damn. I feel bad for Tom, but Bill did say.

I'm worried about where this is going with Anis. I don't think Tom's walking away so easily.

Author's Response:

He certainly does. I want this to be a case of "they were both wrong" - because 90% of the time, it takes two to tango. Looking at you, Mr. Sensitive.

rn

Hohohohoho, we'll see, we'll see...

Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:15 am Title: Crowning Achievement

It is an incredibly awkward thing to do. Folding a sheet, that is. I typically crumple it into a wad and call it a day. It is just not meant to be folded!

Oh and good chapter. I shall be happily awaiting the next!

Author's Response:

HOW DID YOU KNOW I WAS UPDATING TONIGHT, REVEAL TO ME YOUR SECRETS

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:08 am Title: Crowning Achievement

No next button! I will be here, waiting for an update! This fic is just awesome, thanks for sharing it with us!

Author's Response:

I updated just now, just for you <3

rn

Okay that's a lie but in a way, I did, and... there's another chapter

rn

So there's that

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 12:02 am Title: Kicking and Screaming

Bill is very intriguing and I really like learning about him a bit more in this chapter. Love the pace of this fic, it's perfect!

Author's Response:

Thank you, I try! No really. I do. Thank you. THANK YOU. /sobs

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:53 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2

I hope Tom is strong enough to not go back to his old habits. He's doing really good so far!

Author's Response:

He's got you in his corner, he could do a lot worse!

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:46 pm Title: In Absence of the Queen

Love the scene with Nate, he's a funny guy and it's really cool to read about his interactions with Tom!

This line is brilliant: ``Bill sat at their centre like Christ at the last supper, if Jesus was an arrogant bitch. ``

Author's Response:

I love love love writing Nate! I gotta do it - check out the show I jacked him from, Misfits! AND KNOW NO REGRETS

rn

Thanks, I thought that one was a beaut myself! :D

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:39 pm Title: Jerkle Gym

I'm officially addicted to this fic! So so good, I just can't stop reading even if I'm super tired and it's way past my bet time =P I can't wait to read how their relationship is gonna evolve!

Author's Response:

WELL TOO BAD THERE IS NO BETTY FORD FOR FANFIC, HAHAHAHAHA but no srsly, awesome

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/26/11 11:31 pm Title: Round One: Fight!

This is such a good read! Hilarious and so interesting! I haven't read a lot of fic with this type of Bill and it's really refreshing!

Author's Response:

Refreshing, that's a new one! Usually I get "ugh" or "what the fuq is wrong with you", sometimes "you are an affront to God"

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