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Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/11 01:38 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

Oh ill check it out o:

Author's Response:

It's getting rave reviews

rn

Did you know she was a fighter pilot in WW2? Wow.

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/11 11:55 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

haha addicting story! :3

Author's Response:

Your Mom is an addicting story

rn

No really I read her memoirs, exciting stuff tbh

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/11 12:12 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Aww, fuck ;___;

Bill has definitely dealt with his fair share of drunks(perhaps his father, or an ex?)and Tom just so happened to push a wrong button :(

I'd take a guess as to what I think is going to happen, but it's useless. You're a sneaky, sneaky snake...

and I love you for it :))

Author's Response:

Or an ex! No one's guessed that one yet!

rn

Tom is a pro at pushing buttons, and Bill makes it easy by being COVERED IN BUTTONS, ALL OVER, EVERYWHERE

rn

That's how I roll. SLYTHERIN REPRESENT

Reviewer: -SB- Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/11 02:42 pm Title: Whoopsiedoodles

OOOOOOHH SHIT yeah. Mann, der Bill ist so... so... Prrh, poor Tom but heŽll get Bill to trust him someday : )
Keep on going on the same track, this is so great.

Author's Response:

LOL "PPRRRHHH" brb lewling into the dark ages

rn

Bill ist ein RIESIGER schlampe, komplett unbußfertigen, f'real

rn

So so glad you're enjoying this! THANK YOU ALWAYS AND FOREVER FOR REVIEWING D: <3

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/11 02:20 pm Title: Whoopsiedoodles

omg! >.< cant wait for more updates! :D

Author's Response:

Welcome little Shakus :D I CAN'T WAIT EITHER TBH

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/28/11 03:22 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Whoa that was harsh!! Clearly Bill has some deep seated emotional and mental issues with a drunk. His father perhaps? Though I have to say that what Tom said while harsh was meant in the kindest of ways. Pity that they can't find some common ground to start from. I feel really sad for Bill, clearly someone has hurt him, scarred him deeply for him to be so scathing not just of Tom but the world in general. Great update hon, I can't wait to see what happens. *tackleglomps you*

Author's Response:

Mmmmmmaybe. He has all kinds of issues, I'm sure some Daddy ones are in there somewhere.

rn

Maybe they well... and MAYBE SOON.

rn

I love you so MUCH for all your updates and love and puddin' cups, I just, I can't even

Reviewer: mohanrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 11:36 pm Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Clearly Bill is projecting some things onto Tom so ohhhhhh snap. Will our young master Tom be able to break through the carefully constructed layers of Bill? I will stay tuned to find out!

Oh and LOL at the title of the chapter.

K bye.

Author's Response:

Glad to hear it! SO WILL I.

rn

Hahaha, you're the only one that caught that, apparently.

rn

K c u l8er

Reviewer: s_n_a_r_k Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 08:47 pm Title: Whoopsiedoodles

bill's got a drunk or two in his family. He's dealt with it far too many times.

Author's Response:

You picked up on that pretty quick; hope the same can't be said for you.

Reviewer: Quinny Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 08:08 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

Well, Tom has been saying that he wants to understand why Bill is the way he is. I'd say he got a bit of what he was wishing for...

Author's Response:

Haha, amen to that. It certainly needed saying.

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 07:42 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

Well snap crackle my pop! I think we're ready

Author's Response:

/rips off shirt

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 07:42 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

You are no modest hand-basket! You wouldn't be as awesome if you were

Author's Response:

Okay okay... picnic basket.

Reviewer: gabby2102010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 06:28 pm Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Ooooooooh

Author's Response:

MMMMMMMMMMMMHM.

Reviewer: musique_style Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 02:39 pm Title: Whoopsiedoodles

OH HOLY SHIT!! >_> Was not expecting that! But, let me work in order.

I'm suspicious of Bushido... he's just way too easy. I get the feeling he's going to get Tom into some serious shit; he's trying to set him up, or is going to accidentally get him into trouble, I'm just sure of it! (But am I correct, is the question haha)

And damn, Bill was not playing around! Granted, he never really does, but still! That was harsh. I'm wondering what happened that caused him to loathe alcohol and drunks so much.

But, I'm proud of Tom for finally speaking his mind. It may have hurt Bill, but I feel like he needed to hear it; Tom had been doing nothing but try and be nice to Bill, and in return, Bill was really cold towards him. I feel like he needed to hear Tom's thoughts on that matter.

FJDSKALJDKLAFJ YOU KILL ME, LEICHENWASSER! I'm going to have to bribe you for updates, lol! *___*

Author's Response:

.... I really need a nickname. GET ON THAT WOULD YOU.

rn

Good, do be suspicious of him. If you're not, I'M DOING SOMETHING VERY VERY WRONG. Are your suspicions correct... maybe :D

rn

One spring in Cancun is my guess.

rn

Dude, THANK YOU. Thank you for saying this. Tom is totally not the only one in the wrong; Bill contributes his fair share of shit to deal with, tbh.

Reviewer: Jumbie22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 10:58 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Oh no! I don't want Tom to move out =( Bill is more and more intriguing, I wonder what exactly happened in his past to make him hate drunk people so much... poor Bill. Thanks for this update, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response:

WELL TOO BAD

rn

J/K not nearly finished with these bitches. You'll get your answers soon enough my sweet!

rn

DON'T GET STUCK IN ANY RAFTERS UNTIL THEN

Reviewer: tomsteddybillscandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 10:58 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

oh my.... *sigh* bill is such a mystery to me. 



Author's Response:

I think Bill is a mystery to everyone. Especially Bill.

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 10:42 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Bill's got issues with something. Dang. Tom's just caught in the crossfire. Tom's not a drunk, and he's changed his gang ways. Ohhhh shit!!! That was my reaction too.

Author's Response:

Bill's got issues with EVERYTHING. He's got VOLUMES.

rn

Tom's a cool guy wrapped up in a dude with serious shit to work through. TBH IDK why he sticks around. He's a saint in oversized clotheses.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 10:12 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

wow...I think Tom just opened up a lot of past anger and hurt in Bill and god help Tom...and Bill!

Author's Response:

It's a good thing! .... it just doesn't feel like it right now.

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 06:02 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

I suspect Bill have some deep feelings about drinking.

Author's Response:

WHO TOLD YOU

Reviewer: Giulietta192 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 05:40 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

I have the feeling of CHRIST BILL IS NOT A BIG DEAL ahhaa but for him it is of course. Old stuff coming up?

Author's Response:

Oh hi :D

rn

Dude, it's TOTALLY not a big deal - to anyone that isn't Bill. He's more sensitive than he lets on, especially when he lies around in the sun all day without sunscreen. SO TENDER. Also, peely.

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/27/11 02:16 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles

Lmfao, this part's confusing, though: He went to his room, which was still at least 50% boxes, and changed his clothes, woke up(?), and at a loss finally sat on the edge of his bed.

Author's Response:

No shut up you don't know anything your English is terrible

rn

.... I didn't mean it I love you, am lost without you, sob sob

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