Date: 05/02/11 05:07 am Title: In Absence of the Queen
Unfortunatly the need to sleep has finally taken over, so I'll have to wait to catch up on the rest of this story. I am loving everything about this so far! XD
Author's Response:
I'm replying to all of your reviews backwards, so enjoy that
rnFun Fact: I read The Stepbrother this morning, gonna go harangue you over there soon as I get a mo'
rnSLEEP WHEN YOU'RE DEAD j/k that's not sleeping that's death which is different but interesting fact, death and sleep are twin brothers, tru story if you're an ancient Greek
Date: 05/02/11 04:57 am Title: Jerkle Gym
Another great chapter :D
Author's Response:
Thanks, I made it myself in shop class
rn... that was a lie and I'm sorry.
Date: 05/02/11 04:40 am Title: Round One: Fight!
I am loving these two more and more. Great chapter! XD
Author's Response:
They love you two! Biblically, if I can believe what's written on the bathroom stalls. Nasty.
Date: 05/02/11 04:32 am Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
Interesting situation, I can't wait to see what happens when Bill gets there XD
Author's Response:
SHIT GETS REAL
rnThat's generally what happens when Bill shows up.
Date: 05/02/11 03:42 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
btw i just peed in your boxers
Author's Response:
Those are the boxers I always leave out for you, never wear them, continue to wear girl's underthings, be an affront to God
Date: 05/02/11 03:42 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
btw she doesnt have braces no more, you racist
Author's Response:
I liked them puta, tell it to my groin okay
Date: 05/02/11 03:41 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
OH MY GOD /falls flat on face, pees self
Author's Response:
Why do I ever tell people about you, Jesus
Date: 05/02/11 02:31 am Title: Unimpressed, Terminally
lol, I am loving this Bill more and more. Great chapter! I am very excited to see what happens next XD
Author's Response:
At least someone is, toxic bitch, Jesus
rnChill the fuq out, man
Date: 05/02/11 02:20 am Title: A Force of Nature
I'm liking the way your Bill is shaping up. Great chapter :D
Author's Response:
Thanks, he's been working out.
Date: 05/02/11 02:16 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Interesting start, you've definitely reeled me in. I can't wait to see what happens next XD
Author's Response:
/gently detaches the hook, scales you, fries you in butter
rnIt's how I treat all the ladies I reel in. With class. And butter.
Date: 05/02/11 12:15 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
LOL-loved the mention on *clotheses* in your answer to Melluransas review of chapter 11! I loved this chapter to bits--can't wait to see where this goes and exactly what it takes to crack Bills walls!
Author's Response:
Who doesn't love clotheses, they are superiour to diamonds, better than forever, etc.
rnA sledgehammer and possibly awkward fumbling in the back of Tom's Escalade - and now I'm not paying attention anymore
Date: 05/01/11 07:43 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
lol the royal family is sorta weird looking XD
Author's Response:
HEY D:<
rn... it's totally true.
Date: 05/01/11 06:21 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
this is such a good story. i love the humor you add and the way Bill and Tom interact. and Lola is amazing.
Author's Response:
Why thank you! Always ecstatic to hear others enjoy my writing as much as I enjoy writing it! Hope you stick around for a long time to come!
Date: 05/01/11 05:50 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
Haha! Love it xDD
Author's Response:
THE L WORD /gasp
Date: 05/01/11 05:00 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
very very interesting chapter. Very insightful. Tom's little speech was great and I loved every moment with Lola. Thanks for the speedy updates, keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed that very tender interlude, they are so delicate with one another I can't even
rnI aim to please!
Date: 05/01/11 04:16 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
It was the "natural brows" that made it obvious. ;)
That was a hell of a mature speech for just Tom who is only 18. Very mature. I thought it was awesome and now the whole feeling between them seems new and tentative. Very nice. :)
Author's Response:
Fur breezy. Love that you're familiar enough to catch that. /caresses her caterpiebrows
rnI feel as shy as if I was the one who made it. <3 Thank you so much, glad to know you're still enjoying it as it goes along!
Date: 05/01/11 03:39 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
aaaaaw tom is officially worth 3 grilled cheeses to bill. i think that is saying a lot, at this point...:3 yay. their making up was cute, tom said all the right things and bill was sweetly awkwarded out by it, but it worked :) hmm, don't wanna rush you cuz i'm totally liking how this is taking its time, but i can't wait to see how cupid takes his chokehold...not that it should be soon, just that i'll be happy to see when it does, after proper buildup....:) tom's thoughts are so flattering, 'unshaven tranny in stretchpants'...oh lordy. and lola is perfect, she made everything better at the right time
Author's Response:
Hahaha, dammit, DON'T MAKE IT CUTE
rnIt'll start shifting that way soon, actually, I think... SPOILERS LEWL
rnTom is such a romantic, honestly
rnLola was so much fun to write, haha, more on her coming up akshully
Date: 05/01/11 03:38 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
I sincerely hope the flavor of your Capri Sun is a good one, like Pacific Cooler. If it's Wild Cherry or that gross Strawberry one...so help me..
I greatly enjoyed this chapter! And that was quite sneaky of you...tryin to make us think there would be lemons..hmmph.
Can't wait for the next chapter!! Mmmk goooodbye!
Author's Response:
I do enjoy Pacific Cooler, but tbh I also enjoy Wild Cherry, sry2say, feel free to stay pressed
rnLe... Lemons? I played Portal 2 over the weekend, and it became my gurlfran, quote is from there
rnI just looked up "lemons" and now that I get it I can tell you that yes, there will be sex in here, sometime
rn.... eventually
rnOKAYILOVEYOUBUHBYE
Date: 05/01/11 01:26 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
Ahh, I love it! I'm so glad that Bill is at least letting Tom stay, and that he actually listened to what Tom had to say. He's opening up to Tom, just not in the way that most people would be expected, in that he's not opening his mouth. But, he's opening his ears, and he's opening his heart a little bit, and that's what really counts, right?
I think the three sandwiches shows that Tom isn't as far down on Bill's bad list as everyone thinks ;)
Author's Response:
Three sandwiches from Bill is practically a marriage proposal. Man is stingy with his grilled cheese.
rnThe heart is what this story is all about, even if it doesn't seem it just now. <3
Date: 05/01/11 01:25 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
I really like this story, added it as favourite. I am so happy when I see new update :-)
Author's Response:
Dude, that is AWESOME! I like every part of that. Thank you from the bottom of my butt, it's a lot bigger than my heart.