Date: 05/09/11 06:30 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
OK. So. First. I love this story. every time i see an update my plams get all sweaty like a virgin on her first date. I wish there was i way I could wrangle (is that a word?) more updates out of you. Seriously. Thats just how much i love this FF.
Best Chapter Chirp: "Yeah, you raise your pinky when you punch people in the face," - almost pissed self laughing.
No, I lied! THIS IS THE BEST CHIRP!!! "Least I know who my Daddy is, your birth certificate has a zipcode listed as the father!"
BFF's and all that:D
Author's Response:
WRANGLE IS A REAL WORD. I use it all the time. Which is... not a convincing argument, come to think of it.
rnWAIT YOU'RE NOT A VIRGIN? I am returning you and keeping the dowry.
rnZomg chirps. That is the official name of those little zingers. CHIRPS. Plus: makes me think of fat fluffy chickadees.
rnBFFS 4 LAIF
Date: 05/09/11 06:09 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
i loved this chapter! :D can we expect more romance soon? :3
Author's Response:
Sure, you can expect it! JUST DON'T COUNT ON ME TO DELIVER.
rnj/k I like boys kissing as much as the next guy, count on it
Date: 05/09/11 04:51 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
I - how you say - 'LOL-ed' after reading your response to my previous review. Also, as per your humble request, I won't ask about your choice of writing environment.
Now, in regards to this particular chapter: Thank you for updating and providing myself - amongst other readers - a delightful distraction from chores and/or work. This chapter was exquisite and I'd just like to point out that I love the image of the snail you used to portray Bill's personality. Genius. This was a good insight into the tense relationship between Bushido and Bill along with the latter's relationship to the mysterious and elegant Lola. I look forward to your next update. Now, here is a smiley face. ------> :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. My dignity appreciates it.
rnAlways happy to help other procrastinate. :D I admit after writing that I wished I was back home where snails grow rampant so I could pick one and Bedazzle it. Yyyyyyeeeaahhhh boooyyyyyyyeeeeee. "Mysterious and elegant" you have portrayed her better than I ever could, thank you.
rnHow did you know I needed a smiley face today? I WILL CHERISH IT ALWAYS.
Date: 05/09/11 04:45 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
Awsh, the ending was adorable ^^
Author's Response:
"awsh", ugh, God, why are you so adorable, reminds me SO MUCH of my broski
Date: 05/08/11 12:11 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
I have to say, I have never enjoyed a fanfic as much as I have this one.It's well written and the development of the characters and the plot line are simply magnificent. I have absolutely fallen in love with Bill's biting sarcasm and Tom's clever remarks. Oh, and Nate is absolutely wonderful-he'd definitely be a friend of mine. Hope to see some new chapters soon.
Author's Response:
You know what you are? AN ENABLER. YOU ARE AN ENABLER.
rnI was all, Man, I'd do anything for a review right about now, because I am a pathetic and shameless addict, and there you are, offering me support and encouragment like a BITCH. GOD, HONESTLY-
rnJ/K I'm going to be busy framing this review. Really, no other fanfic? My disbelief, it must be suspended!
rnWorking on a chapter right now, as we speak - in the bathtub, in the dark. Don't ask.
Date: 05/04/11 05:14 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
Great chapter honey, Tom's talk with his mum was definitely full of good advice. I loved Tom's little speech, and I'm glad that Bill took notice and told him to stay. Lola seems like a gem, it was funny to see Bill bossed about and it's good to know that he has someone that loves him and is obviously his confidant. Can I hope that now they're on a better footing that things actually start becoming friendly between them? Is that too much to expect? I just love this fic, your humour and satire are a breath of fresh air and I can't wait for more as usual. *snuggles you close and feeds you tidbits*
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really love writing comfortable female characters; no drama, no muss, no fuss, just bright, wonderful women who care for somebody. /Mommy issues
rnTom's Mom is so important to his character, and Lola fulfills that supportive role for Bill, in their own quirky way. I really enjoyed writing the interactions between the them, all.
rnAnd yep, next chapter, things will progress in a much more favorable way! Time to break the bottle over the bow of this relationship. /snap snap
rnThank you, as always! You keep me afloat. <3
Date: 05/03/11 04:41 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
my friend says "I loved that, man. great chapter!" and I am still loving that adonis royal family comment. bitchwizard
Author's Response:
/eyes well up
rnYOU LOVE ME, YOU REALLY LOVE ME
rnBitchwizards 4 life, LETS ROLL OUT
Date: 05/03/11 04:54 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
Shit! There's no 'next' button 0_0 What am I suppose to do with my free time now?! ...getting a life is out of the question.
Anywho, I'm happy he let him stay, and it seems that they are almost making progress when it comes to being civil with each other. I'm of course looking forward to seeing where it goes from here.
Author's Response:
I know how that is. I wrote the damned thing after all.
rn... me too lewl
Date: 05/03/11 04:07 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles
So obviously Bill has some history with and alcoholic or something. I'm thinking either one, or both, of his parents.
I'm hoping he cools off in the next chapter and lets Tom stay.
Great chapter! XD
Author's Response:
WHATEVER GAVE YOU THAT IDEA
rnMmmmmmmmmaybe okay yes, look, you were gonna find out anyways, okay
Date: 05/03/11 03:45 am Title: Crowning Achievement
I am in a love/hate relationship with Bill right now. I love his sassy sarcastic comments, but don't like pretty much everything else about his general attitude, lol. I'm looking forward to seeing how things work out.
And yes...you are the only one XD
Author's Response:
GOOD. I AM GLAD. He is a spiteful little bitch, and if he was somehow cute or endearing I would be doing something VERY VERY WRONG.
rnI... I am? I... oh. Oh. /shuffles feet, hangs head
Date: 05/03/11 03:24 am Title: Kicking and Screaming
It gets hard to think of new ways to tell you how much I'm loving this story, so I shall just leave it at that *clicks next button*
Author's Response:
Good enough for me :D
Date: 05/03/11 03:00 am Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2
Finally back to this oh so wonderful story XD
I'm curious about Bill's past, I wonder what happened to make him how he is. And I hope Tom sticks to his new lifestyle and doesn't get wrapped up in any drama with Bushido and such.
I can't wait to read more! And I don't have to wait to read more :D
Author's Response:
Welcome home, honey. /hands you a martini, takes your briefcase
rnWe can only hope that they keep one another in line from here on out
rn
Date: 05/02/11 11:24 pm Title: Crowning Achievement
BITCHWIZARD. extra mayo. yah, just reading this to my friend and had to comment again on the amazing bitchwizardry of this chap
Author's Response:
Extra mayo, shit, LEVEL UP
rnReading it to your friend? HOT DAMN, I AM FLATTERED AS FUQ
rnHonestly why are we not together, we should get jerseys, we make a good team <3
Date: 05/02/11 09:22 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
This Lourdes girl is awesome! Love her already, I'm glad someone is looking out for Bill. Very good update as usual, I can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think everyone's pretty much glad that there's SOMETHING keeping Bill under control. Damn.
Date: 05/02/11 11:34 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
I knew he was really a delicate little flower deep down inside. He just hides it in the dungeon, of a fortress he built, behind a moat, with the drawstring bridge raised.
This is a really fantastic story so far. I am excited to see more soon!
PS...to fold a fitted sheet, you tuck the corners together when you fold it in half the first time. Then its just normal folding from there.
Can't wait to see more soon! keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response:
Have I mentioned lately that I love you? No? I love you.
rnI can finally fold a fitted sheet! Maybe then I will no longer bring shame to my family.
rnWhat an excellent way to phrase that! And totally true. Just... just don't let Bill hear you say that. It's for the best.
Date: 05/02/11 05:07 am Title: In Absence of the Queen
Unfortunatly the need to sleep has finally taken over, so I'll have to wait to catch up on the rest of this story. I am loving everything about this so far! XD
Author's Response:
I'm replying to all of your reviews backwards, so enjoy that
rnFun Fact: I read The Stepbrother this morning, gonna go harangue you over there soon as I get a mo'
rnSLEEP WHEN YOU'RE DEAD j/k that's not sleeping that's death which is different but interesting fact, death and sleep are twin brothers, tru story if you're an ancient Greek
Date: 05/02/11 04:57 am Title: Jerkle Gym
Another great chapter :D
Author's Response:
Thanks, I made it myself in shop class
rn... that was a lie and I'm sorry.
Date: 05/02/11 04:40 am Title: Round One: Fight!
I am loving these two more and more. Great chapter! XD
Author's Response:
They love you two! Biblically, if I can believe what's written on the bathroom stalls. Nasty.
Date: 05/02/11 04:32 am Title: Mommy's Apron to Roomie's Gowns
Interesting situation, I can't wait to see what happens when Bill gets there XD
Author's Response:
SHIT GETS REAL
rnThat's generally what happens when Bill shows up.
Date: 05/02/11 03:42 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
btw i just peed in your boxers
Author's Response:
Those are the boxers I always leave out for you, never wear them, continue to wear girl's underthings, be an affront to God