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Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/11 04:05 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

great chapter! lots of progress for Bill and Tom. Thanks so much!!

Author's Response:

You are very, very welcome! Tons of thanks go for you too! You've been around since the beginning, and I love that you stuck it out this far! <3

Reviewer: zuzana899 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/11 01:37 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

I love this story. I love their conversations, I love how bitchy Bill seems to be, but deep inside he is a sweetheart... I love EVERYTHING here.

Is daily updating possible? I think I am addict :)

Author's Response:

Dude, I wish. I need a sugarparent (I'm not even picky) to support me and buy me bonbons because I in all honesty want nothing more than to curl up in the tub and write all day. (It's cool, 90% of the time the tub's empty. I'm less concerned with electrocution and more concerned with losing data.)

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THERE IS NO BETTY FORD FOR FANFIC ADDICTS, ENJOY YOUR SLOW DESCENT INTO MISERY j/k it's great to hear from you

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/11 07:20 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

not personally on you i mean in real life. i mean what's the point? if you say No Homo you were obviously thinking of something gay, not the other person. and when they use it all the time for EVERYTHING i'm like grrrrrrrr. everything isn't gay, somethings are basic human interactions :/

sorry if you thought i was calling you out or something.



Author's Response:

Gurl, no. Don't apologize. This is a place for you to leave a review, your opinion - even if it's totally harsh and I may not agree with it, I want to hear your opinion, whatever it is! Never apologize for having one. <3

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/11 01:50 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

I'm so looking forward the the slumber party. ._.

Bushido offered an understanding smile. "Your old lady?"

"Something like that," Tom sighed.


With all the witty verbal sparring, that was still my favorite part of the chapter. Except Tom's arm around Bill's shoulder at the end. :)

Author's Response:

Hahaha! They practically have one every night! No but srsly, maybe

rn

... it was sort of mine too, NGL

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 09:57 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

I lovers Bill :D Woot god though his sarcasm is brilliant! It never gets old

Author's Response:

Well good, it's about time someone did, and Tom's taking his sweet time-

rn

I never get tired of hearing that! TELL ME MORE.

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 09:42 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

haha yay :3

Author's Response:

TOTES YAYS

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 08:42 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

i hate when people say No Homo



Author's Response:

I'm sorry. :(

Reviewer: musicmaniac Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 06:25 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

Awe Bill`s getting cute with Tom. I like it.

Author's Response:

IT'S ABOUT TIME.

Reviewer: gabby2102010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 04:41 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

Yah pillow fights:)

Author's Response:

GOOD IDEA.

Reviewer: -SB- Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 03:34 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

Orange is the best color EVER!! There´s something in Bushido. I´m sure he´s just playing nice and trying to make Tom a bad boy again ; P But thankfully there´s Bill and Bill and Tom´s last talking in the passage was very nice. Their relationship is developing :)

Author's Response:

I love bright colors! If I could, I'd be a total eyesore, rainbow colors all the time! I think Bill said once that he liked orange, so... :D

rn

Bushido's naughty! But Tom's a saint. One has to cancel out the other :D

rn

Slow and steady gets laid! :D

Reviewer: nathalicious Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 03:33 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

This story is so AMAZING! I can't even D:
I weally weally LOOOOVE IT!

Author's Response:

Is your handle related to Nathan? NO WONDER YOU LIKE IT SO MUCH YOU LITTLE-

rn

No but seriously, ridonkulously happy to hear it. HOLD ME BARRY

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 02:36 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

Excited for more!! xDDD

Author's Response:

ME TOO :D

Reviewer: tomsteddybillscandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 01:16 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

oh, bromance :"> LOL! can i just give you and this fic a virtual hug and kiss on the cheeks or... :D i wonder if tom WILL cut his dreads and go for cornrows instead. hmm... me gusta...



Author's Response:

There is little I love more than bromance. (eyeliner and bacon take precedence)

rn

Hell gurl, you could climb in the virtual backseat with us, don't be shy.

rn

Oh hell yes, cahnrows are in the future. Mmmmm.

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 12:58 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

Aww, they were actually civil to each other, for pretty much a whole chapter! XD Great chapter, as per usual, I am looking forward to seeing what happens next :D

Author's Response:

Progress is slow in coming, but always inevitable. :D

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 12:54 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

"Honey, please, if I got chummy with everyone I worked with I'd have as many special friends as your Mama does." xD I'm gonna make sweet sweet love to that line.

Ahhh, actually, I think I'm gonna fuck the shit out of this whole chapter, if it's all the same to you. Ugh, loved it. So much snark :3 I swear I almost get off to the banter alone. I wish I'd gotten a letter, you know, and been able to attend Hogwarts school of dickcraft and bitchwizardry. but alas, I gladly resign to groveling at your feet.

Author's Response:

I would be offended if you DIDN'T deflower this chapter, TBH

rn

I laughed so hard I lost my virginity at that phrase, so as I was crying in the shower I related it to my roommate, and if he had been a virgin he would've been in the shower with me

rn

LOVE YOU SFM, LET'S RUN THIS BITCH

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 12:52 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

Yay! More snarky Bill in action!

And yeah, Tom should make him food.

And: "Like I said, more observant thank you think." - Hehe, thank you think :3

Author's Response:

No shut up what are you and English-speaker, jeez

rn

... thank you I'd be lost without you D: <3

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 11:27 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

Oh please, Tom would choose Bill any day if he were to get into a fight for Tom's attention with a girl with nice curves and a talent for wearing very little clothing. And not because Tom would want to spare the girlo the vicious barbs and right hook from Bill.

It was pretty cute picturing Bill going about daily activities with socks on his hands...

So...Lola and Anis? Really? Crazy. Bushido did not seem happy that Tom knew Lola. At all. Like almost unreasonably POed. Wonder what is up with that?

I am kind of curious why Tom didn't clarify roommate when he was talking to Bushi about getting a bunch of crap for going home drunk. I mean he wouldn't had to say who he lived with or anything...

Fantastisch chapter. I can't wait to see more soon! I really loved how Bill came to rescue him, and wants to poke Tom's bear traps....Keep up that awesome work!

Author's Response:

Pfffttt, he would choose Bill because he doesn't want those barbs or right hook aimed at HIMSELF. Also, Bill sulks. He's suck a puss sometimes, jeez

rn

I know right? Immensely soothing.

rn

True story. Well, not... not really. In my story, yes. IRL, no. Though their smiles are eerily similar... You'll find out all things in time. OR WILL YOU no you will

rn

Fantastisch <3 Thank you so much for all your support! You. Are. AMAZING.

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 11:21 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

Gah this had me giggling like a loon. I loved Tom saying he had nightmares and Bill telling him he wasn't worth the thread. Gangbanger's Quarterly and Bill pretending to spit on Tom's waffle. I got a huge giggle out of the wanksock discussion, very funny.

Bill 'saving' Tom from 'Beartrap Bu' was rather sweet, in Bill's special way of making things painfully awkward.

I so totally want to go and make them necklaces now *wink* Awesome chapter, loved it to bits and I'm so excited to see them on a more friendly footing.

Slumber party ahoy!! *tackle glomps you and shoves you in my sleeping bag*

Author's Response:

LIKE A LOON isn't that a bird though, omg I never realized this but birds don't laugh, that's fucked up

rn

BEARTRAP BU brb finding this insanely adorbs

rn

"Bill's special way of making things painfully awkward" omg genau

rn

MAKE THESE NECKLACES. PLEASE. OH MY GOD. I WOULD HAVE TO QUIT MY LIFE AND BECOME YOUR DISCIPLE IF YOU DID THIS. PLEASE. YOU KNOW YOU WANT SEXUALLY CONFUSED DISCIPLES.

rn

Oh my God a slumber party with them would be amazing though, full of violence and coarse language and then it would get gay, AWESOME

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 10:49 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

Bill's a good guy underneath that front! It's great to see them . . . get along? Get along better than before, at least! I love the back and forth dynamics you write between Tom and Bill.

I'm looking forward to you revealing all the history and things going on, cuz there's more to the story -- I know.

Author's Response:

Bill likes to play dress-up - but instead of dressing himself all pretty (which he does anyways) he makes believe that he's a miserable prick. There are less tea parties involved.

rn

I'm glad your enjoying it as much as I love writing it! And of course, hearing from you. <3

rn

There is so, so much more. Hope I don't disappoint!

Reviewer: kissandtell Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/11 09:48 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

this chapter just made my day and your comments made me laugh. Nothing better to do at 7:30 in the morning.

Author's Response:

I wouldn't have you anywhere else but here, at 7:30. <3

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