Date: 05/09/11 12:52 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
Yay! More snarky Bill in action!
And yeah, Tom should make him food.
And: "Like I said, more observant thank you think." - Hehe, thank you think :3
Author's Response:
No shut up what are you and English-speaker, jeez
rn... thank you I'd be lost without you D: <3
Date: 05/09/11 11:27 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
Oh please, Tom would choose Bill any day if he were to get into a fight for Tom's attention with a girl with nice curves and a talent for wearing very little clothing. And not because Tom would want to spare the girlo the vicious barbs and right hook from Bill.
It was pretty cute picturing Bill going about daily activities with socks on his hands...
So...Lola and Anis? Really? Crazy. Bushido did not seem happy that Tom knew Lola. At all. Like almost unreasonably POed. Wonder what is up with that?
I am kind of curious why Tom didn't clarify roommate when he was talking to Bushi about getting a bunch of crap for going home drunk. I mean he wouldn't had to say who he lived with or anything...
Fantastisch chapter. I can't wait to see more soon! I really loved how Bill came to rescue him, and wants to poke Tom's bear traps....Keep up that awesome work!
Author's Response:
Pfffttt, he would choose Bill because he doesn't want those barbs or right hook aimed at HIMSELF. Also, Bill sulks. He's suck a puss sometimes, jeez
rnI know right? Immensely soothing.
rnTrue story. Well, not... not really. In my story, yes. IRL, no. Though their smiles are eerily similar... You'll find out all things in time. OR WILL YOU no you will
rnFantastisch <3 Thank you so much for all your support! You. Are. AMAZING.
Date: 05/09/11 11:21 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
Gah this had me giggling like a loon. I loved Tom saying he had nightmares and Bill telling him he wasn't worth the thread. Gangbanger's Quarterly and Bill pretending to spit on Tom's waffle. I got a huge giggle out of the wanksock discussion, very funny.
Bill 'saving' Tom from 'Beartrap Bu' was rather sweet, in Bill's special way of making things painfully awkward.
I so totally want to go and make them necklaces now *wink* Awesome chapter, loved it to bits and I'm so excited to see them on a more friendly footing.
Slumber party ahoy!! *tackle glomps you and shoves you in my sleeping bag*
Author's Response:
LIKE A LOON isn't that a bird though, omg I never realized this but birds don't laugh, that's fucked up
rnBEARTRAP BU brb finding this insanely adorbs
rn"Bill's special way of making things painfully awkward" omg genau
rnMAKE THESE NECKLACES. PLEASE. OH MY GOD. I WOULD HAVE TO QUIT MY LIFE AND BECOME YOUR DISCIPLE IF YOU DID THIS. PLEASE. YOU KNOW YOU WANT SEXUALLY CONFUSED DISCIPLES.
rnOh my God a slumber party with them would be amazing though, full of violence and coarse language and then it would get gay, AWESOME
Date: 05/09/11 10:49 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
Bill's a good guy underneath that front! It's great to see them . . . get along? Get along better than before, at least! I love the back and forth dynamics you write between Tom and Bill.
I'm looking forward to you revealing all the history and things going on, cuz there's more to the story -- I know.
Author's Response:
Bill likes to play dress-up - but instead of dressing himself all pretty (which he does anyways) he makes believe that he's a miserable prick. There are less tea parties involved.
rnI'm glad your enjoying it as much as I love writing it! And of course, hearing from you. <3
rnThere is so, so much more. Hope I don't disappoint!
Date: 05/09/11 09:48 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
this chapter just made my day and your comments made me laugh. Nothing better to do at 7:30 in the morning.
Author's Response:
I wouldn't have you anywhere else but here, at 7:30. <3
Date: 05/09/11 06:30 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
OK. So. First. I love this story. every time i see an update my plams get all sweaty like a virgin on her first date. I wish there was i way I could wrangle (is that a word?) more updates out of you. Seriously. Thats just how much i love this FF.
Best Chapter Chirp: "Yeah, you raise your pinky when you punch people in the face," - almost pissed self laughing.
No, I lied! THIS IS THE BEST CHIRP!!! "Least I know who my Daddy is, your birth certificate has a zipcode listed as the father!"
BFF's and all that:D
Author's Response:
WRANGLE IS A REAL WORD. I use it all the time. Which is... not a convincing argument, come to think of it.
rnWAIT YOU'RE NOT A VIRGIN? I am returning you and keeping the dowry.
rnZomg chirps. That is the official name of those little zingers. CHIRPS. Plus: makes me think of fat fluffy chickadees.
rnBFFS 4 LAIF
Date: 05/09/11 06:09 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
i loved this chapter! :D can we expect more romance soon? :3
Author's Response:
Sure, you can expect it! JUST DON'T COUNT ON ME TO DELIVER.
rnj/k I like boys kissing as much as the next guy, count on it
Date: 05/09/11 04:51 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
I - how you say - 'LOL-ed' after reading your response to my previous review. Also, as per your humble request, I won't ask about your choice of writing environment.
Now, in regards to this particular chapter: Thank you for updating and providing myself - amongst other readers - a delightful distraction from chores and/or work. This chapter was exquisite and I'd just like to point out that I love the image of the snail you used to portray Bill's personality. Genius. This was a good insight into the tense relationship between Bushido and Bill along with the latter's relationship to the mysterious and elegant Lola. I look forward to your next update. Now, here is a smiley face. ------> :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. My dignity appreciates it.
rnAlways happy to help other procrastinate. :D I admit after writing that I wished I was back home where snails grow rampant so I could pick one and Bedazzle it. Yyyyyyeeeaahhhh boooyyyyyyyeeeeee. "Mysterious and elegant" you have portrayed her better than I ever could, thank you.
rnHow did you know I needed a smiley face today? I WILL CHERISH IT ALWAYS.
Date: 05/09/11 04:45 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
Awsh, the ending was adorable ^^
Author's Response:
"awsh", ugh, God, why are you so adorable, reminds me SO MUCH of my broski
Date: 05/08/11 12:11 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
I have to say, I have never enjoyed a fanfic as much as I have this one.It's well written and the development of the characters and the plot line are simply magnificent. I have absolutely fallen in love with Bill's biting sarcasm and Tom's clever remarks. Oh, and Nate is absolutely wonderful-he'd definitely be a friend of mine. Hope to see some new chapters soon.
Author's Response:
You know what you are? AN ENABLER. YOU ARE AN ENABLER.
rnI was all, Man, I'd do anything for a review right about now, because I am a pathetic and shameless addict, and there you are, offering me support and encouragment like a BITCH. GOD, HONESTLY-
rnJ/K I'm going to be busy framing this review. Really, no other fanfic? My disbelief, it must be suspended!
rnWorking on a chapter right now, as we speak - in the bathtub, in the dark. Don't ask.
Date: 05/04/11 05:14 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
Great chapter honey, Tom's talk with his mum was definitely full of good advice. I loved Tom's little speech, and I'm glad that Bill took notice and told him to stay. Lola seems like a gem, it was funny to see Bill bossed about and it's good to know that he has someone that loves him and is obviously his confidant. Can I hope that now they're on a better footing that things actually start becoming friendly between them? Is that too much to expect? I just love this fic, your humour and satire are a breath of fresh air and I can't wait for more as usual. *snuggles you close and feeds you tidbits*
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really love writing comfortable female characters; no drama, no muss, no fuss, just bright, wonderful women who care for somebody. /Mommy issues
rnTom's Mom is so important to his character, and Lola fulfills that supportive role for Bill, in their own quirky way. I really enjoyed writing the interactions between the them, all.
rnAnd yep, next chapter, things will progress in a much more favorable way! Time to break the bottle over the bow of this relationship. /snap snap
rnThank you, as always! You keep me afloat. <3
Date: 05/03/11 04:41 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
my friend says "I loved that, man. great chapter!" and I am still loving that adonis royal family comment. bitchwizard
Author's Response:
/eyes well up
rnYOU LOVE ME, YOU REALLY LOVE ME
rnBitchwizards 4 life, LETS ROLL OUT
Date: 05/03/11 04:54 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
Shit! There's no 'next' button 0_0 What am I suppose to do with my free time now?! ...getting a life is out of the question.
Anywho, I'm happy he let him stay, and it seems that they are almost making progress when it comes to being civil with each other. I'm of course looking forward to seeing where it goes from here.
Author's Response:
I know how that is. I wrote the damned thing after all.
rn... me too lewl
Date: 05/03/11 04:07 am Title: Whoopsiedoodles
So obviously Bill has some history with and alcoholic or something. I'm thinking either one, or both, of his parents.
I'm hoping he cools off in the next chapter and lets Tom stay.
Great chapter! XD
Author's Response:
WHATEVER GAVE YOU THAT IDEA
rnMmmmmmmmmaybe okay yes, look, you were gonna find out anyways, okay
Date: 05/03/11 03:45 am Title: Crowning Achievement
I am in a love/hate relationship with Bill right now. I love his sassy sarcastic comments, but don't like pretty much everything else about his general attitude, lol. I'm looking forward to seeing how things work out.
And yes...you are the only one XD
Author's Response:
GOOD. I AM GLAD. He is a spiteful little bitch, and if he was somehow cute or endearing I would be doing something VERY VERY WRONG.
rnI... I am? I... oh. Oh. /shuffles feet, hangs head
Date: 05/03/11 03:24 am Title: Kicking and Screaming
It gets hard to think of new ways to tell you how much I'm loving this story, so I shall just leave it at that *clicks next button*
Author's Response:
Good enough for me :D
Date: 05/03/11 03:00 am Title: In Absence of the Queen Part 2
Finally back to this oh so wonderful story XD
I'm curious about Bill's past, I wonder what happened to make him how he is. And I hope Tom sticks to his new lifestyle and doesn't get wrapped up in any drama with Bushido and such.
I can't wait to read more! And I don't have to wait to read more :D
Author's Response:
Welcome home, honey. /hands you a martini, takes your briefcase
rnWe can only hope that they keep one another in line from here on out
rn
Date: 05/02/11 11:24 pm Title: Crowning Achievement
BITCHWIZARD. extra mayo. yah, just reading this to my friend and had to comment again on the amazing bitchwizardry of this chap
Author's Response:
Extra mayo, shit, LEVEL UP
rnReading it to your friend? HOT DAMN, I AM FLATTERED AS FUQ
rnHonestly why are we not together, we should get jerseys, we make a good team <3
Date: 05/02/11 09:22 pm Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
This Lourdes girl is awesome! Love her already, I'm glad someone is looking out for Bill. Very good update as usual, I can't wait to read more =)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think everyone's pretty much glad that there's SOMETHING keeping Bill under control. Damn.
Date: 05/02/11 11:34 am Title: Keeping it in the Fambly
I knew he was really a delicate little flower deep down inside. He just hides it in the dungeon, of a fortress he built, behind a moat, with the drawstring bridge raised.
This is a really fantastic story so far. I am excited to see more soon!
PS...to fold a fitted sheet, you tuck the corners together when you fold it in half the first time. Then its just normal folding from there.
Can't wait to see more soon! keep up the fabulous work!
Author's Response:
Have I mentioned lately that I love you? No? I love you.
rnI can finally fold a fitted sheet! Maybe then I will no longer bring shame to my family.
rnWhat an excellent way to phrase that! And totally true. Just... just don't let Bill hear you say that. It's for the best.