Date: 05/12/11 06:54 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
YES TIS I!
Ewww peach ;-; I no likey peaches
Yeah you so had that coming -snickers- My Bu!
Author's Response:
HARLOT, SCARLET WOMAN
rnYour Bu? LOL EXCUSE YOU, SOMEONE HOLD MY EARRINGS-
rnYour dog is like, super cute
Date: 05/12/11 06:20 pm Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
Dude Tom..GET THE CHERRY PIES! They are so much better, but man what's up Bu adn Bill's ass...Oh well I guess you're threesome comment answered that!
Author's Response:
YOU AGAIN
rnDude no peach pies are the boss
rn/throws up in my mouth a little/ I SHOULDN'T HAVE SAID ANYTHING
Date: 05/12/11 04:36 pm Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
Aha! Well *I* wasn't drinking milk! Whatcha gonna do about that? ;)
Oh my goodness, such tension in that conversation. Though I still have an inkling Bushido might lead to bad news, I admire Tom for being determined to be friends with both of them. I wish I had that strength back when I was a kid and various friends were forcing me to choose.
Author's Response:
Probably put the milk back in the fridge if you're not using it. :D
rnBushido is a Bad News Bear! Tom is lucky in that he has an awesome Mom who's raised him well and helped him mature. Too bad Bill and Bushido can't say the same.
Date: 05/12/11 03:44 pm Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
man, i hope Bill and Bushido get along. or at least avoid each other.
love the chapter end note, btw. ^__^
Author's Response:
Without hope, are we even human? Without chorizo, will I have anything to eat tonight? No. No.
rnThanks, I made it myself :D
Date: 05/12/11 01:25 pm Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
Don't be silly, I didn't shoot milk out of my nose. It was Mt Dew.
*ponders* I wonder what Bushido meant about Bill being as bad as him...*strokes chin* hmmm...
I am so happy Bill has more dress work, but wouldn't that involve the girls coming to his house and stuff...like for fittings, and to pick out the design on the dress and stuff? And does Bill ever design suits for guys?...Because it might be super nice for Bill to design something for Tom...even if it were like a pet project on paper that Tom didn't know about and stumbles upon at some point. I don't know, that idea just popped in my head as I was writing the review, feel free to use it if you want, but I wont be like upset or anything if you don't.
Itotally get Tom and the fabric shopping thing. It is more fun. I am crap at sewing and have no one like Bill to take me but I still find it more fun than regular shopping. I went fabric shopping once, found this amazing fabic, though I am not sure what the heck anyone would use it for. I decided to use it for wall paper. My room is a rectangle and I put it on the two short walls. Its this thin, kind of stretchy, stone washed denim, and it has this swirly fuzzy overlay in olive green, muted rose pink and plum purple, and a little bit of beige. They all kind of run together. It is amazing.
This was a really great chapter. I cannot wait for more!
oh, and thank you, you're pretty awesome too! *glomps*
Author's Response:
Oh shit. Ow. But I'm jealous you were drinking Mt. Dew. SO JEALOUS.
rnI do wonder :D
rnFIRST OFF well not really but sort of FIRST OFF I WANT TO SAY thank you so much for taking the time to leave such an AMAZING review! I love that you're so invested in the story, and really taking part in it! Cannot tell you that enough!
rnThe suit design idea is an interesting one! I've been mulling it over - who knows? Certainly not me. I write this shit in a stupor 90% of the time.
rnCOME SHOPPING WITH ME. I make everything awesome for one, and for another, I AM ADDICTED TO FABRIC. It will be a perfect fabric union. <3 I'd love to see pictures of how your room looks with the material, he said, absolutely not coming off like a stalker.
rnHUGS FOR ERR'BODY
Date: 05/12/11 12:19 pm Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
I'm curious as to why they hate each other so much...or is it just because of Lourdes? Anywho, great chapter! XD I'm looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Because they're boys, and neither of them are the brightest crayon in the box - though they both battle to be the most prideful
rnMe too! Thanks! :D
Date: 05/12/11 12:04 pm Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
the parts with bushido annoy me so much. I don't understand why he's important in the story but sure we're gonna discover it sooner or later
Author's Response:
Really! I'm actually really interested in that; is it that you think he detracts from the main story too much, do you not like his character, or...?
Date: 05/12/11 10:55 am Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
First off, I'd just like to say that, that snail is my new best friend. Okay? Good. It was awesome. Sexy snail.
Secondly, this is awesome, obviously. Now that Tom and Bill aren't rrreeeaaallllyyyy arguing constantly. And Bushido is Tom's friend. S'all good :D I enjoyed it ^^
Author's Response:
I'm happy for you, and I wish you both all the best in your life together. <3 And I mean it genuinely, not in that fascetious way in which I told my ex-girlfriend.
rnEVERYONE'S SO HAPPY I must concoct ways to ruin all of their lives
Date: 05/12/11 10:44 am Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
Evil Tart. You prolly gonna leave us hanging for a few days now. I just knew it! dammit. And Yes, I know this is my second comment on this damn chapter;)
Author's Response:
'Evil tart', sounds like that would make an awesome tattoo, maybe as a skank stamp, haven't gotten one there yet
rnPROBABLY. But on the plus side, I will be posting other things? :D
Date: 05/12/11 10:34 am Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
I went to check the pairings after you sprung the threesome thing on us. HHMMM you didn't say that for no reason. What is really going on between Bu and Bill?
Author's Response:
I absolutely said that for no reason. :D
Date: 05/12/11 09:29 am Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
No, this is definitely a love triangle. For sure. I love it.
Author's Response:
More of a love-hate triangle. No straight lines in this story.
Date: 05/12/11 08:30 am Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
rofl that end note wasn't funny XD I can't wait for more of Bill's attitude.
Author's Response:
IT WAS HILARIOUS, YOU ARE ALL JUST JEALOUS
rnMe neither :D
Date: 05/12/11 08:24 am Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
You should know that I woke up cranky as hell and you just made my morning. Everyone I know thanks you for that. ;)
Author's Response:
You're right, I should know this. BECAUSE IT IS AWESOME.
rnSorry you were feeling cranky. Think happy thoughts of Tom's Old Lady. >:D
Date: 05/12/11 06:03 am Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
omg not funny i was drinking water and i actually did spill some LOL Amazing chapter however cant wait for another soon!
Author's Response:
That's what's great about me. I just keep giving and giving. <3
rnWELL YOU'LL HAVE TO but hopefully not long. :D
Date: 05/12/11 05:53 am Title: Fuck-Ups are a Thug's Best Friends
"Can't I just drive past and push you out the door, and come pick you up in the event I didn't kill you?" OOOOh Tom got bitten by the Bitch Bug!
Does Bushi have a wittle ole crush on Tomikins???
Author's Response:
Right in the ass.
rnOh lewl, I live for this! Spoilers: no. I was kidding around about that threesome thing.
Date: 05/11/11 11:50 pm Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships
Grinning so hard right now. No homo. :D
Author's Response:
YOU AGAIN
rn... you smell weally weally nice today.
Date: 05/11/11 05:31 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Indeed.
With my dainty pinky finger raised and all.
Honesty is a virtue indeed. I should hope that you recover well and soon lest my truths of you rest your heart.
You are correct in your assumptions. I was 'taught' from an early age to eat any variety of food, though I do maintain some occasional selective tendencies.
I'm afraid I must retire for the evening, but I hope to continue our eloquent colloquy. I avidly await the latest installment of your story as well. I do so enjoy both Bill and Tom's repartee.
Author's Response:
That's how I like 'em. Dain-tay.
rnFish is gross, RESIST
rnYour eloquence makes my heart skip a beat, always, soon it will be become a medical condition
Date: 05/11/11 03:56 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Such flawless enunciation, how ever could I say no?
Then I shall continue to your blessèd hearts desire. It is only natural to recognize greatness when one has had the tremendous fortune to be in its presence.
Indeed, what mystifying and awe inspiring beings your progenitors must be to have born a child of such unfathomable beauty and compassion.
Indeed, my own progenitors are of mythical breed, which does in fact explain astounding qualities.
Am I to believe that you have a dislike for fish?
Author's Response:
/flips hair, pushes up sunnies
rnAw shit, an accent mark, you fancy gurl
rnThat is a fair and just evaluation, heavily laced with truth and poetry, my heart has skipped a beat and may never recover
rnAs stereotypical as it is yes, I hate fish, so much, fish is right up there with mass murder for me, I assume it is not the same for you?
Date: 05/11/11 02:45 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
A kiss upon each one and praise befitting the wondrous princess you are.
...Oh my, perhaps I should keep my silence as to prevent the further damnation of my soul...or not. Yum.
What benevolence you display, your people are indeed most fortunate to be allowed the pleasure of basking in your graceful and majestic glory.
Worry not, the cat has nine lives after all. I'll just take one in exchange for feeding him every day.
I've never tried inari sushi, but I'll have to see where I can find some and perhaps share in your enthusiasm.
Author's Response:
I... I don't say this often, but... tonight... would you... MAKE! ME! FEEL! LIKE I'M THE ONLY GIRL IN THE WOOOORRRLLLDDD!
rnNo it's okay you don't have to, you practically already are, effusive in your praise as you are, but it's good that you recognize my importance
rnSometimes I think my parents are angels in disguise to have sired someone like me, ethereal and flawless. Were yours? It would explain a lot. Mostly the halo thing, but also your effervescent awesome.
rnI am buck. wild. for inari sushi. Could go on about it for years. But it is so good. SO GOOD. And fishless, yyyeeeaahhhh B
Date: 05/11/11 02:21 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
o.o I thought you didn't have YIM! o.o
Damn xD That makes things a hella a lot easier! I use MSN all the time but YIM and MSN can add each other, so hit me up on there :D
Author's Response:
WELL NOW I DO, WHAT NOW
rnI'm leichenwasser@ymail.com, because they made me take their lame email address as well, though I never intend to use it, because Gmail smells nice and has nice, strong arms.
rnBUT YEAH ADD ME AS A MATTER OF FACT I'M ON RIGHT NOW CATCH ME QUICK BEFORE THE SEDATIVES KICK IN