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Reviewer: WeStoleEternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 08:49 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

D: But mama said I needed to be edumacated! j/k

Finals were far more stressful than they needed to be and I have one more presentation this Tuesday before I can bask in glorious relaxation.

Camping went well, but - as in most cases - could have been a great deal better. By the by, I hate my allergies with a passion only dreamt of in man's maddest hour.

Author's Response:

MY MAMA SAID KNOCK YOU OUT

rn

Yikes! Good luck this Tuesday, though, knock 'em dead! :D

rn

THATS WHAT YOU GET FOR CAMPING

Reviewer: WeStoleEternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 07:58 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble

O.O Truly?!

(Finals week and a last minute camping trip.)

Author's Response:

You selfish bitch, TRYING TO ADVANCE YOUR EDUCATION, ENJOY YOUR YOUTH- D:<

rn

No but j/k, how were your finals, and how was camping? I hate camping, it is dirty, ugh ugh ugh

rn

And yes. A bicycle. It was very, very sad.

Reviewer: WeStoleEternity Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 05:45 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

There's nothing like a piece of Humble Pie, eh? Another wonderful chapter to brighten my day. Thank you kindly.

I hope you've been doing well. Unfortunately, I've not been able to spend much time lolly-gagging and enjoying myself, so this update was just the thing to cure my stress induced misery.

Author's Response:

ALA MODE

rn

You are most emphatically welcome :D

rn

I got hit by a bike, and was concussed. WHERE WERE YOU

Reviewer: KristineTH Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 03:32 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

I LOVE THIS STORY *growls*

Author's Response:

/jumps, scrambles over the couch

rn

JESUS

Reviewer: AbnormalKidd Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 02:02 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

Ohohoho, this was faaabbb. It's cute how much Tom cares ^^ And Bill's just like, sowwwii D:
Iloved it ^^

Author's Response:

He was just seconds away from getting spanked in the face.

Reviewer: tomsteddybillscandy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 12:22 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

ಠ_ಠ oh yes damn you got my face while reading this chapter. lol! i wonder who's it for...what bill did. I was surprised he apologized though. XD suweet! 



Author's Response:

We share a face! ARE WE TWINS.

rn

He's getting there!

Reviewer: Steinsgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 05:49 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

It felt like a kiss. Before the end of Tom's speech, it felt like a kiss. But Bill would have smacked the shit out of him and the point would have been lost. But man. I was waiting for it.

Author's Response:

Why is your review such poetry? Honestly.

rn

You won't be waiting too long for things to move in that direction!

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 04:50 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

Dude, I am making a habit to post more than one review on this damn fic. Now, I dont wanna hear that they are like brothers!!! The thoughts I have for these two are seriously un-brotherly:)The words "f*ck" and "rabbits" do make an appearance in my thoughts...

but anyhoo, It is sunday, the world did NOT end yesterday, and i finished all my vodka last night waiting for the rapture. No gimme another update today to ease the mutterfluffer of a hangover:D

Author's Response:

Dude, do I look like I care? THE ANSWER IS NO.

rn

Oh, they're like brothers. :D THE INCESTUOUS KIND.

rn

NO. Okay, okay, I guess, you did say the magic word - MUTTERFLUFFER

Reviewer: Alli_cat141 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 03:23 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

LOL love that Tom's mum made a lasagne just for Bill and his bewilderment, so sweet. Giggled myself silly at them arguing and having a slap fight in the car. Bill going all ninja is a strange scenario, and I really want to know who he did it for. Loved Tom's little speech and Bill being cowed by it. Love love love this my darling. *glomps*

Author's Response:

Lola is his surrogate Mama, and Tom is stepping up to be his Daddy. KINKY AS FUQ

rn

That was the best part to write, tbh, the slap fight

rn

Bill is a shitty ninja, loud as Hell and got caught

Reviewer: SouthernAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 02:49 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

Bwahaha the car fight...bloody awesomeness! yank your weave....bwahahaha

Jeeez, imagine the fireworks and volcano erruptions if these two ever hook up.

Author's Response:

I do imagine it. ALL. THE TIME. Usually when I'm alone, with the lights turned down and some smooth jazz on.

rn

They're so totally like brothers, honestly-

Reviewer: HollyWoodFix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 02:37 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

Such an amusing story to read. I love your dialogue! And right now I'm far to tired to think of anything witty to say, so I'll just end this review with: I loved it! And I can't wait to read more! XD

Author's Response:

Always glad to hear you enjoyed it, witty or not! Get some sleep, gurl, give the rest of us a chance to be fabulous in your stead. <3

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 02:16 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks bro

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 02:16 am Title: First Step is a Stumble

haha yays, Im pretty sure we've all been waiting for that, LOVE the story! :D

Author's Response:

You and me both, honey. DAMN.

Reviewer: tokio_fan_girl39 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 02:15 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

i wonder wen will the attraction come in?

Author's Response:

NEVER

rn

J/k soon

Reviewer: bobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 01:56 am Title: Loose Lips Sink Friendships

SOCKS ON HIS HANDS

Author's Response:

Bill: /sobs, tries to open a can of Coke

Reviewer: sraine Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 01:48 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

Whoa daddy Tom on the loose! But gah what is up with mein Bill!

Oh liebe! You haven't been on but I ended up switching prom dressed. My new one is blue and lacy :D ftw. XD

Author's Response:

Tom is going to make Bill stand in the corner next time.

rn

OMGWTF NO WAY, I NEED TO GET ON AND SEE THIS

Reviewer: Daissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 01:34 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

Lmfao, that face again.

Lmfao, I was coincidentally listening to "Boys, Boys, Boys" by Lady Gaga when I saw the chapter title.

Someone should listen to Three Days Grace while reading Bill smashing that car XD I mean, uh, that was a very wrong thing to do, Bill..

Author's Response:

It's the face I make when I am not wholly satisfied. ಠ_ಠ I keep forgetting, you're one of my few crossover readers.

rn

BOYS BOYS BOYS! WE LIKE WHEN THEY HIT CA-ARS! BOYS BOYS BOYS!

rn

Huh. /cues it up, rereads/ HOLY MOTHER OF POMMES-

Reviewer: shaku Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 01:22 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

this was amazing, i see a romantic turn coming up soon-ish? :D

Author's Response:

SO EAGER FOR THE GAY

rn

But yes, actually, soonish sounds about right :D

Reviewer: Melluransa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 12:23 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

Bill is greedy for Tom's meatloaf. Bill loves Tom's meatloaf.

I love their back and forth, it's so amusing to read!

Bill is an odd one. I like discovering more and more about him each chapter, and in the point of view of Tom.

Author's Response:

He makes it with oatmeal. Shit's good.

rn

.... and also that other thing.

rn

It's awesome to write, too! I'm glad we can enjoy this together. <3

rn

Awesome! I fret sometimes that Tom gets shortchanged :/

Reviewer: ladyX Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/11 12:01 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys

wait wait wait, I stumbled on one of those almost mythical creatures, a guy that like TH, and didn't even realize it?? *facepalms* Wow...no wonder you write guys so well.

We should go shopping, I have yet to actually meet another Tokio Hotel fan in person,that alone would make it pretty awesome to me. Sadly the US is a large country, amidst an even larger world, and I doubt you live anywhere feasible close. Unless its Chicago, I could probably swing Chicago.

This was a really great chapter. Simone was awesome in it. Making lasagna for Bill, and giving away her obviously super secret recipe to Tom in the process.

I am absolutely in love with the way you keep adding all these secrety twists in at just the right moments. And you know what? Bill needs someone to tell him when he is out of line. Just because his parents aren't in the picture doesn't mean he can run crazy. I am super interested in who he was doing thst for, and if he does this sh*t for extra cash, or if its just kinda like the sprite incident, and he can't stand seeing someone small being picked on/taken advantage of/being abused.

ps. super wondering WHY the sprite incident set Bill off so badly.

Anyway, wonderful work again. I cannot wait to see more. When I saw the update today it totally made my day, and thats saying something because today was awesome for me, I went and got jumbo jelly beans AND saw the new Pirates of the Caribbean movie. Keep up the great work. *glomps*

Author's Response:

So I'm just gonna sip my Capri Sun and read this shit like over and over and over again

rn

WAIT WHO TOLD YOU I'M oh right my bio I guess

rn

But yep, I have a diq and like ToHo. AND THAT IS ONLY THE BEGINNING

rn

Thanks for the compliment, by the way, much obliged /tips cap

rn

We do need to go shopping. I'm poor as fuq but gurl that don't mean a thing long as I got you on my arm. <3 I live in the states, actually! But all the way on the west coast, around about where the twins live. THIS WAS NOT DELIBERATE, IT WAS JUST A JOB AND I TOOK IT possibly hard and deep BUT ANYWAYS I do fancy Chicago (it has 'chic' in it, it must be incredible)

rn

The secret ingredient for Kaulitz Lasagna is love. Love, and garlic.

rn

I love writing mamas, I do. Simone makes it easy, having birthed cherubs she is inherently cool.

rn

You know, not gonna lie, I was crazy mad uncertain about this chapter, but you just sort of blew all that to smithereens, so, thank you, thank you, I owe you like, 12, I'm so glad you're so into this. Also, PREACH. Bill needs a spanking, not the erotic kind because that happens in like chapter 25 or whatever and this is only 15, so

rn

He like really hates Sprite

rn

.... better than jumbo jelly beans and PotC? DDDAAAAYYYYYUUUMMMMMM

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