Date: 05/23/11 01:28 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys
DEAR JESUS! MORE OF THIS STORY, NAU! :D This is, like, fucking amazing. The plot and everything, it truly is my second favourite. Plus, your wording and the use of words is remarkable.
Oh, and just in case you have run out of it: much inspiration to ya. c:
Author's Response:
Dude, it's cool, you don't have to use my full name, you can just call my Saucy J, all the arcangels do
rnSECOND FAVORITE, I MUST STRIVE HARDER- no but srsly, out of curiosity, what's your number 1 favorite? RECS PLS
rn/absorbs inspiration like sunlight
Date: 05/23/11 12:25 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys
I just read this whole story through, having seen it featured on the front page. I think you're doing an amazing job with it! The relationship is building beautifully, not at all too fast as sometimes happens in these types of stories. And I adore your use of banter! It doesn't sound forced at all and has had me laughing out loud a few times.
I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Whoa, props to you! How long did it take you? Damn, that is some commitment. Much obliged! :D
rnI had no idea getting featured would not only get me so many readers, but so many ROCKLOBSTER reviews! Seriously awesome.
rnThe banter is one of my favorite parts to write, so I'm glad we share that enthusiasm! :D
rnThanks for reading through and reviewing! SO MANY THANKS LIKE YOU DON'T EVEN-
Date: 05/23/11 10:41 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys
This story reads like hot salted buttered popcorn and a really good flick. The kind where you want to savour the scene yet anticipate the next. And I definitely am!
Author's Response:
You got me all excited at "hot, salted", then mildly less aroused at "popcorn", but then again, I'm the guy with the old-fashioned popcorn machine, so that was pretty much like telling me you want my body. YOU DO, DON'T YOU, YOU SCANDALOUS THING
rnI'm eager to oblige! Stay tuned, dude!
Date: 05/23/11 10:36 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys
This is one of the best things I've ever read! I adore this Bill, and this whole universe, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Dude, awesome! I love to hear that! It's like mercilessly scarring my child by putting her in a pageant, and having it validated by other parents. CHOICE. <3
Date: 05/23/11 05:22 am Title: A Force of Nature
Haha, I love the idea of Bill punching someone in the face! I think it's a nice change of pace to read a Bill that can really stand up for himself.
Congrats on the feature btw!
Author's Response:
It's fun! If you haven't already, I suggest you try it. I MEAN WRITE IT. Yeah.
rnThat was pretty much all I was aiming for, a Bill in high school that could kick ass, take names, and knew how to do his own nails.
rnThanks elebenty jillions, dude! Totally not a long-time fan shrieking at hearing from you! Totally keeping it real here! Holla!
Date: 05/23/11 03:42 am Title: A Force of Nature
Bill punching someone in the face is HOT and a refreshing change. Kick-ass. xD
Author's Response:
'Hot' is a new one! Glad you enjoyed the gratuitous violence - I know I did :D
Date: 05/23/11 02:28 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Hahaha~
Author's Response:
HOHOHO
Date: 05/23/11 02:06 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Does it now?
With each word written by your hand my heart beats a maddening, sweet tune by the name 'Elation'.
I fear sweet words will have to suffice, for I too lack such delicacies at the moment. How saddening this fact is, no?
Tsk, tsk. One must always remember to return Home every once in a while. For who could know what wondrous news awaits?
Author's Response:
MAYBE.
rnAnd my heart, too, keeps time. <3
rn/lies on the ground in protest
rnAnd/or nachos.
Date: 05/23/11 01:57 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys
Woot! How awesome it was to click my 'Tracked' to reread some stuff, and I see the *~blue ribbon~* next to Cupid's Chokehold!
Congrats!
Author's Response:
I know! I was congratulated before I even saw it, haha, NEVER WOULD HAVE KNOWN
rnMY SOCKS ARE ALL TWISTED WITH GLEE
Date: 05/23/11 01:51 am Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys
before i go anywhere with this, i must say in response to the title, probably lick it up...;P
okay, bill's a bitch and i can't wait for them to get a little sexual. i'm sure bill will be just as bitchprincess as he is normally :3 at least until he's gone for it. oh bill, what's tom gonna do with you, beatin on cars and junk...hmm, imma go out on a limb and suggest that perhaps the person bill did this for is/was his mother who may or may not be dead? that's the only theory i'm rollin on. yah, and "your milkshake brings all the vultures to the yard" is priceless
did you book the flight for our honeymoon yet??
Author's Response:
Aaaaand now I'm distracted.
rnBill's a BIG OL' BITCH. Apparently this chapter was full of unintentional sexual frustration. IT IS TIME FOR THEM TO BONE, APPARENTLY.
rnHis mother, hm. /strokes goatee
rnI figured we were going to be spending it inside anyways, so I booked a hotel. P.S. don't bother packing clotheses, ty
Date: 05/23/11 01:01 am Title: First Step is a Stumble
Tsk, tsk.
Ah, Vicoden. I know thee well. j/k
Indeed. At the very least the school year is merely days away from ending. Summer's name resonates like a sort of blissful oblivion.
I simply devou- ahem - "nibbled" at a mind-numbing amount of chocolate confectioneries.
Congratulations on getting featured!
Author's Response:
Sseriously, my roommate was on THE EDGE! OF GLORRRYYYYY no but srsly, of killing me, Vicodin makes me all talky
rnThe way your name echos in my heart, I know this particular joy well <3
rnOh shit mang, hit me up with some of that, DYING OF UNSWEET RN
rnDude, thanks! I wouldn't have even noticed, hahaha!
Date: 05/23/11 12:51 am Title: Crowning Achievement
Hey, I'm really loving this. It's nice to see/read the twins as tougher, darker, deeper characters. Thanks!
And btw, I can't get my head around those sheets either! O_o
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm always glad to hear that, since it's what I was aiming for, and I love writing 'em!
rnI want to wrap my HANDS around those sheets and just... just wring the life out of them D:<
Date: 05/22/11 10:11 pm Title: A Force of Nature
Ha! Loved it!! ^^
Author's Response:
CHOICE :D
Date: 05/22/11 10:06 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Must have been during his mad get-away.
Are you feeling better now?
I've determined the definition to be the following: School + System = Utter, pointless bullshit. :)
Rinds Honey? Well, I'm not particularly a fan of honey in general, so...
Author's Response:
I know, Jesus, watch it you jerk
rnMuch better, with the assistance of my good friend Vicodin :D
rnAMEN, HONEY, AMEN
rnWhat the- THEN HOW DID YOU GET SO SWEET, SURGERIES
Date: 05/22/11 09:05 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
Indeed. Speaking of - How did this whole bike incident occur?
Thank you, but I need to get my final score before I do that. ;P
How very true. Nature hates me and taunts me at every inopportune moment she can find - not that I'm bitter or anything of the like... >_>
Author's Response:
It was Bill, that little bitch-
rnNo j/k was minding my own business, got clipped, fell, hit my head, INSTANT CONCUSSION
rnI have no idea what is schooling I don't even
rnI am. I AM BITTER, BITTER LIKE RINDS HONEY
Date: 05/22/11 08:49 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
D: But mama said I needed to be edumacated! j/k
Finals were far more stressful than they needed to be and I have one more presentation this Tuesday before I can bask in glorious relaxation.
Camping went well, but - as in most cases - could have been a great deal better. By the by, I hate my allergies with a passion only dreamt of in man's maddest hour.
Author's Response:
MY MAMA SAID KNOCK YOU OUT
rnYikes! Good luck this Tuesday, though, knock 'em dead! :D
rnTHATS WHAT YOU GET FOR CAMPING
Date: 05/22/11 07:58 pm Title: First Step is a Stumble
O.O Truly?!
(Finals week and a last minute camping trip.)
Author's Response:
You selfish bitch, TRYING TO ADVANCE YOUR EDUCATION, ENJOY YOUR YOUTH- D:<
rnNo but j/k, how were your finals, and how was camping? I hate camping, it is dirty, ugh ugh ugh
rnAnd yes. A bicycle. It was very, very sad.
Date: 05/22/11 05:45 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys
There's nothing like a piece of Humble Pie, eh? Another wonderful chapter to brighten my day. Thank you kindly.
I hope you've been doing well. Unfortunately, I've not been able to spend much time lolly-gagging and enjoying myself, so this update was just the thing to cure my stress induced misery.
Author's Response:
ALA MODE
rnYou are most emphatically welcome :D
rnI got hit by a bike, and was concussed. WHERE WERE YOU
Date: 05/22/11 03:32 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys
I LOVE THIS STORY *growls*
Author's Response:
/jumps, scrambles over the couch
rnJESUS
Date: 05/22/11 02:02 pm Title: Bad Boys, Bad Boys
Ohohoho, this was faaabbb. It's cute how much Tom cares ^^ And Bill's just like, sowwwii D:
Iloved it ^^
Author's Response:
He was just seconds away from getting spanked in the face.