Just reread this chapter and the previous one. Tears again, nose slightly runny again D:

sometime I wonder if you are actually a very famous author trying to have fun by going incognito on interner writing fanfic. Or maybe you are just one smart dude. Anyway, this is one of those stories that does more than just satisfying me as a fanfic reader - this satisfies me as a literature lover. The wat you describe the emotions is so realistic. Keep up the good work, bro. No one force you to update but please consider the fact that everytime you update, theres tons of girls around the world whose days are brighten :)

oh. god. finally! It was soo worth the wait. I am speechless - the bond between them is beautiful, and maybe one day Bill can see himself as beautiful again.. as grimy as the story, I find tiny hope bubbles (about time as well) :) Of all the fics in the same genre on here I found yours the most painful yet most addictive to read. The way you handle emotions is epic. Probably the only fic that get me crying when I read a second time :(
This is fucking amazing, and I am already finger crossed for a slightly faster update :) Let us get the pain and hurt over with.

Oh wow. The way you wrote Tom’s pain and guilt for not being there to protect is twin was SO vivid, felt so real. I kinda feel physically ill like Tom reading how he had to watch the vid, watch is brother in so much pain.

I really wish Bill would get it off his chest and confide in Tom. He seems like he needs it and it's getting bad for him, it's really sad to see him like this. Once again, the way you write is absolutely amazing, such a brilliant story.

Poor Bill, second guessing himself in that interview. He's not himself anymore, he doesn't let himself be and that's what I find the most sad. Especially when he was wondering what it would be like if he wasn't there, second guessing even his existence =(

Oh god. Poor Bill. Makes me so angry to think that there is some sick people like the ones who attacked him in the world. Gonna take a break and come back later. This is just to well written and painful to read all at once.

I'm not even going to say anything, that would just ruin it or something. Just know that this is one of the most powerful chapter I've read in a long time.

I have no idea why it took me such a long time to finally start reading this... and I have no idea either why I started reading it on a day where I have so much homework to do. If I can't study for the rest of the day, I totally blame you and your amazing writing style. This first chapter was absolutely captivating. The way you wrote Bill and his emotion (or lack of) was really interesting. I'm addicted to this already. Wow. Just wow.

With this story I just learn, that I should expect anything from you.

The most of this chapter was surprising for me. This genre is definitely very hard to write, you need to put so much effort into it. The reactions of Tom and Bill, I didn´t expected this. Where comes this from? Are you thinking about it 24 hours every day? Well, it is all so interesting, I feel like I can see in their heads. Perfect characterizations, I am bowing to you. I always feel so down after reading this story. But that is just because you write it so perfectly.

And I hope Tom didn´t make a mistake when he told them about Bill´s secret.

PS: sometimes I really hate english. I want to say something, but I can´t find the right words or the dictionary finds something that just isn´t suitably for it. So I just end writing something else and not that, what I wanted to write initially. If my reviews are meaningless sometimes, I am really sorry.